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Children of Alpheios
A genetically engineered colony on a new world.
A baby born different than everyone else.
A mother who will do anything to save him.
On planet Eamine, twenty-one-year-old Alina finds herself up against the colony’s central corporation when she discovers they want to exploit her baby's remarkable DNA anomaly. Trained by the Expeditionary Academy, Alina knows how to survive Eamine’s harsh environment and flees to keep Mandin safe.
While Alina tries to uncover the truth, she finds herself relying on Kiean, a gruff pilot who protects her from threats in the midst of her new surroundings. As an upcoming rebellion brews, Alina must discover who she can trust, facing choices about family, life, and love. Despite the risk, Alina is determined to safeguard Mandin from the colony‘s most powerful institutions, even if it means risking herself..
A baby born different than everyone else.
A mother who will do anything to save him.
On planet Eamine, twenty-one-year-old Alina finds herself up against the colony’s central corporation when she discovers they want to exploit her baby's remarkable DNA anomaly. Trained by the Expeditionary Academy, Alina knows how to survive Eamine’s harsh environment and flees to keep Mandin safe.
While Alina tries to uncover the truth, she finds herself relying on Kiean, a gruff pilot who protects her from threats in the midst of her new surroundings. As an upcoming rebellion brews, Alina must discover who she can trust, facing choices about family, life, and love. Despite the risk, Alina is determined to safeguard Mandin from the colony‘s most powerful institutions, even if it means risking herself..
438 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2023
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Diana Fedorak
2 books97 followersDiana Fedorak is a novelist from Las Vegas, Nevada. Born in Saigon, South Vietnam, she grew up in a Pan Am Airways family who frequently traveled overseas. Her prior career was as an officer in the United States Air Force. She enjoys writing complex characters in high-stakes science fiction and fantasy worlds.
Diana's debut novel, Children of Alpheios, which was released by the The Wild Rose Press in 2023 and was deemed a Book of the Year Finalist for Science Fiction by the Independent Author Network. When she’s not writing, she spends time in her own universe with her husband, two children, and their German Shepard.
Diana's debut novel, Children of Alpheios, which was released by the The Wild Rose Press in 2023 and was deemed a Book of the Year Finalist for Science Fiction by the Independent Author Network. When she’s not writing, she spends time in her own universe with her husband, two children, and their German Shepard.
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January 28, 2025
Diana Fedorak’s Children of Alpheios is a gripping, heart-pounding journey that masterfully combines science fiction, emotional depth, and unrelenting suspense. With a fearless heroine, a compelling plot, and a richly imagined world, this book is a standout addition to the genre.
Alina is a remarkable protagonist—strong, resourceful, and driven by a fierce love for her child. Her determination to protect Mandin, a baby whose DNA anomaly makes him a target, is both inspiring and heart-wrenching. Fedorak captures the intensity of a mother’s love and the lengths Alina will go to safeguard her son, making her struggles feel deeply personal and profoundly moving.
The world of Eamine is vividly detailed, with its harsh environment, complex societal structures, and the looming threat of corporate exploitation. The colony’s central corporation serves as a chilling antagonist, and Fedorak’s portrayal of its sinister motivations adds a layer of realism and tension to the narrative.
The relationship between Alina and Kiean is a highlight of the book. Kiean’s gruff exterior and unwavering loyalty make him an intriguing and endearing character, and their evolving bond adds warmth and depth to the story. As they face danger together, their dynamic becomes a pillar of hope and trust amidst the chaos.
The plot is expertly paced, blending action-packed sequences with moments of introspection and emotional resonance. The rebellion brewing in the background adds an additional layer of stakes, while Alina’s quest to uncover the truth keeps readers hooked until the very end.
Fedorak’s writing is captivating, seamlessly balancing vivid descriptions with engaging dialogue and heartfelt moments. The themes of family, survival, and resilience are beautifully explored, making this more than just a sci-fi adventure—it’s a story that resonates on a deeply human level.
Children of Alpheios is a stunning, thought-provoking novel that will leave readers breathless. Diana Fedorak has crafted a tale of courage, love, and defiance that is impossible to put down. Perfect for fans of science fiction with heart!
Alina is a remarkable protagonist—strong, resourceful, and driven by a fierce love for her child. Her determination to protect Mandin, a baby whose DNA anomaly makes him a target, is both inspiring and heart-wrenching. Fedorak captures the intensity of a mother’s love and the lengths Alina will go to safeguard her son, making her struggles feel deeply personal and profoundly moving.
The world of Eamine is vividly detailed, with its harsh environment, complex societal structures, and the looming threat of corporate exploitation. The colony’s central corporation serves as a chilling antagonist, and Fedorak’s portrayal of its sinister motivations adds a layer of realism and tension to the narrative.
The relationship between Alina and Kiean is a highlight of the book. Kiean’s gruff exterior and unwavering loyalty make him an intriguing and endearing character, and their evolving bond adds warmth and depth to the story. As they face danger together, their dynamic becomes a pillar of hope and trust amidst the chaos.
The plot is expertly paced, blending action-packed sequences with moments of introspection and emotional resonance. The rebellion brewing in the background adds an additional layer of stakes, while Alina’s quest to uncover the truth keeps readers hooked until the very end.
Fedorak’s writing is captivating, seamlessly balancing vivid descriptions with engaging dialogue and heartfelt moments. The themes of family, survival, and resilience are beautifully explored, making this more than just a sci-fi adventure—it’s a story that resonates on a deeply human level.
Children of Alpheios is a stunning, thought-provoking novel that will leave readers breathless. Diana Fedorak has crafted a tale of courage, love, and defiance that is impossible to put down. Perfect for fans of science fiction with heart!
September 25, 2025
3.25/5. Thanks to the publisher, Diana Fedorak, and Netgalley for the ALC!
In the first book of a series (currently at two books), Alina discovers things are not all they seem in the city of Alpheios. She is having her first child (through surrogate) with her boyfriend - son of a political movemaker and current Guardian - and she, herself, has left her schooling at the academy to become mother. But when her son starts displaying unusual talents, it is a choice of give him up (never) or give up the comforts that she knows.
As she decides to travel to the harsher, less-technologically-gifted areas of the planet, she finds herself learning more about the Origins, the humans living there. They are descendants of the original humans to land on the planet and they, too, might know a thing about her son's talents... But now they aren't the only ones and Alpheios is coming.
My main problem with this book was the speed in which things happened. It's obvious from the start that Alina has been culturally influenced to think the Origins are different in a negative way. She has been led to believe that Alpheios and the corporations there are the best that can happen. And her transition from that to suddenly being ||a rebel against Alpheios|| was a transition that made sense, but I wished was a little more fleshed out.
Also, ||her leaving of Chase and sudden relationship with Kiean was too soon for me. You had a child with this man and yes, leaving him made sense with his choices, but it seemed too quick and clean even after Chase's visit.||
Jennifer McCool did a wonderful job narrating the novel. The accents and voices were distinct and didn't seem overdone to me. The production was seamless and there were no erroneous noises or strange pauses. Well-done!
The sequel, Origins Progeny, is already released on Amazon and may be something I add to my TBR next year to see what happens to this group.
In the first book of a series (currently at two books), Alina discovers things are not all they seem in the city of Alpheios. She is having her first child (through surrogate) with her boyfriend - son of a political movemaker and current Guardian - and she, herself, has left her schooling at the academy to become mother. But when her son starts displaying unusual talents, it is a choice of give him up (never) or give up the comforts that she knows.
As she decides to travel to the harsher, less-technologically-gifted areas of the planet, she finds herself learning more about the Origins, the humans living there. They are descendants of the original humans to land on the planet and they, too, might know a thing about her son's talents... But now they aren't the only ones and Alpheios is coming.
My main problem with this book was the speed in which things happened. It's obvious from the start that Alina has been culturally influenced to think the Origins are different in a negative way. She has been led to believe that Alpheios and the corporations there are the best that can happen. And her transition from that to suddenly being ||a rebel against Alpheios|| was a transition that made sense, but I wished was a little more fleshed out.
Also, ||her leaving of Chase and sudden relationship with Kiean was too soon for me. You had a child with this man and yes, leaving him made sense with his choices, but it seemed too quick and clean even after Chase's visit.||
Jennifer McCool did a wonderful job narrating the novel. The accents and voices were distinct and didn't seem overdone to me. The production was seamless and there were no erroneous noises or strange pauses. Well-done!
The sequel, Origins Progeny, is already released on Amazon and may be something I add to my TBR next year to see what happens to this group.
July 25, 2023
The Wishing Shelf Book Awards
24th July 2023
TITLE: Children of Alpheios
AUTHOR: Diana Fedorak
Star Rating: 4
‘A cleverly plotted sci-fi thriller with a strong, likeable protagonist to root for. Highly recommended!’ The Wishing Shelf
REVIEW
Set on a different planet, this is a compelling sci-fi novel from the pen of Diana Fedorak. It's the story of Alina, who must find a way of protecting her baby who has a remarkable DNA anomaly from the powers that be. Skilfully plotted and with a likeable protagonist who's easy to root for, I suspect this will go down well with sci-fi lovers and readers who enjoy medical thrillers.
Admittedly, it is a little slow in the beginning, but things really kick off halfway through, and from there on in it's a thrilling ride. For readers who enjoy the technical stuff, there's plenty of that, although admittedly I did have to work hard to understand everything. Still, the author has excellent storytelling skills, keeping the focus on the mother and child and the dilemmas facing them which, to be honest, is the biggest strength of the novel. There is a little romance, but it felt like a bit of an afterthought; and rightly so. Nothing kills a sci-fi more than endless mush!
All in all, I'm very happy to recommend this exciting adventure novel to readers enjoy strongly plotted thrillers with plenty of suspense, and a thought-provoking plot. Although I would recommend the author work on ‘grabbing the reader early on in the story’, it's still a gripping read packed full of twists, turns - and drama!
A ‘Wishing Shelf’ Book Review
www.thewsa.co.uk
24th July 2023
TITLE: Children of Alpheios
AUTHOR: Diana Fedorak
Star Rating: 4
‘A cleverly plotted sci-fi thriller with a strong, likeable protagonist to root for. Highly recommended!’ The Wishing Shelf
REVIEW
Set on a different planet, this is a compelling sci-fi novel from the pen of Diana Fedorak. It's the story of Alina, who must find a way of protecting her baby who has a remarkable DNA anomaly from the powers that be. Skilfully plotted and with a likeable protagonist who's easy to root for, I suspect this will go down well with sci-fi lovers and readers who enjoy medical thrillers.
Admittedly, it is a little slow in the beginning, but things really kick off halfway through, and from there on in it's a thrilling ride. For readers who enjoy the technical stuff, there's plenty of that, although admittedly I did have to work hard to understand everything. Still, the author has excellent storytelling skills, keeping the focus on the mother and child and the dilemmas facing them which, to be honest, is the biggest strength of the novel. There is a little romance, but it felt like a bit of an afterthought; and rightly so. Nothing kills a sci-fi more than endless mush!
All in all, I'm very happy to recommend this exciting adventure novel to readers enjoy strongly plotted thrillers with plenty of suspense, and a thought-provoking plot. Although I would recommend the author work on ‘grabbing the reader early on in the story’, it's still a gripping read packed full of twists, turns - and drama!
A ‘Wishing Shelf’ Book Review
www.thewsa.co.uk
November 13, 2023
This book—wow. I wandered around Las Vegas Book Festival a couple weekends ago and this was the last book I bought. I am so happy that I did!
In Children of Alpheios, Alina, a young mother, discovers that her son has a genetic abnormality which gives him extraordinary gifts, but comes at a cost. Wanting to know more about his condition, and distrusting of the city’s leading doctors, she seeks out the Origins people who live on the outskirts of Alpheios. There, she finally learns what it means to have a family and what it means when you cross people with power.
Y’all, this book had me going through it. I laughed. I cried. I waited forever for two certain characters to kiss. The slow burn 😩
There is something in here for everyone. Especially, I feel, for mothers who would do anything to protect their little ones. Or for fans of female main characters who kick ass the entire time and don’t yield their power to their love interest.
My favorite part about this book, though, is the strong exploration of found family and community that does not always come from blood. From the beginning, the main character struggles to find her place after losing her father. All she has wanted is to start her own family with her boyfriend but quickly finds out that she is left alone to raise her son. That is until she is accepted, with a bit of apprehension, by the Origins people.
By the end, Alina has found a village to help her raise her son and the love that she had been searching for ❤️
In Children of Alpheios, Alina, a young mother, discovers that her son has a genetic abnormality which gives him extraordinary gifts, but comes at a cost. Wanting to know more about his condition, and distrusting of the city’s leading doctors, she seeks out the Origins people who live on the outskirts of Alpheios. There, she finally learns what it means to have a family and what it means when you cross people with power.
Y’all, this book had me going through it. I laughed. I cried. I waited forever for two certain characters to kiss. The slow burn 😩
There is something in here for everyone. Especially, I feel, for mothers who would do anything to protect their little ones. Or for fans of female main characters who kick ass the entire time and don’t yield their power to their love interest.
My favorite part about this book, though, is the strong exploration of found family and community that does not always come from blood. From the beginning, the main character struggles to find her place after losing her father. All she has wanted is to start her own family with her boyfriend but quickly finds out that she is left alone to raise her son. That is until she is accepted, with a bit of apprehension, by the Origins people.
By the end, Alina has found a village to help her raise her son and the love that she had been searching for ❤️
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October 23, 2025
Alina lives on the distant planet of Eamine. She gives up a promising career to become a mother, only to discover her newborn son, Mandin, carries a rare DNA anomaly, something that powerful institutions want to exploit. Faced with an impossible choice, Alina goes on the run, risking everything to protect her child.
As she leaves behind the technologically advanced colony of Alpheios, Alina seeks refuge among the "Origins," descendants of the planet’s first settlers, long marginalized by corporate & political elites. There, she not only finds answers about her son’s mysterious condition but also begins to question everything she was raised to believe.
With the help of Kiean, a gruff but loyal pilot, she confronts threats both personal and systematical, all while navigating new relationships and keeping an eye over her shoulder.
The story mainly centers around Alina's fierce devotion to her son and her evolution from rule abiding citizen to determined rebel and found family along the way.
The author did an amazing job showcasing her love for Mandin.
I felt some of the other relationships could have benefited from a little more detail, but maybe the next book will get into it. The story does get a little slow at points when it's just Alina & Mandin, but eventually picks back up.
Fedorak’s world building is intriguing, centering on genetic engineering, social hierarchy, and life in a resource & power driven colony.
I liked that the Sci-Fi elements were not overly technical, it was easy to follow.
I listened to the audiobook version and thought the narrator, Jennifer McCool did a fantastic job and her voice fit the story well. She spoke with an even rhythm that kept me engaged and really did well at voicing Alina's thoughts and concerns.
Children of Alpheios is a light sci-fi novel that combines dystopian society, politics, & the depth of maternal love.
It’s a perfect read for fans of dystopian science fiction or someone who wants an entry level Sci-Fi book. I’ll definitely be picking up the sequel.
Thanks so much to NetGalley and The Wild Rose Press for this ALC Audiobook.
As she leaves behind the technologically advanced colony of Alpheios, Alina seeks refuge among the "Origins," descendants of the planet’s first settlers, long marginalized by corporate & political elites. There, she not only finds answers about her son’s mysterious condition but also begins to question everything she was raised to believe.
With the help of Kiean, a gruff but loyal pilot, she confronts threats both personal and systematical, all while navigating new relationships and keeping an eye over her shoulder.
The story mainly centers around Alina's fierce devotion to her son and her evolution from rule abiding citizen to determined rebel and found family along the way.
The author did an amazing job showcasing her love for Mandin.
I felt some of the other relationships could have benefited from a little more detail, but maybe the next book will get into it. The story does get a little slow at points when it's just Alina & Mandin, but eventually picks back up.
Fedorak’s world building is intriguing, centering on genetic engineering, social hierarchy, and life in a resource & power driven colony.
I liked that the Sci-Fi elements were not overly technical, it was easy to follow.
I listened to the audiobook version and thought the narrator, Jennifer McCool did a fantastic job and her voice fit the story well. She spoke with an even rhythm that kept me engaged and really did well at voicing Alina's thoughts and concerns.
Children of Alpheios is a light sci-fi novel that combines dystopian society, politics, & the depth of maternal love.
It’s a perfect read for fans of dystopian science fiction or someone who wants an entry level Sci-Fi book. I’ll definitely be picking up the sequel.
Thanks so much to NetGalley and The Wild Rose Press for this ALC Audiobook.
February 5, 2025
This is such an accessible, heartfelt sci-fi story. It is about a mother who will do anything to protect her newborn son. Alina’s journey is equal parts emotional and fascinating as she fights against powerful political forces to safeguard her baby, who is born with unique abilities and seizures. While the science and world-building aspects are fascinating, what truly stood out to me were the relationships and the community—every character felt so real and genuine.
The romance was incredibly sweet, though it is a subplot. But my favorite part of the book was its deep exploration of found family. From the beginning, Alina struggles to find her place, left alone to raise her son after her boyfriend abandons them. But when she finds the Origins community, she also finds love, acceptance, and the support she’s always longed for. And realizes that it is also a connection to her late father.
This story is a bit slower-paced, but I was completely immersed in it. With its gripping emotional stakes, stunning world-building, and action-packed moments, Children of Alpheios would make an incredible movie. It beautifully celebrates community, resilience, and the bonds that go beyond blood. I adored it, and I can’t wait to pick up the next book! A hidden gem in the genre!
Thanks so much to Hidden Hollow BookTours and the author for the complimentary copy and opportunity to read and review. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
The romance was incredibly sweet, though it is a subplot. But my favorite part of the book was its deep exploration of found family. From the beginning, Alina struggles to find her place, left alone to raise her son after her boyfriend abandons them. But when she finds the Origins community, she also finds love, acceptance, and the support she’s always longed for. And realizes that it is also a connection to her late father.
This story is a bit slower-paced, but I was completely immersed in it. With its gripping emotional stakes, stunning world-building, and action-packed moments, Children of Alpheios would make an incredible movie. It beautifully celebrates community, resilience, and the bonds that go beyond blood. I adored it, and I can’t wait to pick up the next book! A hidden gem in the genre!
Thanks so much to Hidden Hollow BookTours and the author for the complimentary copy and opportunity to read and review. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
September 16, 2025
Children of Alpheios is a gripping, heart-pounding journey that pulls you into a distant future where humanity has spread to the stars, yet the story remains intimate and human, even in the heat of a high-stakes chase. The book blends sci‑fi with emotional depth and unrelenting suspense, anchored by a fearless heroine who fights political power and fate with equal parts grit and grace. Alina’s fierce devotion to her newborn son, who arrives with unique gifts and seizures, drives a journey that is as much about found family and trust as it is about danger and discovery. The Origins community breathes warmth into a world that could have stayed cold, and their support, love, and acceptance are the beating heart the plot needed. The romance glows softly in the background, but the real spark lies in the relationships that redefine what family means, including a path to a late father’s memory. The pace may lean slower at times, yet I was wholly immersed by the emotional stakes, lush world-building, and bursts of action that beg to be seen on screen. This is a celebration of resilience and belonging that honors the bonds beyond blood, and Alina’s journey from fear to trust feels both earned and hopeful. The last act is tense and surprising in just the right ways, and the ending lands with a promise I’m itching to follow in book two. Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an arc of this book. 4.5⭐️story | 5 ⭐️ narration #NetGalley #arcreview #ChildrenofAlpheios
February 15, 2025
I read CHILDREN OF ALPHEIOS by Diana Fedorak for the review tour hosted by the author and Hidden Hollow Book Tours. Thank you to both for inviting me along and for the gifted e-arc. I thoroughly enjoyed this book!
Sci-fi is one of those genres that I don't read very often. I'm just not a fan of Star Wars type stories. Luckily, this was not that book. It was heavier of the Dystopian side of things while still taking place on another planet.
Alina and her boyfriend, Chance, have a newborn baby. He has been found to have a medical issue, and the medical facility wants to test alternative treatments on the baby. Alina has doubts. That's where the trouble begins.
I love Alina's willingness to do whatever it takes to keep her son well and to protect him. This is a story of the fierceness of a mother's love. She also has a personal journey to take. One that takes her away from all that she's believed. She has to learn to trust the very people she's been taught to fear. And, maybe to even open her heart again.
There are some intense edge-of-your-seat scenes, especially in the last part of the book. There were a couple of surprises, one I guessed at. I really like the way the book ended, and I can't wait to read book 2.
I recommend CHILDREN OF ALPHEIOS to fans of sci-fi, dystopia, genetic engineering, medical thrillers, strong FMC, and planetary exploration.
Sci-fi is one of those genres that I don't read very often. I'm just not a fan of Star Wars type stories. Luckily, this was not that book. It was heavier of the Dystopian side of things while still taking place on another planet.
Alina and her boyfriend, Chance, have a newborn baby. He has been found to have a medical issue, and the medical facility wants to test alternative treatments on the baby. Alina has doubts. That's where the trouble begins.
I love Alina's willingness to do whatever it takes to keep her son well and to protect him. This is a story of the fierceness of a mother's love. She also has a personal journey to take. One that takes her away from all that she's believed. She has to learn to trust the very people she's been taught to fear. And, maybe to even open her heart again.
There are some intense edge-of-your-seat scenes, especially in the last part of the book. There were a couple of surprises, one I guessed at. I really like the way the book ended, and I can't wait to read book 2.
I recommend CHILDREN OF ALPHEIOS to fans of sci-fi, dystopia, genetic engineering, medical thrillers, strong FMC, and planetary exploration.
September 20, 2025
In this novel, future humans have taken genetic selection to the next level. "Origins" are those who arrived on the planet as humans. The generation born on the planet has adapted to its conditions, but a core science organization has taken things to the next level: gene editing to ensure babies are born free of the "wrong" types of issues. But the newborn of one well-connected couple has a seizure, and how best to treat him going forward becomes a critical issue. There are clashes among different strata (i.e. castes) of people, opposites attracting, and a precocious young girl, all of which propelled the story and kept me engaged. The original couple, however, seems too stereotypically strident: the woman who gives up her career ambitions to be a mother to their lab-grown infant, and the ambitious man who is so deeply entrenched in the system that he follows corporate advice over his own heart. The world-building here primarily revolves around genetics, social mores, and the vital mineral that sustains life. This first installment ends with an exciting chase. Jennifer McCool does an excellent job, as usual, narrating this material. I look forward to listening to the next book in the series.
My thanks to the author, @BambooTreePress, and #NetGalley for access to the audiobook of #ChildrenofAlpheios for review purposes. It is currently available.
My thanks to the author, @BambooTreePress, and #NetGalley for access to the audiobook of #ChildrenofAlpheios for review purposes. It is currently available.
November 19, 2024
Alina is a new mother whose baby is born with unique powers. Those in charge want to do experiments on young Mandin. To protect her child, Alina flees with pilot Kiean. Will they get to safety or be captured?
Children of Alpheios is a gripping science fiction/dystopian I couldn’t put down. The descriptive narration combines with the world-building to lure readers into the story. The plot moves at a good pace with twists I didn’t see coming. The characters, though, are what make Children of Alpheios an engrossing read.
Let’s start with Alina. She is a relatable heroine who, when the time comes, will do anything to protect her baby. She’s resilient and easy to connect with. I found Alina to be my favorite character.
Kiean is a hero yet plays the antihero against the establishment. He protects Alina and her child from harm. He isn’t in it for the glory but to help a woman in need. Feelings bloom and Kiean must prove to Alina she can trust him.
If you love dystopian novels with morally gray characters, you’re going to find Children of Alpheios your next binge-read.
My Rating: 5 stars
Reviewed by: Nancy
This review first appeared: https://www.nnlightsbookheaven.com/po...
Children of Alpheios is a gripping science fiction/dystopian I couldn’t put down. The descriptive narration combines with the world-building to lure readers into the story. The plot moves at a good pace with twists I didn’t see coming. The characters, though, are what make Children of Alpheios an engrossing read.
Let’s start with Alina. She is a relatable heroine who, when the time comes, will do anything to protect her baby. She’s resilient and easy to connect with. I found Alina to be my favorite character.
Kiean is a hero yet plays the antihero against the establishment. He protects Alina and her child from harm. He isn’t in it for the glory but to help a woman in need. Feelings bloom and Kiean must prove to Alina she can trust him.
If you love dystopian novels with morally gray characters, you’re going to find Children of Alpheios your next binge-read.
My Rating: 5 stars
Reviewed by: Nancy
This review first appeared: https://www.nnlightsbookheaven.com/po...
February 14, 2025
This was a really nice read on a rainy day.
I was not expecting who the true villain was so that surprise at the end was interesting! I wonder how that makes a certain character feel. Because that person also did not seem like they'd be very into Phase 3 but I guess they were.
So many times I thought Chance was gonna work with Alina and be her rock but mam he disappointed me. He finally came to his senses a little but took him forever. Alina is just better off with Kiean, even if he started with not liking her, but all the best book relationships start that way lol.
Alina was good and strong. Trusting her gut really helped her and made it so Mandin was set up for the best life he could have. Especially since she was able to find such a good community to raise him in compared to the city. Which man I don't think I could like I'm that city, feels away to clinical.
I didn't think Alina's dad being gone would mean any major plot points with him but that was a nice surprise that he knew shady stuff was going on and that Alina would need somewhere to take Mandin.
I'm ready to dive into the next book so I can see what defense might be put up since they are being hunted, and to see how the kids abilities progress, especially Mandins.
I was not expecting who the true villain was so that surprise at the end was interesting! I wonder how that makes a certain character feel. Because that person also did not seem like they'd be very into Phase 3 but I guess they were.
So many times I thought Chance was gonna work with Alina and be her rock but mam he disappointed me. He finally came to his senses a little but took him forever. Alina is just better off with Kiean, even if he started with not liking her, but all the best book relationships start that way lol.
Alina was good and strong. Trusting her gut really helped her and made it so Mandin was set up for the best life he could have. Especially since she was able to find such a good community to raise him in compared to the city. Which man I don't think I could like I'm that city, feels away to clinical.
I didn't think Alina's dad being gone would mean any major plot points with him but that was a nice surprise that he knew shady stuff was going on and that Alina would need somewhere to take Mandin.
I'm ready to dive into the next book so I can see what defense might be put up since they are being hunted, and to see how the kids abilities progress, especially Mandins.
February 25, 2025
I wasn't sure what to expect when I started this book but instantly I was drawn in by the plot. Sci-Fi isn't my normal go to read but when I find one with interesting notions I give it a go. We find a society of humans on a distant planet that they had to adapt to in order to survive. Through science they accomplished this but they lost apart of themselves and culture for more sophisticated living. Now two groups of people reside in this society: those inundated with scientific adjustments in every bit if their life including using artificial gestation and gene alterations for births & others known as Origins who don't rely on scientific but holistic and old ways for living and birth. Alina is faced with a challenge to either trust the company that birth her baby or trust her instincts that something just isn't right and the Origins thar she met on the street might know more of what is really happening with her baby and possibly a solution for him. However, she is caught between a rock and hard place trying to keep her baby safe at costs,meets a pilot that may be better suited to keep her and her baby safe with a possibly relationship in the making if she can get over her baby's dad who abandoned them to come back into their lives.
February 4, 2023
Children of Alpheios is at its core the origin story of superhero Mandin, who has the "glimmer," and his mother. It starts with a mystery, but then slips into 10 long chapters of worldbuilding and backstory before baby Mandin's abilities are understood. Bits of the rebellion surface around the middle, embedded within long chapters of side stories that barely advance the main plot.
In chapter 24, romance buds sprout. I hoped for a conflict-laden love triangle, but that plot didn't surface, a missed opportunity IMO. The rebellion ramps up in chapter 25. Now the stakes shoot up to life & death. The outposts strive for independence to protect the glimmer children from experimentation to exploit their powers by the city, which dashes any hope for peace with a cruel escalation.
The chapters are too long for my taste, making it unnecessarily hard to refer back to one. While I can live with the jargon, I wanted more details about the technology when introduced. For example, it took a few pages for me to figure out the babylev, but I only have a vague understanding of what it looks like.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
In chapter 24, romance buds sprout. I hoped for a conflict-laden love triangle, but that plot didn't surface, a missed opportunity IMO. The rebellion ramps up in chapter 25. Now the stakes shoot up to life & death. The outposts strive for independence to protect the glimmer children from experimentation to exploit their powers by the city, which dashes any hope for peace with a cruel escalation.
The chapters are too long for my taste, making it unnecessarily hard to refer back to one. While I can live with the jargon, I wanted more details about the technology when introduced. For example, it took a few pages for me to figure out the babylev, but I only have a vague understanding of what it looks like.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 12, 2023
I have to admit that I accidentally clicked on this in a Voracious Reader's Only email, not really wanting to read it. But the author gave me the book, so I felt I had to read and review it, even though it isn't the subject matter I normally would like.
And the beginning of the book was very tense. A mother constantly worries about her son, experiencing myriad symptoms of anxiety. But I plowed through. Then over the halfway mark, the story became very compelling, even if the characters weren't quite as likable as I usually 'like', and there were some forays in the story that didn't seem necessary, like a long and TMI description of birthing a baby.
The last third became quite a thriller. A villain near the end was a little much for me, but it makes the story what it is I suppose.
I thought the whole storyline was extremely well thought out and organized. I didn't notice any mistakes. The end wasn't what I thought it would be and it was wrapped up very well. Alina and friends went on quite an adventure.
If the description sounds at all interesting to you, I would definitely recommend reading this book.
There is minimal swearing and the romance is low-key.
And the beginning of the book was very tense. A mother constantly worries about her son, experiencing myriad symptoms of anxiety. But I plowed through. Then over the halfway mark, the story became very compelling, even if the characters weren't quite as likable as I usually 'like', and there were some forays in the story that didn't seem necessary, like a long and TMI description of birthing a baby.
The last third became quite a thriller. A villain near the end was a little much for me, but it makes the story what it is I suppose.
I thought the whole storyline was extremely well thought out and organized. I didn't notice any mistakes. The end wasn't what I thought it would be and it was wrapped up very well. Alina and friends went on quite an adventure.
If the description sounds at all interesting to you, I would definitely recommend reading this book.
There is minimal swearing and the romance is low-key.
January 15, 2025
Thank you to Diana Fedorak and Hidden Hollow Book Tours for the free copy of this book!
I love a good sci-fi cautionary tale, and Children of Alpheios delivers an engaging exploration of humanity’s relationship with genetic engineering. The moral dilemma of losing what makes us human through DNA editing is both thought-provoking and chilling.
Alina’s fierce love for her son Mandin was beautifully written. Her strength, intelligence, and determination made her such a compelling protagonist, and her journey to protect her son kept me hooked. Kiean, with his gruff exterior and hidden soft side, was a delightful addition. Watching his character evolve was such a treat!
The world-building was another standout. Fedorak created an incredible sense of place on planet Eamine, from the harsh environment to the expeditionary life. The climax—storming Alpheios—was tense and thrilling, a definite highlight of the book.
While the pacing felt a bit slow at times, the story remained engaging, and I’m already excited to dive into the next installment, Origins Progeny. If you’re a fan of thoughtful science fiction with strong characters and emotional depth, this is definitely one to add to your TBR!
I love a good sci-fi cautionary tale, and Children of Alpheios delivers an engaging exploration of humanity’s relationship with genetic engineering. The moral dilemma of losing what makes us human through DNA editing is both thought-provoking and chilling.
Alina’s fierce love for her son Mandin was beautifully written. Her strength, intelligence, and determination made her such a compelling protagonist, and her journey to protect her son kept me hooked. Kiean, with his gruff exterior and hidden soft side, was a delightful addition. Watching his character evolve was such a treat!
The world-building was another standout. Fedorak created an incredible sense of place on planet Eamine, from the harsh environment to the expeditionary life. The climax—storming Alpheios—was tense and thrilling, a definite highlight of the book.
While the pacing felt a bit slow at times, the story remained engaging, and I’m already excited to dive into the next installment, Origins Progeny. If you’re a fan of thoughtful science fiction with strong characters and emotional depth, this is definitely one to add to your TBR!
February 12, 2025
This was a unique, entertaining and heart racing story that took me on one hell of a journey into the world of Eamine.
The imagery and world building was creatively detailed and swept me up into this harsh new world.
Alina is such a strong character. Her journey to protect her baby was an incredibly emotional one. But she’s a survivor and she will do anything and everything to protect her baby from the corruption and evil that wants to take the child away from her to experiment on.
The hurdles that Alina had to overcome were incredibly intense and had me on the edge of my seat. I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry over everything they both endure to find their safety and happiness.
This was a fascinating dystopian sci/fi story that kept me captivated and turning the pages to see what was going to happen in the end. I was invested and needed to know if Alina and her baby would be able to escape the evil that was right on their tails.
Highly enjoyed and look forward to reading more by this author.
The imagery and world building was creatively detailed and swept me up into this harsh new world.
Alina is such a strong character. Her journey to protect her baby was an incredibly emotional one. But she’s a survivor and she will do anything and everything to protect her baby from the corruption and evil that wants to take the child away from her to experiment on.
The hurdles that Alina had to overcome were incredibly intense and had me on the edge of my seat. I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry over everything they both endure to find their safety and happiness.
This was a fascinating dystopian sci/fi story that kept me captivated and turning the pages to see what was going to happen in the end. I was invested and needed to know if Alina and her baby would be able to escape the evil that was right on their tails.
Highly enjoyed and look forward to reading more by this author.
April 19, 2024
3.75 stars
Set on the world of Eamine, the human race is surviving out in the stars but with just the same problems as ever plaguing them: survival of the fittest, scientific advances and humanity's ineffable greed.
Essentially this is a story about a young woman seeking the best for her new-born son, to protect him and give him the best possible future she can. The powerful big pharma, Genodyne, all but runs the planet's colony of Alpheios and conducts experiments, seeking to produce and patent adaptations to their home world. Ranged against them, Alina, the young mother, and the Origins, descendants and the surviving original colonists from Earth, and their suspicions that something just isn't right.
This is a good story, well-written and undeniably naive and simple in style and content at times. It reads like a first novel of someone with a good degree of potential as a writer. Watch out for Diana Fedorak, she could become quite a name in speculative sci-fi.
Set on the world of Eamine, the human race is surviving out in the stars but with just the same problems as ever plaguing them: survival of the fittest, scientific advances and humanity's ineffable greed.
Essentially this is a story about a young woman seeking the best for her new-born son, to protect him and give him the best possible future she can. The powerful big pharma, Genodyne, all but runs the planet's colony of Alpheios and conducts experiments, seeking to produce and patent adaptations to their home world. Ranged against them, Alina, the young mother, and the Origins, descendants and the surviving original colonists from Earth, and their suspicions that something just isn't right.
This is a good story, well-written and undeniably naive and simple in style and content at times. It reads like a first novel of someone with a good degree of potential as a writer. Watch out for Diana Fedorak, she could become quite a name in speculative sci-fi.
January 27, 2025
Reading this book, with the world in the state it’s currently in, was a bit surreal. Although set on an alien planet, one could easily draw parallels to things happening today, right in front of our eyes. The plot is engaging and moves along at a smooth pace, picking up a bit around halfway through, and then not slowing down until the very end (and I cannot wait to read book two after the way things ended). Alina is a great character with a big heart, unwilling to just accept the status quo and what the powers that be tell her, and it’s that drive that helps kick off this adventure when she goes looking for answers for her child. The Origins people are outcasts, but just like in real life, are more welcoming and protective than the elites. I don’t want to get too more in-depth for fear of spoilers, but this is absolutely one book you don’t want to miss if you enjoy found family, a strong FMC, and a dystopian future in an alien environment!
February 8, 2023
💚🌐🌌 A huge crush!
Alina watched her newborn carefully.
The little Mandin had a genetic anomaly, discovered recently.
Alina laid the little baby on the examining table for Dr. Laughlin to examine.
The baby was doing very well. However, we had to wait for the results of further examinations.
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A huge crush on this mysterious sci-fi/colonization dystopia, with beautiful main characters and a completely captivating background plot.
I loved the courageous and luminous character of Alina, moving with her baby Mandin.
I was totally immersed in the story, with its puzzles and twists, and I had a hard time letting go of the novel.
I couldn't have guessed the ending.
I recommend this great dystopian sci-fi/colonization adventure to discover absolutely for fans of the genre.
💚🌐🌌
Alina watched her newborn carefully.
The little Mandin had a genetic anomaly, discovered recently.
Alina laid the little baby on the examining table for Dr. Laughlin to examine.
The baby was doing very well. However, we had to wait for the results of further examinations.
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A huge crush on this mysterious sci-fi/colonization dystopia, with beautiful main characters and a completely captivating background plot.
I loved the courageous and luminous character of Alina, moving with her baby Mandin.
I was totally immersed in the story, with its puzzles and twists, and I had a hard time letting go of the novel.
I couldn't have guessed the ending.
I recommend this great dystopian sci-fi/colonization adventure to discover absolutely for fans of the genre.
💚🌐🌌
May 6, 2023
This story follows Alina who just received her newborn son Mandin who has been having seizures. She finds out that her son may have gifts and rather than have him be looked at, she takes her son to protect him and learn more about his powers.
This was a very sciency-fiction book, emphasis on the science, with a found family and a sweet enemies to lovers romance. This is a story about a mother and the lengths she would go to protect her baby. I loved how Alina, who is considered a wealthy citizen of the planet, gives up everything to protect her boy and learn about his powers with those within the lesser society. At times, she annoyed me because she definitely was spoiled, but she learned as the book progressed and she is very smart and was able to use her smarts to help. The romance is sweet, and that’s about all I have to say about the romance. I liked it, but nothing too exciting to report there. This book’s focus was definitely on Alina and her baby Mandin.
There was a lot of science involved that I admit KU would get a bit lost when reading that part and I wish there was more history about the world and the people there since this is a different planet from Earth and I would have loved more about how or why they were on Alpheios.
Overall, I enjoyed this unique scifi and I really liked the way it ended. I received a free digital copy to read. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
This was a very sciency-fiction book, emphasis on the science, with a found family and a sweet enemies to lovers romance. This is a story about a mother and the lengths she would go to protect her baby. I loved how Alina, who is considered a wealthy citizen of the planet, gives up everything to protect her boy and learn about his powers with those within the lesser society. At times, she annoyed me because she definitely was spoiled, but she learned as the book progressed and she is very smart and was able to use her smarts to help. The romance is sweet, and that’s about all I have to say about the romance. I liked it, but nothing too exciting to report there. This book’s focus was definitely on Alina and her baby Mandin.
There was a lot of science involved that I admit KU would get a bit lost when reading that part and I wish there was more history about the world and the people there since this is a different planet from Earth and I would have loved more about how or why they were on Alpheios.
Overall, I enjoyed this unique scifi and I really liked the way it ended. I received a free digital copy to read. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
November 4, 2025
To be honest this took some time for me to really get into it. I started it a few times and it took a couple weeks of reading here and there until I finally got to a point (maybe 15% in?) where it just clicked. My interest was peaked and I wanted to know more. After that point, it took me two days to finish.
The premise of the story was quite interesting, especially when you realize most people are not longer conceived or born 'naturally'. The ones who are, are not allowed to be apart of society. A fascinating look at where studying genetics could take society. With what almost feels like a touch of eugenics.
I do think some of the characters felt a little flat and not super dimensional, though as the story goes on that does change to a point. It was only a couple people I felt that way about, the rest were well rounded.
Worth the read, 3.75/5.
The premise of the story was quite interesting, especially when you realize most people are not longer conceived or born 'naturally'. The ones who are, are not allowed to be apart of society. A fascinating look at where studying genetics could take society. With what almost feels like a touch of eugenics.
I do think some of the characters felt a little flat and not super dimensional, though as the story goes on that does change to a point. It was only a couple people I felt that way about, the rest were well rounded.
Worth the read, 3.75/5.
May 15, 2023
This book’s synopsis sounded AMAZING, and I guess it’s my fault for expecting something different from what I got.
I expected Mandin’s life to actively be in danger, and because Alina knows “how to survive Eamine’s harsh environment and flees,” I expected her to flee to the wild, braving this new planet’s bizarre weather and landscape to keep her baby safe—not move to a neighborhood on the outskirts of town and repeatedly visit the city, including her workplace and the hospital. I wanted to see her problem-solve in the wild while being hunted. I expected Mandin’s “remarkable DNA anomaly” to be some grand superpower manifestation that somehow threatened the leaders of the colony, which is not the case. I expected the “upcoming rebellion” to take up more than the last 25% of the book, and I expected Kiean to not be such a jerk. I waited and waited and waited for him to have a redeeming moment after their unfortunate meeting, and it never came for me.
All of that just to say, it’s my own fault I didn’t love this book. My expectations were off because of the synopsis. Besides the need for a couple more rounds of editing, the writing is promising! The world is intriguing, and there were several moments I truly felt for Alina, such as when Mandin’s seizures began or when she helped deliver a baby.
I expected Mandin’s life to actively be in danger, and because Alina knows “how to survive Eamine’s harsh environment and flees,” I expected her to flee to the wild, braving this new planet’s bizarre weather and landscape to keep her baby safe—not move to a neighborhood on the outskirts of town and repeatedly visit the city, including her workplace and the hospital. I wanted to see her problem-solve in the wild while being hunted. I expected Mandin’s “remarkable DNA anomaly” to be some grand superpower manifestation that somehow threatened the leaders of the colony, which is not the case. I expected the “upcoming rebellion” to take up more than the last 25% of the book, and I expected Kiean to not be such a jerk. I waited and waited and waited for him to have a redeeming moment after their unfortunate meeting, and it never came for me.
All of that just to say, it’s my own fault I didn’t love this book. My expectations were off because of the synopsis. Besides the need for a couple more rounds of editing, the writing is promising! The world is intriguing, and there were several moments I truly felt for Alina, such as when Mandin’s seizures began or when she helped deliver a baby.
June 21, 2023
This is not your typical SciFi book, yet I found it familiar somehow. The story takes place in the distant future when humanity has begun to colonize other planets. Unlike many science fiction romps, the protagonist is not tasked to prevent a war or win a space battle. Instead, Alina is a mother determined to give her child the best life possible on a hostile planet with sometimes hostile humans in the mix too. Sure, this book has futuristic ships and technology, but there most compelling aspect is how the author speculates about the human condition in the world she created. I felt like she was curious about what it means to be a parent. Or, what is community? Or, is progress always good? Maybe it is me, but there are definite philosophical tones throughout it.
The book slows down in the middle, but stick with it. It picks up quickly in the second half. At the end of it, you'll want to keep reading more. But that's mainly because the author doesn't tie up every thread she started. You know there'll be another book to follow. Give this new author a chance.
The book slows down in the middle, but stick with it. It picks up quickly in the second half. At the end of it, you'll want to keep reading more. But that's mainly because the author doesn't tie up every thread she started. You know there'll be another book to follow. Give this new author a chance.
February 12, 2025
What a fantastic journey into the world of Eamine, the human race must survive among the stars but with the problems that always afflict them such as the survival of the fittest to last but also scientific progress and the greatest sin, greed... . . As a quasi-pharmacist I loved how the big pharmaceutical company, Genodyne, is treated and talked about. It all intrigued me a lot... Alina, the young mother, and the Origins, descendants and original settlers who survived from Earth. How will we address their suspicions that something isn't right? To be the beginning, I found it to be a truly beautiful, well-written story that keeps you glued to the pages. I really think I'll follow Diana Fedorak because I want to read all her future sci fi works. Rating 4 ⭐
January 24, 2025
Children of Alpheios is a gripping dystopian/sci-fi following Alina who is a new mother of a gifted child. unfortunately the higher powers want to use Mandins DNA to create a new level of human. Alina must find a way to protect the children of Alpheios or risk losing her son.
Diana Fedorak is a remarkable story teller and this book was gripping the whole way through! If you love your sci-fi with a hint of thriller and a bit of romance thrown in there you will LOVE this one!
Id love to see this story turned into a TV series or even a video game. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!
Diana Fedorak is a remarkable story teller and this book was gripping the whole way through! If you love your sci-fi with a hint of thriller and a bit of romance thrown in there you will LOVE this one!
Id love to see this story turned into a TV series or even a video game. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 23, 2025
This was an interesting read. What I liked most was how badass the female lead was. She was truly fearless, strong, resourceful and driven.
The pot is compelling , with our heroine trying to safe and protect her child. He was genetically engineered and his DNA makes him a target.
I would have liked to learn more about the world and the events that lead us to the current situation, since I feel that would have been super interesting.
Children of Alpheios is a thought-provoking novel that will grip readers from the start.
Thank you to Netgalley and Bamboo Tree Press for a copy of this book, all opinions are my own.
The pot is compelling , with our heroine trying to safe and protect her child. He was genetically engineered and his DNA makes him a target.
I would have liked to learn more about the world and the events that lead us to the current situation, since I feel that would have been super interesting.
Children of Alpheios is a thought-provoking novel that will grip readers from the start.
Thank you to Netgalley and Bamboo Tree Press for a copy of this book, all opinions are my own.
February 8, 2023
Children of Alpheios reinforces the fact that you should follow your instincts and what a mother would do to protect her child.
It also touches on the genetics and what people would do to find a way to create the "perfect" human. This story takes place on a new planet and the inhabitants are exposed to different environmental factors and its affects on their lives. I had a hard time putting this book down.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
It also touches on the genetics and what people would do to find a way to create the "perfect" human. This story takes place on a new planet and the inhabitants are exposed to different environmental factors and its affects on their lives. I had a hard time putting this book down.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 8, 2023
Right from the beginning, I want to know what's going to happen to baby Mandin! Children of Alpheois is a wonderful book that transports us to life on another planet.
The world building is superb and so is the tension. It’s an adventure filled story about how human beings relate to each other in a new society. Have we evolved far enough to treat each other with love and compassion or do more sinister actors lurk with their own agendas?
I found this a fast, entertaining book that never slowed down. I would highly recommend it.
Ray Murphy
The world building is superb and so is the tension. It’s an adventure filled story about how human beings relate to each other in a new society. Have we evolved far enough to treat each other with love and compassion or do more sinister actors lurk with their own agendas?
I found this a fast, entertaining book that never slowed down. I would highly recommend it.
Ray Murphy
February 8, 2023
I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are well developed and I could completely relate to a mother's unconditional love for her child and to protect that child at all costs. I loved that the main character was a young mother, not the usual protagonist and that she also was strong yet vulnerable because of her child. Diana Fedorak takes you through a journey of ups and downs, twists and turns that you would never expect. Children of Alpheios is a fantastic read for sci fi fantasy lovers.
July 24, 2025
In this futuristic city children are constantly genetically motified. When the protagonist’s child is born, he has seizures despite these modifications. However, she doesn’t want her child to become a test subject, and instead discovers her child (and others) may have special powers. But how can these children evade the government’s scientific programs?
I really enjoyed this book. It has a little of everything: dystopian, fantasy, sci-fi, & romance. I could not put the book down for the last 100 pages, and I love the main character and her main love interest.
I really enjoyed this book. It has a little of everything: dystopian, fantasy, sci-fi, & romance. I could not put the book down for the last 100 pages, and I love the main character and her main love interest.
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