I get that this book takes place in Canada, but the Canadian-isms are pushed way too hard. Especially product placement, or super old words that my 80+ year old grandma used.
The mystery was so flat I got confused. Mostly because of the bombardment of people thrown at me. Julia is after Flint. Oh, wait, now Hammond. Dunno where he came from, but okay. Simon had all the flags of "future love interest" but just... disappeared. Leander came out of nowhere for some back story and vanished. Craddock, the new coroner, Oshaun, Harry... like, do any of these people matter?
Julia's mom was just so pointless and dumb. She's the kind of vague villain who is more like an annoying fly than anything else. The drama with her is just pointless filler.
Julia herself is flat, and dumb. The whole story is pretty dumb, honestly. Yeah, sure, I believe that the local police would just shut down a secret federal investigation because... who the hell knows what was the point of it. Nothing makes sense.
And I know this isn't a love story, but holy crap. Are we supposed to be devastated that Luke's memories were erased? The guy was cardboard. The kind of nice dude who would be a great partner in real life, but boring as fuck in a piece of fiction. Actually, he was a doormat. Didn't like his parents, but catered to them. Constantly pushed Julia to reconcile with her mother, who was a caricature of a terrible mom. Went against Julia's boundaries a bunch of times, in fact. Maybe he wouldn't be a good partner after all.