OMG, I hate this woman! She's an ass to Cassian, she judges everything and everyone, including her “friend” (who is equally judgmental, BTW, maybe that's why they're friends), and gets angry for Cassian not doing things she didn't say she expected. Cassian is a total doormat, and just lets this bitch walk all over him.
The military didn't make any sense, because there's no mention whatsoever of any conflict they might be needed for, the author only deemed important to mention they're “grossly overfunded”, with no thoughts whatsoever for the origin of said funds. Also, they don't seem to do anything other than have breakfast, go to the gym, have dinner, and sleep. No training mentioned, and everyone seems to do whatever they want whenever they want. Except, apparently, the alarm, which might or might not be regulation.
The reason for the women being there makes no sense either. Why introduce untrained civilians into a military base? Just because the soldiers were “discontent” for being celibate? Letting them go out of base to get some seems a much better solution, less expensive and way less troublesome.
I stopped at 25% because I can't stand this bitch for another second, and the setting didn't help.