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Eternal Dominion #14
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Time waits for no one!
With his children almost due in reality and the virtual world of Eternal Dominion, Alex/Xeal finds himself needing to make the most out of the time he does have. After all, the world stops for no man and if he stands still now, he will watch all his advantages start to disappear.
Especially as the time for him to face the ordeal involved in reaching tier-6 is coming just as fast as his children seem to be!
With his children almost due in reality and the virtual world of Eternal Dominion, Alex/Xeal finds himself needing to make the most out of the time he does have. After all, the world stops for no man and if he stands still now, he will watch all his advantages start to disappear.
Especially as the time for him to face the ordeal involved in reaching tier-6 is coming just as fast as his children seem to be!
- GenresHaremTime TravelFantasy
238 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 1, 2023
About the author
Bern Dean
40 books59 followersAs a child I did not read unless Pokémon cards count. It wasn’t until middle school when my mother played a trick on me, she got me entranced in the Harry Potter books. She would read the first few to me before switching to reading me a chapter and leaving the book out for me to read if I wanted more. Thus started my love of reading, at least in part. I still didn’t go out of my way to find books to read and after high school I could count on one hand how many books I would read each year. Life continued like this for over five years before I was hooked on an anime and searched out its light novel. This led to the phase where I was reading at least a couple books a month to now where I have gone through over 300 books in the last year.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
Now I am putting my own work in to the world while following my own mantra. To write for yourself or you will never love what you write. When I first started to put my ideas into words I was surprised to find that those I shared it with loved it. This led me on to the road of putting out my own book for the world to see. Thank you to everyone who has or will help and support me in making this dream a reality.
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Displaying 1 - 13 of 13 reviews
January 1, 2023
Another great entry in the Eternal Dominion series
Bern Dean continues his wonderful work with this, the 14th entry in the Eternal Dominion series. Major events continue happening as expected, with the tier 6 trial being one of the highlights here. If you've gotten this far in the series, you know what to expect, and this entry fully meets expectations. Highly recommended if you're a fan of the previous entries!
Bern Dean continues his wonderful work with this, the 14th entry in the Eternal Dominion series. Major events continue happening as expected, with the tier 6 trial being one of the highlights here. If you've gotten this far in the series, you know what to expect, and this entry fully meets expectations. Highly recommended if you're a fan of the previous entries!
January 4, 2023
A Headache
This story of a guy who gets a do over to his eighteen year old self that he fully takes advantage of and becomes a multi billionaire was fantastic and frustrating. He has five women in real life and a dozen or so online. It’s not really harem, it’s more of politics Nobel and Uber rich rules. Its more the women decided to have babies to lock him in than him fooling around. Regardless it’s starting to fill like a Mormon propaganda but is a great story nonetheless.
This story of a guy who gets a do over to his eighteen year old self that he fully takes advantage of and becomes a multi billionaire was fantastic and frustrating. He has five women in real life and a dozen or so online. It’s not really harem, it’s more of politics Nobel and Uber rich rules. Its more the women decided to have babies to lock him in than him fooling around. Regardless it’s starting to fill like a Mormon propaganda but is a great story nonetheless.
January 2, 2023
Wonderful read
Great to see the series continuing to provide solid world and character development as we keep moving forward. Love the series and always look forward to the next book.
Great to see the series continuing to provide solid world and character development as we keep moving forward. Love the series and always look forward to the next book.
January 1, 2023
Great book
It was a truly interesting book. However, this one took on a baby fever tent. Overall it’s still a really good book.
It was a truly interesting book. However, this one took on a baby fever tent. Overall it’s still a really good book.
January 2, 2023
Needs charter list
I like this series but this one Almost got only tree stars. Over a third is baby stuff. Plus in need a charter list so we recommend whowho.
I like this series but this one Almost got only tree stars. Over a third is baby stuff. Plus in need a charter list so we recommend whowho.
January 15, 2023
Very focused
Well it was what I thought it would be, very focused on pregnancy and birth. I did miss out on some of the excitement and surprises we usually see. Still a good book and important for the story but not as much to look forward to as the others.
Well it was what I thought it would be, very focused on pregnancy and birth. I did miss out on some of the excitement and surprises we usually see. Still a good book and important for the story but not as much to look forward to as the others.
January 2, 2023
Very good read
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with real world tie in.
I enjoyed reading this book very much and I recommend this book to anyone who like LitRPG and progression type of books with real world tie in.
January 1, 2023
It feels like he is writing these by rote. Lots of filler. I do understand he is writing once a month but perhaps he could write once every two months and get more consistent quality. He obviously has this all planned out. But for a lot of it, he could have a machine fill it in.
I like the series and very much appreciate the world he has created.
I like the series and very much appreciate the world he has created.
January 23, 2023
Illegible
A first draft, bundled and sold as complete. The writing is repetitive, verbose, and makes exciting scenes dull. The descriptions are excessive, flat, and bury the reader in details. The game mechanics get a lot of page time, but have no effect on the story.
This series keeps getting worse and I have reached my limit.
A first draft, bundled and sold as complete. The writing is repetitive, verbose, and makes exciting scenes dull. The descriptions are excessive, flat, and bury the reader in details. The game mechanics get a lot of page time, but have no effect on the story.
This series keeps getting worse and I have reached my limit.
January 31, 2023
A very busy book.
This story bounces around in and out of the VR world of Ed to the extent that very little progress is made. I enjoyed the little progress the players did make but the bureaucracy slows the story down. Hopefully the next book moves forward faster.
This story bounces around in and out of the VR world of Ed to the extent that very little progress is made. I enjoyed the little progress the players did make but the bureaucracy slows the story down. Hopefully the next book moves forward faster.
July 24, 2023
Ridiculous
Simply couldn't get past the 50% mark , Xeal has always been arrogant and overpowered but his Tier 6 challenge requires more than a suspension of belief , a great initial idea has become silly , what a shame.
Simply couldn't get past the 50% mark , Xeal has always been arrogant and overpowered but his Tier 6 challenge requires more than a suspension of belief , a great initial idea has become silly , what a shame.
January 8, 2023
Zzzzz...
Never thought that would end. I was bored during this and ended up reading 3 other books before I could finish this.
Never thought that would end. I was bored during this and ended up reading 3 other books before I could finish this.
February 3, 2023
Nice book
The story in this was different and unique I look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books
The story in this was different and unique I look forward to seeing the next installment of this series of books
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