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Fated #6

Their Desired Luna

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Kyan has lived with the shadows that cursed his family for generations. Born as an Octavian comes at a price; Kyan was no ordinary werewolf. No, Kyan lives with a monster far older, and a curse bestowed by the original Moon Goddess Celeste. When he finds his mate, he rejects her. She thinks he hates her, but little does she know he is trying to protect her. But temptation becomes too much when Jonah, his best friend, takes a keen interest in her, and jealousy becomes too much. Now Kyan must choose either to try to break the curse or lose her to his best friend. There is just one thing; his curse is that of his Lycan’s, forced to love and lose, cursed to kill his mate. So what happens when he finds her? Will Marabella meet her demise, or will she be the key to breaking the curse on not only him but that of his Lycan? Or will she meet the same fate as every woman in his family's curse?

308 pages, Paperback

Published December 19, 2022

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Jessica Hall

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139 reviews
August 3, 2024
How is she a best seller?

This would have gotten a better review but I just couldn't do it with all of the grammatical errors. These are just examples of some of the sentences you get reading this book. " while him was running up the stairs" " I couldn't wait to tell me how much I loved him ". This was actually in the book " he sweat his hand away "
16 reviews
April 17, 2023
No ending for at least 2 stories, Eziah and Persephone and Rose and Casen. No ending re- baby Lucas.

No ending for at least 2 stories, Eziah and Persephone and Rose and Casen. No ending re- baby Lucas either but she's gone off to write other things, so, yeah, won't read more from her, no point if there is no ending.
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5,115 reviews55 followers
December 30, 2024
Their Desired Luna
Fated #6
By Jessica Hall
Narrated by Logan Anare, Ryan Lee Dunlap, Ramona Master, Gunnar Qualen, Jenna St Claire, Shiloh James, Harlowe James, Joshua MaCrae

Excitement continues in this installment of the Fated series. The darkness and light all come into play as things are coming to a head. Shadows are all around as Kyan continues to dismiss Bella. When she seeks solace in the arms of Jonah, Kyan's jealousy begins to boil. But what can he do? He needs to protect her! The only way is to keep her at arms length. Or is it? Dominick is becoming much more prominent too. Is he alive? Kat makes a promise that changes her life. Add in Eziah's protectiveness and light and his need to find his mate and the story is definitely not over! I can't wait to hear the next part of the story to see more of this family and their saga.

This multicast narration is phenomenal. Duet style, each voice matches the character and from book to book each one is consistent. Logan Anare, Ryan Lee Dunlap, Ramona Master, Shiloh James, Gunnar Qualen and Jenna St Claire keep their characters fresh and exciting with the developing plots, spice and suspense! New to the story, Harlowe James and Joshua MaCrae add their own take to the story and it's all a bit of magic. Loving it!
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57 reviews13 followers
March 31, 2024
I loove the marabella-kye-jonas trio soo much .. they’re so perfect together and their story is amazing..

I love this whole serie and and loved katya’s story is the first books but GOD HOW I HATED HER IN MARA’S BOOKS!!!!
She was the worst mom .. never caring for mara one bit ..


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For exp when mara committed suiced after kye rejected her katya didn’t show any emotions of sadness at all .. all she was thinking about was how it would be impossible and painful for eziah to contain both darkness and light within him .. like woman please you daughter just died !!😤😤😤😤..

Also when eziah brought mara back to life but killed lucas in the process she didn’t qhow any happiness that her daughter is live but only thinking about how she would tell her brother his BF is dead !!!
She literally said "break my brother or break my son " thinking only that it would break eziah to have mara’s power in him too 🤬🤬


She drove me MADDDD in Mara’s book and as much as i loved her in her story i HATED her like nothing else here 🤬🤬🤬 i am soo disappointed in her

Mara deserved so much better than this ..
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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Author 8 books3 followers
June 10, 2024
I’m sorry but this author is fraud! How can you call yourself an author when you stole the concept of the author who created The Vampire Diaries!
The Gemini Twin concept was first introduced in season 6 episode 8 goes into full detail of it and it is also the basis for the spin off series Legacies with Josie and Lizzy! Yeah I’ll bet she didn’t think that anyone would catch that part.
I love how on the novel apps she claims that she’s originally the creator of this concept and is always bashing others for their work being similar to hers but, she must have really missed the part she herself is unoriginal!
Makes you wonder who else’s ideas she stole!
I won’t be reading anything further from this person!
4 reviews
October 16, 2025
most of her books have a terrible ending…..

This book was good all the way till the end. Great story righter, yet the past books had terrible endings. They werent even cliff hangers! It was more like she ended it at that point just to sell another book (at least thats the feeling you get). This one had a real ending that made the story complete, yet also some questions to ask gor the other non-main characters. This is how u end a book and yet keep the reader wanting to know more and yet happy for the circle to come around. I hope her other books are more like this cause I will switch and try different authors otherwise…..
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111 reviews
April 27, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️ | 🌶️🌶️

I don’t know about anyone else, but I felt like the buildup was so high that when the curse was finally broken, it just didn’t live up to the hype. It felt like a major anti-climax, sadly.

I also wasn’t a fan of the anger issues in this book. The story felt rushed, and honestly, it’s starting to annoy me that everyone immediately falls pregnant. It’s just a lot.

Besides that, I feel like the author is reusing scenes or sentences, which makes it feel less authentic. It’s almost like I’m rereading the same story over and over.
133 reviews5 followers
February 17, 2023
This the 6th book in the series. It was pack with action, drama, romance, sex, suspense.
POV : from different main characters.
No OM OW
Sex 🌶️🌶️🌶️/5
Triggers: depression, cutting, suicidal thoughts. We are
HEA for the main characters in this book. However the author introduces a glimpse of the feelings and conflicts the other characters are going through. I am sure there is 7th book brewing. I hope so. I want to read about Ezahia -mysterious tormented woman, and Rose -Casen.
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61 reviews
June 23, 2024
Everything has happened for a reason, and it's all understandable, but Marabella is completely in the dark. She has such strong feelings for both males, but who will she choose? Shadow Daddy or Golden Retriever? They're "fighting" over little miss Shy (Marabella)! OMG! But why choose? Yes! Oh gawd yes, please! HEA with so much Dark Romance!
(((Check the trigger warnings if you have triggers)))
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17 reviews1 follower
August 20, 2025
Again way too many errors in this book. Making me think there is no one proofreading these books before they go on sale. Completely wrong words used, missing punctuation, or extra punctuation, miss spelled words. The list goes on.
Also the ending was lacking as well, so don’t expect much from that, you will probably be disappointed.
1 review
October 25, 2025
great plot an delivery

This was so good from the first book in the series to this and I know the next one will be just as great. I love how layered the plot is and thoroughly delivered. The author has not missed any detail that needs to be concluded. Overall, I loved the book. I would recommend 1000 times.
16 reviews
January 31, 2023
Loved it!!!!

I absolutely love this series!!! I laughed, I cried then laughed some more. I'm hoping there is more to come, can't wait to find out about Eziah's mate and wtf with Cassen.....
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172 reviews3 followers
January 31, 2023
loose ends

Definitely ends with some loose ends untied and it took my so long to finish this one I can’t even remember how it started but I do remember the spicy scenes were decent. Probably going to be another book or two based off the ending
21 reviews1 follower
September 24, 2023
Invested in these characters!

I am totally invested in these characters. I would highly recommend to any reader who likes character enrichment within a series. The plot was well written with enough angst to keep one guessing.
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42 reviews
September 23, 2024
This entire series kept me busy for a week. I was in love with the entire story and since its been a while since i read all of them all of the books turned into one big one in my head. So ill give them all the same rating
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28 reviews
December 5, 2024
I really enjoyed this book, even though I thought it was more of an emotional rollercoaster than the previous ones. I love this series so much, and I think that Jessica Hall is an amazing author! I can't get enough of her books!! 😍
2 reviews
January 4, 2023
Fated series

Awesome books can't wait for the next one for Elijah's story taming the alpha's daughter hope it comes out soon love these books
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265 reviews
January 14, 2023
I love it!

This is my favorite book out of the set. It has brought so many emotions to me and was a roller-coaster of laughs and tears.
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73 reviews
March 10, 2023
The plot felt very scattered and disconnected, so was not really worth it.
8 reviews1 follower
March 31, 2023
loved this series just wish it was longer

I loved every book. I loved the characters and their personalities. 6 books just wasn’t enough I want more please.
1,243 reviews3 followers
May 5, 2023
Great book

The conclusion of this great threesome and the sacrifices they make to be in each other lives. A very good story.
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8 reviews
May 18, 2023
The book ties out Marabelles story want to know what happens with Eziah and Rose
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101 reviews1 follower
December 11, 2024
There is a lot happening in this book, but ultimately it comes down to trust. Of course there is a HEA. I enjoyed reading both books and the characters in these books.
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533 reviews4 followers
January 20, 2023
Good

Let's see...this book covered way more info than the previous ones did. It was jammed packed with info and stories, that I kept wondering about the other characters that are part of the story.
It was also very fast paced, with big gaps between times.
I obviously want to know more about Ezriah and his side of things as well as what the hell happened with Rose, Case and Vince....why? Like that is the biggest question this book left me with. Why?
Overall it was good it had all the spice, love, heartache that I can't get enough of.
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51 reviews
May 22, 2025
Really enjoyed the character development throughout this book, It felt easy to connect with the FMC, + wolf shifters 😏
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64 reviews
September 3, 2023
Love iiiiit. Kyan and Jonah 🤩 congrats Jessica, this series is soooo gooood. The 4rth one was looong as hell but the whole series is amazing.
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