Really good story
This is a 5 star storyline, that is well executed with excellent character development. While this story has a super hero comic book premise, it has the feels, and heart, of so much more. This author has talent and I hope this is book 1 to the start of a series. That being said, there is one very big negative — it needs serious proofing (accordingly, I docked the review by one star). I was able to read around that and enjoy the story, but a lack of proofing will hold this author back with bad reviews.