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Ringdweller #1
Scorned Prince
Prince Migo Rikaydian's cowardice has lost him his mother's favor. He learns of a plan to have him assassinated before he turns 18 so his mother can retain the throne. He seeks to regain her favor by hunting down a shaman assassin and eliminating any other shaman he can find.
Katsi Danan, the shaman girl he's after, is no killer. She's an outcast seeking to end the 400 year conflict between her tribe and city-state ruled by Migo's mother. She uncovers a plot by the tribe to revive ancient, terrible magic that would allow them to ravage the city, but thousands would die on both sides. Her power alone might not be enough to stop it.
Migo sees that there's more than his own life at stake and must decide how deep his loyalties lie.
Katsi Danan, the shaman girl he's after, is no killer. She's an outcast seeking to end the 400 year conflict between her tribe and city-state ruled by Migo's mother. She uncovers a plot by the tribe to revive ancient, terrible magic that would allow them to ravage the city, but thousands would die on both sides. Her power alone might not be enough to stop it.
Migo sees that there's more than his own life at stake and must decide how deep his loyalties lie.
228 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 23, 2023
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Brady Hunsaker
13 books399 followersBrady was born in a stronghold at the base of the Rocky Mountains. He currently resides there with his wife, their two daughters, and a few domesticated house lions of a rare breed. He set out with the goal to write fantasy that anybody could read, with characters who face real life struggles. Everyone deserves to feel like there is hope.
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February 19, 2023
I am very conflicted about this rating.
I think the world and premise get ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Whereas the characters and execution get ⭐️⭐️
**I wrote a really long post and I’m sad that I lost it**
Migo is a prince who is determined to earn his spot in the royal guard as well as his heartless Queen mother’s heart by ridding the world of shamans. Katsi is a newly awakened shaman who wants to find answers as well as peace. Through terrible circumstances, Katsi and Migo find themselves aligned to defeat a greater evil. Can they set aside their differences?
Okay.
Let’s start this…
The world: I like the world. I wished though it would have been explained better about the cycles and marks. I often felt confused on the timeline because the assassination plot was supposed to occur at the end of seven cycles, but it felt like we went over that (not including the storm in the battle). Traveling didn’t have the same impact because I couldn’t relate to how long a cycle was or how long a mark was.
Premise: again, it’s a good premise. I wish there was a little more. The feud between the shamans and the ringdwellers was talked about but I didn’t feel it as deep as I should have. There was a lot of telling rather than showing in this book.
The characters:
This might hurt a lot but I was super disinterested in Migo as a character. The conflict between him and his mom was also more told rather than shown. Other than the one instance in the beginning, we don’t get much interaction to feel the “deep seeded hatred” that Migo says his mom has for him. Additionally, when it comes to Migo, he really dislikes himself and there was only so much I could take of hearing how he thought he should die or how it was okay that his mom was going to murder him. I understand self-loathing as a character trait but instead it became his whole personality. It was tiring.
Katsi. She was slightly more interesting but still had some basic issues as she progressed through the book. I think the inconsistencies killed me and made me over analyze her character. Early on she or Damani says she is sixteen, and then in other chapter she is seventeen. The relic plot line was okay but again, it was more told to the audience vs Katsi experiencing it and showing the audience what was happening.
Scales. I think scales was awesome. It reminded me of the little dude from frozen 2. My problem with scales is that he was there and then during battle scenes he was gone. He seemed more like an afterthought/comedic relief. I liked him but I think it would have been better if he was incorporated into the scenes better.
The romance:
I think it should have been left out. It was vastly underdeveloped. I don’t think I believe that after two weeks, a prince whose sole purpose was to rid his area of shamans, fell in love with a shaman to the point he was ready to burn down the whole world for her. He was mostly unconscious the entire time. I could see if it was because she was nice to him because he wasn’t treated well, but still I don’t think the romance belonged in this book. I think it would have been better in the second book.
Magic:
I feel like this magic system was lacking consequences. Magic should have a cost (unless it’s me in DnD because I deserve all the spell slots). It felt like there was no consequence, which would be okay if the shaman magic was explained more.
Overall, I did like it- despite what all my criticisms might suggest. I think the second book will take us to more places with more people, and I think it will be good.
I think the world and premise get ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Whereas the characters and execution get ⭐️⭐️
**I wrote a really long post and I’m sad that I lost it**
Migo is a prince who is determined to earn his spot in the royal guard as well as his heartless Queen mother’s heart by ridding the world of shamans. Katsi is a newly awakened shaman who wants to find answers as well as peace. Through terrible circumstances, Katsi and Migo find themselves aligned to defeat a greater evil. Can they set aside their differences?
Okay.
Let’s start this…
The world: I like the world. I wished though it would have been explained better about the cycles and marks. I often felt confused on the timeline because the assassination plot was supposed to occur at the end of seven cycles, but it felt like we went over that (not including the storm in the battle). Traveling didn’t have the same impact because I couldn’t relate to how long a cycle was or how long a mark was.
Premise: again, it’s a good premise. I wish there was a little more. The feud between the shamans and the ringdwellers was talked about but I didn’t feel it as deep as I should have. There was a lot of telling rather than showing in this book.
The characters:
This might hurt a lot but I was super disinterested in Migo as a character. The conflict between him and his mom was also more told rather than shown. Other than the one instance in the beginning, we don’t get much interaction to feel the “deep seeded hatred” that Migo says his mom has for him. Additionally, when it comes to Migo, he really dislikes himself and there was only so much I could take of hearing how he thought he should die or how it was okay that his mom was going to murder him. I understand self-loathing as a character trait but instead it became his whole personality. It was tiring.
Katsi. She was slightly more interesting but still had some basic issues as she progressed through the book. I think the inconsistencies killed me and made me over analyze her character. Early on she or Damani says she is sixteen, and then in other chapter she is seventeen. The relic plot line was okay but again, it was more told to the audience vs Katsi experiencing it and showing the audience what was happening.
Scales. I think scales was awesome. It reminded me of the little dude from frozen 2. My problem with scales is that he was there and then during battle scenes he was gone. He seemed more like an afterthought/comedic relief. I liked him but I think it would have been better if he was incorporated into the scenes better.
The romance:
I think it should have been left out. It was vastly underdeveloped. I don’t think I believe that after two weeks, a prince whose sole purpose was to rid his area of shamans, fell in love with a shaman to the point he was ready to burn down the whole world for her. He was mostly unconscious the entire time. I could see if it was because she was nice to him because he wasn’t treated well, but still I don’t think the romance belonged in this book. I think it would have been better in the second book.
Magic:
I feel like this magic system was lacking consequences. Magic should have a cost (unless it’s me in DnD because I deserve all the spell slots). It felt like there was no consequence, which would be okay if the shaman magic was explained more.
Overall, I did like it- despite what all my criticisms might suggest. I think the second book will take us to more places with more people, and I think it will be good.
November 15, 2023
I think Scorned Prince has excellent world-building, and Brady did an amazing job at the dual POV. This has a compelling plotline! I particularly liked the naming of the characters, creatures, and plants. Very creative and eloquent!
I loved the way he described the environment and natural disasters that occurred. There were some beautiful passages.
Favourite quote: "I don't know what magic you used on me... but whatever it is, you've changed me. I would kill for you. I would bleed for you. I would defy the whole empire to keep you safe."
But there were a number of minor aspects that distracted me from the main story. Again: they were minor, but they added up.
A young woman was repetitively referred to as ugly - which is an adjective I never like unless describing a heinous, immoral, or villainous act. Not for a normal village girl with a crush on a boy. This was only a side character with a very minor role in the story at least.
Katsi rescues a lizard-like animal at the very beginning of the story, gives it a name, continuously converses with it, and has it with her for over half of the book. Then when things get 'too' dangerous, releases it back into nature and it's never referenced to again. I just found that it was a lot of character-building and plot integration, for nothing. [EDIT: I read the ARC copy, and I understand that the lizard was written back in at the end of the book, before the official publication! Yay!]
A few times, the outcomes just seemed unlikely. For example: The ease of which a half-trained girl managed to get past the royal palace gates, infiltrate the palace itself, and run amok inside the palace was baffling. Mainly the getting inside part... through the front gates while guards were on patrol and in plain sight. She just ran through and entered the palace and started causing mayhem when guards finally caught up to her.
The post-kiss reaction took me by surprise. They kissed (and she stabbed him in the process), and then they just pretended like it never happened for quite awhile. I think this could have been acceptable if the characters reflected upon it more in their thoughts.
I had mixed feelings about all the self-loathing and self-pity. On one hand, I think they were very human thoughts. But on the other, it's hard to find a character likable who thinks it's okay for his mother to want to assassinate him because he deserves it - until the final few chapters. The jump to Katsi was refreshing, but then when Katsi got locked up at the end and started blaming everything on herself too, I groaned. But again... I can understand it. But it's not necessarily likable.
I think a few scenes required more reflection. Some things that weren't believable... could have been with more description and reflection.
At the very end when Migo ordered Katsi's childhood friend to no longer associate with Katsi, that angered me. And I wasn't completely sure if the accusatory words that friend later directed at Katsi was because of Migo's order or if it was what he truly felt (since that friend proved to be cowardly and traitorous towards shamans already). Was it an act or not?
Do I recommend Scorned Prince? Yes. Do I think it could be further improved? Also yes. This really does have great potential, and is worth the read.
I loved the way he described the environment and natural disasters that occurred. There were some beautiful passages.
Favourite quote: "I don't know what magic you used on me... but whatever it is, you've changed me. I would kill for you. I would bleed for you. I would defy the whole empire to keep you safe."
But there were a number of minor aspects that distracted me from the main story. Again: they were minor, but they added up.
A young woman was repetitively referred to as ugly - which is an adjective I never like unless describing a heinous, immoral, or villainous act. Not for a normal village girl with a crush on a boy. This was only a side character with a very minor role in the story at least.
Katsi rescues a lizard-like animal at the very beginning of the story, gives it a name, continuously converses with it, and has it with her for over half of the book. Then when things get 'too' dangerous, releases it back into nature and it's never referenced to again. I just found that it was a lot of character-building and plot integration, for nothing. [EDIT: I read the ARC copy, and I understand that the lizard was written back in at the end of the book, before the official publication! Yay!]
A few times, the outcomes just seemed unlikely. For example: The ease of which a half-trained girl managed to get past the royal palace gates, infiltrate the palace itself, and run amok inside the palace was baffling. Mainly the getting inside part... through the front gates while guards were on patrol and in plain sight. She just ran through and entered the palace and started causing mayhem when guards finally caught up to her.
The post-kiss reaction took me by surprise. They kissed (and she stabbed him in the process), and then they just pretended like it never happened for quite awhile. I think this could have been acceptable if the characters reflected upon it more in their thoughts.
I had mixed feelings about all the self-loathing and self-pity. On one hand, I think they were very human thoughts. But on the other, it's hard to find a character likable who thinks it's okay for his mother to want to assassinate him because he deserves it - until the final few chapters. The jump to Katsi was refreshing, but then when Katsi got locked up at the end and started blaming everything on herself too, I groaned. But again... I can understand it. But it's not necessarily likable.
I think a few scenes required more reflection. Some things that weren't believable... could have been with more description and reflection.
At the very end when Migo ordered Katsi's childhood friend to no longer associate with Katsi, that angered me. And I wasn't completely sure if the accusatory words that friend later directed at Katsi was because of Migo's order or if it was what he truly felt (since that friend proved to be cowardly and traitorous towards shamans already). Was it an act or not?
Do I recommend Scorned Prince? Yes. Do I think it could be further improved? Also yes. This really does have great potential, and is worth the read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 24, 2023
*ARC REVIEW*
(My only regret ARC reading this book is I now have to wait for the second book!)
This book follows the story of a prince who blindly obeys his mother, an evil queen. When the Prince finds himself in an unlikely partnership with his sworn enemy, his loyalty becomes in question.
This world is so unique from any other fantasy book I have read. I really enjoyed the introduction into the world, the magic, and the characters. The author was incredibly successful in creating an immersive world for the reader.
This is definitely up the alley of Throne of Glass fans or Dance of Thieves fans. If you’re a fan of Throne of Glass, or the writings of Suzanne Collins than you’d probably enjoy this book because it is very similar to that writing style.
I loved the authors writing style and the imagery he was able to create. The book captivates you into the world immediately and the whole “boring world building” thing is avoided.
I got the ebook version for the arc, and while I don’t normally prefer to own ebook copies, this is one I wouldn’t mind owning. The format is wonderful. However I love the cover and I will be purchasing the paperback edition when it is released. I love the cover and think it represents the story well.
Also, as someone who loves maps with my fantasy stories, I LOVED THE MAP OF THIS WORLD!
(My only regret ARC reading this book is I now have to wait for the second book!)
This book follows the story of a prince who blindly obeys his mother, an evil queen. When the Prince finds himself in an unlikely partnership with his sworn enemy, his loyalty becomes in question.
This world is so unique from any other fantasy book I have read. I really enjoyed the introduction into the world, the magic, and the characters. The author was incredibly successful in creating an immersive world for the reader.
This is definitely up the alley of Throne of Glass fans or Dance of Thieves fans. If you’re a fan of Throne of Glass, or the writings of Suzanne Collins than you’d probably enjoy this book because it is very similar to that writing style.
I loved the authors writing style and the imagery he was able to create. The book captivates you into the world immediately and the whole “boring world building” thing is avoided.
I got the ebook version for the arc, and while I don’t normally prefer to own ebook copies, this is one I wouldn’t mind owning. The format is wonderful. However I love the cover and I will be purchasing the paperback edition when it is released. I love the cover and think it represents the story well.
Also, as someone who loves maps with my fantasy stories, I LOVED THE MAP OF THIS WORLD!
February 4, 2023
"These are the tears of the innocent who has been misjudged."
5/5 ⭐
Scorned Prince was a very anticipated read of mine in 2023 and Brady Hunsaker did not disappoint!
We follow along Migo and Katsi in this new YA Epic Fantasy.
A prince who only believes in one truth is set to be assassinated and a young woman who wants peace but is on a quest to find her own power must overcome their own trust and beliefs to stop the downfall of their society.
This book is written in dual POV, which is perfect as we see into their minds and witness their inner turmoils. There were times when I just wanted to snap at one of the characters. It just shows the reality and realistic parts of how people can have their trauma perceived.
When I got to the battle scenes I just couldn't put the book down. It was nicely written and you were never confused about what was going on.
I honestly cannot wait until the next book where I'm sure we will see more of the magic and possible consequences of the choices that were made.
"You've been nothing more than a tool in their eyes. Don't forget yourself. He knew who you were. That's why he was willing to die for you."
It was a fun fast-paced story that has me wanting more! That ending had me dreading the wait time until I can get my hands on the next book in The Ringdweller Series .
Thank you to the author Brady Hunsaker for providing me with an E-ARC in exchange for an honest review.
5/5 ⭐
Scorned Prince was a very anticipated read of mine in 2023 and Brady Hunsaker did not disappoint!
We follow along Migo and Katsi in this new YA Epic Fantasy.
A prince who only believes in one truth is set to be assassinated and a young woman who wants peace but is on a quest to find her own power must overcome their own trust and beliefs to stop the downfall of their society.
This book is written in dual POV, which is perfect as we see into their minds and witness their inner turmoils. There were times when I just wanted to snap at one of the characters. It just shows the reality and realistic parts of how people can have their trauma perceived.
When I got to the battle scenes I just couldn't put the book down. It was nicely written and you were never confused about what was going on.
I honestly cannot wait until the next book where I'm sure we will see more of the magic and possible consequences of the choices that were made.
"You've been nothing more than a tool in their eyes. Don't forget yourself. He knew who you were. That's why he was willing to die for you."
It was a fun fast-paced story that has me wanting more! That ending had me dreading the wait time until I can get my hands on the next book in The Ringdweller Series .
Thank you to the author Brady Hunsaker for providing me with an E-ARC in exchange for an honest review.
February 9, 2023
*ARC Review*
This was my first ARC book to ever read/review and I hope I do the review justice. I’m going to give it a solid 3.5-4 stars. It’s definitely geared toward YA in my opinion and it took me about 50% to get into the book where the action started to pick up — why I gave not 5 stars.
Prince Migo is raised by his abusive mom, the queen, and she has issued that all of their enemy, the Shamanfolk, should be eradicated and massacred. After an attack on the kingdom by the Shaman, Migo is tended to by the enemy and some of his thought process starts to change that they possibly may not be as evil as his mother has said.
The author does a great job of immersing you immediately in the world and it’s honestly not like any fantasy book I’ve read. He paints such a descriptive picture of the world with all of the colors and storms.
- Duel POV from Migo and Katsi - the 2 main characters
- Slow burn angst and dare I say enemy to lovers possibly in the second book?!
- Beginning stages of learning magic
- Treason within the kingdom and murder
Can’t wait to see what happens between the 2 main characters in the 2nd book!
This was my first ARC book to ever read/review and I hope I do the review justice. I’m going to give it a solid 3.5-4 stars. It’s definitely geared toward YA in my opinion and it took me about 50% to get into the book where the action started to pick up — why I gave not 5 stars.
Prince Migo is raised by his abusive mom, the queen, and she has issued that all of their enemy, the Shamanfolk, should be eradicated and massacred. After an attack on the kingdom by the Shaman, Migo is tended to by the enemy and some of his thought process starts to change that they possibly may not be as evil as his mother has said.
The author does a great job of immersing you immediately in the world and it’s honestly not like any fantasy book I’ve read. He paints such a descriptive picture of the world with all of the colors and storms.
- Duel POV from Migo and Katsi - the 2 main characters
- Slow burn angst and dare I say enemy to lovers possibly in the second book?!
- Beginning stages of learning magic
- Treason within the kingdom and murder
Can’t wait to see what happens between the 2 main characters in the 2nd book!
February 5, 2023
Sands, I flew through this book - read it in barely 7 marks i.e. under ONE cycle! (If you don't understand this, read the book.)
I was super excited for this one and it does not disappoint. The author is easily able to deliver on what he promised.
My review in word: IMMERSIVE
My Rating: 3.75-4 stars
So, what worked?
1. THE WORLD: beautiful, no-nonsense worldbuilding. A tidally locked planet makes for such a good setting and the author creates fantastic ice and sand imagery. Even the animals, the foliage were done to perfection.
The author introduces elements and the world with great ease, garnishing the story with this magic here and there. Significant efforts were taken to not make the pacing and setting overwhelming, which is great for a YA fantasy.
If this didn't convince you enough, just have a look at the MAP for this story.
Special mention: where can I get Linara stones?
2. THE NARRATION: seamless dual POVs with chapter titles adds so much depth to the story. Equally invested in both the characters, I was invested in the side characters too! Hatan, Tarahan, Damani made for a rich context.
3. THE CHARACTERS: Good, convincing backstories with well sprinkled referencing. Both Migo and Katsi were likable enough, human enough. Trauma, self-loathing, feelings of not being good enough made them believable but not annoying.
4. THE FEUD: The dispute of the shamans and the Ringdwellers, intensified by the Maedari was probably my favorite discord in this story. It was chaotic, representative of different views, delivering on the idea of making absolute judgements is dangerous.
5. THE KISS SCENE + THE CLIMAX: executed to perfection
What fell short?
1. Not enough buildup. Things just happened. We weren't shown them occuring, but TOLD that this happened. For eg. Katsi's powers
2. The romance happened wayyy too quickly for me, making it unconvincing. These characters trusted each other pretty easily imo considering the generation long feud.
3. Some elements were introduced but ended up having no impact on the story. Eg. Scales, the amulet.
Overall, this book was extremely fun. It was easy to get into and maintained its momentum. Not a single chapter is boring and the books leaves you asking for more. Fantasy enthusiasts will have fun with it and it works as a great primer for fantasy beginners!
My gratitude to the author for providing the ARC!
I was super excited for this one and it does not disappoint. The author is easily able to deliver on what he promised.
My review in word: IMMERSIVE
My Rating: 3.75-4 stars
So, what worked?
1. THE WORLD: beautiful, no-nonsense worldbuilding. A tidally locked planet makes for such a good setting and the author creates fantastic ice and sand imagery. Even the animals, the foliage were done to perfection.
The author introduces elements and the world with great ease, garnishing the story with this magic here and there. Significant efforts were taken to not make the pacing and setting overwhelming, which is great for a YA fantasy.
If this didn't convince you enough, just have a look at the MAP for this story.
Special mention: where can I get Linara stones?
2. THE NARRATION: seamless dual POVs with chapter titles adds so much depth to the story. Equally invested in both the characters, I was invested in the side characters too! Hatan, Tarahan, Damani made for a rich context.
3. THE CHARACTERS: Good, convincing backstories with well sprinkled referencing. Both Migo and Katsi were likable enough, human enough. Trauma, self-loathing, feelings of not being good enough made them believable but not annoying.
4. THE FEUD: The dispute of the shamans and the Ringdwellers, intensified by the Maedari was probably my favorite discord in this story. It was chaotic, representative of different views, delivering on the idea of making absolute judgements is dangerous.
5. THE KISS SCENE + THE CLIMAX: executed to perfection
What fell short?
1. Not enough buildup. Things just happened. We weren't shown them occuring, but TOLD that this happened. For eg. Katsi's powers
2. The romance happened wayyy too quickly for me, making it unconvincing. These characters trusted each other pretty easily imo considering the generation long feud.
3. Some elements were introduced but ended up having no impact on the story. Eg. Scales, the amulet.
Overall, this book was extremely fun. It was easy to get into and maintained its momentum. Not a single chapter is boring and the books leaves you asking for more. Fantasy enthusiasts will have fun with it and it works as a great primer for fantasy beginners!
My gratitude to the author for providing the ARC!
June 5, 2024
Cool premise, terrible execution. The writing style was clunky, unrefined, and in desperate need of an editor. Passive voice, constant telling, and filter words run rampant, not even to mention the strangely placed and oftentimes irrelevant worldbuilding infodumps that could have been so much more gracefully worked into the narrative.
The characters never felt like real people. I could never really orient myself in the world or picture it clearly. The romance and character development were rushed and nonsensical.
I genuinely think the ideas for this world and this story are awesome, which is why I'm so disappointed by the book itself. I'm fascinated by the possibilities of such a universe, and the factions developed within it, but instead of reading a novel, I feel like I'm listening to the detailed ramblings of a teenaged sci-fi nerd at the lunch table. Certainly passionate, certainly creative, but several years away from developing the skills necessary to execute his vision.
Keep at it bro, but please, for the love of all that is holy, take a writing course.
The characters never felt like real people. I could never really orient myself in the world or picture it clearly. The romance and character development were rushed and nonsensical.
I genuinely think the ideas for this world and this story are awesome, which is why I'm so disappointed by the book itself. I'm fascinated by the possibilities of such a universe, and the factions developed within it, but instead of reading a novel, I feel like I'm listening to the detailed ramblings of a teenaged sci-fi nerd at the lunch table. Certainly passionate, certainly creative, but several years away from developing the skills necessary to execute his vision.
Keep at it bro, but please, for the love of all that is holy, take a writing course.
February 6, 2023
*ARC review*
I thoroughly enjoyed this book! For his debut novel, it was an extremely compelling read.
Due to the nature of this novel (it being extremely different to any fantasy story I’ve read), a good 40%-50% of the novel is spent setting up the story, introducing the characters and familiarising the reader with the world. I personally would’ve preferred the action to start a little sooner, with the world being developed along the side, but the descriptions and central conflict were written very well, so it’s only a very minor criticism.
The two main characters, Migo and Katsi, might be some of the most real characters I’ve read in a while. When it comes to the YA genre, characters can seems under-developed and even outlandish sometimes. However with these two, their fears and hopes are portrayed very well and in a way that you yourself would experience these emotions if put through their circumstances. Migo did seem to brood a little much for my liking (personal preference don’t shoot me!), but reflecting on his past and the trials he’s gone through, I think a bit of brooding is warranted!
While the book doesn’t go into too much detail about the central magic system, you get enough information so as not to feel clueless or lost at any point. You know as much as you need to, leaving you thirsting to find out more. I hope with the release of the second book come more explanations because I am DYING to geek out about the lore!!
Fans of high fantasy books I feel will very much enjoy this. It’s a fast and easy read with a new world, dynamic setting and thankfully, not much angst (for the moment I assume…). I didn’t give the book five stars because I simply believe he hasn’t had enough experience writing to measure up to “the classics” yet (you all know what I mean). But I will definitely be finishing the series as and when it releases and look forward to his future works!! :D
TLDR: Read it, it’s pretty good and it’ll get you out of a reading slump :)
I thoroughly enjoyed this book! For his debut novel, it was an extremely compelling read.
Due to the nature of this novel (it being extremely different to any fantasy story I’ve read), a good 40%-50% of the novel is spent setting up the story, introducing the characters and familiarising the reader with the world. I personally would’ve preferred the action to start a little sooner, with the world being developed along the side, but the descriptions and central conflict were written very well, so it’s only a very minor criticism.
The two main characters, Migo and Katsi, might be some of the most real characters I’ve read in a while. When it comes to the YA genre, characters can seems under-developed and even outlandish sometimes. However with these two, their fears and hopes are portrayed very well and in a way that you yourself would experience these emotions if put through their circumstances. Migo did seem to brood a little much for my liking (personal preference don’t shoot me!), but reflecting on his past and the trials he’s gone through, I think a bit of brooding is warranted!
While the book doesn’t go into too much detail about the central magic system, you get enough information so as not to feel clueless or lost at any point. You know as much as you need to, leaving you thirsting to find out more. I hope with the release of the second book come more explanations because I am DYING to geek out about the lore!!
Fans of high fantasy books I feel will very much enjoy this. It’s a fast and easy read with a new world, dynamic setting and thankfully, not much angst (for the moment I assume…). I didn’t give the book five stars because I simply believe he hasn’t had enough experience writing to measure up to “the classics” yet (you all know what I mean). But I will definitely be finishing the series as and when it releases and look forward to his future works!! :D
TLDR: Read it, it’s pretty good and it’ll get you out of a reading slump :)
February 16, 2023
ARC Review
4.5 STARS
My second Indie book ever! Really loving these Indie authors proving their work is just as good, if not better, than traditionally published authors.
Scorned Prince is Sanderson-esque fantasy with a touch of Dune. The world is AWESOME! Very unique and easy to understand. The actions sequences, specifically near the end, are amazing and have just the right amount of gore. Katsi is a perfect character. And I loved the subtle dashes of humor sprinkled throughout.
Now, Scorned Prince isn’t perfect, but the missteps are minor and few and far between. Great debut novel!
4.5 STARS
My second Indie book ever! Really loving these Indie authors proving their work is just as good, if not better, than traditionally published authors.
Scorned Prince is Sanderson-esque fantasy with a touch of Dune. The world is AWESOME! Very unique and easy to understand. The actions sequences, specifically near the end, are amazing and have just the right amount of gore. Katsi is a perfect character. And I loved the subtle dashes of humor sprinkled throughout.
Now, Scorned Prince isn’t perfect, but the missteps are minor and few and far between. Great debut novel!
February 5, 2023
** ARC REVIEW **
There are many qualities that make up a good book. Things like a fascinating world, visible character development, and a strong plot. Scorned Prince has all of these things and so much more.
Beyond that though, the mark of a truly good book for me is a book that naturally pulls me in. A book that causes me to forget what’s going on around me, and begin rabidly consuming it until I’m done. About halfway through this book, I lost all self control, became feral, and finished it in half a day.
Some things that truly stood out to me in this book included the dual POV (we LOVE a dual POV), an immersive fantasy world, and relatable characters. The world was shown to us in so many ways, instead of the author just relying on flat telling you what the world was, which I appreciated.
The author was not afraid to allow his male main character to feel less traditional emotions. On top of that, it was heartbreaking to watch a boy fight for love that he never should have had to earn. Both main characters were fascinating and nuanced, and I appreciate that we got to know them individually before they met.
I have one minor critique. Very occasionally, the dialogue between characters will feel a little heavy handed. The author is using it to give us more information, which is good and natural, but it doesn’t flow like a normal conversation. It leaves the interaction feeling just a little bit flat. But truly it only happens a few times, and never between the main characters!
** SPOILER **
Lastly, I am so glad Katsi did not hesitate to kill the queen. That was such an amazing moment!!
There are many qualities that make up a good book. Things like a fascinating world, visible character development, and a strong plot. Scorned Prince has all of these things and so much more.
Beyond that though, the mark of a truly good book for me is a book that naturally pulls me in. A book that causes me to forget what’s going on around me, and begin rabidly consuming it until I’m done. About halfway through this book, I lost all self control, became feral, and finished it in half a day.
Some things that truly stood out to me in this book included the dual POV (we LOVE a dual POV), an immersive fantasy world, and relatable characters. The world was shown to us in so many ways, instead of the author just relying on flat telling you what the world was, which I appreciated.
The author was not afraid to allow his male main character to feel less traditional emotions. On top of that, it was heartbreaking to watch a boy fight for love that he never should have had to earn. Both main characters were fascinating and nuanced, and I appreciate that we got to know them individually before they met.
I have one minor critique. Very occasionally, the dialogue between characters will feel a little heavy handed. The author is using it to give us more information, which is good and natural, but it doesn’t flow like a normal conversation. It leaves the interaction feeling just a little bit flat. But truly it only happens a few times, and never between the main characters!
** SPOILER **
Lastly, I am so glad Katsi did not hesitate to kill the queen. That was such an amazing moment!!
December 19, 2023
One of the best lines to start a book:
The Queen was going to kill him. His own Mother.
Say what? There doesn’t seem to be a lot of loving affection between the Queen and Prince Migo. Migo finds out she plans to have him assassinated in 8 days. He decides to win back her favor by destroying the shamans. Things don’t go as planned once he meets Katsi could this be me enemies to lovers? The novel’s ending events were unexpected. I gasped. You’ll have to read it to find out how things are left for book 2 to carry on.
I really enjoyed this YA fantasy. We have betrayal, a quest, budding romance and vengeance. Oh this series is going to be so good.
The Queen was going to kill him. His own Mother.
Say what? There doesn’t seem to be a lot of loving affection between the Queen and Prince Migo. Migo finds out she plans to have him assassinated in 8 days. He decides to win back her favor by destroying the shamans. Things don’t go as planned once he meets Katsi could this be me enemies to lovers? The novel’s ending events were unexpected. I gasped. You’ll have to read it to find out how things are left for book 2 to carry on.
I really enjoyed this YA fantasy. We have betrayal, a quest, budding romance and vengeance. Oh this series is going to be so good.
August 15, 2023
If your favorite thing to read in fantasy is intriguing world building, then you're going to want to check this one out. The author crafts a fascinating world that gives you enough reference to get your bearings but leaves enough mystery to keep you interested in learning more. If you love enemies to lovers, you're probably going to stick around for the series. And if you love magic systems, the author gives you just enough of a taste to whet your appetite for more.
February 11, 2023
Synopsis:
The Ringdwellers and the Shamans have been at war for years. Habitable land is in short supply and devastating storms ravage civilization, tipping the balance of power in favor of the storm-wielding shamans that Queen Rikaydian is hellbent on eradicating. Her hatred for them burns hotter than the deserts of the Scorched Waste, and even hotter still is her hatred for her son. Prince Migo knows he is a disappointment to her, but he never imagined they she would order his assassination. His only hope is to prove his usefulness by bringing as many Shamans as possible to justice. But his plans go awry when he encounters Katsi Danan. Her power is formidable, but she is unlike any Shaman he has met. She seeks a peace that hasn’t been known for centuries, and though her words cut him deeply, Migo finds himself torn between a lifetime of practiced hatred, and a future of forgiveness and possibility.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Review:
I have never read a fantasy with such compelling world building. The geography of this story is intoxicating, and so much fun to read. The earth is tidally locked to the sun, creating incredible biomes that almost feel like characters in the story. It’s incredibly well done.
Migo is difficult to love in the beginning of the story, but his growth was so satisfying. I felt myself changing my opinion of him, just as he changed his opinion of himself, and I loved that connection. Katsi, on the other hand, is absolutely incredible from the very beginning and she becomes more complex.
Their relationship is very well written, and I really enjoyed their banter. There were a few twists that I could never have predicted, and I love that. The climax of the story was impeccably written and I was completely enthralled. I got to the last page, and I could hardly believe it was over. I am ready and eager for book 2, I have to know what happens next!
Hunsaker wove a very intricate world with a complex and interesting cast of characters, and created a story that far exceeded even my high expectations. The goal was to write fantasy that anyone could read, with characters that face real life struggles… you knocked it out of the park!
The Ringdwellers and the Shamans have been at war for years. Habitable land is in short supply and devastating storms ravage civilization, tipping the balance of power in favor of the storm-wielding shamans that Queen Rikaydian is hellbent on eradicating. Her hatred for them burns hotter than the deserts of the Scorched Waste, and even hotter still is her hatred for her son. Prince Migo knows he is a disappointment to her, but he never imagined they she would order his assassination. His only hope is to prove his usefulness by bringing as many Shamans as possible to justice. But his plans go awry when he encounters Katsi Danan. Her power is formidable, but she is unlike any Shaman he has met. She seeks a peace that hasn’t been known for centuries, and though her words cut him deeply, Migo finds himself torn between a lifetime of practiced hatred, and a future of forgiveness and possibility.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Review:
I have never read a fantasy with such compelling world building. The geography of this story is intoxicating, and so much fun to read. The earth is tidally locked to the sun, creating incredible biomes that almost feel like characters in the story. It’s incredibly well done.
Migo is difficult to love in the beginning of the story, but his growth was so satisfying. I felt myself changing my opinion of him, just as he changed his opinion of himself, and I loved that connection. Katsi, on the other hand, is absolutely incredible from the very beginning and she becomes more complex.
Their relationship is very well written, and I really enjoyed their banter. There were a few twists that I could never have predicted, and I love that. The climax of the story was impeccably written and I was completely enthralled. I got to the last page, and I could hardly believe it was over. I am ready and eager for book 2, I have to know what happens next!
Hunsaker wove a very intricate world with a complex and interesting cast of characters, and created a story that far exceeded even my high expectations. The goal was to write fantasy that anyone could read, with characters that face real life struggles… you knocked it out of the park!
February 7, 2023
Thank you to the author for providing an ARC!!!
This book is refreshing. It’s definitely YA which if you’ve been getting tired of all the sexy stuff from books claiming to be YA then this book actually sticks to its promise.
The world building was gorgeous and the descriptions of the magical aspects were incredible (I’d actually want to stand in the Maedari, it reminded me of the northern lights but on steroids)
The story is fast paced without any lag.
The dual perspectives were executed exceptionally well and I really liked katsi as a character. The author didn’t try to make her seem like the
supreme-ruling-goddess/ultimate/queen/badass-at-everything/makes-no-mistakes /impossible-perfect character that majority of authors seem to do. She was a young girl and he portrayed her perfectly.
Migo was a good character and I can understand his fear of the Maedari considering how he lost his father. There was certain times that I become a bit annoyed due to having expections of him since he is the captain of the guard but then I realised it’s because so many authors portray the lead male character with all these impossible qualities. He experienced emotions, he has fears, he has weaknesses, he fears his mother (which is something I’m sure any normal person generally does), he is the captain of the guard yet he also has limits. I’d say that Brady did an excellent job at creating realistic characters.
The book is really easy to follow, there isn’t any over complicated magical systems and corruption happening that you need a glossary and to back track to in order to keep up with the story.
Would I recommend this book to anyone? Yes definitely! It’s super clean except maybe for a few gore scenes which for me wasn’t bad but it does include beheading etc.
Give this book a try if you want something that is fast-paced, straight to the point, actually YA and gives a honestly realistic approach to characters without being far-fetched.
Also follow His Tiktok it’s hilarious 😂
This book is refreshing. It’s definitely YA which if you’ve been getting tired of all the sexy stuff from books claiming to be YA then this book actually sticks to its promise.
The world building was gorgeous and the descriptions of the magical aspects were incredible (I’d actually want to stand in the Maedari, it reminded me of the northern lights but on steroids)
The story is fast paced without any lag.
The dual perspectives were executed exceptionally well and I really liked katsi as a character. The author didn’t try to make her seem like the
supreme-ruling-goddess/ultimate/queen/badass-at-everything/makes-no-mistakes /impossible-perfect character that majority of authors seem to do. She was a young girl and he portrayed her perfectly.
Migo was a good character and I can understand his fear of the Maedari considering how he lost his father. There was certain times that I become a bit annoyed due to having expections of him since he is the captain of the guard but then I realised it’s because so many authors portray the lead male character with all these impossible qualities. He experienced emotions, he has fears, he has weaknesses, he fears his mother (which is something I’m sure any normal person generally does), he is the captain of the guard yet he also has limits. I’d say that Brady did an excellent job at creating realistic characters.
The book is really easy to follow, there isn’t any over complicated magical systems and corruption happening that you need a glossary and to back track to in order to keep up with the story.
Would I recommend this book to anyone? Yes definitely! It’s super clean except maybe for a few gore scenes which for me wasn’t bad but it does include beheading etc.
Give this book a try if you want something that is fast-paced, straight to the point, actually YA and gives a honestly realistic approach to characters without being far-fetched.
Also follow His Tiktok it’s hilarious 😂
September 19, 2023
ARC Review
The Scorned Prince
Brady Hunsaker
4.5/5 ⭐
Arc review
Release Date: March 23
This is my very first ARC and I'm convinced despite that exciting fact that this is a very special book.
Author Brady Hunsaker has made his debut YA epic fantasy Scorned Prince an instant page turner without unnecessary fluff or flowery explanations. The way that this novel centralizes themes of anxiety, grief, mental health and the search of redemption in the MC's struggles is spectacular.
In my opinion, this is the perfect definition of a gateway fantasy novel. Not only does Brady create beautiful locations and incredible world building but he introduced the reader to relatable characters that are beyond flawed and broken in search of redemption and true change. Complete with a unique way this world operates and exciting magic systems only a true fantasy lover could imagine.
In this dual POV, the Ringdweller Queen seeks to eliminate the Shamanfolk people after the assassination of her husband citing their magic practices as a weapon. Her Son, Prince Migo has been sentenced to be killed by his mother in seven days time for cowardice. Determined to win back her favor, he embarks on a journey to prove his worth where he crosses paths with Katsi, a pacifist shamanfolk woman looking to end a 400 year violent feud with the Ringdwellers and Shamanfolk people. Each having their own scores to settle - they both may be an integral part in changing their worlds forever.
To me, this is a wonderful benchmark of epic fantasy that encompasses all we love. For a debut, it's wonderful. Some character development could have been drawn out a little longer however to think of the reader I was as a young adult - I would have loved this. Brady states his goal is to create YA fantasy for everyone I would say he absolutely accomplished it. I cannot wait to read the second book and see how the characters and world further develop.
The Scorned Prince
Brady Hunsaker
4.5/5 ⭐
Arc review
Release Date: March 23
This is my very first ARC and I'm convinced despite that exciting fact that this is a very special book.
Author Brady Hunsaker has made his debut YA epic fantasy Scorned Prince an instant page turner without unnecessary fluff or flowery explanations. The way that this novel centralizes themes of anxiety, grief, mental health and the search of redemption in the MC's struggles is spectacular.
In my opinion, this is the perfect definition of a gateway fantasy novel. Not only does Brady create beautiful locations and incredible world building but he introduced the reader to relatable characters that are beyond flawed and broken in search of redemption and true change. Complete with a unique way this world operates and exciting magic systems only a true fantasy lover could imagine.
In this dual POV, the Ringdweller Queen seeks to eliminate the Shamanfolk people after the assassination of her husband citing their magic practices as a weapon. Her Son, Prince Migo has been sentenced to be killed by his mother in seven days time for cowardice. Determined to win back her favor, he embarks on a journey to prove his worth where he crosses paths with Katsi, a pacifist shamanfolk woman looking to end a 400 year violent feud with the Ringdwellers and Shamanfolk people. Each having their own scores to settle - they both may be an integral part in changing their worlds forever.
To me, this is a wonderful benchmark of epic fantasy that encompasses all we love. For a debut, it's wonderful. Some character development could have been drawn out a little longer however to think of the reader I was as a young adult - I would have loved this. Brady states his goal is to create YA fantasy for everyone I would say he absolutely accomplished it. I cannot wait to read the second book and see how the characters and world further develop.
April 26, 2023
"I have always felt doom lurking over my shoulder. At least now it has a deadline."
I'd like to thank the author for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review!
I've also posted this review on Instagram and my blog.
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Content Warnings: parental abuse, death of a parent, violence, death, murder
I was really intrigued by the premise of Scorned Prince, especially the magic system and political intrigue, which is what made me pick up this book. I was excited to learn more about the world and its history which we get snippets of throughout the story. The world building was well done and I was able to picture the setting clearly while reading. On the other hand, the writing style when it came to action and characters felt a bit more like we were told what was happening as opposed to seeing it unfold ourselves. The pacing of the plot also felt very fast and I would have liked to see some scenes drawn out more so that we could fully grasp the gravity of the situation and spend more time with the characters. I enjoyed seeing Katsi grow and become more involved in her magic and past. She was very determined and was willing to do anything for what she thought was right. Unfortunately, I felt that the romance didn't have enough time to develop and at times felt like it came out of nowhere. I preferred reading about Katsi and Migo's individual internal struggles more. One of my favourite character was Scales, a lizard the Katsi saves in the beginning of the story. I thought the little pet was very cute and provided some relief from the danger and action of the plot.
Ultimately I liked the concept but found the pacing to be too fast.
I'd like to thank the author for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review!
I've also posted this review on Instagram and my blog.
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Content Warnings: parental abuse, death of a parent, violence, death, murder
I was really intrigued by the premise of Scorned Prince, especially the magic system and political intrigue, which is what made me pick up this book. I was excited to learn more about the world and its history which we get snippets of throughout the story. The world building was well done and I was able to picture the setting clearly while reading. On the other hand, the writing style when it came to action and characters felt a bit more like we were told what was happening as opposed to seeing it unfold ourselves. The pacing of the plot also felt very fast and I would have liked to see some scenes drawn out more so that we could fully grasp the gravity of the situation and spend more time with the characters. I enjoyed seeing Katsi grow and become more involved in her magic and past. She was very determined and was willing to do anything for what she thought was right. Unfortunately, I felt that the romance didn't have enough time to develop and at times felt like it came out of nowhere. I preferred reading about Katsi and Migo's individual internal struggles more. One of my favourite character was Scales, a lizard the Katsi saves in the beginning of the story. I thought the little pet was very cute and provided some relief from the danger and action of the plot.
Ultimately I liked the concept but found the pacing to be too fast.
February 6, 2023
Scorned Prince was my first ARC and I’m so glad it was a good one!
The world building was very well done. I loved the idea of the sun standing still in the sky creating a pure desert in the middle with just a small ring around the edges for life. The creatures and plants are all interesting and new (I would die for Scales) and really add to the immersive world.
I love Katsi. She is everything I want from a female protagonist! She is strong and determined and isn’t afraid to do what needs to be done! I am excited to see how her powers grow as the series progresses.
Migo was good too. I loved that he was strong and had real emotions. I also always love a character that is great with a weapon. However, his self-pity was too much sometimes. I appreciate that it didn’t stop him from trying his best, like it does to some characters.
The duel POV was very well done. I never felt bogged down by the switch because we never stayed too long with one character. Both characters’ POV pushed the story forward even though they were separate for most of the book.
I have just one thing for you as a reader to note. The story takes a long time to get to what you expect it to go and then when we were there it felt rushed. I did love the ending though. I felt that each character grew into what Brady wanted them to be.
I honestly can’t wait for the next book! It is a fun read with a lot of exciting action, clever twists and turns, and a great start to this series!
The world building was very well done. I loved the idea of the sun standing still in the sky creating a pure desert in the middle with just a small ring around the edges for life. The creatures and plants are all interesting and new (I would die for Scales) and really add to the immersive world.
I love Katsi. She is everything I want from a female protagonist! She is strong and determined and isn’t afraid to do what needs to be done! I am excited to see how her powers grow as the series progresses.
Migo was good too. I loved that he was strong and had real emotions. I also always love a character that is great with a weapon. However, his self-pity was too much sometimes. I appreciate that it didn’t stop him from trying his best, like it does to some characters.
The duel POV was very well done. I never felt bogged down by the switch because we never stayed too long with one character. Both characters’ POV pushed the story forward even though they were separate for most of the book.
I have just one thing for you as a reader to note. The story takes a long time to get to what you expect it to go and then when we were there it felt rushed. I did love the ending though. I felt that each character grew into what Brady wanted them to be.
I honestly can’t wait for the next book! It is a fun read with a lot of exciting action, clever twists and turns, and a great start to this series!
February 9, 2023
Thank you to the author, Brady Hunsaker, for providing me with an arc!
This book was everything. I knew when I first signed up for an arc that the concept was interesting and that I’d be hooked, but BOY, did I underestimate how much I’d be dying for the second book.
The pace the author set was perfect. The alternating POVs kept the pace of this book and provided just the right amount from each character every single chapter. Migo was a beautiful character with so much depth that made me feel everything he felt. Katsi is a character who I just know has so much more development coming and I can’t wait to see it unfold.
Characters aside, the world the author builds is so unique and wonderful. A planet gridlocked with areas barren and wasted, the ring is where most people live and cast out the shamans and magic. The dynamic was built in such a way that you didn’t once question who was on what side.
This book was wonderful and action-packed and I will be patiently (not) waiting for the next installment.
This book was everything. I knew when I first signed up for an arc that the concept was interesting and that I’d be hooked, but BOY, did I underestimate how much I’d be dying for the second book.
The pace the author set was perfect. The alternating POVs kept the pace of this book and provided just the right amount from each character every single chapter. Migo was a beautiful character with so much depth that made me feel everything he felt. Katsi is a character who I just know has so much more development coming and I can’t wait to see it unfold.
Characters aside, the world the author builds is so unique and wonderful. A planet gridlocked with areas barren and wasted, the ring is where most people live and cast out the shamans and magic. The dynamic was built in such a way that you didn’t once question who was on what side.
This book was wonderful and action-packed and I will be patiently (not) waiting for the next installment.
February 3, 2023
This is my first review on Goodreads but I have several on Amazon. This book is great for both adults and teenagers which is one of the reasons I’ve rated it so highly. Also, having read the first book ever by several authors normally you have to overlook multiple errors and a lot of times too much verbiage in world building. That’s not the case here and honestly if I hadn’t known this was his first book I’d never have guessed. The characters are well developed. You have a good grasp of the setting. You feel what the characters feel and they are very relatable even though the world is fictional and has magic. It was an easy read as in I didn’t have to force it and enjoyed it. I was mad at the end with how it was left but only because I wanted to know what happened. But I will have to wait just like everyone else! The only criticism I would give at all which is more preference than actually anything that’s negative is that I would’ve liked a bit more action & magic. But it’s so minor I thought of leaving this out because I think most if not all will be happy. Also, the way it is left you know that there’s so much more magic to come so again, I cannot wait to read the next book in this series. I’d definitely recommend this for all lovers of YA fantasy.
March 20, 2023
Family tragedy, family trauma, family discord. An outraged, angry, evil queen, a prince who's been disowned. If you enjoy all these things plus epic battle scenes, dystopian, fantasy, then you'll love Scorned Prince!
I enjoyed this book. I love dystopians and fantasy, and family issues just make for some great drama (as long as it's fictional. Real life, not so much!). The battle scenes were a little too descriptive for my taste, but all in all, a book worth reading!
~I was given a complimentary copy of this book. No positive review was required, and all opinions are my own.~
I enjoyed this book. I love dystopians and fantasy, and family issues just make for some great drama (as long as it's fictional. Real life, not so much!). The battle scenes were a little too descriptive for my taste, but all in all, a book worth reading!
~I was given a complimentary copy of this book. No positive review was required, and all opinions are my own.~
July 9, 2024
My rating is bumped up a little because of Scales. But I don’t think I’m going to continue this series.
February 8, 2023
Overall Impression (non-spoiler)
I enjoyed this read immensely – and there were parts of the story when I couldn’t make myself put it down no matter how hungry I got. While clearly written and easy to follow, the complex world that Brady Hunsaker has created for the Ringdwellers and the Shamanfolk is begging for more secrets to be discovered in future books. You root for the characters, know their motives, and hurt when they feel betrayal or pain. Some of the characters are clearly well-meaning, while others are naturally vain or cruel – but most hold a certain depth that improves the quality of character arcs. The dual POV setup is ideal for exploring the setting, yet Hunsaker makes it easy to keep track of which character has knowledge on a given topic. If you’re looking for an epic fantasy of war, honor, and love, I highly recommend you give Scorned Prince a try.
I await the next installment.
(gives away minor stuff but no massive spoilers)
World Building
The premise to this world is so fascinating, and I am so excited to learn more in future publications. The very setup of the world is a planet locked in place in reference to the sun. The heliosynchronous orbit has turned one part of the world (known as the Scorched Waste) to a hot desert, while the opposite side of the world (the Frozen Waste) hasn’t seen sunlight since this lockstep occurred. The Scorched Waste is unsuitable for any amount of life above-ground – although caves within or around the edges make the Wastes a decent place to hide if running from a Ringdweller.
The term Ringdweller refers to the persons living around the edges of the Scorched Wastes where the sun is perpetually in the east (or west, in other areas that are not central to this storyline). They maintain a political system of an absolute monarchy, headed by a queen or king when the contender reaches the age of 18 and his/her parent abdicates the throne to them. The guard thus answers directly to the monarch, who may command them to any action (moral, amoral, or immoral) and the guard is required to obey or be guilty of treason. The kingdom has few cells for inmates and no requirement for a legal trial (although a trial is a familiar concept), with grievous crimes ending in execution by glaive.
Beyond those of angering the royal family, one of the most dangerous aspects of this world is the Maedaris that arise – tornado-like rushes of air, water, sand, and whatever else is nearby that the whirlwinds can pick up. To Ringdwellers, being caught outside in a Maedari means almost certain death so they must live their lives prepared to return inside if they feels winds increasing at any moment. To shamanfolk (or perhaps just the magical shamans), there is something more in the Maedaris – some sense of creature, intent, or magic that is more than a physical movement. They have a type of armor called stormwalking armor which allows them to be less buffeted by the winds, keeps the sands out of their eyes, and prevents their flying away. Without the enchanted armor, however, Maedaris are equally perilous to shamanfolk as to Ringdwellers.
Through the novel we learn of a few different varieties of edible plants, varying from fruit to the roots of specific mosses. Beyond being different from those on Earth in name, these plants require different care which allows for fascinating farming practices. The fauna that they have are still mostly unknown, with attention brought only to a skink-like lizard and to the rangolas, cat-like and scaled animals that soldiers ride as horses. Rangolas live both domesticated and wild, and the wild ones are not to be trifled with – though the domesticated ones seem more willing to serve as ridden creatures than I can imagine cats on Earth would ever be.
Plot
There are two peoples at war, each looking to exterminate the other. One character believes in the mission; the other rejects it entirely. There is not one driving goal for both characters throughout the entire story: the goals twist and turn as the characters grow, and so the plot changes throughout. is working to gain his mother’s favor, most directly by exterminating as many “shamans” (Shamanfolk, as he doesn’t realize there is a difference) as possible. Migo begins his hunt for Katsi initially believing her involved in a murder – and eventually ends up considering the world entirely differently thanks to her influence. Katsi is working to survive on her own, having left her tribe, and to bring peace to the two warring peoples. Katsi is minding her own business (excepting the occasional theft during a Maedari storm), until she discovers her own magic and returns to her tribe for answers. There she learns that her tribe has a new method to eradicate all Ringdwellers, and hurriedly goes to warn the prince in order to minimize the casualties. Katsi and Migo begin as enemies, forced into position by birth. Ultimately, the plot follows their introduction to each other and the resulting changes in perspective and values.
Characters
Believing as I do that there would be no plot or romance without Katsi and Migo, I will only address them briefly in this section – I think any more would read as redundant by the end of the review. Rather, this section is primarily for my analysis of other characters within the book.
Katsi – I loved the chapter where we got to understand Katsi’s parents. I think who she is, what she believes, and why she acts in the manner she does makes perfect sense once you meet her father and mother. I am a little bit curious how much actual fighting training she received with the tribe and what the final straws were to push her to leave. Additionally, I am interested to see if the time she does end up killing haunts her – I think, given her character, even though she understands the logic and necessity she should have some emotional difficulty accepting her decisions.
Migo – I am very used to the protagonist soldier who holds honor and his word in high regard (and perhaps I’ve read too many fae novels where they can twist words but cannot lie). We see Migo care significantly about looking powerful but never truly considering honor in the way so many protagonists do. Indeed, his temper tantrum when beating the soldier (when his mother watched training in a flashback) and his direct lies to Damani both demonstrate no honor to Migo’s name. While Hatan tries to push the issue, Migo clearly has never really considered what is honorable until this story (and, still, it is an inconsistent thought). I was taken aback by the lack of honor, but I think it makes significant sense given his mother. I am curious that no code of chivalry of any sort was taught (or at least none that he acknowledged) at his training academy. Because others demonstrate honor, as evidenced in…
Hatan – I adore the loyal, caring, teasing cousin role. Hatan is genuine and trustworthy and the main reason that Migo has not lost his head entirely by the beginning of the book. He is Migo’s only friend (excepting Genda). How he grew up a cousin in this court yet the caring, silly warrior he is, I do not know. I wish we got slightly more backstory for Hatan, whether it be through his parents (The king’s siblings? The queen’s?) or just a different location for his upbringing. Why has Migo never received love from his aunt and uncle – did they die before he was born, or were they exiled? Despite Hatan being twice Migo’s age, they do seem to have a relationship of peers rather than Hatan being a father figure. I wonder how and when this occurred, particularly given how young Migo still is in the story. To conclude on Hatan: I want more, especially concerning to how he fits the family tree and Hatan’s own training in honor.
Damani – I appreciate what he tried to do by lying for Katsi, his care for her the day her parents died, and his overall generous demeanor. I think he has been a great childhood friend, but I do not see significant character arc for him within this story. In his defense, there isn't a ton of opportunity to see an arc based on the POVs we do have.
Queen Rikaydian – Evidently, the queen was a very different woman before her husband’s death than she is in the story we see. I am curious as to how she truly sees Migo however: a weapon she has honed to defeat the Shamanfolk? A pitiful creature full of cowardice and feelings (a negative, in her eyes)? A threat to her position in court if he ever turns against her? While Migo expresses what he would like her to see in him, and her disapproval is clear, I wonder how her feelings grew such. I feel it is unclear if she wants him to suffer just because she blames in his father’s death or if she genuinely believes that him pushing through his “cowardice” is the only way to move forward into a son she can be proud of. She is constantly testing him, which seems that she has not yet given up on something within him. I cannot understand how, precisely, her mind warped – for it seems that, perhaps, she sees Migo as more of a threat after he returns to the city-state than she did before the battle. I wonder if this shift truly happened, or if it had anything to do with the approval he won from the city and the soldiers during the fighting.
Tarahan – This man’s motives make obvious sense, particularly through Migo’s goading. An officer working cruelly and tirelessly to earn the queen’s love (either romantically or in a manner of power). It is easy to fill powerful while kicking others, as Tarahan displays wonderfully.
Genda – Genda is Migo’s other friend besides Hatan. She seems sweet and hardworking, as well as highly supportive. It is with Genda that we first see Migo relaxing enough to be affectionate – while he appreciates and trusts his cousin, he clearly maintains a sense of proving himself that he drops with Genda. She is Migo’s rangola, and I want one.
Scales – I almost cried when Katsi thought Scales had died. I am so glad that she was incorrect in that quick assessment, and that she saved Scales initially during the first Maedori. That being said, if Katsi ate “three whole hearts” and considered it a lot, but then left a whole heart out for Scales, I think Scales eats a ton and should definitely stay wild rather than a pet.
Romance
The romance between Katsi and Migo felt right in a simple way. One character is a pacifist and one is a trained soldier and warrior, yet both work to understand and soothe the other – and both are willing to stretch their own comfort zones to protect the other. Reassessing long-term beliefs because someone is worth changing over? THAT is love, and is evident coming from Migo when he realizes that Katsi – not the queen – is worth fighting to be worthy of.
I do think Katsi, though clearly attracted to Migo, has been less active in choosing Migo than he has choosing her. She saves him not for his sake but for Damani’s; she kills the queen not to spare him killing his mother (as I initially hoped), but for her paper to work; and I would have liked more hesitation from her on whether or not she truly believed that Migo had betrayed her (did he have time to send that many guards to her home before she got there? Had he even been to that home, to the best of her knowledge?) I hope we get more of Katsi truly falling in love with Migo, as he has with her.
There is a fine line between hyperfocus on romance to the point that one loses pages to a character’s thoughts about their would-be lover and an insta-love. I think Scorned Prince falls a little towards the latter- at least on Migo’s end. We see his interest and his obsession building in the beginning of the book, especially as he hunts her post-murder. But his shift from enemy to lover feels a bit abrupt – I’m a big fan of almost kisses and lots of tension before the first kiss actually happens.
That being said? Migo is absolutely welcome in my library of book boyfriends – just the right amount jealous of her relationship with Damani (blessings to Hatan for the beauty question, loved that scene), just the right amount of “touch-her-and-I’ll-kill-you,” just the right amount of respect and awe in her capabilities (her using the magic and him feeling awe rather than fear? Gorgeous!), and just the right amount of smitten in general.
Writing
As far as writing style, I felt it was easy to fall into a rhythm with the reading and sentence flow. The verbiage was straightforward and pleasant to read. The descriptions were top notch and enhanced the world precisely and beautifully. It felt like the characters each had a distinct voice when they spoke and when it was their turn as the POV, making it easy to keep track of who you were reading. I would absolutely read from this author again – his style left me feeling intrigued rather than frustrated (as with poor writers) or tired (not always a bad thing, but common with more dense, difficult reads).
If we can just take a moment to appreciate the line “I have always felt doom lurching over my shoulder. At least now it has a deadline.”
The choice of lurching to be the awkward, uncomfortable, destructive thing rather than looming (which might be graceful and evil, but elegant in the end)? So good. Thank you.
Editing-wise, I did find some typos, sentence fragments, etc throughout the novel. With a high level fantasy book that is self-published (and, I've learned, didn't have a nit-picky grammar editor), I was still decently pleased with the quality of editing. The typos that I did find were not common enough to detract in any meaningful way from the story.
Extras
The Map! Gorgeous. The Cover! Gorgeous. Even the art on the reels that Brady Hunsaker posts on his Instagram! Gorgeous, and adds to my love of the world he created. Also, you almost never hear about characters using glaives and that was just a detail I adored. The extra miles were so worth it.
Looking forward to Book Two!
I enjoyed this read immensely – and there were parts of the story when I couldn’t make myself put it down no matter how hungry I got. While clearly written and easy to follow, the complex world that Brady Hunsaker has created for the Ringdwellers and the Shamanfolk is begging for more secrets to be discovered in future books. You root for the characters, know their motives, and hurt when they feel betrayal or pain. Some of the characters are clearly well-meaning, while others are naturally vain or cruel – but most hold a certain depth that improves the quality of character arcs. The dual POV setup is ideal for exploring the setting, yet Hunsaker makes it easy to keep track of which character has knowledge on a given topic. If you’re looking for an epic fantasy of war, honor, and love, I highly recommend you give Scorned Prince a try.
I await the next installment.
(gives away minor stuff but no massive spoilers)
World Building
The premise to this world is so fascinating, and I am so excited to learn more in future publications. The very setup of the world is a planet locked in place in reference to the sun. The heliosynchronous orbit has turned one part of the world (known as the Scorched Waste) to a hot desert, while the opposite side of the world (the Frozen Waste) hasn’t seen sunlight since this lockstep occurred. The Scorched Waste is unsuitable for any amount of life above-ground – although caves within or around the edges make the Wastes a decent place to hide if running from a Ringdweller.
The term Ringdweller refers to the persons living around the edges of the Scorched Wastes where the sun is perpetually in the east (or west, in other areas that are not central to this storyline). They maintain a political system of an absolute monarchy, headed by a queen or king when the contender reaches the age of 18 and his/her parent abdicates the throne to them. The guard thus answers directly to the monarch, who may command them to any action (moral, amoral, or immoral) and the guard is required to obey or be guilty of treason. The kingdom has few cells for inmates and no requirement for a legal trial (although a trial is a familiar concept), with grievous crimes ending in execution by glaive.
Beyond those of angering the royal family, one of the most dangerous aspects of this world is the Maedaris that arise – tornado-like rushes of air, water, sand, and whatever else is nearby that the whirlwinds can pick up. To Ringdwellers, being caught outside in a Maedari means almost certain death so they must live their lives prepared to return inside if they feels winds increasing at any moment. To shamanfolk (or perhaps just the magical shamans), there is something more in the Maedaris – some sense of creature, intent, or magic that is more than a physical movement. They have a type of armor called stormwalking armor which allows them to be less buffeted by the winds, keeps the sands out of their eyes, and prevents their flying away. Without the enchanted armor, however, Maedaris are equally perilous to shamanfolk as to Ringdwellers.
Through the novel we learn of a few different varieties of edible plants, varying from fruit to the roots of specific mosses. Beyond being different from those on Earth in name, these plants require different care which allows for fascinating farming practices. The fauna that they have are still mostly unknown, with attention brought only to a skink-like lizard and to the rangolas, cat-like and scaled animals that soldiers ride as horses. Rangolas live both domesticated and wild, and the wild ones are not to be trifled with – though the domesticated ones seem more willing to serve as ridden creatures than I can imagine cats on Earth would ever be.
Plot
There are two peoples at war, each looking to exterminate the other. One character believes in the mission; the other rejects it entirely. There is not one driving goal for both characters throughout the entire story: the goals twist and turn as the characters grow, and so the plot changes throughout. is working to gain his mother’s favor, most directly by exterminating as many “shamans” (Shamanfolk, as he doesn’t realize there is a difference) as possible. Migo begins his hunt for Katsi initially believing her involved in a murder – and eventually ends up considering the world entirely differently thanks to her influence. Katsi is working to survive on her own, having left her tribe, and to bring peace to the two warring peoples. Katsi is minding her own business (excepting the occasional theft during a Maedari storm), until she discovers her own magic and returns to her tribe for answers. There she learns that her tribe has a new method to eradicate all Ringdwellers, and hurriedly goes to warn the prince in order to minimize the casualties. Katsi and Migo begin as enemies, forced into position by birth. Ultimately, the plot follows their introduction to each other and the resulting changes in perspective and values.
Characters
Believing as I do that there would be no plot or romance without Katsi and Migo, I will only address them briefly in this section – I think any more would read as redundant by the end of the review. Rather, this section is primarily for my analysis of other characters within the book.
Katsi – I loved the chapter where we got to understand Katsi’s parents. I think who she is, what she believes, and why she acts in the manner she does makes perfect sense once you meet her father and mother. I am a little bit curious how much actual fighting training she received with the tribe and what the final straws were to push her to leave. Additionally, I am interested to see if the time she does end up killing haunts her – I think, given her character, even though she understands the logic and necessity she should have some emotional difficulty accepting her decisions.
Migo – I am very used to the protagonist soldier who holds honor and his word in high regard (and perhaps I’ve read too many fae novels where they can twist words but cannot lie). We see Migo care significantly about looking powerful but never truly considering honor in the way so many protagonists do. Indeed, his temper tantrum when beating the soldier (when his mother watched training in a flashback) and his direct lies to Damani both demonstrate no honor to Migo’s name. While Hatan tries to push the issue, Migo clearly has never really considered what is honorable until this story (and, still, it is an inconsistent thought). I was taken aback by the lack of honor, but I think it makes significant sense given his mother. I am curious that no code of chivalry of any sort was taught (or at least none that he acknowledged) at his training academy. Because others demonstrate honor, as evidenced in…
Hatan – I adore the loyal, caring, teasing cousin role. Hatan is genuine and trustworthy and the main reason that Migo has not lost his head entirely by the beginning of the book. He is Migo’s only friend (excepting Genda). How he grew up a cousin in this court yet the caring, silly warrior he is, I do not know. I wish we got slightly more backstory for Hatan, whether it be through his parents (The king’s siblings? The queen’s?) or just a different location for his upbringing. Why has Migo never received love from his aunt and uncle – did they die before he was born, or were they exiled? Despite Hatan being twice Migo’s age, they do seem to have a relationship of peers rather than Hatan being a father figure. I wonder how and when this occurred, particularly given how young Migo still is in the story. To conclude on Hatan: I want more, especially concerning to how he fits the family tree and Hatan’s own training in honor.
Damani – I appreciate what he tried to do by lying for Katsi, his care for her the day her parents died, and his overall generous demeanor. I think he has been a great childhood friend, but I do not see significant character arc for him within this story. In his defense, there isn't a ton of opportunity to see an arc based on the POVs we do have.
Queen Rikaydian – Evidently, the queen was a very different woman before her husband’s death than she is in the story we see. I am curious as to how she truly sees Migo however: a weapon she has honed to defeat the Shamanfolk? A pitiful creature full of cowardice and feelings (a negative, in her eyes)? A threat to her position in court if he ever turns against her? While Migo expresses what he would like her to see in him, and her disapproval is clear, I wonder how her feelings grew such. I feel it is unclear if she wants him to suffer just because she blames in his father’s death or if she genuinely believes that him pushing through his “cowardice” is the only way to move forward into a son she can be proud of. She is constantly testing him, which seems that she has not yet given up on something within him. I cannot understand how, precisely, her mind warped – for it seems that, perhaps, she sees Migo as more of a threat after he returns to the city-state than she did before the battle. I wonder if this shift truly happened, or if it had anything to do with the approval he won from the city and the soldiers during the fighting.
Tarahan – This man’s motives make obvious sense, particularly through Migo’s goading. An officer working cruelly and tirelessly to earn the queen’s love (either romantically or in a manner of power). It is easy to fill powerful while kicking others, as Tarahan displays wonderfully.
Genda – Genda is Migo’s other friend besides Hatan. She seems sweet and hardworking, as well as highly supportive. It is with Genda that we first see Migo relaxing enough to be affectionate – while he appreciates and trusts his cousin, he clearly maintains a sense of proving himself that he drops with Genda. She is Migo’s rangola, and I want one.
Scales – I almost cried when Katsi thought Scales had died. I am so glad that she was incorrect in that quick assessment, and that she saved Scales initially during the first Maedori. That being said, if Katsi ate “three whole hearts” and considered it a lot, but then left a whole heart out for Scales, I think Scales eats a ton and should definitely stay wild rather than a pet.
Romance
The romance between Katsi and Migo felt right in a simple way. One character is a pacifist and one is a trained soldier and warrior, yet both work to understand and soothe the other – and both are willing to stretch their own comfort zones to protect the other. Reassessing long-term beliefs because someone is worth changing over? THAT is love, and is evident coming from Migo when he realizes that Katsi – not the queen – is worth fighting to be worthy of.
I do think Katsi, though clearly attracted to Migo, has been less active in choosing Migo than he has choosing her. She saves him not for his sake but for Damani’s; she kills the queen not to spare him killing his mother (as I initially hoped), but for her paper to work; and I would have liked more hesitation from her on whether or not she truly believed that Migo had betrayed her (did he have time to send that many guards to her home before she got there? Had he even been to that home, to the best of her knowledge?) I hope we get more of Katsi truly falling in love with Migo, as he has with her.
There is a fine line between hyperfocus on romance to the point that one loses pages to a character’s thoughts about their would-be lover and an insta-love. I think Scorned Prince falls a little towards the latter- at least on Migo’s end. We see his interest and his obsession building in the beginning of the book, especially as he hunts her post-murder. But his shift from enemy to lover feels a bit abrupt – I’m a big fan of almost kisses and lots of tension before the first kiss actually happens.
That being said? Migo is absolutely welcome in my library of book boyfriends – just the right amount jealous of her relationship with Damani (blessings to Hatan for the beauty question, loved that scene), just the right amount of “touch-her-and-I’ll-kill-you,” just the right amount of respect and awe in her capabilities (her using the magic and him feeling awe rather than fear? Gorgeous!), and just the right amount of smitten in general.
Writing
As far as writing style, I felt it was easy to fall into a rhythm with the reading and sentence flow. The verbiage was straightforward and pleasant to read. The descriptions were top notch and enhanced the world precisely and beautifully. It felt like the characters each had a distinct voice when they spoke and when it was their turn as the POV, making it easy to keep track of who you were reading. I would absolutely read from this author again – his style left me feeling intrigued rather than frustrated (as with poor writers) or tired (not always a bad thing, but common with more dense, difficult reads).
If we can just take a moment to appreciate the line “I have always felt doom lurching over my shoulder. At least now it has a deadline.”
The choice of lurching to be the awkward, uncomfortable, destructive thing rather than looming (which might be graceful and evil, but elegant in the end)? So good. Thank you.
Editing-wise, I did find some typos, sentence fragments, etc throughout the novel. With a high level fantasy book that is self-published (and, I've learned, didn't have a nit-picky grammar editor), I was still decently pleased with the quality of editing. The typos that I did find were not common enough to detract in any meaningful way from the story.
Extras
The Map! Gorgeous. The Cover! Gorgeous. Even the art on the reels that Brady Hunsaker posts on his Instagram! Gorgeous, and adds to my love of the world he created. Also, you almost never hear about characters using glaives and that was just a detail I adored. The extra miles were so worth it.
Looking forward to Book Two!
February 20, 2023
Thank you to the author Brady Hunsaker for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I follow Brady on Instagram and am in love with his funny reels about book tropes and character traits. He’s hilarious and you should definitely check him out.
I was excited to read his debut novel as the world and characters he started to promote resonated with me and hence applied for the ARC.
SCORNED PRINCE is a YA fantasy read with a sci-fi feel to it. The world building is very unique and immersive. The intriguing magic system, the harsh environment, the animals, plants, food and even the clever swear words were well thought through and explained.
The plot was interesting and easily followed, the romance was clean and the dual POV was well executed.
My rating for the SCORNED PRINCE is 3.5 stars as there were a couple of things that I struggled with.
Overall, I think the author shows great promise as his world building is very creative. I am excited to see what sort of surprises will await us in book 2!
I follow Brady on Instagram and am in love with his funny reels about book tropes and character traits. He’s hilarious and you should definitely check him out.
I was excited to read his debut novel as the world and characters he started to promote resonated with me and hence applied for the ARC.
SCORNED PRINCE is a YA fantasy read with a sci-fi feel to it. The world building is very unique and immersive. The intriguing magic system, the harsh environment, the animals, plants, food and even the clever swear words were well thought through and explained.
The plot was interesting and easily followed, the romance was clean and the dual POV was well executed.
My rating for the SCORNED PRINCE is 3.5 stars as there were a couple of things that I struggled with.
Overall, I think the author shows great promise as his world building is very creative. I am excited to see what sort of surprises will await us in book 2!
October 25, 2024
Actual rating: 2.5
I want to preface this review by saying that I see a lot of potential in this world and in the writing. Still, I have decided not to continue this series, because one of the main characters drove me up a wall, which sucks, since the concept of the world is really unique and I liked the other main character. I forced myself to finish it instead of dnfing because it’s short, I liked the worldbuilding and Katsi.
More detailed thoughts and spoilers (!):
I appreciate the pronunciation guide at the back; the author clearly put a lot of love and work into this series, including a map and a glossary as well.
Writing:
As I stated before, the writing (especially) in the beginning is pretty good. But it sometimes got a bit choppy and detached, like listing facts.
The narrative spells things out too clearly for my taste and leaves no room for interpretation. It feels like the message the author wants to convey is being drilled into the reader so they don’t miss the point and I’m being told how to feel.
*“Migo had grown to hate this soldier as well, since he’d become an example of Migo’s own failure.”*
*“He wondered if his mother’s lust for vengeance had skewed her rationalization. Could the same be true of myself?”*
*“Tears of rage and pain stung her eyes as she thought about how she’d never been so mistreated. They had no justification. Anger burned within her.”*
*“Right, because you wanted to die. You’re probably overwhelmed with the guilt of all your injustices.” Migo’s face burned. Not because Katsi was wrong, but because she was right.”*
*“Something was wrong with him. Perhaps it was a spell or a curse. Or maybe his mother just messed him up.”*
*“He looked weary of the conversation. They seemed less like his own words and more like a script.”*
I couldn’t picture the fight scenes very well and I didn’t feel the tension.
*“Father noticed the other man and gave Migo a tentative glance. Father dodged a swing and a jab from the man’s blade.”*
*“Migo stabbed with the knife, catching Tarahan on his upper arm. It tore through muscle. Tarahan lost grip of the glaive. Migo adjusted his grip on the glaive and swung hard.”*
That being said, the author explains things pretty well and naturally most of the time.
Also on the positive side, the chapters had a nice length in my opinion.
Plot:
The pacing had a few issues, sometimes very slow and nothing progressed (especially in the middle) and the ending happened too fast.
There also were a few plot holes, not so much in the world (the author definitely knows his world very well), but the character choices sometimes made no sense. In some cases, that was even acknowledged in the text, but then nothing was done with that.
However, why the shamans are so hated with no good proof did bother me a bit while reading
*→ “and this is why you and the queen hate shamanfolk—because one of them murdered your father… That’s a nonsensical connection to blame an entire people for a single murder(…)”*
Also, the foreshadowing was a bit heavy handed at times and the plot twist were rather obvious to me. But it is a ya and maybe my expectations, that this would be adult, influenced my view.
Characters:
The supporting cast didn’t stand out much and could have used some further fleshing out, but they weren’t one dimensional or too stereotypical at least. But I wished we got a lot more exploration of the “villains” (the queen and the other captain → can’t even remember his name anymore), to understand their motivations (those given in the text felt superficial to me)
*“She sometimes found it difficult to remember that she was only seventeen years old.”*
→ Me too, and I kinda wish the characters were aged up a bit
Probably the biggest factor in my decision to dnf the series was Migo.
Admittedly there was growth with Migo’s character and I appreciated that. But he was so frustratingly stubborn for most of the book, it was way too late for me to care and also unbelievable that he suddenly would be ok with going against everything he knows, even going as far as killing his own mother because he liked a girl (he knew for two weeks !), who belonged to the group of people he swore to annihilate. Make it make sense please.
*“But after seeing them hurt Katsi, there was only one reasonable solution left. Kill them. All of them.”*
*“These were brave men doing the right thing. But they had to die. A necessary evil for the sake of the whole kingdom.”*
Before, he would have given his life to save them! His personality/ morals completely changed once the “romance” started!
*“I killed them all,” Migo said just as Ailon’s thrashing body went still. “Why?” “I had to.” Because they hurt her.“*
I don’t find that sexy, that’s terrifying! Even more so since Katsi is a pacifist and tries to prevent the death of others!
I also collected a few quotes under the headline “Migo being sad and dramatic”. I know, I’m being really hard on that character, but he annoyed me a lot throughout the first two thirds and just when he started to show some growth and I thought I could like him, he became even more unlikable thanks to his possessive streak and irrational behavior.
These quotes however demonstrate my problem with Migo in the first two thirds, and those are just a few examples. In his chapters, there was a sentence like these about every two pages.
Don’t get me wrong, I don’t dislike deeply troubled and flawed characters in general, but it was overdone in this book in my opinion, to the point where it no longer felt real, but like a stereotype.
*“He couldn’t even imagine what it would be like if another human was excited to see him.”*
*“Perhaps it was fitting that he suffer eternally in pain — the anguish of his soul fully manifest as a physical sensation.”*
*“It was my fault. She hates me for it — just like I hate myself. That’s why I deserve to die.”*
*“Would he dare try to forgive himself? He shuddered at the thought and couldn’t fathom the idea of forgiveness. Despite how peaceful it sounded, he knew he didn’t deserve it.”*
On the other hand, I really like Katsi, she is clever, kind and knows what she’s doing. She felt real.
However, their romance was forced in my opinion and I couldn’t root for it at all.
I knew that it would inevitably happen, but I didn’t like how sudden it was and I never felt the chemistry between them.
Katsi deserved someone better (her childhood best friend; at least I believed that they could fall in love) in my opinion.
For example, why is Katsi the only one comforting the other after a trauma dump?
After she told him about the death of her parents, Migo started talking about himself, how that was is first time witnessing an execution (which is fd up in it’s own right, but this ain’t about you right now)
Also, why does Katsi have to be Migo’s therapist? To me, that’s not how a romantic relationship should be, one shouldn’t have to fix the other.
Their first kiss was so out of the blue and note swoon-worthy at all to me
*“I’m letting you go.” Damani blinked back at him. “On one condition,” Migo said. “If Katsi comes to you, you must turn her away. You betrayed her to me. You don’t truly love her and you don’t deserve her loyalty. If I get the word that you take her in or pretend you care for her, I’ll put you right back here. Understood?”*
Again, I don’t find that cute but controlling/terrifying, girl run!
I want to preface this review by saying that I see a lot of potential in this world and in the writing. Still, I have decided not to continue this series, because one of the main characters drove me up a wall, which sucks, since the concept of the world is really unique and I liked the other main character. I forced myself to finish it instead of dnfing because it’s short, I liked the worldbuilding and Katsi.
More detailed thoughts and spoilers (!):
I appreciate the pronunciation guide at the back; the author clearly put a lot of love and work into this series, including a map and a glossary as well.
Writing:
As I stated before, the writing (especially) in the beginning is pretty good. But it sometimes got a bit choppy and detached, like listing facts.
The narrative spells things out too clearly for my taste and leaves no room for interpretation. It feels like the message the author wants to convey is being drilled into the reader so they don’t miss the point and I’m being told how to feel.
*“Migo had grown to hate this soldier as well, since he’d become an example of Migo’s own failure.”*
*“He wondered if his mother’s lust for vengeance had skewed her rationalization. Could the same be true of myself?”*
*“Tears of rage and pain stung her eyes as she thought about how she’d never been so mistreated. They had no justification. Anger burned within her.”*
*“Right, because you wanted to die. You’re probably overwhelmed with the guilt of all your injustices.” Migo’s face burned. Not because Katsi was wrong, but because she was right.”*
*“Something was wrong with him. Perhaps it was a spell or a curse. Or maybe his mother just messed him up.”*
*“He looked weary of the conversation. They seemed less like his own words and more like a script.”*
I couldn’t picture the fight scenes very well and I didn’t feel the tension.
*“Father noticed the other man and gave Migo a tentative glance. Father dodged a swing and a jab from the man’s blade.”*
*“Migo stabbed with the knife, catching Tarahan on his upper arm. It tore through muscle. Tarahan lost grip of the glaive. Migo adjusted his grip on the glaive and swung hard.”*
That being said, the author explains things pretty well and naturally most of the time.
Also on the positive side, the chapters had a nice length in my opinion.
Plot:
The pacing had a few issues, sometimes very slow and nothing progressed (especially in the middle) and the ending happened too fast.
There also were a few plot holes, not so much in the world (the author definitely knows his world very well), but the character choices sometimes made no sense. In some cases, that was even acknowledged in the text, but then nothing was done with that.
However, why the shamans are so hated with no good proof did bother me a bit while reading
*→ “and this is why you and the queen hate shamanfolk—because one of them murdered your father… That’s a nonsensical connection to blame an entire people for a single murder(…)”*
Also, the foreshadowing was a bit heavy handed at times and the plot twist were rather obvious to me. But it is a ya and maybe my expectations, that this would be adult, influenced my view.
Characters:
The supporting cast didn’t stand out much and could have used some further fleshing out, but they weren’t one dimensional or too stereotypical at least. But I wished we got a lot more exploration of the “villains” (the queen and the other captain → can’t even remember his name anymore), to understand their motivations (those given in the text felt superficial to me)
*“She sometimes found it difficult to remember that she was only seventeen years old.”*
→ Me too, and I kinda wish the characters were aged up a bit
Probably the biggest factor in my decision to dnf the series was Migo.
Admittedly there was growth with Migo’s character and I appreciated that. But he was so frustratingly stubborn for most of the book, it was way too late for me to care and also unbelievable that he suddenly would be ok with going against everything he knows, even going as far as killing his own mother because he liked a girl (he knew for two weeks !), who belonged to the group of people he swore to annihilate. Make it make sense please.
*“But after seeing them hurt Katsi, there was only one reasonable solution left. Kill them. All of them.”*
*“These were brave men doing the right thing. But they had to die. A necessary evil for the sake of the whole kingdom.”*
Before, he would have given his life to save them! His personality/ morals completely changed once the “romance” started!
*“I killed them all,” Migo said just as Ailon’s thrashing body went still. “Why?” “I had to.” Because they hurt her.“*
I don’t find that sexy, that’s terrifying! Even more so since Katsi is a pacifist and tries to prevent the death of others!
I also collected a few quotes under the headline “Migo being sad and dramatic”. I know, I’m being really hard on that character, but he annoyed me a lot throughout the first two thirds and just when he started to show some growth and I thought I could like him, he became even more unlikable thanks to his possessive streak and irrational behavior.
These quotes however demonstrate my problem with Migo in the first two thirds, and those are just a few examples. In his chapters, there was a sentence like these about every two pages.
Don’t get me wrong, I don’t dislike deeply troubled and flawed characters in general, but it was overdone in this book in my opinion, to the point where it no longer felt real, but like a stereotype.
*“He couldn’t even imagine what it would be like if another human was excited to see him.”*
*“Perhaps it was fitting that he suffer eternally in pain — the anguish of his soul fully manifest as a physical sensation.”*
*“It was my fault. She hates me for it — just like I hate myself. That’s why I deserve to die.”*
*“Would he dare try to forgive himself? He shuddered at the thought and couldn’t fathom the idea of forgiveness. Despite how peaceful it sounded, he knew he didn’t deserve it.”*
On the other hand, I really like Katsi, she is clever, kind and knows what she’s doing. She felt real.
However, their romance was forced in my opinion and I couldn’t root for it at all.
I knew that it would inevitably happen, but I didn’t like how sudden it was and I never felt the chemistry between them.
Katsi deserved someone better (her childhood best friend; at least I believed that they could fall in love) in my opinion.
For example, why is Katsi the only one comforting the other after a trauma dump?
After she told him about the death of her parents, Migo started talking about himself, how that was is first time witnessing an execution (which is fd up in it’s own right, but this ain’t about you right now)
Also, why does Katsi have to be Migo’s therapist? To me, that’s not how a romantic relationship should be, one shouldn’t have to fix the other.
Their first kiss was so out of the blue and note swoon-worthy at all to me
*“I’m letting you go.” Damani blinked back at him. “On one condition,” Migo said. “If Katsi comes to you, you must turn her away. You betrayed her to me. You don’t truly love her and you don’t deserve her loyalty. If I get the word that you take her in or pretend you care for her, I’ll put you right back here. Understood?”*
Again, I don’t find that cute but controlling/terrifying, girl run!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 20, 2024
Of the indie published books I’ve read so far this year, this has been my favorite. With a tight narrative and easy prose, Hunsaker drives the reader through a slow-burn, enemies to allies (maybe more) story of purpose and redemption.
The marketing pitches this as an Avatar the Last Air Bender story that centers around Prince Zuko. I can definitely see the comparison! However, what a lot of readers (who complain about the character, Migo) fail to realize is that the psychology of his character and the nature of his flaws are so well aligned with covert depression. Having been diagnosed myself, it’s rare for a high-achieving character to be portrayed (Well!) with depression. The only one that truly comes to mind outside of Migo is Kaladin from Sanderson’s Stormlight Archive.
I hope people read this and give Migo the benefit of the doubt. Maybe at first you might not understand him, maybe you think it a little too cut and dry, or his thinking too black and white, but give him a chance. Maybe you’ll learn something about what it means to live with depression and have greater empathy for the millions of undiagnosed men in your life.
Thank you to the author for sharing such a powerful story in such a digestible form. I will absolutely be continuing the series and look forward to future installments!
The marketing pitches this as an Avatar the Last Air Bender story that centers around Prince Zuko. I can definitely see the comparison! However, what a lot of readers (who complain about the character, Migo) fail to realize is that the psychology of his character and the nature of his flaws are so well aligned with covert depression. Having been diagnosed myself, it’s rare for a high-achieving character to be portrayed (Well!) with depression. The only one that truly comes to mind outside of Migo is Kaladin from Sanderson’s Stormlight Archive.
I hope people read this and give Migo the benefit of the doubt. Maybe at first you might not understand him, maybe you think it a little too cut and dry, or his thinking too black and white, but give him a chance. Maybe you’ll learn something about what it means to live with depression and have greater empathy for the millions of undiagnosed men in your life.
Thank you to the author for sharing such a powerful story in such a digestible form. I will absolutely be continuing the series and look forward to future installments!
September 19, 2023
Disclaimer: I was given an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review. Due to unforeseen personal issues, I was unable to review the book prior to release. I am only 50% into the book, but I'll update this review when finished.
The Scorned Prince is a FUN read. This YA book is set an a very imaginative world in which the light of the sun is fixed on one side of the planet, while the other side is cast in permanent darkness. The story takes place in "the ring," the only inhabitable lands. The characters are very relatable, and you can't help but like them. Hunsaker drops you in the middle of the action right away with a mystery and immediate, clear stakes opening the story.
So far, it's a book that I would have no qualms recommending to teens and adults who enjoy YA fantasy.
The Scorned Prince is a FUN read. This YA book is set an a very imaginative world in which the light of the sun is fixed on one side of the planet, while the other side is cast in permanent darkness. The story takes place in "the ring," the only inhabitable lands. The characters are very relatable, and you can't help but like them. Hunsaker drops you in the middle of the action right away with a mystery and immediate, clear stakes opening the story.
So far, it's a book that I would have no qualms recommending to teens and adults who enjoy YA fantasy.
October 11, 2024
i really wanted to love this book but i found it so so hard to get into.
the pacing felt so off - sometimes it was going so slow and then other times it was going too quick without explaining much — like girlie got her powers and then knew how to use them to break into the palace within a week 😬
the characters had no real depth and i struggled to get on with either of them throughout
overall, the redeeming quality of this book was the unique plot line and it had hooked me in enough i’ll end up finishing the series but it was a hard one to get through 🥲
the pacing felt so off - sometimes it was going so slow and then other times it was going too quick without explaining much — like girlie got her powers and then knew how to use them to break into the palace within a week 😬
the characters had no real depth and i struggled to get on with either of them throughout
overall, the redeeming quality of this book was the unique plot line and it had hooked me in enough i’ll end up finishing the series but it was a hard one to get through 🥲
March 4, 2024
If I had a nickel for every for every time I was interested in reading a book that takes place on a planet with severe weather patterns in different locations and then I was extremely disappointed with said book, I would have two nickels. Which isn’t a lot but it’s weird that it’s happened twice.
August 14, 2023
Received an ARC for an honest review
1.5 STARS
RTC
1.5 STARS
RTC
Want to read
July 29, 2024So I heard this one is for the zuko/katara shippers so...👀
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