I want to start by thanking the author/publisher for the opportunity to read this book before it was published. I’m always thankful for the opportunity to read an ARC, but this review is not impacted by their generosity.
Prior to reading this book, I was not familiar with Barrie Farris or their previous Ingenious series, so I went into this novel having no preconceived notions about the author or their writing style.
As a whole, I enjoyed this book. Let's start by discussing what I liked.
1) I found the main character, Hal Hunter, charming and not stereotypical, which I really appreciated. He's interesting and self-deprecating. His first real wish annoyed me but didn't surprise me as a gay man (I won't say — no spoilers here). I wanted to be annoyed by him for this, but realized I think most gay men in his situation would have done the same thing.
2) I enjoyed the world building. I think Farris does a good job of providing a new and interesting world with its own unique mythos, which is hard to do. I found the world easy to follow, and I didn't find any aspects of the world contradictory.
3) I really liked the character of Charlemagne, the gecko-esq creature who is a fertility natural. Charlemagne provides most of the humor and intrigue throughout the entire novel.
4) I enjoyed Josseran but found him not nearly as resentful and spiteful as I think the character should have been after being a slave for millennia. In fact, I almost think this is one area where some of the realism falls. I almost feel like Hal and Josseran fell in love too easily, given Josseran's background.
Aspects about the book I didn't like:
1) I found the book a bit jarring when there's the sudden character shift in Chapter Three. It's more like the first two chapters were a prologue and not really part of the narrative of the rest of the book. Although the information in those two chapters was necessary, the style and point of view differed from the rest of the book.
2) I found the overall arc awkward. There's a natural climax, only it's a false climax. Without going into detail here, I was surprised when the expected epic battle happens quickly and is over so fast. Admittedly, the novel keeps going, but the last 1/4 of the novel seems almost like a different story. I liked the direction it took, but the arc seemed disjointed after the natural climax.
Overall, I thought this was a good book. I don't think know if there will be a book two, but it's entirely possible. The ending lends itself for future narrative directions.