The TL;DW for this book is: it’s a nice little adventure story. I’m somewhat fuzzy on the details of what’s going on, but the central narrative thread, and the emerging side plots, are handled with plenty of care and attention, allowing for a reading experience that is both easy and immersive. With the introduction out of the way, it’s time to delve a little deeper.
The plot of this book follows Leena Davies, an orphaned young lady whose father was killed by a pirate, leaving her with a disdain for the practitioners of piracy. After her twin brother and surrogate father figure gets arrested for arson, she is acquired by a travelling merchant, and goes on a journey that will teach her how to stand up for herself, and for the people she cares about. Aiding her on her journey is a mysterious new acquisition onboard the merchant’s ship, The Sanguine Tortuga, who stirs many new thoughts and emotions within her.
The plot developments beyond that are a little too intricate for me to get into without seriously spoiling this book, each new reveal by the plot brings out a whole new thread, connecting a slew of characters together. Their relationships, their abilities, their common histories, their strengths, their distinctive features and characteristics, all of these are woven together in a seamless, naturalistic manner, which very much invites the reader into experiencing the events of the narrative alongside the characters. An aspect of the narrative, or the pacing, that I particularly wish to highlight, is how the story is built up. It starts with Leena and her surroundings, her living situation, and then the narrative eye, or perspective, gradually pans out, revealing her native country and some of its administrative processes, then Leena’s new home, followed by a greater view of the places she visits, while hinting at the connections between them.
The timeline of the book is, I have to admit, a little murky, distances and intervals tend to blend together, leaving the entire narrative in a strange, timeless limbo. There is a sense of romance that emerges from that presentation, but I find my investment in the story waning when the events within it do not have the impact they are told to have, or when I, as a reader, cannot gauge, cannot assess the impact of the characters on the rest of the world. The worldbuilding is done quite competently, if I am to be very fair, and it is the point where I think Barrison shows the most improvement as a writer, but it is too vague to fully allow for immersion. Even though there is a map of the world in the beginning of this book, the presentation of travel times is fairly inconsistent, and only some of the locations of the book are actually presented on the map. I hesitate to say she shouldn’t’ve included it at all, even though I think that would’ve benefitted this book, because it’s still likely she could do something interesting with the map in the series’ following books. Confounding the problem are all the loose ends Barrison brings into the narrative. I don’t, as of right now, know if those loose ends will stay loose, or will form new threads in future instalments.
That being said, her characterisation does more than enough to salvage the story. All characters are distinctive, engaging, easy to tell apart, and all of them are given moments to shine. They all contribute to the narrative in their own, interesting ways, adding a lot of depth and relatability to an otherwise simple narrative. For obvious reasons, however, it is Leena and her love interest that receive the lion’s share of narrative attention and development, which made for a very enticing read.
Overall, while I am willing to admit the flaws of this book, its strengths do more than enough to outshine them.
Btw, the review is based on an ARC, and I'm leaving it voluntarily