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The Price You Pay
She was never meant to leave the sea.
Ayla is a princess of Atlantis. Trapped in a life she never chose, suffocating beneath expectations and control. But when she glimpses a human woman who sets her soul on fire, everything changes.
She wants her.
Craves her.
Will risk everything to have her.
There’s only one problem.
To walk on land… she has to make a deal with the Sea Witch.
And the Sea Witch doesn’t grant wishes for free.
The price?
Something Ayla may never survive losing.
But some desires are stronger than fear.
And some loves are worth the destruction that follows.
🔥 A dark sapphic Little Mermaid retelling full of obsession, power, and dangerous bargains.
Welcome to Twisted Ever Afters—dark sapphic fairytale retellings where villains get the girl and love is anything but safe.
Each book is a standalone filled with obsession, magic, and dangerously irresistible women.
Ayla is a princess of Atlantis. Trapped in a life she never chose, suffocating beneath expectations and control. But when she glimpses a human woman who sets her soul on fire, everything changes.
She wants her.
Craves her.
Will risk everything to have her.
There’s only one problem.
To walk on land… she has to make a deal with the Sea Witch.
And the Sea Witch doesn’t grant wishes for free.
The price?
Something Ayla may never survive losing.
But some desires are stronger than fear.
And some loves are worth the destruction that follows.
🔥 A dark sapphic Little Mermaid retelling full of obsession, power, and dangerous bargains.
Welcome to Twisted Ever Afters—dark sapphic fairytale retellings where villains get the girl and love is anything but safe.
Each book is a standalone filled with obsession, magic, and dangerously irresistible women.
183 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 4, 2023
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February 13, 2023
On KU. I didn't find it as good as the previous novella.
February 5, 2023
3 stars. I much preferred the Beauty and the Beast retelling by this author than this Little Mermaid one. This one was a lot more relying on sex and I just didn’t feel any genuine connection between Ayla and Eryn. Their characters weren’t that fleshed out and I wasn’t as invested unfortunately. Overall, wasn’t terrible or anything and it was a quick read but I was left wanting more development and depth.
February 24, 2023
Wow fantastic retelling
Wow fantastic retelling story I loved this version just as much as the original I couldn't put it down definitely worth reading congratulations
Wow fantastic retelling story I loved this version just as much as the original I couldn't put it down definitely worth reading congratulations
February 28, 2023
i saw the vision i really did.. but the dialogue and the overall writing is terrible 🤕
Displaying 1 - 4 of 4 reviews