I think this is going to end up being a long review, possibly a rant. I liked so much about this book. Truly, I enjoyed it. However, I think there could have been some things that I would have liked more. Hopefully, this review doesn't end up with spoilers, I'm going to try to avoid doing so, but I have so many thoughts about everything that they might slip out before I can catch them.
The beginning starts off with this intense and emotional prologue. It grabbed me and sucked me in. A beginning like that can keep you glued to the page, which I did. But, as we continued on, all the dramatic feelings and suspense slowly got lost in the story.
Time jumps started happening, which worked for this story since the main focus was on Wynter. Those moments were necessary to build up backstory. That's what lost me honestly. It was trying too hard to be the Snow White retelling when it had potential to be something completely different. The first part has a focus on Estrella… again, this was necessary for the Snow White plot. I really enjoyed this perspective, but it could have been something more. The flip from Estrella in the first part to Wynter in the second felt like I was starting a whole new book. For that reason, I actually felt removed from the story, and like I had to get reacquainted with the world, there was a large time jump, and the characters were different. I was still enjoying the story though, it just took a little bit more time to adjust. For that reason, I actually wish the book had been split into 2 separate books. I would have loved to see more world-building done, especially from Estrella's POV. I would have loved a story that showed her slowly spiraling into the evil she became rather than a couple of scenes pulled out of the timeline to give us a mere glimpse of it. It worked since the story was trying to get to the parts with Wynter, but so much was lost by doing this.
I truly think Estrella could have been one of those characters that you feel sorry for, that you could have loved even though you knew they had to be the villain. She was complex enough, but we only got to see bits and pieces of that complexity. Her motive also needed to be explored more. I would have loved to see that developed more. She had so much more beneath the surface that I wanted to see.
We got to see pieces of the world, which were fascinating. So much could have been done within this world alone. That's why I think it would have done better in multiple books. There is so much to explore and it felt like the surface had only been scratched. Now, I actually felt like this story also lends itself well to being a graphic novel. That would also have been a possibility to show the world a bit more, it also would have worked remarkably well with the style of the story.
Like I mentioned before, the switch to Wynter's perspective felt like a different book. It had a completely different feel from the beginning. That sudden jump does work since it was a perspective we hadn't had before. It made the story interesting, but it wasn't quite as smooth as I would have liked. That's why I would have liked to see it as a sequel to what felt like the first book. The 2 book plan would have worked so well for this.
I will admit that I didn't care about Wynter that much. She kind of seemed pointless. She just moved along because of what was happening in the story, but it never actually felt like she gave us much emotion. She wasn't very interesting. I only really liked a few moments when she was interacting with the other characters. I actually think those characters had more to their character than she did. I would have liked to see her character developed more. It seemed like she didn't actually have much time on the page. Everyone else overshadowed her. It's a shame because she had moments where she showed she had the potential to be a really strong lead, but they never really stuck, or she appeared weak at other moments. They often portray a Snow White character as weak and innocent, but because of that, most of the time those characters are some of the worst I have ever seen. There is a balance that is needed and I think this book tried to do that, but it didn't quite work for me.
There was a lot that had to be worked into the story, with the backstory and then snow white elements, but nothing developed as strongly as it could have. Now, that does work if you want a simple tale that can be read and enjoyed in just a short amount of time. But, if you want something with lasting impact, that really plays with the readers and gives them a story that stays in their minds, keeping them coming back for more, then everything needed to be explored a bit more. Like I said, the potential was there for that and some people may accept it as is. It was a good story, one that came so close to being something I could love, but it could have been great. One of the best. I want that for this story.
The ending felt like a let down. It didn't nearly have as much drama to is as I would have liked. I think some work on the characters might have helped with that. It seemed a little rushed and then everything was wrapped up nice and neat. I wanted some more conflict. Everything worked out too easily. I would have liked MIRA to have been used more, especially toward the end. Honestly? I actually hope there is a sequel, and I hope MIRA's in it. The world has so much left to explore, and so much could happen with the characters. I never felt like the character's all got sorted out. I want to know what happened after the events in the book and how it changed them.
If you made it this far, congratulations! My rant didn't bore you to death… I do think it was a good story, one I would recommend. The writing style was engaging. I plan to read more by R.J. Setser. If how strongly I felt about this book is any indication, I will probably enjoy more from them.
I received an ARC of this book for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.