Dnf at 25%
This is just depressing in the worst way possible.
First of all, some quick thoughts
- This plot of "I'll fuck some confidence into him and his insecurities rooted in toxic masculinity out of his body" dosent work and it's not interesting. Your pussy is not a remedy or a cure to anything, stop embarrassing yourself;
- "I may not have the actual experience but again, is that really necessary? Plus, he doesn't have to know I’ve never done… things", fellas, is it necessary to communicate to your partner that you have no idea of what you are trying to do whilst still doing it to their body? This FL dont think so...
- One thing is a male sub, another really different thing is an insecure man with no sense of agency, and the latter is not a synonym of a male sub;
- Don't use your FL as a device to be repeating over and over again that a male character is a good person, that dosent mean anything, it's just repetitive and lazy.
Now, the female lead, whose name I dont remember, nor do I want to, is a dumb, pick me, not like other girls, annoying bitch. Like, she's so interested in mechanics, she eats and dont care that her face is all dirty, she hangs out only with the boys, but she still cooks and have maternal instincts, so shes a good woman...
But shes still different because the ML's ideal woman will be the perfect stereotype of a mother-house wife (yes, the FL describes it).
At first she was fine, not really interesting or eye catching but I had to give her a chance since it was her first time being introduced, but I just couldn't endure her anymore after she called a random woman a bitch because she didnt want to go out with the male lead.
Seriously, the woman just said she wasn't interested in dating and all of a sudden this FL said to Miller, the ML, that he couldn't talk to her anymore because she was a bitch to him?
Also, there's this weird tone in the writing towards other women, this desperate attempt to not sound like a pick me but also wanting this FL to be showered with male validation, instead of just committing to a pick me female character. But the author won't commit, they'll use the male character to filter out how we should interpret the obvious pick me narrative.
Wich it's so recurrent here, having a male character who happens to be a decent person as a device to filter how the reader has to see a specific female character; if a woman is not on her knees for him, she's automatically a bitch, if she is putting him on a pedestal and reminding you constantly that this male character is an angel on earth then she's a good woman and person...
This man dosent automatically deserves everything in this world and the good out of everyone just because he knows how to act like a decent person!
The ML was cute I guess. His plotline is interesting but this author was torturing me with the horrendous, cringy writing. WE DONT NEED TO BE REMINDED CONSTANTLY ABOUT THE FL'S WET PUSSY!!!!!
"Everything between my legs floods with warmth. No, not even warmth. Heat. Fucking fire. My pussy burns for his touch"
"I fucking swear. I can actually feel my pussy get so wet my panties start to stick to me."
"I think my pussy almost explodes"
And that is just a few because I cant keep on reading this anymore.