The story is decent and simple but is more of a basis for a plot: Jedi investigate a place with the Dark Side, one is taken prisoner, other Jedi go to rescue him, a bit of padawans, and a whole lot of talking about the Dark Side's presence in said place.
The story lacks cohesion, as we go from one set of characters and plot to the next, similar to a pulp, which would ultimately result in their team-up in the second issue but lacks impact, as these characters' involvement seem to be lucky happenstance and none of them really interact with one another. Instead, the characters are described through descriptive text, which becomes frustratingly distracting from the visual pace of the narrative.
The translated book was meaningless and only served to get two Jedi to meet the villain and join the fight, amongst multiple other characters who've been presented up to this point.
A Jedi constructs her lightsaber and might be the most interesting and lively character here, but she isn't provided much else than that she joins the fight, has a child who has the Force and that she will soon be given the title of Jedi. Bear in mind that this was written before the Prequels and George Lucas' Jedi lore was more gingerly established.
There's a woman who helps, who is the daughter of the villain, but her lineage has no bearing on the story.
There is a bit of action, however, rather than showing, most of it is told via descriptive text. Indeed, many comics pre-2000 had descriptive text, albeit, they were there to accompany the visual storytelling; the visual medium came first and foremost.
The dialogue was not great and mostly felt superfluous to the already repetitive text-heavy panels.
Perhaps by having less characters and sub-plots and having the apprentice and the daughter of the villain be the sole focus, the story could have been tighter and stronger.
There is some fun to be had here, but it wasn't for me.
The artwork and lettering are nice. I do enjoy the pre-2000 style of colouring and so forth, and these comics are pleasing to gander upon.