Ok, I have struggled through almost 240 pages and honestly, I'm done. Why you ask? Where do I even begin?🤷♀️🤦♀️
For starters, the writing style leaves much to be desired. We are told what our characters are feeling, but only on the surface level. This means we don't get insights as to why Emma does any of the random things she does. We aren't given her inner dialog or thoughts, which would have been helpful given how flighty she came off.
On top of that, this book feels incredibly dated. It's from 2006, but it feels so much older.
The ladies here feel like relics from the 1950s, with many of them acting like subservient housewives. Our heroine was witless, flighty, and spineless...oh and fearless? 🤷♀️ She darts off in random actions, doesn't think things through, and makes other silly moves that made me cringe. I'll save my "favorite" random act for the romance section of this review. 🙄🤦♀️
The book started on a good foot with the inciting incident in the 1st chapter. We get the 1st body, as well as the meet-cute with Finn, our hero. So, I figured we were going to have a lively, exciting thriller with a budding romance between Fin and Emma...sadly instead we get chapter after chapter of random wanderings, lengthy conversations, and a random sex scene not involving our main characters, all of which does little to progress the plot.
So let's talk about the plot...or rather lack thereof.
We have a murderer in town and instead of diving headlong into the investigation or maybe the fear that the murder creates in this small town, we get Emma sticking her foot in her mouth every other paragraph, making hasty decisions that lead her to make a fool of herself, and long chapters about Emma's "girls" club that involves embarrassing and cringeworthy things such as the wearing of pink gowns, holding hands, and getting naked and slathering each other with goop. 😕
I am all for what she says the club is about; supporting each other and being there for other women in your friend group. But this "club" acts more like a weird cult, with secretive rules, and a reclusive leader. They stop just short of chanting. 🤦♀️ We also get waaay more chatter about this club than feels relative to the murder, and none of it moves the plot forward. We get moments with Emma explaining the club to her husband, then to Finn, and talking about it with her friends. All while delivering no new information to us the reader, which makes it feel redundant and pointless.
The way Emma was written came off as awkward and unhinged. She is dealing with the end of her marriage, so maybe that could account for some of her random actions. But even her move to divorce her slimy abusive husband isn't done with any measure of urgency. She drags out that decision, yet jumps headlong into doing dangerous things such as chasing down a mysterious black van that threw an envelope of photos at her; or speeding off to break into her murdered friend's place because she doesn't think the police are working fast enough. 🤔
And while Finn is with her on some of these capers, it doesn't progress the plot. Instead, it seemed random and convoluted and felt like following the trail of a chicken with its head cut off. Half the time I was left scratching my head trying to figure out why what I was reading was in the book. And why it was taking so long.
I'm giving up over halfway through this book and we still have yet for the 2nd body to drop 🤷♀️⌚ And we are getting yet another chapter revolving around her "girls" club 🙄
So what about the romance? *sigh*
The romance in this book follows the same bizarre trail as the plot...lots of jumping around, random scene changes, lengthy conversations, Emma sticking her foot in her mouth, again, and oh yeah...my favorite...Emma jumping on the bed... after sexy time with Finn 🤔 I'm sorry, how old is she? 🤦♀️
And that's about all we got from them so far...and I really don't care if they get together again or not. Although since it's a romantic thriller, I'm leaning towards "they will". But I don't want to drag myself through the rest of the book to find out for sure, or to see when the plot is finally going to kick in.
I'd say this feels a lot like a short story that got "flushed out" into a longer book, without adding anything of importance.