It’s easy to see why Hautman continues to receive critical acclaim. He’s a good writer, and this particular book had one of those non-endings with loose ends that critics seem to love.
Mack MacWray was always a rather placid fellow, a bit boring to his wife, until a con man takes him for everything he’s got and leaves him several hundred thousand dollars in debt. To help soothe their troubles, Mack’s wife Paula, a travel agent, takes them on a vacation to Cancun. One day, while out wandering, Mack spies Lars Larson, his ex-business partner who ripped him off. He follows him, confronts him, and does nothing to save Lars when he meets with a fatal accident, leaving his accomplice widow with nothing. Suddenly, Mack is a new man.
When he and Paula return to Minneapolis, he bullies the bank and aggressively gets his raped business back up and running, and business is suddenly booming. But, of course, there is a dark side to the powerful new Mack, and he starts losing control at the same time he loses sight of who he really is. Lars Larson’s widow appears, ready to cause trouble, a policeman seems far too curious about a death that occurred in Mexico, and Paula starts to wonder what’s really going on. Of course, it is the last thing Mack expects that unravels his new life.
Disappointingly, I did not feel there was any kind of closure. Too many questions were left unanswered, leaving me feeling unsatisfied. It was as if Hautman suddenly tired of his protagonists at the last minute and ended the book with more minor characters instead. The book also suffered from a lack of focus. I was never quite sure I liked any of the characters, which made it hard to sympathize with anyone. Good guys should have flaws, but not so many we’re not so sure if they’re good. Pete Hautman writes good books, but this one is not at the top of my list. The story compelled me to keep reading, but the muddled ending didn’t leave me with the feeling it had been all that worthwhile. I recommend Mrs. Million or Short Money instead.