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474 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published January 1, 2010
After the first in the series, I was looking forward to reading the rest of the volumes. In the first volume, the story was gripping, intelligent, laid out in a cogent manner. I found none of that in this second book.
I know that Shevdon has the talent: the first volume showed that. However, in this volume, Shevdon has his protagonist acting like a thoughtless loose cannon who hasn't learned anything beyond age thirteen. Worse, the cool, calm, logical, Blackbird, has become someone who can't reason beyond immediate needs. No more forward thinking like in the first volume, no more intelligent anticipation.
Apparently, Shevdon thinks the loss/danger of a loved one and the pregnancy of a woman makes a person's brains dribble out their ears. While initial trauma does indeed cause a drop in intelligent action, people always return to their mean. They may not be as energetic, or as focused, or as willful; but, they return to more of a baseline of what they were before the trauma: if you can even classify pregnancy as a "trauma."
The two main protagonists take stupid action after stupid action throughout. I don't know if Shevdon just was rushed in writing this book, couldn't pull out a good story to fit his second volume, or the first good volume was a fluke. I just know that this series ends for me with volume two.
