Nice read. Not quite completely satisfying.
The story was too rough, jumping from point A to point B without any interlude.
There were some inconsistencies, I couldn´t get my head around.
It all was too fast and too rocky in story building. A few smoothing touches here and there might have done alot of good.
Loved Chris. But then I just love assholes.
He came off as totally believable, the kind of guy, we all know and love to hate, because he´s an arrogant, narcistic idiot. Sexy.
Didn´t like John. Not even a little bit. But then, I never liked doormats and Mary Sues.. and he was both.
He was the major off putting point for me. The male equivalent of the young damsel, knowing that the myterious Lord next door can never be evil, after exchanging two words with him.
He just came off as shallow and unprofessional, feeling more like a 16 year old girl, than a killer.
Liked Andrei, he appeared to be genuinely confused and believably dependent on those two.
The relationship between Andrei and John was totally unbelievable for me. Too fast. From zero to 100 in something like three days.
Ok, from Andrei´s point of view, since he had nothing but John.
From John´s perpective? Not at all.
Hello? Suspect with close connections to organized crime, he was supposed to kill? Nuh-uh.
But then, the whole book was too fast.
Where it worked though and where I loved it was the last third of the book. I admit, I held my breathe there. Though this, in large parts, also was connected to Chris.
You didn´t know, he was the good guy and honestly could believe, he could pull this off, while just praying, he didn´t.
Still there might have been a few more explanations.
Did John and Andrei know about Chris little plot?
Did John really believe Andrei dead?
Unlikely, but it was a great cliffhanger and in the hospital, I actually had to take a deep breathe. And smiled. Well done.
Did I mention, I loved Chris? He´s such a heartless bastard!
I´m honestly looking forward to his story, and not only because his counter part will be a guy named Nikita.
Overall, a nice little read. With some negative points for me.
Too short, too fast, too rough, doormat.