Flirting with a one star, I ultimately decided to give Alpha Wave two stars as I pushed myself through it to the end. For a couple of reasons I couldn't just DNF it. One was the cost of the book; at $25.95, this mammoth book has a steep cost to get into and one I didn't want to quit after 200 pages. The second reason was that the book had a decent story and the writing, for the most of it, was pretty engaging. Sometimes, I could help turn another page to see what would happen next.
But the problems or my problems with the book, almost killed all the positives.
First off, this book was written by two authors, and it feels like they both had their own editors and proof readers. Sometimes the book was flawless, not a mistake. Then after around 150 pages, the mistakes started happening with grammar, spelling and gender. Somewhere in the book there is one sentence where the character's gender changed twice in one sentence. Once her, then a him. It's jarring to shake your head so much, throwing you right out of the book.
And why are air vents so big in space? Big enough for humans and aliens to crawl through. Please kill this trope. Space in space is expensive.
Another problem with the book was the world building. Not all of it, but a good chunk of it. The flock were pretty well designed as was the general universe and tech, but the culture shifts of the characters, and aliens at times, was weird. One character was spouting slang and felt from the 1920-30's, another two characters felt like they came from a cheap Mad Max clone, while everyone was pretty much using modern century slang like Jiggy, Cat and Nerd. There was NO attempt to make a new human culture or fully realized characters. It may as well been a shlocky 80's action movie dipped in sci-fi, with a good amount of gun porn thrown in. This derailed all the descriptions and world building and brings me to the last prob.
Description in this book was marginal at best, since the flow of the book is more towards action. It was adequate. But what I really missed in this book was any sense of atmosphere or the sense that the characters actually lived and breathed in this universe. A lot of what happened in this book outside of the action scenes felt sterile and lacked tension or drama, even though humanity was being subjugated by an alien species. This being a military sci-fi book, maybe I'm just being too harsh on it. It's not about deep characterizations or filling out the scene with all five senses. It's about blasting aliens and bro hugs and fist pumps followed by some terrible loss, all mixed with a heady brew of testosterone. That said, the women in this book weren't wearing any bikini armor and achieved as much as the men, which for me, gives it another thumbs up.
All in all, it's a donation book for me; an expensive one that I'm sure someone out there will enjoy more than I did.