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192 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2007
I took a drink from a clear, cool, refreshing mountain stream.
NOT
I took a drink from a clear, cool, refreshing, mountain stream.
Similarly, this sentence is correctly punctuated:
I took a drink of clear, cool, refreshing white wine.
Typo in example "Aren't you fed with hearing them ask when they will get there?" (fed up).
Typo in exercise "Freddy and Jean aunt gave it to themb."
Typo: "to turn to turn" (duplicate).
"easy way-in to this topic" awkward, unnecessary "easy way into"
Mistake in exclamation mark exercise passage: The answer uses a punctuation mark which is not specified as an option (and had not been introduced yet) in the exercise.
"Except at the beginnings or ends of the sentence," plural doesn't agree with singular object.
"Remember the rule: in the middles of sentences, commas work in pairs." prefer in the middle of the/a sentence. Hmm there is a solitary comma in the middle of the rule sentence. The rule is vague - better a rule which says why.
"He did volunteer that fact that his name was" prefer "the fact".
"The first type is called a 'restrictive' or 'defining' relative clause, because it specifies or identifies what or who a particular thing or person is... The words 'restrictive' and 'defining' are not particularly illuminating on their own," The word "qualifying" (qualifying relative clause) seems apt.
"the woman that I love most in all the world" ugly, prefer "the woman who".
The part on the colon has exercise questions but no exercise passage.
I don't think the treatment of commas with "so (that)" is consistent with the New Oxford American Dictionary entry for "so".
By using the word "distinctness" the writer draws a fine distinction between "distinctness" and "distinction". This is hair-splitting; it's multiplying entities without reason: "distinctness" is unnecessary.
Some exercises are clumsily worded, in the style of colloquial speech. For the colon or semicolon insertion exercise "The weather was truly awful for the time of the year rain followed fog followed thunder followed hail." The phrase "for the time of the year" fits the pattern for a comment on the sentence - it is awkwardly placed.
In my e-book viewer (Adobe Digital Editions) the cautionary example for a single bracket at a line ending does not have the brackets at line endings (independent of text size).
Chapter references in the text of the e-book do not provide a hypertext link to the referred chapter.
Are "en dash" and "em dash" really the names of typographical marks? Are there no more descriptive names?
The section on dashes leaves the reader in suspense about how em dashes should be used.