"My pattern has been stitched by women, I fancy even more than by men. There were the girls at the village beyond the pine wood, then Perimede who called herself my mother then Hera of the Ford, then dear sweet Hypsipyle, and then Medea. . . . Do I forget the two daughters of Pelias? One with the slashed face, the other with the hanging breast . . . No, those two did not mean much to me, not even as much as that little washed-out fool Glauce, Creon’s brat, for whom I gave my dear sons and my life before all was over. Yes that is it; all my life, although I have half-feared them even while loving them, women have ruled me, have twitched my arms and legs as though I were a puppet. Only once have I acted alone and that was when I was a boy, throwing javelins on the sandy hill-side. And I killed a Spartan with one, thrown at a venture. Come to think of it, that Spartan fellow who grinned even when he was dying, could have killed me as a lad can kill a sparrow, if I had not taken him unawares. I am ashamed to remember it. All my courage has been invented later by poets—those liars—but I do not recall that Medea ever employed a poet to set down her feats."
This quote, taken from the Epilogue, really tells you all you need to know about this novel, a retelling of the legend of Jason and the Argonauts, his doomed marriage to Medea, and in parallel, a restructuring and retelling of the story of Hercules (no small task, since there are so many and often such contradictory myths about the most famous of the Greek heroes, trying to make sense of them is daunting.)
As Treece sees Jason, his story is a summary of a clash between the old, Minoan world with its goddess culture and sacred priestesses maintaining a series of pastoral rites centered around the periodic human sacrifice of a "corn king", and the Hellenes, with their patriarchal gods, who might demand less human sacrifice, but whose followers had a far greater taste for war. This is all very in vogue for the 1960s, when the novel was written, and Treece is a powerful writer who excelled at historical fiction. It should be a brilliant tale, and I really wanted to like this book. In fact, I did for the first third, until the quest for the Golden Fleece really gets rolling.
But the problem is that the novel is told in first person, from Jason's PoV, and its setting, its themes, its style make comparison to Mary Renault's monumental works on Theseus -- The King Must Die and Bull From the Sea -- written only two or three years earlier, inevitable. And against Renault, this work fails, soundly. Renault's Theseus is also arrogant, sometimes callous, sometimes selfish and cruel, yet for all of that he is both *heroic* and strangely likable -- when he fails as a person the reader is frustrated both by and for him.
In contrast, Treece's Jason is a hero a "javelin man" and an "adventurer" only because he tells us so; certainly nothing in his recounting shows him has having been anything other than both lucky and fortunate for drawing the attention of powerful women because he is tall and good-lucking. He fails at every initiative we see him attempt, and his quests succeed because of blind luck or the cunning of others, often off-camera. Caught by the man who deposed his father and whom he has spent two years preparing to murder, who first blubbers and then quickly decides he owes nothing to his parents, whom after all, he knew nothing about until meeting his mother at 16, and so allies with him. A similar thread plays out with Medea's father, the Eagle King of Colchis, and whom he both admires and then prepares to betray, and when found out by the King and Medea, is prepared to castrate himself under Medea's commands and for her amusement, rather than face being executed. Years later, when as a man now 30ish, King Jason loses an eye in battle, he begs any and all nearby to kill him so he need not endure the pain.
Now, showing that even a strong man can be undone through fear, pain, grief, etc., is certainly in keeping with Greek myth and also good storytelling, but understand: JASON NEVER ONCE SHOWS HE CAN DO ANYTHING HEROIC ACCEPT WHEN THE ODDS ARE OVERWHELMINGLY IN HIS FAVOR. As the reader comes to see this -- often as Jason is explaining how time and legend have "perverted" the truth about the other heroes of his age (ex: Atalanta, rather than being a virgin priestess of Artemis and great athlete is a sex-obsessed conniver; Theseus is a cunning, liar who lurks on the battlefield and shoots rivals in the back, so he can steal their victories as his own, etc.) -- he becomes first progressively less likable, then just tedious. Though he periodically professes love for Hippostyle and later Medea, he never really makes any effort to be reunited with them when fate intervenes, and even his "present" position as narrator: a beggar living beneath the shell of the broken and abandoned Argo, seems to be for no reason other than, when deposed in his early 30s, he simply *decides* to do nothing but beg and wander from menial position to menial position. The character is so impotent as to make Hamlet seem cursed with rash impulsiveness.
So why three stars and not two? Because Treece, damn him, can write, and there are scenes and dialogue of great power woven in this novel. More, his Hercules -- clearly mentally ill and prone to paranoid rages, promiscuously bisexual, loyal and honest yet altogether the worst friend anyone could wish upon another -- steals the book. He is a brilliant character in a way that Jason and Medea are not.
But in the end, this is Jason's story and if we cannot like Jason -- and besides perhaps Odysseus and Hector, most Greek heroes are hard for modern readers to like -- we should be able to find areas to respect him. Sadly, this Jason is a man-child whose life peaks at 17 but has the indignity to live on to be about fifty, and to inflict us with the tale of those three years.