Newer review:
Initial reaction:
Coming shortly. I raised the rating by half a star. Brilliantly told story and a classic cat/mouse survival thriller, though sometimes hampered in the pacing despite a hefty (and admirable) amount of attention to detail.
Full review:
I revisited one of my favorite books in middle school in the year of 2023. I mentioned this in my previous review of Robb White's "Deathwatch", but this book had a profound impact on me as a kid/teen in the vein of survival thriller and it still influences both my reading and writing fiction to this day. It was originally written in 1972 (51 years ago!). While I've read this book several times before, I'm still stunned how this ages as well as it does for the appeal it has.
That stated, it's not a perfect book. As much as I enjoy it, there are caveats to this that may not necessarily have it connect to the audience it's aimed for. This is one of the few young adult books where the main characters are not teenagers. Ben himself is 22 years old, a naive college student just trying to go on a hunting expedition with Madec, an older gentleman who doesn't necessarily have the moral compass that Ben does. Something about this book that I did not pick up on when I was younger is how aware Ben is for Madec being not a good person. He knows, he gets it, but he still wants to do the job that he's tasked with. And it's not so much that Ben lacks personality contrary to what I said in my previous review. I re-read this and was surprised by how sassy and point blank Ben was towards Madec's attitude and actions.
When they find a dead body, Ben and Madec's mutually tenuous beneficial relationship goes off the rails very quickly. Ben, more interested in doing the right thing, really does his best to shove off any excuses that Madec makes with what to do with the body. Madec's like "Forget it, bury it, speak no more of it and head back. I'll even offer you money to not say anything." Ben's like "Heck no, we're taking this body back and reporting the person's death. Doesn't matter what responsibility you had in it. Accident." And for all the gaslighting and offering Madec does, Ben's not having it. (Smart guy.)
At least until Madec starts waiving around the gun. Tells Ben to strip down to his underpants. Basically tells Ben that he's going to deprive him of any kind of water or aid and leave him to die in the desert. A slow, painful, burning death in the middle of the desert. Even to this day, Madec's cruelty in what he does to Ben stayed with me, because this poor young guy ends up fighting for his life. Ben, to his credit, is very resourceful and he's not going down without a fight. He does what he can to survive, despite bleeding feet, scorching heat, and outpacing a man with a gun determined to take his time making sure Ben never returns. And even when it gets to the point where Ben is fully naked and starving for food and water, you're realizing as the reader that Ben is in the absolute worst position he can possibly be in for the narrative. If he doesn't starve, face dehydration, burn to death in the scorching heat, or bleed out/get infection from his injuries - Ben's faces death at the hand of Madec's guns.
The amount of detail White uses to describe how Ben survives is meticulously drawn. I don't think it was the survival details in this novel that weighed it down in retrospect, though I think some could draw that argument well enough for context. The pieces that felt repetitive to me came from the ruminations Ben had that didn't really have much to do with the rolling action of the text. Some would argue that it's realistic because Ben's fighting being delirious or having thoughts that a 22-year old would have in this situation. Some might even argue that some of the repetitive movements Ben takes are part of instilling his mind for routine: This is what I have to do to survive. This is what needs to be done for next steps. This is what I have to do, otherwise I'm dead.
Even for the 224 pages of this book, however, you can definitely feel certain places in the narrative where it weighs down. The overarching story it tells is absolutely well done. I think especially towards the moment where this book reaches its climax and Ben and Madec are facing off as far as how the truth of the ordeal plays out, it's realistic and it hurts. Ben's trying, and I remember even from when I read it as a kid how bad I felt for Ben because I understood he was trying his hardest to do the right thing and feeling frustrated at how it came out. But I'll not forget where this ended, and it was a fitting one considering the build up. I give this overall 3.5/5 stars for the execution, but I still name it as a favorite and influential novel for me personally.
Overall score: 3.5/5 stars.
Older Review:
Deathwatch is a book that I read in middle school - particularly the 7th grade (I must have read 300-400+ books during my middle school years - I kid you not), and this particular book caught my attention because it was the first cat and mouse adventure/survival story that I ever read. Ben, the protagonist, is a young adult looking for money to go to college. This leads him to pursue a trip into the desert under the direction of Madec, a greedy businessman. Madec shoots and kills a man in the desert, then tries to cover up the crime. Ben stands his ground and insists on reporting it, which causes Madec to turn on the young man. From then on, it's a 48 hour ordeal where Ben has to use his wits and brawn to run from Madec - without clothes, food, or water.
I actually liked Robb White's prose in this in spurts - it's far better than most contemporary books could note, but suffice to say that reading it now (and having read other books in this same genre) it does leave much to be desired, and there are parts of the book that drag on for longer than it should have. Madec's actions are sadistic and make you feel sympathetic to Ben, though Ben's characterization could have had much more to it looking back on the collective frame of the book. I genuinely liked the way the story ended, and it does tie up events in a way that brings the showdown to a close, and it makes you think about the complex morality and nature of people in due reflection. Overall, I really liked this book, and consider it one of the books that influenced my like of this particular genre, though I do also recognize its respective flaws.
Overall score: 3/5