2.5/5 stars (rounded up)
this book managed to make urban fantasy sapphic vampire hunting witches, a concept which should have been phenomenal, impressively mediocre.
before I get into more critical comments, there were some parts I enjoyed quite a bit. mainly, I liked joan’s narrative voice a lot, she was a compelling protagonist, and I found her bluntness and confidence endearing. the prose was pretty solid in general, and the action scenes were fun and had good suspense. I love that this was set in oregon. also, I love the idea of a lesbian vampire-hunting war witch. the aesthetics and ambience of that concept were carrying a lot of my investment in the narrative tbh.
and that’s kind of the problem — I feel like Consecrated Ground had all the right building blocks for a great book, but they were just slapped together with low quality adhesive so the structure is kind of crumbling. and now I’m the building inspector shaking my head like, “what a shame, these were some damn good bricks that went to waste.”
into my laundry list of criticisms:
joan — listen, I did like joan a lot as a character. but as a narrative and thematic vessel, she did frustrate me at times. she isn’t so much an unreliable narrator as much as an out-of-sight, out-of-mind narrator who doesn’t express any thoughts beyond necessary exposition or commentary on the situation immediately in front of her. joan’s past as a traveling war witch isn’t at all explored, which is such a shame. like, even just a few specific anecdotes of meaningful people she met / experiences she had / things she learned on her travels would have made her backstory so much more interesting. and it would have provided a lot of contrast to her stationary life in small-town Oregon, and made the subsequent climax of claiming the land and choosing to stay much more significant. she was also sort of… philosophically nebulous? like she hated vampires, which is fair enough since (a lot of) vampires kill people, but she was also very morally opposed to vampires voluntarily feeding on humans, and a justification is never really given for that? then, when her (ex)girlfriend is revealed to have been turned into a vampire creature, she gets over it surprisingly quickly, BUT it doesn’t seem to inspire any deeper thought about morality in relation to vampires. it’s kind of just an unspoken, “well, she’s the one good one, but still fuck every single other vampire.” part of the appeal of vampire media is that they exist in such a morally-grey space! lean into it!!!
leigh — she managed to make the idea of being secretly a vampire boring (well, technically, a human vampire thrall called a bloodling). but skill issue fr. she doesn’t even get to partake in the cool sexy things that come with being a vampire!! leigh felt like a very passive character, which isn’t always bad, but she didn’t really make any important decisions, other than deciding to run away, resulting in her getting captured and needing to get saved by joan. joan keeps commenting on how leigh is such a sweet, gentle person, but it’s never really demonstrated. part of the problem is the lack of showing her interacting with anyone other than joan, which is related to the lack of secondary characters in general — put a pin in that one.
the romance — it was alright, though I didn’t find the chemistry between joan and leigh that strong. if you’re going to put sex in your vampire books, is it too much to ask for hot, fucked-up lesbian vampire sex??? (well? maybe that’s just a personal preference. I digress.) so joan and leigh are exes and it’s sort of a second-chance romance situation, which can be fun and exciting, but I do think the book fell into the trap of justifying their relationship to each other with “well, they’re already in love,” without putting in the work of explaining what drew them together in the first place and why they should still be together for reasons other than familiarity and nostalgia. that being said, joan kissing leigh on the forehead out of habit before realizing and being embarrassed about was extremely cute. so for that alone I’ll give the romance a pass.
other characters — what other characters? lmao. okay, there are other characters, but none of them have any significant depth or agency in the narrative. there’s joan’s dead father who talks to her as a ghost, but a) he’s dead, and b) we don’t get much personal detail about him and his character besides the fact that joan had conflicted feelings about him. (what are these conflicted feelings? idk, she’s sad that he’s dead but didn’t like him because they mostly didn’t get along, I guess). then there’s dayton, the head of the town watch, and it was nice for joan to have someone her age she gets along with, but I’m not sure I can even really call them friends since 100% of dayton’s character is asking joan for help, being impressed by Joan’s skills, or backing joan up in important combat scenes. there’s a couple members of the council but we barely get to know them. at one point one of them is revealed to have been a traitor, but I honestly don’t care, and neither does joan, really, because she doesn’t know them either.
worldbuilding — another case of the “lots of good stuff in theory that was criminally underutilized” issue. I had a lot of questions about the worldbuilding, specifically the magic system and the details of vampire lore, which were not particularly well explained. it’s set in some version of the modern world, but feels very dystopian, so I was frequently left wondering, have vampires and magic always existed openly in this world, or was there some sort of vampire apocalypse? because I fear that is a very basic question and the answer had broad and significant implications to everything else in this world. the idea that witches’ covens in large cities often have contracts with the vampires giving them access to donated blood in exchange for strict rules against killing humans was super interesting, and made me wish we spent any amount of time on the city to see that play out. the vampire politics could have been soooooo cool. instead, joan tries to go to the portland high coven for help, but they won’t even let her in the city and she gives up on that in like 2 pages. then, she ends up requesting help from two other vampires, bartholomew and elizaveta, who we are told who they are the first time like 3/4 of the way through the book when joan shows up at their hideout. joan treats this moment of asking for help from these lesser-of-two-evils vampires as super significant, but the whole time I was just wondering “who are these bitches again???” and finally, how does the magic system work? the limits of witches’ powers and the spells they can do are never really explained. I don’t even know if magic is something you have to be born with, or if anyone can do magic with enough training. are there any other magical creatures besides witches and vampires? joan seems really surprised that her father appears to her as a ghost, to the extent that I don’t think she knew ghosts existed in this world, but the audience doesn’t have a strong enough sense of the magic system for it to seem special and shocking that a ghost would show up.
the villain — the vampire lord victor being pierce (joan’s dad’s old apprentice, presumed dead) was a twist I did not see coming, and while reading, I did enjoy it. but in retrospect, I think my enjoyment was more about being surprised than feeling like it was narratively significant. like, it WAS interesting to have those pieces connect, but one character we who never got to understand their goals and motivations being revealed to be another character who we never got to understand their goals and motivations? not that exciting. plus, victor never really gets developed as a villain. I have no idea why he’s doing what he’s doing beyond the fact that he’s a bad dude who has it out for his ex and wants power. HE’S A VAMPIRE LORD! he should be cool and sexy and evil but he’s just a loser.
so those are my thoughts. I feel like I went a bit overboard on being a hater in this review, and it might give you the impression I didn’t like the book at all, but that’s not true. I still gave it basically 3 stars, I just love lesbians + vampires and wish Consecrated Ground was as excellent as it could have been.