What I Liked:
~The relationship development between John and Emma – subtle but good, and normally I complain about intimate scenes being glossed over or left out, but I had no problem with it in this novel, those details weren’t necessary
~Michael – I enjoyed his addition to the series, and I loved his scenes with Bai Hu, though I think he should have been introduced earlier, like at the end of the White Tiger novel. I would like to see the relationship between Rhonda and Bai Hu develop.
~Bai Hu and John Chen relationship dynamic – They are so different from each other, but it’s obvious who has John’s shell whenever he’s in trouble, their interactions always amuse me.
~Simone – Her reaction to finally finding out the truth was realistic, her character development through out this novel could have been at a faster pace but was still good. The situation with her was handled and resolved well. I also liked finding out the source of her clumsiness, her inner-eye needed testing
What I Didn’t Like:
~Show, Don’t Tell – The reader is still getting second-hand fight scenes, now while this could be argued as practical in the the first book, it’s starting to get irritating in the second. The reader was sort of shown the fight scene in the car-park, the reader could easily have been shown the fight scene in the subway and still have it so Emma didn’t remember afterwards
~Leo – Leo’s a character I have mixed feelings about, I enjoy Emma and Leo’s sibling interactions, however his attitude and behavior after the subway fight scene was jarring and confusing. If a seven year old girl can come to the conclusion of “Yes, of course I’m frightened, but that’s still Emma and Emma would never intentionally hurt us.” So can a fully grown adult man, who has been the service of a God for nearly a decade. After nearly a decade of serving a god, I think you lose the right to freak out at weird stuff, weird stuff is what Leo signed up for.
~Emma’s Pointless and Repetitive Freak-Out Moments – Emma had NO LESS THAN 3 Gods tell her “It’s fine, don’t worry about it, You’re not a danger to your family” and she’s still freaking out about it. It was very tiring. And good lord, if Emma thought it was irritating to be told over and over again that she was extraordinary when she really wasn’t, it sure as hell was for me. Being able to think fast in a high-danger/pressure situation is what Emma is supposed to be able to do, she swore to serve John as a retainer, it’s her job to protect Simone.
~John’s Lecture on Nature VS Morality – I don’t know why that scene, and sudden character derailment, was in the book. I understand that a vast majority of Fantasy Novels like to discuss “The Other” theme. The Other theme discusses the element of the unknown in other people, their cultures and most importantly, the element of the unknown or The Other within ourselves. The hidden, perhaps darker, aspects of our inner psyche that most functioning adults conceal and like to pretend does not exist.
But for a woman, whose Australian (you know, the land of Death and poisonous Snakes), whom had previously owned a pet snake and was supposedly genius level intelligence, it seemed like Emma was holding the idiot-ball on purpose just so John could give a lecture on “True Nature” and “There is no Good or Evil” (which I strongly disagree with, I get that good and evil are human constructs, but that doesn’t make them less real).
Perhaps that scene will become more significant later on, but the scene felt forced. Perhaps it’s because “The Other” theme is done so often (with varying success) in so many Fantasy novels, it almost seems cliche when not handled correctly, and that scene didn’t feel right to me.
~Strange Title Choice – The Red Phoenix is in two scenes in the whole book and although both those scenes did have a significant impact on the plot and character, The Red Phoenix doesn’t play a significant role in the novel, The White Tiger did, in fact The White was more significant in Red Phoenix then in the book named after him. Perhaps it’s a retrospective thing I’m just not getting