Russ’s father was a firefighter, and for as long as Russ could remember, he wanted to be a firefighter, too. He loved the camaraderie of the Hothouse (firehouse) team, the shiny, no-fingerprints engines, the brave deeds, and the mustaches. Being a firefighter was the highest calling for a man as far as Russ was concerned. Then, his father and his best friend’s father are killed in a fire, killed being heroes, and Russ’s world shifts on its axis. But, Russ’s father is a hero… he died in the line of duty. Everyone in the community honors the sacrifice that Russ’s and DJ’s fathers made – they get free bus rides, free tattoos, free drinks. There are community barbecues; there are memorials; there are billboards. Everyone wants in on the memory of Courageous Outrageous heroes. Until the findings of the Board of Inquiry come out. Then, Russ’s world shifts on its axis again.
I’ll be honest. I don’t like the voice that Chris Lynch uses for his characters. I remember hating it when I read “Inexcusable,” and I hated it when I read “Hothouse.” It’s a tough voice to describe. In one way, it is very close to the way people actually talk. However, it is written without punctuation to make it clear. I don’t mean to imply that Chris Lynch published a book sans punctuation – that would just be absurd! What I mean is that there are phrases that are actually separate sentences or clauses that should be set apart with punctuation, but they aren’t. Phrases and clauses and sentences are sometimes all mushed together into one sentence, making it confusing to read. And I don’t like to be confused by the grammar/conventions when I read. I don’t like to be confused by the plot, either, but I REALLY don’t like to be confused by something that is so easy to fix and make clear.
Additionally, I didn’t like this book because it was well over half-way through the book before the conflict was introduced. Initially, I thought the conflict was Russ grieving for his father’s death, and in some small way, I think that is part of the conflict. But, the bigger conflict is the results of the Board of Inquiry, and those aren’t even brought up until over halfway through. I remember at about page 70 looking at my husband and saying, “So far, my summary of this book will only consist of: ‘Russ’s father died. Russ is grieving.’” For over half the book, that is the whole of the plot. Sorry. Not enough for me.
My final complaint is that the book feels like it just ends. ”Inexcusable” felt the same way. The conflict has finally been introduced; another major event has just occurred; then, literally 13 pages later, the book ends. Ends! Done! Finito! Sorry. Not okay.
If you can’t tell yet, I’m not in love with this book. Looking back over this review, it’s really negative, and the book wasn’t THAT bad; I mean, I DID finish it. And it had a few emotional moments – it’s a moving topic. I think there are boys who might like this book if they can get past the 70 pages of virtually no plot. However, I was not, and am not now, a huge Chris Lynch fan. I held out hope for this book but Chris, make me read a bad book once, shame on you; make me read a bad book twice, shame on me. You will NOT get me a third time.