1 star and a half. (because the cover looks sexy.)
Ok, I began reading this because I was really curious how the menage was going to play with a dude who wasn't into Submission.
The beginning was good even thought some parts were overdone, like the attraction Benny felt for Mario, then all flows easily until the scene when the first threesome happens, the video was almost overlooked, i would have liked it if it had played more in the scene, but it was ok.
Then we move on and little by little all begins to fall apart, Characters begin to act too dramatically and too many plots are put on game, plots we don't actually see the resolution of, but it was still bearable.
When the story moves just after the the gallery exposition it turns in to a dramafest, everything is drama, drama and more drama, specially from Rain and Benny, Rain, from being the character i liked the most in the beginning turns into the character i hated most in the end, and what's up with the setup? Rain is the Sub be in all the scenes involving him and Benny, he's always the dominant and the one doing the fucking, the only time when Benny fucks Rain was faded to black, and Dear lord, the scene with Rain's "manager" was wrong, i mean is a private club isn't there security? why the hell didn't they helped Jason and why the hell did they let the bad dude run away?, and the actions of both Rain and Benny are Harlequin worthy, I did skip pages due to all the drama which was over the top.
and What I hated the most is the quantity of unanswered questions/plots left in the air, what happened with Shanon's ex-boyfriend?, What was the true reason behind Mario closing his dungeon/club? Did Adam and his boyfriend resolved their issues regarding the house?
And the thing that drive me to read this book wasn't handled in the way I was expecting, if you ask me hierarchically was Jason/Rain/Benny, I was expecting something different, but the author took the easy way, in the end Benny was treated like a sub, the only difference between him and Rain was that Rain was a "pain-slut" as he and Jason denominate him and Benny wasn't, it wasn't at all what I was expecting.