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Lost: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth found themselves lost in the middle of a forest, they must resolve their differences and work together to find their way back. What challenges must they face to get home?
366 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 15, 2023
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January 22, 2023
“Perhaps she had exaggerated; people very often were wrong about their relatives.” –Daphne du Maurier, Rebecca
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: sex scenes between married couples, are not graphic. Strong language and evil intentions would cause the demise of a character if played out. Kidnapping, stressors due to the uncertainty of the evil plot put forth: some parts are not appropriate for a young reader
>>Angst Level: medium to high as an attempt was made on the life of beloved characters
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [1-17-23] with no expectations of a review. The thought and opinions expressed are my own. I first read this on the forums as a WIP [work-in-progress]. The P&P universe was certainly shaken up by this variation.
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe, [2] wimp-spinless Bingley: that caused a different pairing for our dear Jane, [3] Evil Lord & Lady Matlock: but for other reasons, [4] Evil Lady Catherine and a strong Anne who had already deluded her mother [way to go Anne] [5] a really interesting twist for Colonel Fitzwilliam. OMG! Dang! This whole story was turned on its ear. I loved it.
“See, relations are people with the same blood. But family, that’s different. Family is about who gives you hope, [and] who gets involved. And earns the right [to] forgiveness. Or at least starts down the path.” –Mike Chen, A Beginning at the End
There was a huge secret that was well hidden. Or, so someone thought. Secrets are bound to reveal themselves in the most unorthodox manner. There were clues right away that made the reader sit up and take notice. Wait… does this mean that such-and-so is really that? How did that come about? I loved how that played out in the story. That was such a cool twist.
Matlock and his sister were the pits. Lord Matlock was near bankrupt. He gambled and his Lady wife was a spendthrift and could care less she was bankrupting her husband. She was THE leader in ton society and that was all that mattered to her. Lady Catherine ruled Rosings with a tight fist and knew everything that was happening within her purview. Or, so she thought. LA! That was hilarious. Anne had completely hoodwinked her mother and the great lady had no clue. The grand dame spent all her money on ostentatious furniture and decorations. She then let the tenants and the estate fall to rack and ruin. She ignored Darcy’s advice and counsel and fired an excellent steward for one that would do her bidding. Thus, her coffers were running low. She, like her brother the earl, needed an influx of funds, Darcy funds, to be exact. The push was on.
This was a story about greed and avarice. How far would the relatives go in order to secure Darcy’s fortune? There were many surprises in this story. Many parts of this will be shocking and not appropriate for younger readers.
What I didn’t like: was the lack of editing. There were many instances of pronouns being switched, names confused for another, strange sentence structure, and missing words. It pulled me from the story.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: sex scenes between married couples, are not graphic. Strong language and evil intentions would cause the demise of a character if played out. Kidnapping, stressors due to the uncertainty of the evil plot put forth: some parts are not appropriate for a young reader
>>Angst Level: medium to high as an attempt was made on the life of beloved characters
>>Source: Borrowed from KU [1-17-23] with no expectations of a review. The thought and opinions expressed are my own. I first read this on the forums as a WIP [work-in-progress]. The P&P universe was certainly shaken up by this variation.
>>Trope: [1] AU: Alternate Universe, [2] wimp-spinless Bingley: that caused a different pairing for our dear Jane, [3] Evil Lord & Lady Matlock: but for other reasons, [4] Evil Lady Catherine and a strong Anne who had already deluded her mother [way to go Anne] [5] a really interesting twist for Colonel Fitzwilliam. OMG! Dang! This whole story was turned on its ear. I loved it.
“See, relations are people with the same blood. But family, that’s different. Family is about who gives you hope, [and] who gets involved. And earns the right [to] forgiveness. Or at least starts down the path.” –Mike Chen, A Beginning at the End
There was a huge secret that was well hidden. Or, so someone thought. Secrets are bound to reveal themselves in the most unorthodox manner. There were clues right away that made the reader sit up and take notice. Wait… does this mean that such-and-so is really that? How did that come about? I loved how that played out in the story. That was such a cool twist.
Matlock and his sister were the pits. Lord Matlock was near bankrupt. He gambled and his Lady wife was a spendthrift and could care less she was bankrupting her husband. She was THE leader in ton society and that was all that mattered to her. Lady Catherine ruled Rosings with a tight fist and knew everything that was happening within her purview. Or, so she thought. LA! That was hilarious. Anne had completely hoodwinked her mother and the great lady had no clue. The grand dame spent all her money on ostentatious furniture and decorations. She then let the tenants and the estate fall to rack and ruin. She ignored Darcy’s advice and counsel and fired an excellent steward for one that would do her bidding. Thus, her coffers were running low. She, like her brother the earl, needed an influx of funds, Darcy funds, to be exact. The push was on.
This was a story about greed and avarice. How far would the relatives go in order to secure Darcy’s fortune? There were many surprises in this story. Many parts of this will be shocking and not appropriate for younger readers.
What I didn’t like: was the lack of editing. There were many instances of pronouns being switched, names confused for another, strange sentence structure, and missing words. It pulled me from the story.
January 28, 2023
2.5 rounded up to 3 stars
Melodramatic Pride and Prejudice variation wherein evil Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine are in cahoots with a kidnapping scheme to get rid of Darcy for a while, arrange for Wickham (who's part of the plot) to marry Georgiana, and funnel money from Darcy assets to pay off their staggering debts. The kidnappers at first don't realize Elizabeth is present when they nab Darcy, who was just launching into his marriage proposal on the grounds near the parsonage. They decide to take her along as well. The two prisoners eventually escape, but not until they've been carried well into Scotland.
The book has yet another kidnapping attempt - of another character - as well as one character whose parentage is a lie and another who has been secretly married for two years while still living at home. This is a major soap opera!
Everything is over-explained - stating the blatantly obvious when actions and dialogue have already described things adequately without requiring further explanation. Writing doesn't really flow. There's head-hopping. Lots of glaring proofreading/editing errors, including Mrs. Bennet being mis-identified a couple of times as Mrs. Darcy. In the Epilogue, the author reveals that Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam marries Kitty Bennet, apparently forgetting a major storyline involving his wedding and happy marriage with a different character.
If you like a lot of action and intrigue, it's an entertaining story, but the delivery lacks polish.
There is non-graphic Adult Content - couples are clearly enjoying the marriage bed.
Melodramatic Pride and Prejudice variation wherein evil Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine are in cahoots with a kidnapping scheme to get rid of Darcy for a while, arrange for Wickham (who's part of the plot) to marry Georgiana, and funnel money from Darcy assets to pay off their staggering debts. The kidnappers at first don't realize Elizabeth is present when they nab Darcy, who was just launching into his marriage proposal on the grounds near the parsonage. They decide to take her along as well. The two prisoners eventually escape, but not until they've been carried well into Scotland.
The book has yet another kidnapping attempt - of another character - as well as one character whose parentage is a lie and another who has been secretly married for two years while still living at home. This is a major soap opera!
Everything is over-explained - stating the blatantly obvious when actions and dialogue have already described things adequately without requiring further explanation. Writing doesn't really flow. There's head-hopping. Lots of glaring proofreading/editing errors, including Mrs. Bennet being mis-identified a couple of times as Mrs. Darcy. In the Epilogue, the author reveals that Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam marries Kitty Bennet, apparently forgetting a major storyline involving his wedding and happy marriage with a different character.
If you like a lot of action and intrigue, it's an entertaining story, but the delivery lacks polish.
There is non-graphic Adult Content - couples are clearly enjoying the marriage bed.
January 18, 2023
decent story
There were some errors in main story although the storyline was ok but the epilogue had Richard Fitzwilliam married to two different people causing some confusion . Needs some work.
There were some errors in main story although the storyline was ok but the epilogue had Richard Fitzwilliam married to two different people causing some confusion . Needs some work.
April 12, 2023
A really interesting story full of adventure and intrigue. I loved the new twists for some of the characters and I found most of the new ones original and engaging. The writing could stand some editing but, while somewhat distracting, it delivers a delightful story.
March 29, 2023
There are many variations of lost - physically, emotionally, etc. This story follows Darcy and his family finding what they have been missing through love and some chance meetings.
January 19, 2023
I really enjoyed it. Lots of despicable plotting. Our favorite baddies plus some new ones. A few plot twists. Good romance between a gallant Darcy and an intelligent and level headed Elizabeth. One of the several plot lines had a few two-dimensional characters, but overall it was well worth the read.
January 21, 2023
I had a whole lot of notes but I’m just going to say this was not edited, proofread or even checked over in any way. Or if it was it was badly done.
There were pronoun mistakes all over including referring to ‘his husband’. The worst was themself.
Also, Darcy was going to leave Elizabeth alone in an inn while he went for help. Yes, that makes sense.
The characters heard lightening.
A lot of modern language as well including con man, classy and many more.
To top it all off it had the wrong epilogue attached. Usually if I finish a book I give at least three stars. I just couldn’t here.
There were pronoun mistakes all over including referring to ‘his husband’. The worst was themself.
Also, Darcy was going to leave Elizabeth alone in an inn while he went for help. Yes, that makes sense.
The characters heard lightening.
A lot of modern language as well including con man, classy and many more.
To top it all off it had the wrong epilogue attached. Usually if I finish a book I give at least three stars. I just couldn’t here.
January 28, 2023
It started very well, but with so many intrigues I got bored.
April 8, 2023
Rating Rounded Up
This is a story with potential; however the unacceptable amount of errors just make it very hard to read. There were many times where what was written was confusing and I really had a hard time figuring out what the author was trying to convey. Its too bad that there are so many issues with the story because it really does have a lot of promise. There is an author's note that they are aware of the issues and are editing it for another release in future. I wish them the best of luck.
This is a story with potential; however the unacceptable amount of errors just make it very hard to read. There were many times where what was written was confusing and I really had a hard time figuring out what the author was trying to convey. Its too bad that there are so many issues with the story because it really does have a lot of promise. There is an author's note that they are aware of the issues and are editing it for another release in future. I wish them the best of luck.
February 5, 2023
Absolutely delightful
An absolutely delightful and very emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Miranda Flan. I hope she keeps publishing her fabulous stories for us to enjoy.
An absolutely delightful and very emotional variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by the talented Miranda Flan. I hope she keeps publishing her fabulous stories for us to enjoy.
February 14, 2023
I'm sorry to say I didn't enjoy this book at all. There were so many things that didn't sit well with me. Darcy being so weak in thought, not writing anyone after he and Elizabeth escapes, not showing his affection for Elizabeth at Pemberley, Mrs Reynolds being so rude to Elizabeth. These are just a few things. Darcy not being able to think of anything else but bedding Elizabeth and being rude to her in front of his steward.
Not a book I would re read sorry to say. I apologize to the author for such a poor review after she worked hard writing it. It was a good idea but to me wasnt told the right way
Not a book I would re read sorry to say. I apologize to the author for such a poor review after she worked hard writing it. It was a good idea but to me wasnt told the right way
March 16, 2023
The story itself was original and interesting, but extremely poorly written. Grammar errors everywhere, as well as some spelling errors; awkward sentences with missing words, words used that were completely out of place, pronouns and character names mixed up - if an editor was used at all, a refund should be demanded. It really detracted from the flow of the story and made it hard to read.
The plot itself was intriguing, with kidnappings and family plots and long lost relatives, however the character developments were fairly wooden and opinions instantly changed without much reflection or explanation.
The plot itself was intriguing, with kidnappings and family plots and long lost relatives, however the character developments were fairly wooden and opinions instantly changed without much reflection or explanation.
February 2, 2023
Please fix the text to speech on the Kindle version. It stops after every chapter, and I have to reboot the device. Fire tablet is being used.
February 8, 2023
3.5 stars. I had previously read as a WIP.
February 13, 2023
Good Story
This really was a great storyline but multiple grammatical errors detracted from what could have been a 4 rating and I couldn’t overlook such distractions.
This really was a great storyline but multiple grammatical errors detracted from what could have been a 4 rating and I couldn’t overlook such distractions.
March 17, 2023
I honestly thought of not giving it 5 stars but I really liked it just please review the errors, they are misplaced names and the like but they stop this story from becoming extraordinary
June 29, 2024
2.5 rounded up
April 8, 2024
Lost
What a horrible tale of familial betrayal this was. Delightful after getting over the lumps and bumps held by ODC. Kidnapped from Rosings by the order of Lord Matlock, his awful wife, Lady Anastasia, and Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Darcy and Elizabeth must combine their forces to escape from their fate. They manage to get away and are rescued by a Scotsman named James MacKay who winds up tied to the couple by knowing Darcy Senior. He knows the Fitzwillilams too, but the relationship is not met fondly. His wife Emma was the younger sister of Lord Matlock who literally kidnapped his sister and brings her back to London. She dies in childbirth and is told that his son also died. After rescuing Darcy and Elizabeth twice he accompanies them back to Pemberley as Darcy has a letter for him from his father. There he finds out Matlock’s treachery against him and his son. By now Darcy and Elizabeth have married in Scotland and are on their way to London to confront his greedy family. Anne de Bourgh has secretly married her doctor Edmund Johnson, Jane marries Richard Fitzwillilam (MacKay), Darcy married Elizabeth, and no backbone Bingley gets his just deserts along with his scheming sister Caroline. Enjoyed this story.
What a horrible tale of familial betrayal this was. Delightful after getting over the lumps and bumps held by ODC. Kidnapped from Rosings by the order of Lord Matlock, his awful wife, Lady Anastasia, and Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Darcy and Elizabeth must combine their forces to escape from their fate. They manage to get away and are rescued by a Scotsman named James MacKay who winds up tied to the couple by knowing Darcy Senior. He knows the Fitzwillilams too, but the relationship is not met fondly. His wife Emma was the younger sister of Lord Matlock who literally kidnapped his sister and brings her back to London. She dies in childbirth and is told that his son also died. After rescuing Darcy and Elizabeth twice he accompanies them back to Pemberley as Darcy has a letter for him from his father. There he finds out Matlock’s treachery against him and his son. By now Darcy and Elizabeth have married in Scotland and are on their way to London to confront his greedy family. Anne de Bourgh has secretly married her doctor Edmund Johnson, Jane marries Richard Fitzwillilam (MacKay), Darcy married Elizabeth, and no backbone Bingley gets his just deserts along with his scheming sister Caroline. Enjoyed this story.
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