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Bellyache: A Delicious Tale
When Peter Fischer sets out to help his grandfather at Papa's Sweet Shop, he will quickly learn that sneaking sweets and covering up his sugar-dusted tracks will have major consequences. As Peter is transported to a mysteriously delicious, faraway land, a curious people known as the Candonites, some of whom have no time for a non-Candonite, will teach Peter a lesson on what it means to be different and what it means to forgive.
For ages 7 and up.
~2013 B.R.A.G. Medallion Honoree
~2012 USA BEST BOOK AWARDS Award-Winning Finalist in both categories of Children's Fiction & Children's Book Series
For ages 7 and up.
~2013 B.R.A.G. Medallion Honoree
~2012 USA BEST BOOK AWARDS Award-Winning Finalist in both categories of Children's Fiction & Children's Book Series
146 pages, Paperback
First published June 15, 2010
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Crystal Marcos
4 books882 followersAward-winning author Crystal Marcos has been a storyteller her entire life. As the oldest of five children, she had to do a lot of entertaining. She lives on the Kitsap Peninsula in Washington State with her husband, daughter Kaylee, and son Jaxon. Crystal is the author of BELLYACHE: A Delicious Tale, HEADACHE: The Hair-Raising Sequel to BELLYACHE, and Novus: Book One of The Cresecren Chronicles. Bartholomew Buggins is her first children's picture book.
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January 17, 2011
Whew! I am relieved that I really enjoyed this book. I did buy a copy, but I’ve gotten to know the author here at Goodreads and I would have felt very badly if I hadn’t liked this at least 3 stars worth.
This story is great for some 7 year old kids and for 8-10 year olds and maybe 11 year old independent readers, and could also be enjoyable for read aloud one to one or to groups for 6-10 year olds. Older kids and adults will enjoy it too. The story is great for boys and girls both. I’d have especially enjoyed reading this in third and fourth grades. This is a very fast read; I started it before bed one day and finished it quickly the next day. I did notice that as I read I continually made a point of experiencing this as I would have at ages 7 through 10, and I’d also love reading this to kids in that age range. For my first reading, I had a blast reading it just to myself though.
The story and its style have a curiously old fashioned feel, which I enjoyed. There are some definite messages and morals here, forgiveness being a big one, but I like how everything was resolved. The messages might have been a tad didactic but they fit seamlessly into the story, and don’t interfere with the fun part of reading it, and they could lead to some wonderful discussions, and inward thinking by introspective children.
I was afraid I’d get hungry for candy as I was reading this (and I do have candy in the house) but for some reason I did not crave it. Reading it at another time though and cravings might have occurred. Toward the beginning, I thought I’d want my last round red and white swirl (no artificial colors, vegan) peppermint candy.
The story is predictable in every way but also very inventive. This alternate world and its characters are wonderfully, imaginatively presented. There are very vivid descriptions, and the idea of the odor wafting from the Candonite characters and their appearances make for a wonderful reading experience.
Peter’s behavior all the way through is perfectly understandable. I appreciated that he is a good kid who has done something wrong. I loved the relationship between Peter and his grandparents, and between Peter and his friend Lina. At first I wasn’t thrilled when Lina reappeared but eventually I was very glad that she ended up having a significant role in the story. I really like Peter’s grandfather. I actually got invested in many of the characters in both worlds.
What I didn’t always get were several of the language choices. It’s not that they were wrong but in at least a couple of cases I thought a different word would work better, and some of the female vs. male choices, felt a bit like stereotypes, even though I think there was a deliberate attempt to be careful to avoid that, and overall it's written very well. I like how it uses some challenging but accessible vocabulary for middle school readers.
For very fearful children, especially young ones reading this book on their own, there is a section where things felt very sinister, and scary, and though much of the story I had feelings of foreboding.
Given the sentient nature of candy and other sweets in this tale, this might be an appropriately interesting book for vegan and vegetarian children.
And, I’ve always loved vegetables (as a child I enjoyed all but 3 vegetables, and now enjoy them all) so the desserts prevalent in Maple Town sounded very appealing to me, and would have as a child too, even though I’ve also always had a sweet tooth for candy, cakes, etc. sweets.
“Oh crumbles!” and “Oh spam! are my new favorite expletives, particularly “Oh spam!”
This story is great for some 7 year old kids and for 8-10 year olds and maybe 11 year old independent readers, and could also be enjoyable for read aloud one to one or to groups for 6-10 year olds. Older kids and adults will enjoy it too. The story is great for boys and girls both. I’d have especially enjoyed reading this in third and fourth grades. This is a very fast read; I started it before bed one day and finished it quickly the next day. I did notice that as I read I continually made a point of experiencing this as I would have at ages 7 through 10, and I’d also love reading this to kids in that age range. For my first reading, I had a blast reading it just to myself though.
The story and its style have a curiously old fashioned feel, which I enjoyed. There are some definite messages and morals here, forgiveness being a big one, but I like how everything was resolved. The messages might have been a tad didactic but they fit seamlessly into the story, and don’t interfere with the fun part of reading it, and they could lead to some wonderful discussions, and inward thinking by introspective children.
I was afraid I’d get hungry for candy as I was reading this (and I do have candy in the house) but for some reason I did not crave it. Reading it at another time though and cravings might have occurred. Toward the beginning, I thought I’d want my last round red and white swirl (no artificial colors, vegan) peppermint candy.
The story is predictable in every way but also very inventive. This alternate world and its characters are wonderfully, imaginatively presented. There are very vivid descriptions, and the idea of the odor wafting from the Candonite characters and their appearances make for a wonderful reading experience.
Peter’s behavior all the way through is perfectly understandable. I appreciated that he is a good kid who has done something wrong. I loved the relationship between Peter and his grandparents, and between Peter and his friend Lina. At first I wasn’t thrilled when Lina reappeared but eventually I was very glad that she ended up having a significant role in the story. I really like Peter’s grandfather. I actually got invested in many of the characters in both worlds.
What I didn’t always get were several of the language choices. It’s not that they were wrong but in at least a couple of cases I thought a different word would work better, and some of the female vs. male choices, felt a bit like stereotypes, even though I think there was a deliberate attempt to be careful to avoid that, and overall it's written very well. I like how it uses some challenging but accessible vocabulary for middle school readers.
For very fearful children, especially young ones reading this book on their own, there is a section where things felt very sinister, and scary, and though much of the story I had feelings of foreboding.
Given the sentient nature of candy and other sweets in this tale, this might be an appropriately interesting book for vegan and vegetarian children.
And, I’ve always loved vegetables (as a child I enjoyed all but 3 vegetables, and now enjoy them all) so the desserts prevalent in Maple Town sounded very appealing to me, and would have as a child too, even though I’ve also always had a sweet tooth for candy, cakes, etc. sweets.
“Oh crumbles!” and “Oh spam! are my new favorite expletives, particularly “Oh spam!”
March 5, 2018
As a kid I used to dream of going to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory, or shrinking down and getting trapped in Candy Land. Now that dream has come true with Crystal Marcos’ Bellyache a Delicious Tale. Young Peter’s Papa owns a candy shop and brings him along to help out for a day. Predictably, Peter isn’t just a pumpkin eater as he secretly goes to town pilfering some of Papa’s sweets.
The real magic of Bellyache comes when Peter is sucked into a mystical world of candy people and animals. It was fun to see what Peter would discover next, and to see how he moved through his moral journey. Bellyache is well wrapped with enough imagination and action to keep anyone interested to the very end.
I’d recommend this to anyone who enjoyed the Phantom Tollbooth or Alice in Wonderland.
The real magic of Bellyache comes when Peter is sucked into a mystical world of candy people and animals. It was fun to see what Peter would discover next, and to see how he moved through his moral journey. Bellyache is well wrapped with enough imagination and action to keep anyone interested to the very end.
I’d recommend this to anyone who enjoyed the Phantom Tollbooth or Alice in Wonderland.
May 8, 2018
A well-written story about a young boy who gets to spend the day with his grandparents in their candy store. He is given a limit on the number of treats he can eat but finds restraint and honesty fly out the window when surrounded by such tempting morsels. Soon, he finds himself asleep and on a different adventure in a land filled with marshmallow birds and the population made from candy. Peter must learn a valuable lesson along with his journey. Sweet and enjoyable, this book will fire up the imagination of young readers with a sweet tooth for reading.
February 25, 2012
This review contains excerpts of reviews of Bellyache completed by myself, my daughter, and my son. For the full review, please go www.motherdaughterbookreviews.com
Daughter Says: I liked the Candonite people, the peppermint cat, and the marshmallow birds and wondered what they would look like in real life. All I could think of were yellow and green gingerbread people. I really wish there were pictures of the Candonites so I could see what they looked like. I wish I could have been Peter so that I could go to Maple Town because I would like to meet the Candonites. The food sounds gross though, like the brussels sprout pie. I liked Lina and wished that there was more of her in the story because she was funny and brave.
Maple Town was a cool place because they ate the same kind of food as humans, except for candy because that's what they are. I would be fine in Maple Town because I don't like candy all that much. The pointing trees and floating cars were cool too. I liked that the grass was bluish-green that matched bushes and trees because those are two of my favorite colors.
I REALLY liked this book because the story was cool and inventive. I would highly recommend this book to my friends, both girls and boys. I am really looking forward to reading the next book.
Son Says: I really liked the marshmallow birds, peppermint cat, and the people made out of candy (the Candonites). I also liked the Peblars because they had glowing yellow eyes that came out of the wall - I thought that was funny. One of my favorite lines in the story is when Joe, a Candonite boy says:
There are some things that I didn't understand. I didn't understand how Peter got eaten by a box. I also didn't understand how the float worked: How did it bring them somewhere else? I didn't like how it took so long to get to the good part of the story. I don't like the part where they are just talking because it's not that interesting.
I really loved, loved the book. I think other kids like me would like the story.
Mom Says: I decided to read this book aloud to my two children over the course of one week. They were begging me each night to read a bit more. This is a reflection of how original, imaginative, and riveting this story really is for children even as young as 5. The children's books I have read are largely predictable, but this story has so many twists and turns that it keeps you guessing what will happen next throughout. Further, as far as fictional settings are concerned, Maple Town is like nothing I've read before. In short, the plot and the setting are very unique and intriguing.
While not giving away too much of the ending, it is worth it to note that there are important and valuable lessons to be learned in this story: compassion, understanding, and forgiveness. Marcos spins a tale where tension between the characters is nearly inevitable: human meets candy person; human likes to eat candy; candy person is afraid of being eaten! You'll have to read the story to find out if Peter and Lina show restraint. ;)
A couple of small issues I had. First, my kids and I agree that if they were whisked off to a strange land, they would not want to stay there. They would miss their Mommy and Daddy terribly and would want to come home. Ok, maybe I planted that idea in their head!
We all agreed that we wanted more of Lina in the story. This series of books (with the second one coming in March, 2012) could have wider appeal to both boys and girls if Lina's character becomes more fully developed and integrated in the next books. Crossing fingers for more Lina!
I really, really enjoyed this story. I would recommend the book for both boys and girls who are at least 8 years old. I have to admit that it was a bit difficult to read aloud to the kids, but the proof is in the pudding: They loved it!!
Daughter Says: I liked the Candonite people, the peppermint cat, and the marshmallow birds and wondered what they would look like in real life. All I could think of were yellow and green gingerbread people. I really wish there were pictures of the Candonites so I could see what they looked like. I wish I could have been Peter so that I could go to Maple Town because I would like to meet the Candonites. The food sounds gross though, like the brussels sprout pie. I liked Lina and wished that there was more of her in the story because she was funny and brave.
Maple Town was a cool place because they ate the same kind of food as humans, except for candy because that's what they are. I would be fine in Maple Town because I don't like candy all that much. The pointing trees and floating cars were cool too. I liked that the grass was bluish-green that matched bushes and trees because those are two of my favorite colors.
I REALLY liked this book because the story was cool and inventive. I would highly recommend this book to my friends, both girls and boys. I am really looking forward to reading the next book.
Son Says: I really liked the marshmallow birds, peppermint cat, and the people made out of candy (the Candonites). I also liked the Peblars because they had glowing yellow eyes that came out of the wall - I thought that was funny. One of my favorite lines in the story is when Joe, a Candonite boy says:
Don't even think about taking a bite out of me!
There are some things that I didn't understand. I didn't understand how Peter got eaten by a box. I also didn't understand how the float worked: How did it bring them somewhere else? I didn't like how it took so long to get to the good part of the story. I don't like the part where they are just talking because it's not that interesting.
I really loved, loved the book. I think other kids like me would like the story.
Mom Says: I decided to read this book aloud to my two children over the course of one week. They were begging me each night to read a bit more. This is a reflection of how original, imaginative, and riveting this story really is for children even as young as 5. The children's books I have read are largely predictable, but this story has so many twists and turns that it keeps you guessing what will happen next throughout. Further, as far as fictional settings are concerned, Maple Town is like nothing I've read before. In short, the plot and the setting are very unique and intriguing.
While not giving away too much of the ending, it is worth it to note that there are important and valuable lessons to be learned in this story: compassion, understanding, and forgiveness. Marcos spins a tale where tension between the characters is nearly inevitable: human meets candy person; human likes to eat candy; candy person is afraid of being eaten! You'll have to read the story to find out if Peter and Lina show restraint. ;)
A couple of small issues I had. First, my kids and I agree that if they were whisked off to a strange land, they would not want to stay there. They would miss their Mommy and Daddy terribly and would want to come home. Ok, maybe I planted that idea in their head!
We all agreed that we wanted more of Lina in the story. This series of books (with the second one coming in March, 2012) could have wider appeal to both boys and girls if Lina's character becomes more fully developed and integrated in the next books. Crossing fingers for more Lina!
I really, really enjoyed this story. I would recommend the book for both boys and girls who are at least 8 years old. I have to admit that it was a bit difficult to read aloud to the kids, but the proof is in the pudding: They loved it!!
January 4, 2011
Alice in Wonderland meets Charlie and the Chocolate Factory in this delicious, whimsical book.
I picked this book up on New Year's Eve because I had a "Bellyache" after eating too much food. I could so relate to Peter who was helping in his grandfather's sweet shop and kept sneaking treats. Before long Peter is not feeling so well and is transported to the whimsical land of the Candonites. A place where the people look and smell good enough to eat.
I'm sure children ages 6 to 10 will enjoy this book. It would make a fun read aloud for younger kids and a good read alone for those who are a little older. It wrapped up a little too quickly for me and I never fully understood why a couple of characters acted like they did but otherwise an enjoyable, tasty read.
Review copied from my blog: http://iamareadernotawriter.blogspot....
I picked this book up on New Year's Eve because I had a "Bellyache" after eating too much food. I could so relate to Peter who was helping in his grandfather's sweet shop and kept sneaking treats. Before long Peter is not feeling so well and is transported to the whimsical land of the Candonites. A place where the people look and smell good enough to eat.
I'm sure children ages 6 to 10 will enjoy this book. It would make a fun read aloud for younger kids and a good read alone for those who are a little older. It wrapped up a little too quickly for me and I never fully understood why a couple of characters acted like they did but otherwise an enjoyable, tasty read.
Review copied from my blog: http://iamareadernotawriter.blogspot....
August 20, 2013
A ten year old in a candy store? I can only imagine Peter's excitement when his parents say he will be spending the day with his grandpa, helping out at the candy store. Candy as far as the eye can see. MMMMMM. YUMMY. Chocolate, squishy gummy bears, strings of licorice, peanut butter cups.....I think we all know where this is going, but it was a great ride getting there. This is a fun and quick read that your inner child may enjoy, as much as the youngsters in the family. Excellent writing. I smiled and laughed as Peter got more than he bargained for. A delicious book with a delicious tale for the delicious child in you or someone you know. I won this signed, first edition paperback of Bellyache from Crystal Marcos. The cover is so cure I couldn't resist it. I look forward to reading the sequel.
January 16, 2013
A wonderful children's story!
I originally purchased the Kindle edition of this book for my "special needs" son. We have been reading it almost every night and we've truly enjoyed it. I also purchased a couple of paperback editions for Christmas gifts (last month) to my younger grandchildren as well. We all found BELLYACHE to be a very creative and fun story. In addition, this story flows quite smoothly and the Author does an amazing job of keeping the reader engaged from cover to cover. We're now looking forward to reading her next book in this series (HEADACHE). I'm very confident that we'll enjoy the sequel as well.
I originally purchased the Kindle edition of this book for my "special needs" son. We have been reading it almost every night and we've truly enjoyed it. I also purchased a couple of paperback editions for Christmas gifts (last month) to my younger grandchildren as well. We all found BELLYACHE to be a very creative and fun story. In addition, this story flows quite smoothly and the Author does an amazing job of keeping the reader engaged from cover to cover. We're now looking forward to reading her next book in this series (HEADACHE). I'm very confident that we'll enjoy the sequel as well.
July 22, 2018
This is the first book I’ve read/listened to by this author. This was a cute story but I wondered where it was going for a while. There is not a blaring moral to the story. Quite a lovely tale.
This is the third book I’ve listened to by this narrator, Meral Mathews, and I would listen to another. He did a great job narrating this kids book. The other books I’ve listened to by him are in the An Trodai series. He does well giving each character a voice.
There are no explicit sex scenes, excessive violence or swearing.
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and voluntarily left this unbiased review
This is the third book I’ve listened to by this narrator, Meral Mathews, and I would listen to another. He did a great job narrating this kids book. The other books I’ve listened to by him are in the An Trodai series. He does well giving each character a voice.
There are no explicit sex scenes, excessive violence or swearing.
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and voluntarily left this unbiased review
January 22, 2019
Bellyache is an imaginative book with interesting concepts, however, I would have liked to have seen the ideas more fully fleshed out. The book held my interest but I think that the author could have made the book even better by giving more details about the Cadonites and their civilization.
October 28, 2019
I had high hopes for this book because I think the cover is so enticing. I found the writing to be flat and predictable. A boy falls into a candy world after eating too many sweets at his granddad's candy shop.
January 5, 2019
Peter enjoys a day working in his grandfather's candy shop. But he has to pay the price for all those pilfered treats. This is an imaginative tale with lots of action and a lesson or two.
May 10, 2011
No hay nada mas delicioso que los dulces y sé que mas de uno se ha desmandado con ellos, se ha atiborrado hasta que consiguen un horroroso Bellyache (dolor de panza, pues), o no? Pues, como a todo niño y uno que otro adulto, Peter fue presa del inconfundible deseo de comer y comer y comer dulces hasta saciarse.
Todo comenzó un día que no había escuela, pero al estar sus papis ocupados, él, todo un hombrecito como para tener una niñera, se fue trabajar a la dulcería de su abuelo. Era estar en el cielo, entre tantos olorosos y deliciosos manjares. Como pago, tendría que tomar 3 dulces que deseara, pero ah sí! su estómago libró una batalla enorme y pidió mas y mas golosinas hasta que Peter pensó que no podría comer ni un pedacito mas.
De manera fantastica, y como pago por tanta comida, es trasportado al mundo de los Candonites. Todos son deliciosos, se ven tan sabrosos y hay muchas aventuras por ahí, Peter tendra que aprender una sabrosa lección, después de que el dolor de estómago remita, por supuesto.
Bellyache fue una lectura divertida y muy ligera, yo creo que niños de 6 años en adelante serían felices de leerlo, y los adultos podemos divertirnos también, yo lo hice! Pero amigos hispanos, si tienen la oportunidad de leer el libro (tenemos un concurso aquí por un ejemplar!), compartan la historia con los peques de la casa, es un cuento encantador.
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There is nothing more delicious than candy, and I know that more than one has eaten their fill of them, up getting a horrific Bellyache, or not? For, as every child and some adults, Peter was seized with unmistakable desire to eat and eat and eat candy until filled.
It all started when was a school holiday, but his daddies had jobs, he, a big boy for have a babysitter, went to work at the candy store of his grandfather "Papa's Sweet Shop". It was to be in heaven, among the many fragrant and delicious food. In return, he would have to take 3 candy he wanted, but oh yeah! his stomach fought a huge battle and requested more and more candy until Peter thought he could not eat a bit more.
So fantastic, and as payment for such food is transported to the world of Candonites. All are delicious, they look so tasty and there are many adventures out there, Peter will have to learn a tasty lesson, after the stomach pain disappears, of course.
Bellyache was a fun read and very light, I believe that children 6 years and older would be happy to read it, and adults can have fun too, I did! (we have a contest for a copy!), Share the story with the kids in the house, is an enchanting tale.
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Todo comenzó un día que no había escuela, pero al estar sus papis ocupados, él, todo un hombrecito como para tener una niñera, se fue trabajar a la dulcería de su abuelo. Era estar en el cielo, entre tantos olorosos y deliciosos manjares. Como pago, tendría que tomar 3 dulces que deseara, pero ah sí! su estómago libró una batalla enorme y pidió mas y mas golosinas hasta que Peter pensó que no podría comer ni un pedacito mas.
De manera fantastica, y como pago por tanta comida, es trasportado al mundo de los Candonites. Todos son deliciosos, se ven tan sabrosos y hay muchas aventuras por ahí, Peter tendra que aprender una sabrosa lección, después de que el dolor de estómago remita, por supuesto.
Bellyache fue una lectura divertida y muy ligera, yo creo que niños de 6 años en adelante serían felices de leerlo, y los adultos podemos divertirnos también, yo lo hice! Pero amigos hispanos, si tienen la oportunidad de leer el libro (tenemos un concurso aquí por un ejemplar!), compartan la historia con los peques de la casa, es un cuento encantador.
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There is nothing more delicious than candy, and I know that more than one has eaten their fill of them, up getting a horrific Bellyache, or not? For, as every child and some adults, Peter was seized with unmistakable desire to eat and eat and eat candy until filled.
It all started when was a school holiday, but his daddies had jobs, he, a big boy for have a babysitter, went to work at the candy store of his grandfather "Papa's Sweet Shop". It was to be in heaven, among the many fragrant and delicious food. In return, he would have to take 3 candy he wanted, but oh yeah! his stomach fought a huge battle and requested more and more candy until Peter thought he could not eat a bit more.
So fantastic, and as payment for such food is transported to the world of Candonites. All are delicious, they look so tasty and there are many adventures out there, Peter will have to learn a tasty lesson, after the stomach pain disappears, of course.
Bellyache was a fun read and very light, I believe that children 6 years and older would be happy to read it, and adults can have fun too, I did! (we have a contest for a copy!), Share the story with the kids in the house, is an enchanting tale.
http://the-itzel-library.blogspot.com...
February 22, 2012
How would you like to have a job working in a sweets shop? For Peter Fischer it is a dream come true. At 10 years old he feels he is now too old for a babysitter. So, on this school holiday, he will be working at Papa's Sweet Shop which is owned by his grandfather. Peter has his day all planned out, even down to the order in which he will eat the sweets he has chosen. What Peter doesn't plan on is the bellyache he will get nor the incredible experience he will have as a result.
This is one book with which I easily made a connection. I have always loved sweets and so I was easily able to understand Peter's sneaking one here and one there as the opportunities arose. Given the opportunity, at his age, I would have done exactly the same thing. I was also easily able to understand how he felt when he had a bellyache and the dilemma he had when he felt that he couldn't easily eat the lunch his Nana had prepared while at the same not being willing to fess up as to why he couldn't eat. Oh, the pain and discomfort I felt for him as Peter struggled through his difficulty. If he had only limited himself to what Papa had told him he could have, none of what he experienced in the story would ever have happened.
Although the description of the book indicates that it is appropriate for 7 years and up, I don't believe that many 7 or 8 year olds would be able to read this on their own. At the same time, the messages taught in this book are certainly appropriate for 7 years and up. Therefore, I highly recommend this book for any of my students who are looking for a fun, enjoyable fantasy selection. It would also be appropriate for families to read and discuss together. With central themes of honesty, obedience, and forgiveness, it is a good read for all.
This is one book with which I easily made a connection. I have always loved sweets and so I was easily able to understand Peter's sneaking one here and one there as the opportunities arose. Given the opportunity, at his age, I would have done exactly the same thing. I was also easily able to understand how he felt when he had a bellyache and the dilemma he had when he felt that he couldn't easily eat the lunch his Nana had prepared while at the same not being willing to fess up as to why he couldn't eat. Oh, the pain and discomfort I felt for him as Peter struggled through his difficulty. If he had only limited himself to what Papa had told him he could have, none of what he experienced in the story would ever have happened.
Although the description of the book indicates that it is appropriate for 7 years and up, I don't believe that many 7 or 8 year olds would be able to read this on their own. At the same time, the messages taught in this book are certainly appropriate for 7 years and up. Therefore, I highly recommend this book for any of my students who are looking for a fun, enjoyable fantasy selection. It would also be appropriate for families to read and discuss together. With central themes of honesty, obedience, and forgiveness, it is a good read for all.
May 1, 2012
I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads.
My feelings about this book were up and down quite a bit as I read. I tried to leave a little wiggle room as I understand it's geared towards a younger audience then I normally read, but I still found many parts lacking a little pizzazz.
The beginning of the book was almost enough to make me set it down and walk away. Main character Peter is helping out at Papa's Sweet Shop and every thought and action is simply spelled out. It reads a bit like an elementary primer. Dick and Jane are hungry. Dick and Jane see a snack. Dick and Jane eat the snack.
Luckily though, the story picks up when Peter is transported to a magical candy land. The story's really cute here and I could have done without the tedious set up back at Papa's shop. Just let him eat too much and get there, ASAP! There were a few ominous bits that didn't really fit the mood of the story. I kept expecting to find out that the Mayor and his wife were planning on baking Peter in a pie and feeding him to the Candonites.
Frankly, that would have made more sense then the conclusion that we're given
Suddenly we're introduced to a whole new conflict and a whole new bad guy from whom Peter and his friend must rescue some not so friendly acquaintances and the whole thing just felt very forced.
I really see a lot of promise in the ideas behind this book and the magical land in which it takes place but there were too many bumps and hiccups along the way for this to be one I'd love and share.
My feelings about this book were up and down quite a bit as I read. I tried to leave a little wiggle room as I understand it's geared towards a younger audience then I normally read, but I still found many parts lacking a little pizzazz.
The beginning of the book was almost enough to make me set it down and walk away. Main character Peter is helping out at Papa's Sweet Shop and every thought and action is simply spelled out. It reads a bit like an elementary primer. Dick and Jane are hungry. Dick and Jane see a snack. Dick and Jane eat the snack.
Luckily though, the story picks up when Peter is transported to a magical candy land. The story's really cute here and I could have done without the tedious set up back at Papa's shop. Just let him eat too much and get there, ASAP! There were a few ominous bits that didn't really fit the mood of the story. I kept expecting to find out that the Mayor and his wife were planning on baking Peter in a pie and feeding him to the Candonites.
Frankly, that would have made more sense then the conclusion that we're given
Suddenly we're introduced to a whole new conflict and a whole new bad guy from whom Peter and his friend must rescue some not so friendly acquaintances and the whole thing just felt very forced.
I really see a lot of promise in the ideas behind this book and the magical land in which it takes place but there were too many bumps and hiccups along the way for this to be one I'd love and share.
August 21, 2013
I finally had a chance to get a copy of Bellyache a delicious tale preceding the sweet sequel titled Headache. I stumbled across Headache written by Crystal Marcos, first and, hey, an avid reader reads whatever comes first!
As you know by my review of Headache, we were totally craving more sweets for our sweet tooth! We were anxious to learn just how did every kids weakness in sweets become a world of living, breathing, talking best friends with an equal parallel enemy of evil, putrid, rock candy!
Bellyache did not let us down! It starts off with every kid’s dream to have an unlimited supply of every sweet treat they can imagine and even some new ones dreamed up on the spot! Forget that! Writer Crystal Marcos does not stop there! She continues to have her little readers imagine quite vividly a whole world of the most tempting of favourite treats! Of course, she is very clever to subtly set in a gluttony moral that children will favour with. Trust me!
Once again, the author does not stop with just a lick of the lollipop! No, she goes above and beyond using her delicious imagination to teach more morals. Why stop at one when you can feed 2, 3, or 4 ! As Mary Poppin always says, ” just a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down”. So, how about adding the topics of bullying, kindness, encouragement, and forgiveness.
Some beautiful morals all wrapped up in a candy wrapper and surrounded by problem-solving, friendship, drama and gargantuan, putrid, evil Rock Candy who wants to claim our friends forever! Oh broccoli! How do they escape that?
As you know by my review of Headache, we were totally craving more sweets for our sweet tooth! We were anxious to learn just how did every kids weakness in sweets become a world of living, breathing, talking best friends with an equal parallel enemy of evil, putrid, rock candy!
Bellyache did not let us down! It starts off with every kid’s dream to have an unlimited supply of every sweet treat they can imagine and even some new ones dreamed up on the spot! Forget that! Writer Crystal Marcos does not stop there! She continues to have her little readers imagine quite vividly a whole world of the most tempting of favourite treats! Of course, she is very clever to subtly set in a gluttony moral that children will favour with. Trust me!
Once again, the author does not stop with just a lick of the lollipop! No, she goes above and beyond using her delicious imagination to teach more morals. Why stop at one when you can feed 2, 3, or 4 ! As Mary Poppin always says, ” just a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down”. So, how about adding the topics of bullying, kindness, encouragement, and forgiveness.
Some beautiful morals all wrapped up in a candy wrapper and surrounded by problem-solving, friendship, drama and gargantuan, putrid, evil Rock Candy who wants to claim our friends forever! Oh broccoli! How do they escape that?
March 3, 2011
Genre: Children’ Fiction
Title: Bellyache: A Delicious Tale
Author: Crystal Marcos
BELLYACHE: A Delicious Tale is a wonderful book filled with action that your young ones will love to read.
Peter Fischer gets invited to work at his grandfather's sweet shop, and he can't wait to try all the yummy delights. He eats one too many treats and is transported to a magical town where everything is made of candy! Unfortunately, he finds "candy" enemies. Thankfully, though, he finds "candy" friends. Even better, he finds out that his grandma was probably there a long time ago. Then the most interesting part; his best friend from the human world has also been transported there! How did that happen?
Author Crystal Marcos does not leave us "hanging", but perfects a clever way to tell us more. However, all too soon, his adventure ends. No time to worry about that though! Another one springs up, requiring more skills than before.
Crystal Marcos provides a moving tale to help us learn to forgive, no matter how hard it is. Although this is her first book, she displays through it her startling ability to teach a difficult matter in a fun and appealing way that children will understand. Kids will want to read this book over and over again! Reviewer ~ Cecilia Lee, Allbook Reviews
Title: Bellyache: A Delicious Tale
Author: Crystal Marcos
BELLYACHE: A Delicious Tale is a wonderful book filled with action that your young ones will love to read.
Peter Fischer gets invited to work at his grandfather's sweet shop, and he can't wait to try all the yummy delights. He eats one too many treats and is transported to a magical town where everything is made of candy! Unfortunately, he finds "candy" enemies. Thankfully, though, he finds "candy" friends. Even better, he finds out that his grandma was probably there a long time ago. Then the most interesting part; his best friend from the human world has also been transported there! How did that happen?
Author Crystal Marcos does not leave us "hanging", but perfects a clever way to tell us more. However, all too soon, his adventure ends. No time to worry about that though! Another one springs up, requiring more skills than before.
Crystal Marcos provides a moving tale to help us learn to forgive, no matter how hard it is. Although this is her first book, she displays through it her startling ability to teach a difficult matter in a fun and appealing way that children will understand. Kids will want to read this book over and over again! Reviewer ~ Cecilia Lee, Allbook Reviews
April 6, 2011
This was a fun and very cute story about a very sweet young boy who loves his sweets! At least until he eats so many he gets a Bellyache, falls asleep and ends up in a fantasy world where the 'people' are sweets. He learns a bit about being different, prejudices and consequences for his actions.
This book is actually a bit hard for me to break down and review. It's not an age I'm used to reading. It's not a picture book, but is younger reading then middle grade. So it's hard for me to point out the things I normally would because they don't exist!
I can say that my kids thought the book was a lot of fun. Well, my six year old did anyway. My two year old didn't pay a bit of attention, no surprise there! My six year was constantly interrupting to comment about things. From the sweets that he ate in the beginning (she likes those ones too!) to the Candonites (that were described as different candies and sweets). It made for a bit of a lengthy read, but at a chapter a night, 3 nights or so a week, we finally got through it. I would say that my daughter was a little young, but she still liked the story, I just had to have patience with her.
Overall it was a fun and enjoyable read and I think kids that are a bit older then mine (7 and up) would enjoy it quite a lot! Especially if they're fans of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and books along those lines.
This book is actually a bit hard for me to break down and review. It's not an age I'm used to reading. It's not a picture book, but is younger reading then middle grade. So it's hard for me to point out the things I normally would because they don't exist!
I can say that my kids thought the book was a lot of fun. Well, my six year old did anyway. My two year old didn't pay a bit of attention, no surprise there! My six year was constantly interrupting to comment about things. From the sweets that he ate in the beginning (she likes those ones too!) to the Candonites (that were described as different candies and sweets). It made for a bit of a lengthy read, but at a chapter a night, 3 nights or so a week, we finally got through it. I would say that my daughter was a little young, but she still liked the story, I just had to have patience with her.
Overall it was a fun and enjoyable read and I think kids that are a bit older then mine (7 and up) would enjoy it quite a lot! Especially if they're fans of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and books along those lines.
April 20, 2012
BELLYACHE: A Delicious Tale by Crystal Marcos is an entertaining story kids will sink their teeth into! Crystal Marcos uses her incredible imagination to create a world of candy people called Candonites who enjoy eating an unthinkable dessert. Despite their oddities the Candonites teach Peter a very important lesson in forgiveness and that overindulgence is never a good thing.
Peter has to spend the day helping in his Papa's candy shop. He is eager to try all the tasty treats, but soon finds out his Papa will only allow him to choose 3 candies for the day. When Papa isn't looking Peter sneaks candy and sweets and soon finds himself feeling rather green. Papa sends Peter to the backroom to rest, but when Peter awakens he realizes he is alone. Not wanting Papa to get in trouble for forgetting him at the candy shop Peter decides to wait awhile and that's when he notices a mysterious package. Curiosity gets the best of him and Peter is swallowed up by the package. He is transported to an unusual land full of scrumptious treats...only these treats are not for eating. What challenges will Peter face in this unfamiliar place? Will he ever get home to his family?
Come along with Peter as he discovers the Candonite town and the people who live there and learn some important lessons along the way.
Peter has to spend the day helping in his Papa's candy shop. He is eager to try all the tasty treats, but soon finds out his Papa will only allow him to choose 3 candies for the day. When Papa isn't looking Peter sneaks candy and sweets and soon finds himself feeling rather green. Papa sends Peter to the backroom to rest, but when Peter awakens he realizes he is alone. Not wanting Papa to get in trouble for forgetting him at the candy shop Peter decides to wait awhile and that's when he notices a mysterious package. Curiosity gets the best of him and Peter is swallowed up by the package. He is transported to an unusual land full of scrumptious treats...only these treats are not for eating. What challenges will Peter face in this unfamiliar place? Will he ever get home to his family?
Come along with Peter as he discovers the Candonite town and the people who live there and learn some important lessons along the way.
May 3, 2012
I actually won this and 'Headache' in a contest. I wanted to win these books because I wanted to share my love of reading with my grandson Derek (age7). I received them and promptly went to the post office to send them off to my grandson (envelope addressed to him to add to the excitement). After a week he still hadn't received them (I live in Colorado and he lives in Utah, so clearly he should've received them) I was very upset, because I knew how excited he was and just as anxiously awaiting them. Long story short, they were placed in the wrong mail box, but thankfully they were turned into the apartment management. He finally got them..this was a week ago and he just called me to tell me how much he LOVED them and was sooo thankful to have had them given to him. He said they were funny and soo much fun to read, that now he wants me to send him more books!!!! Thanks Crystal for helping me turn my grandson on to the love of reading!!! I'm sure it's gonna cost me a pretty penny, but EXTREMELY well worth it!!!! That being said, I would highly recommend these two books to anyone and everyone....if it gets kids away from the tv, then its a great thing!!!!!
July 13, 2012
Peter disobeyed his Papa by stuffing himself with candy from Papa’s candy store. Peter got a bellyache and soon found himself in Maple Town home of the Candonites. Candonites are giant living candies complete with arms, legs and facial features. Peter is taken to the Mayor’s house where he is taken care of by the Baker family. The next day, Peter goes to a parade for him and he finds out that his Best Friend Lina also got a bellyache and she is in Maple Town too! When it is time for the kids to leave they find out that two Candonites have disappeared! They kids then set off on a dangerous quest to find them!
I REALLY liked this book! The plot was very interesting – a kid eats lots of candy and ends up in a fantasy candy world complete with evil candy! I love the description of the Candonites. The story was a fun read. I think this book is good reading for a lot of age and reading levels. I thought the candy world was described really well. I think it was a funny thing that the Candonites thought of vegetables as dessert! I liked that uniqueness! I recommend it to kids 7+ and young advanced readers!
I REALLY liked this book! The plot was very interesting – a kid eats lots of candy and ends up in a fantasy candy world complete with evil candy! I love the description of the Candonites. The story was a fun read. I think this book is good reading for a lot of age and reading levels. I thought the candy world was described really well. I think it was a funny thing that the Candonites thought of vegetables as dessert! I liked that uniqueness! I recommend it to kids 7+ and young advanced readers!
July 22, 2013
This children's book by Author Crystal Marcos is such a creative and imaginative story. The author has quite the vivid imagination which she captures on the page, and adults and children both will love it!
Along the lines of "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory," the story follows the adventures of young Peter. You will tag along with him on his journey to a faraway land full of very unique people. He not only travels to a place quite unlike his own home town, but he also learns many valuable lessons along the way.
The author masterfully wove together vivid story elements, colorful characters, and life lessons that will stick with your young reader for a very long time. This book will make great bedtime reading, and don't be surprised if they beg you for more!
She has a sequel already out, HEADACHE: The Hair-Raising Sequel to BELLYACHE so pick this one up after you've finished with "Bellyache!"
Along the lines of "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory," the story follows the adventures of young Peter. You will tag along with him on his journey to a faraway land full of very unique people. He not only travels to a place quite unlike his own home town, but he also learns many valuable lessons along the way.
The author masterfully wove together vivid story elements, colorful characters, and life lessons that will stick with your young reader for a very long time. This book will make great bedtime reading, and don't be surprised if they beg you for more!
She has a sequel already out, HEADACHE: The Hair-Raising Sequel to BELLYACHE so pick this one up after you've finished with "Bellyache!"
July 30, 2010
Bellyache is going to be a great read-aloud for my students this fall. This is Crystal Marcos's first book and it brings out the child in all of us. Her main character, Peter, is modeled around any normal child/adult wanting more than is allowed, yet managing to go beyond those rules and take what is wanted anyway he can. How many times my eyes have been bigger than my stomach is not just a 'for kids' story!!! I enjoyed the fantasy of Peter's 'dreams' and got hungry just from the descriptions of the Candonites. Lots of morals are sprinkled into the story with, of course, the highlight being the rescue of two not-so-friendly friends, who then, through a little understanding, become the best of friends. I look forward to lots of discussions and questions coming from this book. I would say it's geared for the 7-10 age range, but adults will fall into Marcos's winninng style too!
July 8, 2011
Read my review at Imaginary Reads!
While helping out in his grandfather’s candy shop, Peter sneaks bites of candy. He eats so much candy that he beings to feel sick and is thus transpoated to the land of the Candonites, a race of people that look (and probably taste) like what we call candy.
Bellyache is a whimsical and fun story filled with adventure and breath-taking sights. A short novel, it makes a great read-aloud for a family with young children; for slightly older children, this is a great read-alone.
Young children who loved watching Disney’s film adaptation of Alice in Wonderland will enjoy reading this tooth-aching tale of gluttony and its consequences. Most importantly, it is about friendship and forgiveness.
While helping out in his grandfather’s candy shop, Peter sneaks bites of candy. He eats so much candy that he beings to feel sick and is thus transpoated to the land of the Candonites, a race of people that look (and probably taste) like what we call candy.
Bellyache is a whimsical and fun story filled with adventure and breath-taking sights. A short novel, it makes a great read-aloud for a family with young children; for slightly older children, this is a great read-alone.
Young children who loved watching Disney’s film adaptation of Alice in Wonderland will enjoy reading this tooth-aching tale of gluttony and its consequences. Most importantly, it is about friendship and forgiveness.
December 31, 2016
I RECEIVED THE BOOK AND THIS GREAT BOOK YOU REMEMBER CANDY LAND GAME THIS WILL TAKE YOU IN THE WORLD OF GREAT KID MIND PETER IS ASK TO HELP HIS GRANDFATHER IN CANDY SHOP AND WHAT HAPPEN HE ONLY SUPPOSE TO TAKE 3 PIECE OF CANDY. WELL TEMPTATION IS OUT OF THE QUESTION WHILE HELPING GRANDPA HE LEARNS HIS LESSON NOT TO BE GREEDY. WELL NANA COME WITH LUNCH AND PETER HAS TO EAT IT ALL WELL THIS IS WERE THE WORK COME IN BELLYACHE COME IN.
AND THEN GRANDPA TELL HIM TO LAY DOWN AND TAKE BREAK WELL PETER FALL ASLEEP AND THEN THE KID MIND GOES IN A DREAM WERE HE IS IN A CANDY LAND AND THEN HIM AND HIS FRIEND MEET SOME CANDY KID AND THEY HAVE A ADVENTURE. YOU AND YOUR KIDS WILL LOVE THE BOOK AND MANY MORE
THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME READ AND THEN I LOVE THIS BOOK AND SO WILL KIDS
AND THEN GRANDPA TELL HIM TO LAY DOWN AND TAKE BREAK WELL PETER FALL ASLEEP AND THEN THE KID MIND GOES IN A DREAM WERE HE IS IN A CANDY LAND AND THEN HIM AND HIS FRIEND MEET SOME CANDY KID AND THEY HAVE A ADVENTURE. YOU AND YOUR KIDS WILL LOVE THE BOOK AND MANY MORE
THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME READ AND THEN I LOVE THIS BOOK AND SO WILL KIDS
January 14, 2012
I won this book as a firstreads giveaway.
Bellyache is a nice easy read that's written with a younger audience in mind. Despite that fact I found it to be fun and entertaining.
Peter begins working in a candy shop with his grandfather where the temptation to sneak a few treats proves just too great. The resulting bellyache sends him off on a magical adventure to another land inhabited by a race of candy people called Candonites. Not only does Peter get to experience a great deal of fun and deliciousness, but he also learns a valuable lesson about forgiveness and apology.
I would definately recommend Bellyache for younger readers and for adults who sometimes like to take a journey back to childhood.
Bellyache is a nice easy read that's written with a younger audience in mind. Despite that fact I found it to be fun and entertaining.
Peter begins working in a candy shop with his grandfather where the temptation to sneak a few treats proves just too great. The resulting bellyache sends him off on a magical adventure to another land inhabited by a race of candy people called Candonites. Not only does Peter get to experience a great deal of fun and deliciousness, but he also learns a valuable lesson about forgiveness and apology.
I would definately recommend Bellyache for younger readers and for adults who sometimes like to take a journey back to childhood.
September 7, 2010
‘Bellyache, A Delicious Tale’ by Crystal Marcos is a really fun and imaginative children’s book. I really enjoyed the magical world she has woven for her readers, full of mouth watering candy creations. I thought the book’s characters were larger than life and came across really clearly in your mind’s eye. There were a lot of great uses of imagery in the book, making the settings really clear in your head, almost like being there. The books storyline was well thought out, and I particularly enjoyed the rather exciting ending, which I won’t spoil for you by telling you what happened. I’m sure your children will really enjoy this book. I know I would of when I was a little one.
December 3, 2012
A delicious tale, that may have induced a major sweet craving. We follow Peter as he helps out in his Papa's sweet shop. Like any kid, Peter can't help but sneek a few extra treats behind his Papa's back. However, Peter quickly learns about dishonesty and the consequences that it can have not only on your tummy but your friends and family.
I loved the Candonite world, with the rich and vivid descriptions of the Candonite people. Bella's House of Food was absolutely fabulous and I found myself wishing I could try a D.T.S (Dynamic Television Soda).
I enjoyed this story and the message of forgiveness that Peter must learn before he can save his friends and find his way home.
I loved the Candonite world, with the rich and vivid descriptions of the Candonite people. Bella's House of Food was absolutely fabulous and I found myself wishing I could try a D.T.S (Dynamic Television Soda).
I enjoyed this story and the message of forgiveness that Peter must learn before he can save his friends and find his way home.
July 13, 2010
I received this through GoodReads First Reads. Thank you SO much Crystal!
Oh my, this is a WONDERFULLY delicious book!! I love Roald Dahl's work, and this is very similar to his style.
The creativity of the whole adventure is brilliant!!! And the level of writing is perfect for younger readers - and still enjoyable for older ones :D
... I have a warning though: you must have snacks close at hand when reading this, it WILL make you hungry.
Great book... I do look forward to reading more from Crystal in the future.
Oh my, this is a WONDERFULLY delicious book!! I love Roald Dahl's work, and this is very similar to his style.
The creativity of the whole adventure is brilliant!!! And the level of writing is perfect for younger readers - and still enjoyable for older ones :D
... I have a warning though: you must have snacks close at hand when reading this, it WILL make you hungry.
Great book... I do look forward to reading more from Crystal in the future.
July 6, 2010
I received this book from Goodreads.
I pre-read this book before giving it to my 10 year old granddaughter. I found the book to be witty, with nicely developed characters and plot. A true adventure tale (along the lines of the Wizard of Oz) for young readers with just the right vocabulary level as well. A fun read.
My only criticism, albeit minor, is that I thought the age range of the book should be more like 8 to 10, as I felt it was a little too young in content for the new sophisticated 12 year old reader.
I pre-read this book before giving it to my 10 year old granddaughter. I found the book to be witty, with nicely developed characters and plot. A true adventure tale (along the lines of the Wizard of Oz) for young readers with just the right vocabulary level as well. A fun read.
My only criticism, albeit minor, is that I thought the age range of the book should be more like 8 to 10, as I felt it was a little too young in content for the new sophisticated 12 year old reader.
July 12, 2010
Bellyache is a charming story with fascinating characters, imaginative landscapes, and witty dialog. The hero of the story, Peter, is an ordinary kid swept up in extraordinary events. The tale showcases acceptance, tolerance, bravery, persistence, forgiveness, and faith, but manages to avoid the often-times treacle-drenched parlance of contemporary kids’ literature.
A tale crafted in the same vein as Alice and Wonderland and Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory stories …if only milk chocolate bunnies would hop through my world!
A tale crafted in the same vein as Alice and Wonderland and Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory stories …if only milk chocolate bunnies would hop through my world!
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