It's embarrassing how long this took me to read (And I don't mean the hot kind)
Look, the book is fine. If you are into marshmallow fluff kink books, oh are you in for a cavity inducing treat. Finley was cute, Jared was swoon. The smut was a little drawn out but there was a lot of kink to make up for it. The humiliation aspect was less humiliation and more mild to medium embarrassment but I think that was the point. And the dialogue is excellent. Definitely the hottest part. If that sounds like your jush and you're okay with books that overstay their welcome a little bit, you'll have a good time with this one.
Now, had I read it three to four years ago, no questions asked, this would have been a five star knockout. However, times are tough, I'm a new woman, and my expectations are exceptionally high now. For those of you keeping score at home, we are no longer in the quickie portion of this review.
I like M A Innes. I swear I do. I have read so many books by this woman as both M A Innes and Shaw Montgomery that my fan club membership is not in question. However... F*ck it, I'll be blunt, mama the pacing here is a mess. And I'm saying the pacing because this book is far from long. It's about 260 pages, 65,000 words give or take, but it felt like it took 75 years of my life to complete. Miss ma'am, that's not okay. And a lot of that has to do with how repetitive this book is. There are lines that are repeated a lot that...I don't wanna f*ck up my karma but the editor should have caught or at least strongly suggested be removed. If I have to read "he's looking at me like I'm the most romantic Dom in the world" (and Mama that is verbatim) more than twice, far too much. Hell, twice is too much.
And then there are scenes that just drag. Jared will say something that Finley finds hot and he's all "thank you master"
"You're welcome pet. You're so hot"
"oh thank you master"
"You're welcome pet"
Meanwhile I'm in the balcony with Statler and Waldorf screaming "if you two don't just f*ck already, I will be sick you restitutions"
I swear I like this author.
A good 10,000 words should have been cut from this. I think it would have made for a much better reading experience and improve the flow. Because, truthfully there's nothing wrong with the story or the characters. It's all very cute and a good book for those who want to read kink without hard and growly parts. It's just so wordy that it gets annoying. There's creating sexual tension and then there's edging for so long that your mind starts to do a mental checklist of chores you'll need to complete once you're allowed to stand up again.
I would love to say that this series isn't for me but there was enough that I liked that I'll check out more from the author but y'all, this is just M A Innes writing style. It doesn't get much better from here. But it works for her and people are into it. If you are one of those people, as I always say I am so happy for you and yours. Like I said, I still get invited to the meetings. But reading this has reminded me why I stopped showing up to said meetings. Three stars because she's cute but not that cute.