The first big blowout fight among the baby-sitters, and the crazy lengths they go to just to run their club while they aren't speaking. This is an interesting juxtaposition of the baby-sitters seventh grade immaturity, and their dogged persistence, and ingenuity in adjusting their business model to accommodate that immaturity. I borrowed this from my best friend when I was in second or third grade.
Things I remember from reading this as a kid:
That fight! I just loved the drama of it. I'm sure a lot of the meanness went over my head when I was young, but how quickly the members are divided against each other still stands out in my mind.
I felt a deep, deep sympathy for Claudia, who is so hurt when she hears Mimi calling Mary Anne "my Mary Anne". As a child I always wanted to be the favorite of someone, and the bond between Mimi and Claudia is so special that I remember feeling completely on Claudia's side when she gets angry with Mary Anne.
I did not envy Mary Anne at all, having to grow up in that stiff, awkward house with such a stuffy father.
I was really excited to discover this book was the introduction to Dawn.
Things I've considered since reading this as an adult:
Mary Anne's mental "apology" letters to her friends are so hilarious! ("I'm really, really sorry you called me a shy little baby. I hope you are sorry too," and "I'm sorry you're the biggest, bossiest know-it-all in the world, but what can I do about it? Have you considered seeking professional help?") My amusement at these letters must be the reason why I cannot send notes (or in this age, texts) of apology without sounding really sarcastic.
Several times later on in the series, Kristy is upset that Mary Anne becomes so close to Dawn. I wonder if it was always in the back of her mind that Mary Anne became such good friends with Dawn while she was fighting with Kristy. Like maybe, if she never had fought with Mary Anne, Mary Anne would never have become friends with Dawn, which meant she never would have found out about Dawn's mother being her father's ex-girlfriend, and their parents might never have gotten married, keeping Mary Anne dependent on Kristy for many more years to come. I can't imagine this thought did not enter Kristy's crafty, smart mind, and I like that the series never mentions it. If this thought does occur to Kristy, she doesn't seem to dwell on it.
I think the fight between the baby sitters is so well done. In seconds they go from being the best of friends, to stabbing each other with the flaw that hurts them the most. It's a perfect way to depict adolescent girls, and the reason why they are so vicious to each other. It helps that they make up in the end.
I think it's funny to read the characters that become such an important part of the series for the first time. In this book, Dawn seems to have such extreme feelings -- she is either super happy to have Mary Anne over to her house, or very sad and quiet about her parent's recent divorce, or furious with Mary Anne for lying to her about fighting with her friends. Of all these emotions, I think the happiness one seems false, but even the anger one doesn't strike me as an angry Dawn of later in the series, when she seemed more sulky and passive aggressive. Later on, I think of Dawn as being intense, and a little maudlin. She doesn't have much of a sense of humor, and she is interested in things that don't inspire much happiness. She has some dark ideas (like breaking in Shawna's locker in Claudia and the Middle School Mystery) and she likes her ghost stories a little too much (The Ghost At Dawn's House, The Baby Sitters At Shadow Lake), and much later in the series, she becomes one of the narrators of the darker California Diaries spinoff series, dealing with her friend's abusive relationships, and eating disorders. In this first introduction to Dawn she comes across as pretty happy despite her recent hard times.
Mary Anne's father, Richard, still reads as an awkward person to have grown up with. His rules about looking nice for mealtimes, and not letting Mary Anne redecorate her room seem old-fashioned for someone his age. I could imagine Mary Anne being raised by grandparents, or even great-grandparents who have this mentality, but it seems odd for someone Richard's age (as referenced by his high school yearbooks, I imagine he graduated in about 1961). Later in the series, when the baby sitters have to write their autobiographies for a school project Mary Anne writes about watching Sesame Street with her father every day, and I just can't fit the Richard of that book, with the Richard of this book. I know the series makes a big deal about how he loosened up and got a better sense of humor when he married Dawn's mother, but Mary Anne's childhood memories of him still don't match the stiff, humorless man of this book. Maybe he got really strict and intense as she got closer to puberty?
In the book I read as a child I distinctly remember Mary Anne's mother was named Abigail because I thought it made her sound as old-fashioned as Mary Anne's father, and I pictured them all as a scary Puritanical family in the 1600s. (I probably read The Witch of Blackbird Pond around the same time.) Later in the series, Mary Anne's mother is referred to as Alma, which also makes her sound like a Puritan, and for a long time I assumed it was a nickname for Abigail, because why else would Mary Anne's mother have two different names? Now I understand that someone, somewhere screwed up, and didn't remember that Mary Anne's mother had been given a name in Mary Anne Saves the Day. In the version I just reread Mary Anne's mother is referred to as Alma, so it must have been a later printing.
I didn't realize that this book not only introduced Dawn, but also the social-climbing, phony Prezziosos.