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First Impressions: A Tale of Less Pride & Prejudice
In Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy begins his relationship with Elizabeth Bennet with the words: "She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me; I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men." What would have happened if Mr. Darcy had never spoken so disdainfully? First Impressions explores how the events of Jane Austen's beloved novel would have transpired if Darcy and Elizabeth had danced together at the Meryton Assembly. Jane and Bingley's relationship blossoms unimpeded, Mary makes a most fortunate match, and Lydia never sets a foot in Brighton. Austen's witty style is authentically invoked in this playful romp from Longbourn to Pemberley.
190 pages, Paperback
First published March 30, 2010
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Alexa Adams
18 books107 followersA devoted reader of Jane Austen since her childhood, Alexa Adams is the author of several Austenesque novels and short stories including Being, Mrs. Bennet, Darcy in Wonderland, The Madness of Mr. Darcy, and Tales of Less Pride and Prejudice. Alexa is an American residing in Switzerland with her husband, daughter, and son. She blogs about Austen and Austenesque literature at alexaadams.blogspot.com and a founding member of the Jane Austen Society of Switzerland.
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September 26, 2018
Have you ever noticed that not everyone finds a happy ending at the close of Pride and Prejudice? Did you ever feel that poor Charlotte Lucas deserved a better fate than Mr. Collins? Or that Lydia didn't deserve to suffer life married to Mr. Wickham? If so, then you will be delighted with First Impressions: A Tale of Less Pride or Prejudice by Alexa Adams, a Pride and Prejudice variation where all characters, even the detestable and ridiculous ones, are treated to a happier fate.
So how did Alexa Adams accomplish the amazing feat of improving the fates of nearly all the Pride and Prejudice characters? With one simple change. Before Mr. Darcy utters his ill-fated insult about Elizabeth not being handsome enough to tempt him, he turns her way and observes a look in challenge in her eyes. Seeing that look and being the gentleman he is, Darcy cannot bare to insult her. He instead requests that Bingley secure him an introduction to this intriguing young lady so he can ask her for a dance...
It is truly astounding to see how this one simple change can alter the path of not only Elizabeth's and Darcy's lives, but the lives of all the people around them: Since Elizabeth doesn't think Mr. Darcy is a proud and disagreeable man, it causes the Bennet family to respect and admire him rather than despise him. Mr. Darcy, discovering how Elizabeth is an intelligent and genuine young woman not out to marry him, becomes more at ease and loses some of his haughtiness and reserve. In addition, because of Mr. Darcy's presence and influence many of the other male characters such as Mr. Bingley and Mr. Bennet assume more responsibility for their families and work towards keeping them in line. (I love how Mr. Bingley puts Caroline in her place!) Moreover, it is delightful to see how Kitty is motivated to reform her behavior since she realizes how her over-exuberance and immaturity is not very becoming and not earning her Mr. Darcy's good opinion.
What a delightful and enchanting debut novel from Alexa Adams! I have read quite a handful of Pride and Prejudice variations and I found First Impressions to be a praiseworthy addition to the collection. I took pleasure in Ms. Adams' rich and witty dialogue as well as her reverence and respect towards Jane Austen's original characters. Furthermore, Ms. Adams has a beautiful command of language and successfully captures Jane Austen's satirical tone in her writing. I compliment Ms. Adams' on her talent for emulating Austen's voice, it is not every day that I come across an Austenesque novel so thoroughly in the style of tone of Jane Austen! My one small criticism for this novel is that perhaps there wasn't enough conflict. I guess I am so used to Darcy and Elizabeth having such a turbulent and difficult relationship that a romance without any obstacles felt a little bereft.
First Impressions: A Tale of Less Pride and Prejudice by Alexa Adams is a charming Pride and Prejudice variation that I heartily recommend to everyone, even to Austen purists. Ms. Adams, please keep writing, I am all eagerness to see another work of yours in print!
Austenesque Reviews
So how did Alexa Adams accomplish the amazing feat of improving the fates of nearly all the Pride and Prejudice characters? With one simple change. Before Mr. Darcy utters his ill-fated insult about Elizabeth not being handsome enough to tempt him, he turns her way and observes a look in challenge in her eyes. Seeing that look and being the gentleman he is, Darcy cannot bare to insult her. He instead requests that Bingley secure him an introduction to this intriguing young lady so he can ask her for a dance...
It is truly astounding to see how this one simple change can alter the path of not only Elizabeth's and Darcy's lives, but the lives of all the people around them: Since Elizabeth doesn't think Mr. Darcy is a proud and disagreeable man, it causes the Bennet family to respect and admire him rather than despise him. Mr. Darcy, discovering how Elizabeth is an intelligent and genuine young woman not out to marry him, becomes more at ease and loses some of his haughtiness and reserve. In addition, because of Mr. Darcy's presence and influence many of the other male characters such as Mr. Bingley and Mr. Bennet assume more responsibility for their families and work towards keeping them in line. (I love how Mr. Bingley puts Caroline in her place!) Moreover, it is delightful to see how Kitty is motivated to reform her behavior since she realizes how her over-exuberance and immaturity is not very becoming and not earning her Mr. Darcy's good opinion.
What a delightful and enchanting debut novel from Alexa Adams! I have read quite a handful of Pride and Prejudice variations and I found First Impressions to be a praiseworthy addition to the collection. I took pleasure in Ms. Adams' rich and witty dialogue as well as her reverence and respect towards Jane Austen's original characters. Furthermore, Ms. Adams has a beautiful command of language and successfully captures Jane Austen's satirical tone in her writing. I compliment Ms. Adams' on her talent for emulating Austen's voice, it is not every day that I come across an Austenesque novel so thoroughly in the style of tone of Jane Austen! My one small criticism for this novel is that perhaps there wasn't enough conflict. I guess I am so used to Darcy and Elizabeth having such a turbulent and difficult relationship that a romance without any obstacles felt a little bereft.
First Impressions: A Tale of Less Pride and Prejudice by Alexa Adams is a charming Pride and Prejudice variation that I heartily recommend to everyone, even to Austen purists. Ms. Adams, please keep writing, I am all eagerness to see another work of yours in print!
Austenesque Reviews
June 26, 2016
This is another book that I read but neglected to review so I am now rereading and reviewing. 6/25/16
The perfect P&P book when you have had your fill with angst, drama and pain. This is "Everything is Awesome" or the Jane and Bingley (so nice, so sweet) version of P&P. Yet somehow it works wonderfully. Mr. Darcy dances with Lizzy, Mr. Collins marries Mary, Kitty and Lydia go to finishing school.
This book is like being wrapped up in a soft blanket and sipping cocoa.
The perfect P&P book when you have had your fill with angst, drama and pain. This is "Everything is Awesome" or the Jane and Bingley (so nice, so sweet) version of P&P. Yet somehow it works wonderfully. Mr. Darcy dances with Lizzy, Mr. Collins marries Mary, Kitty and Lydia go to finishing school.
This book is like being wrapped up in a soft blanket and sipping cocoa.
March 16, 2019
This book provides a wonderful example of why you need to murder your darlings.
I am actually taking the phrase slightly out of context because I do not really have much of an issue with the prose of this story. (Actually, I do but we'll come back to that.) The problem with this book is that it removes literally all conflict from our beloved Pride and Prejudice and as a result provides a somewhat insipid tale about people quickly falling in love and...well, that's it.
It starts out with an intriguing premise - what if Mr. Darcy asked Elizabeth Bennet to dance instead of insulting her? What if they got off on the right foot and managed to avoid all misunderstandings?
Apparently, nothing interesting.
In this version, Mr. Darcy's about face means the other men who populate the story somehow also grow a backbone. Mr. Bingley frequently gives Miss Bingley set-downs for being rude, Mr. Bennet corrals his entire family into some form of respectability, and even Mr. Collins becomes a romantic. Mrs. Hurst and Lady Catherine DeBourgh positively shine with good will. Wickham, of course, is evil but even he kind of gets a pass.
Everyone is delighted and pleased and...zzzzzzzz.
See, a plot actually needs to plot before it happily-ever-afters. If you happily-ever-after too soon, you lose any momentum the plot might otherwise have
Subtlety, thou art not this book.
First Impression suffers from a massive case of IN YOUR FACE. The lucky reader gets to read the intimate thoughts and feelings of very single character. Every one! From Anne DeBourgh to Mr. Hurst (I think?) to Sir William Lucas, no character is too mundane. The constant bombardment really drags the book down. Particularly, however, this is true with Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth. I could have seriously cared less about every doubt, hesitation, and thought that prevented Mr. Darcy from proposing within seconds of meeting Lizzie. But the reader gets to live through every single one of them. And then once we seem to finally shut him up, Elizabeth goes off and starts day-dreaming about a proposal from him.
And also, what is with the Kitty POVs? Perhaps she is relevant to the sequels or something? Allow me to summarize: "OMG Mr. Darcy looked at me! Alas, alack, why am I suck a silly goose?"
The characters in general would not recognize themselves. The author inserts paragraphs of justification for their actions that felt utterly foreign to the characters I know, Lady Catherine DeBourgh being the most egregious example.
The writing cannot decide if it wants to mimic Austen or convey modern thoughts so it awkwardly combines the two.
I spent most of this book inwardly flinching as the writing kept kicking me out of the flow of the story.
For example, Mr. Darcy gushing to his sister Georgiana about Elizabeth: "Sisterly devotion does not justify her behavior-she should not have proceeded thusly though, I cannot deny, I am awfully glad she did."
Or Mr. Darcy again, "He should remember in the future not to trouble her with such brooding antics as he had been accustomed to indulge."
OR Elizabeth after overhearing someone she has not yet been introduced to tell Mr. Darcy his marriage "will soon be depriving society of a most eligible bachelor" - "I have the pleasure of performing that theft. Society will just have to make do without him."
The author also plays fast and loose with historical accuracy while also tenaciously clinging to certain Regency elements. For example, the whole "if you marry someone in the family you're not an in-law, you're a brother/sister!" was a running commentary and I guess accurate if irritatingly repetitive. But then Mr. Collins goes and offers to officiate for Jane and Bingley (in a parsonage not his own) and Lady Catherine DeBourgh claims all of England will talk about Mr. Darcy marrying a nobody. (Except I doubt half of society knows who Mr. Darcy even is, much less cares?! Nephews of earls or whatever - if they don't stand to inherit - do not strike me as particularly infamous chaps.) Couples go unchaperoned and Elizabeth constantly runs/skips/throws herself at her friends and family. To say nothing off how quickly and conveniently Lydia and Kitty go from "out" to...not out?
I really wanted to like this book and in a way I did enjoy it. It was fun re-imagining the story of Mr. Darcy and Lizzie. But as the book went on and the author continued to fit things together perfectly, I just got bored. Nothing interesting happens. At least it is quite a short read!
I am actually taking the phrase slightly out of context because I do not really have much of an issue with the prose of this story. (Actually, I do but we'll come back to that.) The problem with this book is that it removes literally all conflict from our beloved Pride and Prejudice and as a result provides a somewhat insipid tale about people quickly falling in love and...well, that's it.
It starts out with an intriguing premise - what if Mr. Darcy asked Elizabeth Bennet to dance instead of insulting her? What if they got off on the right foot and managed to avoid all misunderstandings?
Apparently, nothing interesting.
In this version, Mr. Darcy's about face means the other men who populate the story somehow also grow a backbone. Mr. Bingley frequently gives Miss Bingley set-downs for being rude, Mr. Bennet corrals his entire family into some form of respectability, and even Mr. Collins becomes a romantic. Mrs. Hurst and Lady Catherine DeBourgh positively shine with good will. Wickham, of course, is evil but even he kind of gets a pass.
Everyone is delighted and pleased and...zzzzzzzz.
See, a plot actually needs to plot before it happily-ever-afters. If you happily-ever-after too soon, you lose any momentum the plot might otherwise have
Subtlety, thou art not this book.
First Impression suffers from a massive case of IN YOUR FACE. The lucky reader gets to read the intimate thoughts and feelings of very single character. Every one! From Anne DeBourgh to Mr. Hurst (I think?) to Sir William Lucas, no character is too mundane. The constant bombardment really drags the book down. Particularly, however, this is true with Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth. I could have seriously cared less about every doubt, hesitation, and thought that prevented Mr. Darcy from proposing within seconds of meeting Lizzie. But the reader gets to live through every single one of them. And then once we seem to finally shut him up, Elizabeth goes off and starts day-dreaming about a proposal from him.
And also, what is with the Kitty POVs? Perhaps she is relevant to the sequels or something? Allow me to summarize: "OMG Mr. Darcy looked at me! Alas, alack, why am I suck a silly goose?"
The characters in general would not recognize themselves. The author inserts paragraphs of justification for their actions that felt utterly foreign to the characters I know, Lady Catherine DeBourgh being the most egregious example.
The writing cannot decide if it wants to mimic Austen or convey modern thoughts so it awkwardly combines the two.
I spent most of this book inwardly flinching as the writing kept kicking me out of the flow of the story.
For example, Mr. Darcy gushing to his sister Georgiana about Elizabeth: "Sisterly devotion does not justify her behavior-she should not have proceeded thusly though, I cannot deny, I am awfully glad she did."
Or Mr. Darcy again, "He should remember in the future not to trouble her with such brooding antics as he had been accustomed to indulge."
OR Elizabeth after overhearing someone she has not yet been introduced to tell Mr. Darcy his marriage "will soon be depriving society of a most eligible bachelor" - "I have the pleasure of performing that theft. Society will just have to make do without him."
The author also plays fast and loose with historical accuracy while also tenaciously clinging to certain Regency elements. For example, the whole "if you marry someone in the family you're not an in-law, you're a brother/sister!" was a running commentary and I guess accurate if irritatingly repetitive. But then Mr. Collins goes and offers to officiate for Jane and Bingley (in a parsonage not his own) and Lady Catherine DeBourgh claims all of England will talk about Mr. Darcy marrying a nobody. (Except I doubt half of society knows who Mr. Darcy even is, much less cares?! Nephews of earls or whatever - if they don't stand to inherit - do not strike me as particularly infamous chaps.) Couples go unchaperoned and Elizabeth constantly runs/skips/throws herself at her friends and family. To say nothing off how quickly and conveniently Lydia and Kitty go from "out" to...not out?
I really wanted to like this book and in a way I did enjoy it. It was fun re-imagining the story of Mr. Darcy and Lizzie. But as the book went on and the author continued to fit things together perfectly, I just got bored. Nothing interesting happens. At least it is quite a short read!
December 19, 2017
What if an author decides to take Jane Austen's canon and make those changes many readers have said to themselves over the centuries should have been made?
This is a variation that I can envision the author, with tongue in cheek, writing. (You must read "the apology" in the beginning.) Think: Mr. Darcy's comment in the assembly and his subsequent refusal to dance with anyone. Think: his interference with Bingley's intentions to propose to Jane. Think: Mr. Collins proposing to the wrong sister. Think: Mr. Darcy not keeping his relationship with Wickham a secret and the results of that revelation in Meryton. And the situation with Lady C. and Anne...what if? And you don't want to miss how Caroline stabs herself in the foot!
You get the picture. I was smiling throughout this delightful read. Well worth the time taken to read not once but twice. There is no sexual tension and little, if any, angst, but all's well that ends well.
This is a variation that I can envision the author, with tongue in cheek, writing. (You must read "the apology" in the beginning.) Think: Mr. Darcy's comment in the assembly and his subsequent refusal to dance with anyone. Think: his interference with Bingley's intentions to propose to Jane. Think: Mr. Collins proposing to the wrong sister. Think: Mr. Darcy not keeping his relationship with Wickham a secret and the results of that revelation in Meryton. And the situation with Lady C. and Anne...what if? And you don't want to miss how Caroline stabs herself in the foot!
You get the picture. I was smiling throughout this delightful read. Well worth the time taken to read not once but twice. There is no sexual tension and little, if any, angst, but all's well that ends well.
July 16, 2016
What would have happened had Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth danced together at the Meryton Assembly? What if Mr. Darcy had never said those awful words (“She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me”) towards Elizabeth? That is how this delightful book starts. Ms. Adams shows us how things would have been without pride and prejudice. Definitely everything would have been easier and smoother.
To start off the author writes an apology letter to Jane Austen and I found it lovely! That was a good way to start an Austen inspired novel and I really appreciated it. Then, Ms. Adams starts writing her own story of “Pride and Prejudice”, and it is surprising how a little change in the story can alter the entire plot of a very famous novel without spoiling it. I believe it was possible thanks to the author’s skill and talent of using the right words without emulating the great Jane Austen. She simply was inspired by Austen’s wit and genius. And the outcome is very good.
I loved how the story was developed. Every character has their own story and all the Bennet sisters are involved. It was sometimes weird to read about some characters’ behaviour so unalike from the original, but if they had been too much similar to the original it would not have been a “what if” story! Darcy and Elizabeth’s story is the sweetest among the relationships described in this book and I liked that even Mary has her chance of happiness (although her intended is not one of my favourite characters!). Kitty is also different and I loved her attempts to become more genteel despite Lydia’s bad influence. Perhaps the youngest sister is the only character who resembles more than the others the original one, although her destiny is far more different from what Austen depicted!
Adam’s writing is clear, fun and extremely engaging. It was a pleasure to discover where her inventiveness would guide her and what she would think up for all the characters. Some things were improbable (like Mrs. Bennet’s composure in front of Mr. Darcy) but as the storyline went on, they became convincing.
I had a great time reading “First impression” and if you think it might be boring to read a novel without misunderstandings and villains you are utterly mistaken. This is an unpredictable fiction with enough twists and shocking surprises that will make you smile and think about how life can be strange. If you love “Pride and Prejudice” you will surely enjoy Alexa Adam’s novel.
To start off the author writes an apology letter to Jane Austen and I found it lovely! That was a good way to start an Austen inspired novel and I really appreciated it. Then, Ms. Adams starts writing her own story of “Pride and Prejudice”, and it is surprising how a little change in the story can alter the entire plot of a very famous novel without spoiling it. I believe it was possible thanks to the author’s skill and talent of using the right words without emulating the great Jane Austen. She simply was inspired by Austen’s wit and genius. And the outcome is very good.
I loved how the story was developed. Every character has their own story and all the Bennet sisters are involved. It was sometimes weird to read about some characters’ behaviour so unalike from the original, but if they had been too much similar to the original it would not have been a “what if” story! Darcy and Elizabeth’s story is the sweetest among the relationships described in this book and I liked that even Mary has her chance of happiness (although her intended is not one of my favourite characters!). Kitty is also different and I loved her attempts to become more genteel despite Lydia’s bad influence. Perhaps the youngest sister is the only character who resembles more than the others the original one, although her destiny is far more different from what Austen depicted!
Adam’s writing is clear, fun and extremely engaging. It was a pleasure to discover where her inventiveness would guide her and what she would think up for all the characters. Some things were improbable (like Mrs. Bennet’s composure in front of Mr. Darcy) but as the storyline went on, they became convincing.
I had a great time reading “First impression” and if you think it might be boring to read a novel without misunderstandings and villains you are utterly mistaken. This is an unpredictable fiction with enough twists and shocking surprises that will make you smile and think about how life can be strange. If you love “Pride and Prejudice” you will surely enjoy Alexa Adam’s novel.
November 3, 2017
4,5 stars
what would have happened if sensibility and common sense would have governed our protagonists?
Darcy doesn't insult Elizabeth but dances with her at the Meryton assembly, Darcy warns about Wickham's behaviour, Mr Bennet controls her family... etc.
A very nice book where everyone tries to follow their heart and behave accordingly.
A really charming tale of Pride and Prejudice.
However, not everyone is sensible... Wickham is around and some mischief he must cause with...
what would have happened if sensibility and common sense would have governed our protagonists?
Darcy doesn't insult Elizabeth but dances with her at the Meryton assembly, Darcy warns about Wickham's behaviour, Mr Bennet controls her family... etc.
A very nice book where everyone tries to follow their heart and behave accordingly.
A really charming tale of Pride and Prejudice.
However, not everyone is sensible... Wickham is around and some mischief he must cause with...
April 21, 2010
Alexa Adams, First Impressions. A Tale of Less Pride & Prejudice
Love is in abundance at Longbourn
Using Alexa Adam’s words … it is nothing less than a fabulous dream come true. Imagine the authoress as a witty fairy with a magic wand, that is her pen. Wish that all the characters in our beloved Pride and Prejudice have the most satisfying destiny and … here you have “First Impressions”. It is indeed a story of less pride and prejudice ( as the subtitle annouces) and it is just that which makes the great difference.
In its extremely pleasant “what if “ scenario, the story develops so smoothly and charmingly that it is very difficult to stop and put the book down. From the first “what-if turn” everything goes a different way towards very enjoyable, amusing events. I found myself smiling during my breaks in the teachers’ room at school, waiting for my husband back from work in the car, queueing at the post office, and this especially because Austen’s witty style is authentically recreated.
In “Pride and Prejudice” Mr Darcy comments his first meeting with Miss Elizabeth Bennet with the words: ”She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me; I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men” . And you , of course, know what followed. Much pride and much prejudice prevented both from being immediately happy. But Darcy pronounces other words here:”Very well Bingley. If your partner would be so kind, I would be happy to make the acquaintance of her sister” This changes everything.
Do you believe in love at first sight? Alexa Adams does, so Darcy and Lizzie hit it off immediately dancing together at the Meryton Assembly. First step towards lots of surprises and marriages and unexpected matches. An example? Mary Bennet finds her perfect companion and gets married on the same day as Charles Bingley and her sister Jane. The latter get to their happiness unimpeded and Lydia is safe from the rascal in this story, Mr Whickham, while mischievous and envious Miss Caroline Bingley gets her comeuppance. Mr Collins, Mr & Mrs Bennet keep on the comedy aspect in the plot but lose some of their flaws. Lady Catherine & Ann De Bourgh are less snob and more humane. Ok, I’ll stop here. Maybe I’ve already said too much for someone who wants to read and enjoy this book. I’m sorry, but when I’m led by my enthusiasm I become rather talkative. Maybe too much.
Is there something I didn’t like? Nothing indeed. But if I have to find something negative to say to sound more objective and honest, I might mention a scene: Mr Darcy and Mr Bennet together alone in the old man’s study. Mr Darcy dares speak to Elizabeth’s father about what he cannot accept in their family’s behaviour and suggests solutions. I don’t know why but I found the resulting immediate change in Mr Bennet’s personality not very convincing. But going on reading, I liked the new Mr Bennet so much that I forgot that scene. (ch. 11)
What instead I liked very much is a scene involving Mr Collins. His proposal to his chosen future bride, one of the Bennets, but not Lizzie this time. Lovely scene!
I recommend this book to all of you loving Austen sequels and what if stories based on her beloved novels. Alexa Adam’s First Impressions will give you some very delightful moments to dream about .
Alexa Adams
Love is in abundance at Longbourn
Using Alexa Adam’s words … it is nothing less than a fabulous dream come true. Imagine the authoress as a witty fairy with a magic wand, that is her pen. Wish that all the characters in our beloved Pride and Prejudice have the most satisfying destiny and … here you have “First Impressions”. It is indeed a story of less pride and prejudice ( as the subtitle annouces) and it is just that which makes the great difference.
In its extremely pleasant “what if “ scenario, the story develops so smoothly and charmingly that it is very difficult to stop and put the book down. From the first “what-if turn” everything goes a different way towards very enjoyable, amusing events. I found myself smiling during my breaks in the teachers’ room at school, waiting for my husband back from work in the car, queueing at the post office, and this especially because Austen’s witty style is authentically recreated.
In “Pride and Prejudice” Mr Darcy comments his first meeting with Miss Elizabeth Bennet with the words: ”She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me; I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men” . And you , of course, know what followed. Much pride and much prejudice prevented both from being immediately happy. But Darcy pronounces other words here:”Very well Bingley. If your partner would be so kind, I would be happy to make the acquaintance of her sister” This changes everything.
Do you believe in love at first sight? Alexa Adams does, so Darcy and Lizzie hit it off immediately dancing together at the Meryton Assembly. First step towards lots of surprises and marriages and unexpected matches. An example? Mary Bennet finds her perfect companion and gets married on the same day as Charles Bingley and her sister Jane. The latter get to their happiness unimpeded and Lydia is safe from the rascal in this story, Mr Whickham, while mischievous and envious Miss Caroline Bingley gets her comeuppance. Mr Collins, Mr & Mrs Bennet keep on the comedy aspect in the plot but lose some of their flaws. Lady Catherine & Ann De Bourgh are less snob and more humane. Ok, I’ll stop here. Maybe I’ve already said too much for someone who wants to read and enjoy this book. I’m sorry, but when I’m led by my enthusiasm I become rather talkative. Maybe too much.
Is there something I didn’t like? Nothing indeed. But if I have to find something negative to say to sound more objective and honest, I might mention a scene: Mr Darcy and Mr Bennet together alone in the old man’s study. Mr Darcy dares speak to Elizabeth’s father about what he cannot accept in their family’s behaviour and suggests solutions. I don’t know why but I found the resulting immediate change in Mr Bennet’s personality not very convincing. But going on reading, I liked the new Mr Bennet so much that I forgot that scene. (ch. 11)
What instead I liked very much is a scene involving Mr Collins. His proposal to his chosen future bride, one of the Bennets, but not Lizzie this time. Lovely scene!
I recommend this book to all of you loving Austen sequels and what if stories based on her beloved novels. Alexa Adam’s First Impressions will give you some very delightful moments to dream about .
Alexa Adams
June 2, 2023
First Impressions
Wonderful tale in the style of Jane Austen, with an every day look of how are couple managed without the original insult at the Meryton assembly. Where they became friends and then fell in love.
Wonderful tale in the style of Jane Austen, with an every day look of how are couple managed without the original insult at the Meryton assembly. Where they became friends and then fell in love.
January 23, 2021
A what if everything went terrific with no angst at all book. The author amazingly made it enjoyable! Well done. Not to sweet or sappy and not overwhelmed with internal dialogue. An excellent story.
Reread: Still loved it!
Reread: Still loved it!
April 11, 2016
First Impressions was okay. The author was too good to most of the characters and each circumstance. Everything was wrapped a little too neatly in a tight little bow, it was as if this novel was written by Jane Bennet herself. Sweet can be somewhat boring at a certain point.
June 8, 2010
What if Darcy didn't say those awful words about Lizzie...? They'd become friends and short after be in love...? What if Mary found love in a less than expected man...? What if the wicked and handsome Wickham didn't become part of the Bennett family...?
That's what Alexa is telling us... she's answering lots of questions that many lovers of this story had (it is her own idea, perhaps each reader of this amazing story has got its own, I've got my own, but I loved this one).
Seriously, it was an awesome (and well written) spin-off of Pride & Prejudice (Jane Austen must be proud). All the characters are amazingly written (as their futures), I'd love to read a little more about Georgiana and Kitty (I adored them, btw). I loved how Mr. Bennett changes for well (as whole the family) and the interactions between Darcy and the Bennett's, it made them look a lot as a family. I fell more in love with Darcy and identified myself a lot more with Lizzie while reading it.
I enjoyed and loved each one of its words, phrases, paragraphs... everything! It has become part of my all-time-favorites!
If Alexa writes more things (please, write more!), I'm going to read each of them, because I loved the way she writes... I'm her fan!
That's what Alexa is telling us... she's answering lots of questions that many lovers of this story had (it is her own idea, perhaps each reader of this amazing story has got its own, I've got my own, but I loved this one).
Seriously, it was an awesome (and well written) spin-off of Pride & Prejudice (Jane Austen must be proud). All the characters are amazingly written (as their futures), I'd love to read a little more about Georgiana and Kitty (I adored them, btw). I loved how Mr. Bennett changes for well (as whole the family) and the interactions between Darcy and the Bennett's, it made them look a lot as a family. I fell more in love with Darcy and identified myself a lot more with Lizzie while reading it.
I enjoyed and loved each one of its words, phrases, paragraphs... everything! It has become part of my all-time-favorites!
If Alexa writes more things (please, write more!), I'm going to read each of them, because I loved the way she writes... I'm her fan!
February 16, 2013
A delightful variation of JA's own, Pride and Prejudice, sans the foibles of that book's illustrious characters. Here, the reader is treated to reason and rectitude, rather than rancour and raucousness. Thus, allowing for a read of pleasing diversion. Which is not to say there aren't surprising twists to add to our reading enjoyment. Quite the opposite. Setting to rights a particular grievance from the original.. can we all say 'Wickham'? all done in excellent humour and in keeping with JA's wit, dialogue and description of the era by a most capable author, Alexa Adams. Definitely "A Tale of Less P&P" as revealed by the title byline.
Reading Satisfaction. Thank you, Alexa!
Reading Satisfaction. Thank you, Alexa!
November 21, 2013
I was contacted by the lovely Alexa Adams asking me if I would like to review her trilogy, Tales of Less Pride and Prejudice, and I was only too happy to agree! I was provided with a review copy but this is my honest, unbiased opinion. This ‘what if’ variation captured my intention as soon as I read the blurb – I had always wondered what might have happened had Darcy danced with Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly rather than insulting her, resulting in Elizabeth's opinion not being immediately prejudiced against this mysterious man, and their relationship beginning on a much happier note.
Summing up... This is Pride and Prejudice with all the same events taking place, but perhaps as they should (or rather, could) have happened, had all gone smoothly! I say ‘should have’, but I do not really mean ‘should’ – after all, Pride and Prejudice is Pride and Prejudice, and it is loved for all the misunderstandings and miscommunications between Darcy and Elizabeth! But, it is enjoyable to read a version of Pride and Prejudice where, for example, all carries on smoothly between Bingley and Jane and Elizabeth is warned much earlier of the true nature of Wickham and therefore does not fall for his charms. Basically, all the things which while reading the original make you think ‘if only so and so had/hadn’t done this or that...’ happen that way in this variation.
It was a nice change to read a variation which keeps very close to the original - all the assemblies and events being the same - with only the slight (but important!) difference that Darcy and Elizabeth are favourably disposed towards one another. I haven’t read a variation which kept this close to the events of the original before, and I like it. There were many familiar conversations from the original story coming up but with the addition of Darcy and Elizabeth's budding relationship being included; for example, the talk after the Meryton assembly between Jane and Elizabeth includes both Bingley and Darcy as they discuss the evening, both with big smiles and many girly giggles and feeling very happy! Also there is the talk with Charlotte Lucas about the importance of encouraging both Bingley AND Darcy in their affections.
It was a very strange variation to read, I will admit – I think the strangest aspect was reading the characters we know and love behave very differently and very unlike their normal selves, and it was bizarre to read - but fun! A few examples of what I mean by this...
It was very extraordinary, but lovely, to see Mr Darcy being described in such a favourable light so soon in the story! Elizabeth thinking him agreeable and gentlemanly from the first moment of their acquaintance! Mr Darcy also acts differently (and more beneficially for himself) in his actions. Louisa Hurst, too, takes a different view towards Bingley’s attachment to Jane and also towards her sister Caroline’s continual pursuit of Mr Darcy! And Mr Bennet decides to take an interest in his family and curb some of their more embarrassing behaviour! Bingley, too, is a more authoritative character and (perhaps most surprisingly) we are presented with a much more giving Lady Catherine de Bourgh – unheard of!
I always like to have some sort of description of the marriages and then the ‘happily ever afters’ which follow, as well as the futures of most of the other characters who have been part of the story and I was not disappointed here.
One of my favourite aspects to this story was the authoress’ style of writing - the narration style is very story like and the story is told in a very charming manner meaning it always remained interesting and never dragged. Transitions between different settings and between characters are also very smooth – we have interactions, conversations and insight into the thoughts of many characters throughout the story!
I love the way she interacts with the reader - 'and so dear reader' type of thing - and when the author is talking almost directly to the reader like that, it makes it feel more personal which I enjoy. Most of the time there was an omniscient narrator who knows all and who is always present, commenting and remarking on the unfolding events in a very funny manner, with satirical comments or rhetorical questions. One of my favourite examples of this would be when Darcy and Georgiana are reunited after an extended absence, and the narrator remarks, ‘after exchanging the mandatory pleasantries which must be attended to upon any reunion, regardless of their value conversationally, Darcy said, “I stop here...”’ – it’s just brilliant. This way of speaking to the reader with the added sarcastic comments on society, mannerisms and etiquette is very much in the style of Jane Austen.
I am looking forward to the next two stories, seeing Kitty's and Charlotte's paths to love.
What I will admit is that I would have liked to have more romantic interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth, however that is just my romantic nature wanting more as I fully understand and appreciate that the focus of this variation is not the romance, but it is the humour and twists to the story and characters! And anyway, there were still enjoyable moments of sweet words and shared looks.
I found it a very refreshing change to read a story which was low on misunderstandings and angst, where everything goes to plan and unfolds as it should with minimal problems! It may not be a favourite variation romantically, but it is most certainly a favourite for the comical style and for the uniqueness of the story.
Summing up... This is Pride and Prejudice with all the same events taking place, but perhaps as they should (or rather, could) have happened, had all gone smoothly! I say ‘should have’, but I do not really mean ‘should’ – after all, Pride and Prejudice is Pride and Prejudice, and it is loved for all the misunderstandings and miscommunications between Darcy and Elizabeth! But, it is enjoyable to read a version of Pride and Prejudice where, for example, all carries on smoothly between Bingley and Jane and Elizabeth is warned much earlier of the true nature of Wickham and therefore does not fall for his charms. Basically, all the things which while reading the original make you think ‘if only so and so had/hadn’t done this or that...’ happen that way in this variation.
It was a nice change to read a variation which keeps very close to the original - all the assemblies and events being the same - with only the slight (but important!) difference that Darcy and Elizabeth are favourably disposed towards one another. I haven’t read a variation which kept this close to the events of the original before, and I like it. There were many familiar conversations from the original story coming up but with the addition of Darcy and Elizabeth's budding relationship being included; for example, the talk after the Meryton assembly between Jane and Elizabeth includes both Bingley and Darcy as they discuss the evening, both with big smiles and many girly giggles and feeling very happy! Also there is the talk with Charlotte Lucas about the importance of encouraging both Bingley AND Darcy in their affections.
It was a very strange variation to read, I will admit – I think the strangest aspect was reading the characters we know and love behave very differently and very unlike their normal selves, and it was bizarre to read - but fun! A few examples of what I mean by this...
It was very extraordinary, but lovely, to see Mr Darcy being described in such a favourable light so soon in the story! Elizabeth thinking him agreeable and gentlemanly from the first moment of their acquaintance! Mr Darcy also acts differently (and more beneficially for himself) in his actions. Louisa Hurst, too, takes a different view towards Bingley’s attachment to Jane and also towards her sister Caroline’s continual pursuit of Mr Darcy! And Mr Bennet decides to take an interest in his family and curb some of their more embarrassing behaviour! Bingley, too, is a more authoritative character and (perhaps most surprisingly) we are presented with a much more giving Lady Catherine de Bourgh – unheard of!
I always like to have some sort of description of the marriages and then the ‘happily ever afters’ which follow, as well as the futures of most of the other characters who have been part of the story and I was not disappointed here.
One of my favourite aspects to this story was the authoress’ style of writing - the narration style is very story like and the story is told in a very charming manner meaning it always remained interesting and never dragged. Transitions between different settings and between characters are also very smooth – we have interactions, conversations and insight into the thoughts of many characters throughout the story!
I love the way she interacts with the reader - 'and so dear reader' type of thing - and when the author is talking almost directly to the reader like that, it makes it feel more personal which I enjoy. Most of the time there was an omniscient narrator who knows all and who is always present, commenting and remarking on the unfolding events in a very funny manner, with satirical comments or rhetorical questions. One of my favourite examples of this would be when Darcy and Georgiana are reunited after an extended absence, and the narrator remarks, ‘after exchanging the mandatory pleasantries which must be attended to upon any reunion, regardless of their value conversationally, Darcy said, “I stop here...”’ – it’s just brilliant. This way of speaking to the reader with the added sarcastic comments on society, mannerisms and etiquette is very much in the style of Jane Austen.
I am looking forward to the next two stories, seeing Kitty's and Charlotte's paths to love.
What I will admit is that I would have liked to have more romantic interactions between Darcy and Elizabeth, however that is just my romantic nature wanting more as I fully understand and appreciate that the focus of this variation is not the romance, but it is the humour and twists to the story and characters! And anyway, there were still enjoyable moments of sweet words and shared looks.
I found it a very refreshing change to read a story which was low on misunderstandings and angst, where everything goes to plan and unfolds as it should with minimal problems! It may not be a favourite variation romantically, but it is most certainly a favourite for the comical style and for the uniqueness of the story.
February 17, 2018
No angst or conflict. Everything and everyone acted how they should. Great writing but too sweet for me. I prefer a bit more angst before getting to HEA.
April 26, 2017
A fun read
It is refreshing to read a book where Darcy does not slight Elizabeth Bennett at the Meryton Assembly. So begins a tale of twists, turns, humility, and less prejudice.
It is refreshing to read a book where Darcy does not slight Elizabeth Bennett at the Meryton Assembly. So begins a tale of twists, turns, humility, and less prejudice.
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November 3, 2017Alexa Adams is quickly becoming a favorite of mine among the authors of Austen-inspired fiction. Once I picked up her novel First Impressions: A Tale of Less Pride & Prejudice, nothing could pry it out of my hands. First Impressions is a gentle retelling of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice that first imagines what would happen if, at the Meryton Assembly, Mr. Darcy does not slight Elizabeth Bennet but instead asks her to dance and ends up enjoying himself. From there, Adams imagines what would have happened had Mr. Darcy not interfered with Mr. Bingley’s relationship with Jane Bennet, Mr. Bennet was warned to keep his daughters away from Mr. Wickham, and Mr. Collins makes a more suitable match, sparing Charlotte Lucas a lifetime of putting up with his ridiculousness.
Surprisingly, removing all the tension of the original novel doesn’t cause the novel to fall flat. Adams’ Mr. Darcy finds himself confessing to Mr. Bennet the reasons he is wary to marry his favorite daughter, with amusing results, and she sends Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Mr. Darcy’s formidable aunt, rushing off to Longbourn, this time for a different reason. And Caroline Bingley, in a very satisfying twist, gets her just desserts.
First Impressions is a short, satisfying novel that focuses on the humor, the romance, and the ridiculousness of certain characters. I loved how Adams, just like Austen, gives the characters their privacy, not even allowing readers to witness Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth’s first kiss. Like Austen, Adams’ narrator talks directly to the reader, and it’s little touches like this that I found so delightful. First Impressions was the perfect book to keep me company on a cold, snowy day.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
Surprisingly, removing all the tension of the original novel doesn’t cause the novel to fall flat. Adams’ Mr. Darcy finds himself confessing to Mr. Bennet the reasons he is wary to marry his favorite daughter, with amusing results, and she sends Lady Catherine de Bourgh, Mr. Darcy’s formidable aunt, rushing off to Longbourn, this time for a different reason. And Caroline Bingley, in a very satisfying twist, gets her just desserts.
First Impressions is a short, satisfying novel that focuses on the humor, the romance, and the ridiculousness of certain characters. I loved how Adams, just like Austen, gives the characters their privacy, not even allowing readers to witness Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth’s first kiss. Like Austen, Adams’ narrator talks directly to the reader, and it’s little touches like this that I found so delightful. First Impressions was the perfect book to keep me company on a cold, snowy day.
Review posted on Diary of an Eccentric
I received a free copy of this book for review.
October 9, 2011
This was a nice 'what if' rendering in that it answers the question of how things could turn out differently if Darcy, Lizzy, Lady Catherine, Mr. & Mrs. Bennet, Mary, and Mr. Collins were milder versions of themselves. Any character I did not mention in the above sentence was pretty much the same. It stayed true to the writing style of the times- a steamy romance this story is not turned into.
Obviously with this many personalities behaving differently, we have ourselves a different story. (And some of the diverging subplots were vastly entertaining) I am on the fence about this book. I liked it as a nice well written story, but I confess that I miss the growth in the characters and satisfaction in the end that comes when I read of hardships being overcome.
It is definitely worth a read for those who like to imagine how it all could have been different.
Obviously with this many personalities behaving differently, we have ourselves a different story. (And some of the diverging subplots were vastly entertaining) I am on the fence about this book. I liked it as a nice well written story, but I confess that I miss the growth in the characters and satisfaction in the end that comes when I read of hardships being overcome.
It is definitely worth a read for those who like to imagine how it all could have been different.
October 27, 2025
Well, this was an interesting alternate universe in which Darcy never makes his first rude remark, but instead decides to do the gentlemanly thing and ask Elizabeth to dance. What follows is a fairly conflict-free novel, where everybody (except Caroline) behaves in a way that's almost angelic and too good to be true. There were tons of typos in this copy, which was very distracting, but it was kind of a fun read. You have to suspend belief, though, because everything really does run TOO smoothly. I did, however, enjoy how the author went ahead and used scenes from the original P&P, adapting them to the changed characters and circumstances. Would I read it again? Well, maybe not. But I'd been curious, and now I know. Wish I could give it 2-1/2 stars, but I'll settle for three.
February 5, 2016
Description Amazon:
In Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy begins his relationship with Elizabeth Bennet with the words: "She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me; I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men." What would have happened if Mr. Darcy had never spoken so disdainfully? First Impressions explores how the events of Jane Austen's beloved novel would have transpired if Darcy and Elizabeth had danced together at the Meryton Assembly. Jane and Bingley's relationship blossoms unimpeded, Mary makes a most fortunate match, and Lydia never sets a foot in Brighton. Austen's witty style is authentically invoked in this playful romp from Longbourn to Pemberley.
In Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy begins his relationship with Elizabeth Bennet with the words: "She is tolerable, but not handsome enough to tempt me; I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men." What would have happened if Mr. Darcy had never spoken so disdainfully? First Impressions explores how the events of Jane Austen's beloved novel would have transpired if Darcy and Elizabeth had danced together at the Meryton Assembly. Jane and Bingley's relationship blossoms unimpeded, Mary makes a most fortunate match, and Lydia never sets a foot in Brighton. Austen's witty style is authentically invoked in this playful romp from Longbourn to Pemberley.
February 20, 2013
This story is a big "What-if". It's more than just Darcy not insulting Elizabeth at the Meryton Assembly, it's "what if everything went smoothly".
Normally, I am not a fan of such sanguine P&P stories, especially when they are sequels of perfect married bliss, but I must admit I was lost in the easy joy of this novel.
The only drawback was the handful of typos I picked up.
A sweet story, I read it in an evening and throughly enjoyed it!
Normally, I am not a fan of such sanguine P&P stories, especially when they are sequels of perfect married bliss, but I must admit I was lost in the easy joy of this novel.
The only drawback was the handful of typos I picked up.
A sweet story, I read it in an evening and throughly enjoyed it!
November 5, 2015
I loved all the twists and turns in this book and how everyone came away with a more improved fate.
August 5, 2017
This is one of very few reviews I have written on Goodreads but I did feel compelled to have a go for this and the second in the series.
Reading this book was kind of like being wrapped in a warm blanket. It was soft, sweet and comforting. I got the sense that everything was happening as it should be. Don't get me wrong, Pride and Prejudice is a magnificent piece of work, but this version gave me all the warm fuzzy feelings that I desired. The only reason that I gave it a 4/5 rather than a 5/5 was because I missed the spark that resulted from the misunderstanding between Lizzy and Darcy, but I'm willing to forgive that.
One of the best moments for me though, was when the author gave us an interesting insight into Mary Bennets thought process. In this version, we are shown that Mary is keenly aware of her status as the least attractive of the sisters, and we are given a brief, rather sad, insight into what she sees her future might be: either a governess or doomed to stay at home, a companion to her mother for the rest of her life. Mary sees no possible escape from this life, and I was so pleased when she found an escape, something Austin didn't give us in the original.
I also have to make vague reference to the fate of Miss Bingley simply because never have I felt a character deserved her fate more. Although it's not the worst thing to happen to a character in a book, it was very satisfying!
So as I say, 4/5 because I did miss that sparkling wit between Lizzy and Darcy, but there was enough there to keep me engrossed.
Reading this book was kind of like being wrapped in a warm blanket. It was soft, sweet and comforting. I got the sense that everything was happening as it should be. Don't get me wrong, Pride and Prejudice is a magnificent piece of work, but this version gave me all the warm fuzzy feelings that I desired. The only reason that I gave it a 4/5 rather than a 5/5 was because I missed the spark that resulted from the misunderstanding between Lizzy and Darcy, but I'm willing to forgive that.
One of the best moments for me though, was when the author gave us an interesting insight into Mary Bennets thought process. In this version, we are shown that Mary is keenly aware of her status as the least attractive of the sisters, and we are given a brief, rather sad, insight into what she sees her future might be: either a governess or doomed to stay at home, a companion to her mother for the rest of her life. Mary sees no possible escape from this life, and I was so pleased when she found an escape, something Austin didn't give us in the original.
I also have to make vague reference to the fate of Miss Bingley simply because never have I felt a character deserved her fate more. Although it's not the worst thing to happen to a character in a book, it was very satisfying!
So as I say, 4/5 because I did miss that sparkling wit between Lizzy and Darcy, but there was enough there to keep me engrossed.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 7, 2021
This is a JAFF that although well written, in essentials it is rendered bland because every character is just on their best behavior and nothing goes wrong.
It makes for a very dispassionate JAFF.
Lizzy and Darcy get off on the right foot as Darcy seeing Lizzy before he makes his insult agrees for an introduction and dance. Darcy decides to be charming and Lizzy decides to ease their interactions. They become fast friends.
They both have mutual feelings of admiration but they keep it to themselves;
Lizzy because she doesn't want to get her hopes up,
And Darcy because of the old song and dance about duty we all know too well
The constant narration is very tongue in cheek and it can make for a charming sardonic voice;
And it can also become unseemly and condescending;
'Reader dear', I was pissed! 'Unforgivable intrusion on their privacy' my tuchus!
Stop being so damned coy author dear, this is fiction! Too much privacy and Darcy and Lizzy cease to exist.
Only when we feel them in our hearts and when we think of them in our minds, do they become tangible! Now write their kiss!
Teasing, vexing author! Reminds me of someone.. though considerably less charming and endearing!
What I Enjoyed:
-Loved Kitty and Mary in this
-The happy ending epilogue was cute
-Dialogue at times witty
What Courted my Displeasure:
-Mostly told not shown, but when shown the dialogue was delightful
-Darcy was kind of lame; He suggests to Lizzy that he admires her and would propose but he wants to see if the changes the suddenly conscientious Mr Bennet imposed to improve the Bennets will hold up. The whole schtick of Austen's Darcy being serious is that he likes Lizzy but wouldn't want to trifle with her heart and raise expectations, because he respects her too much to do otherwise. This Darcy does the opposite!
The cherry on top is that he puts the pressure on her and her family to prove themselves worthy of his offering for her!
Thats not a passionate Darcy! Heck, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley are more decisive and stand up guys!
Let me repeat, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley!
-Just zero chemistry between Darcy and Lizzy, unfortunately even denied a kiss!
-Boring, so glad it was short, that the only reason I rallied to finish it. I tell ya, I was awfully tempted to put it down.
Verdict:
I was impressed by the evident wit of Ms Adams, but dismayed by the narrative and plot choices. Unsatisfying read.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes in essence but No in behavior, everyone is too perfect
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?No.
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes the writing was witty, but No there wasn't enough dialogue; too much telling not enough showing!
It makes for a very dispassionate JAFF.
Lizzy and Darcy get off on the right foot as Darcy seeing Lizzy before he makes his insult agrees for an introduction and dance. Darcy decides to be charming and Lizzy decides to ease their interactions. They become fast friends.
“Mr. Darcy, you must allow me to apologize for the behavior of my many well-intended well wishers. While they will misconstrue our interactions, I wish to assure you that I understand the nature of our friendship, appreciate it, and seek no further claim on your affections.”
They both have mutual feelings of admiration but they keep it to themselves;
Lizzy because she doesn't want to get her hopes up,
“No matter what occurs, I shall not be the one to reject any overtures of friendship Mr. Darcy may extend. I believe I can bear our family’s foibles with grace and not be too mortified when he proves to be less swept off his feet than our mother believes. But on the other hand,” she grinned playfully, “in the off chance it should turn out that he is subject to such an unfortunate bout of clumsiness, perhaps I can adapt to that circumstance as well.”
And Darcy because of the old song and dance about duty we all know too well
“When I depict her for you, her family and circumstances seem insignificant obstacles: the mere backdrop to a comic theatric. It is in their company that I wonder what foolishness this is I am entertaining. But then Miss Elizabeth walks into the room and I have eyes and ears for no one else. What is a man to do?”
The constant narration is very tongue in cheek and it can make for a charming sardonic voice;
“If this wasn’t love, both were greatly deceived.”
And it can also become unseemly and condescending;
“At this juncture, reader dear, I fear I’m in a bit of a quandary regarding what to share with you. I could regale you with a detailed account of the first kiss that was, presumably, shared at some point between our hero and heroine during the course of their courtship, but to do so, as I’m sure you’ll agree, would be an unforgivable intrusion on their privacy.”
'Reader dear', I was pissed! 'Unforgivable intrusion on their privacy' my tuchus!
Stop being so damned coy author dear, this is fiction! Too much privacy and Darcy and Lizzy cease to exist.
Only when we feel them in our hearts and when we think of them in our minds, do they become tangible! Now write their kiss!
Teasing, vexing author! Reminds me of someone.. though considerably less charming and endearing!
What I Enjoyed:
-Loved Kitty and Mary in this
-The happy ending epilogue was cute
-Dialogue at times witty
What Courted my Displeasure:
-Mostly told not shown, but when shown the dialogue was delightful
-Darcy was kind of lame; He suggests to Lizzy that he admires her and would propose but he wants to see if the changes the suddenly conscientious Mr Bennet imposed to improve the Bennets will hold up. The whole schtick of Austen's Darcy being serious is that he likes Lizzy but wouldn't want to trifle with her heart and raise expectations, because he respects her too much to do otherwise. This Darcy does the opposite!
The cherry on top is that he puts the pressure on her and her family to prove themselves worthy of his offering for her!
Thats not a passionate Darcy! Heck, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley are more decisive and stand up guys!
Let me repeat, Mr Collins and Mr Bingley!
-Just zero chemistry between Darcy and Lizzy, unfortunately even denied a kiss!
-Boring, so glad it was short, that the only reason I rallied to finish it. I tell ya, I was awfully tempted to put it down.
Verdict:
I was impressed by the evident wit of Ms Adams, but dismayed by the narrative and plot choices. Unsatisfying read.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes in essence but No in behavior, everyone is too perfect
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?No.
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes the writing was witty, but No there wasn't enough dialogue; too much telling not enough showing!
November 8, 2018
And now for something somewhat different
The plot of this story was quite a bit different. Lizzy falls for Darcy about the same time he falls for her. The angst is if Darcy can let go of the expectation of marrying someone of the ton. Lady Catherine, of all people, finally sets him straight, accidentally.
There are some odd pairing, there are changes for the Bennets. Lots of interesting differences.
A good story but not totally compelling. An ok read once, especially with Kindle Unlimited.
The plot of this story was quite a bit different. Lizzy falls for Darcy about the same time he falls for her. The angst is if Darcy can let go of the expectation of marrying someone of the ton. Lady Catherine, of all people, finally sets him straight, accidentally.
There are some odd pairing, there are changes for the Bennets. Lots of interesting differences.
A good story but not totally compelling. An ok read once, especially with Kindle Unlimited.
October 10, 2019
Problems aplenty
Lots of absolutely needless grammar and spelling issues (can someone please offer to proofread for this author in the future?) The book itself has virtually no angst (conflict provides plot progression!)
Just one honest critic could have steered me away from this one. If you are a sweet tea reader who likes it all wrapped up in a bow for you, by all means read this. If you are a bit more discerning, I suggest you chose one of the many wonderful authors in this genre, ‘cause this one just ain’t got it.
Lots of absolutely needless grammar and spelling issues (can someone please offer to proofread for this author in the future?) The book itself has virtually no angst (conflict provides plot progression!)
Just one honest critic could have steered me away from this one. If you are a sweet tea reader who likes it all wrapped up in a bow for you, by all means read this. If you are a bit more discerning, I suggest you chose one of the many wonderful authors in this genre, ‘cause this one just ain’t got it.
September 2, 2013
This review is for both First Impressions AND Second Glances (the sequel):
I decided to review these two together, as I read them back to back, both are fairly short, and I think my review of the one hinges upon my review of the other.
Billed as "a tale of less Pride & Prejudice," and being novellas, I went into the series expecting the "playful romp" it is described as, and on that score, it delivers. It's a light, sweet style that seeks to remove a lot of the conflict and, you know, pride and prejudices the characters may otherwise encounter. First Impressions takes the tack of "What if Lizzie and Darcy were able to get along pretty early on?" Well, what then? Obviously they don't meet and marry, so what else might keep them apart? Adams explores that, creating a playful, pleasing-enough story that I always found enjoyable, even if it felt like something was lacking.
And see, there is something lacking, for me, at least - when you rob a story of its conflict and obstacles, what's the point?
Those very conflicts and obstacles were what made the characters what they were in the end, and what made Pride and Prejudice so enjoyable - without that, they're not nearly so perfectly suited; they haven't had the chance to prove their mettle and to truly trust each other, which is one of the beautiful things about the story, and what makes it so transcendent and universal. But I'm willing to go with just about anything, and see how it turns out, so go with it I did. And I have to say, on the whole, I enjoyed First Impressions. I wanted more conflict, but I will always want more conflict, because that's what makes a story interesting to me. But though Alexa did remove the old conflict - those two hallmarks of P&P - she did substitute in new ones.
To accommodate a tale with much of the original conflict removed, there had to be some overhaul in the characters, and Darcy became a bit of a "fixer" - wanting to take everyone in hand and manage them into being what he needed or wanted them to be, in order to get his Elizabeth (or make her acceptable as his Elizabeth, which seemed a very Darcy-like thing to do). But some of these changes meant reactions and personal interactions sometimes became less believable, not only for who the characters were originally, but also for the time period of the story. Sometimes I felt Adams' Darcy is too patient and self-effacing, and he speaks far too freely/puts up with far too much; sometimes I found Elizabeth lacking a bit in her characteristic backbone. And Lady Catherine just isn't that gloriously hard piece of work we've come to know and love to hate - she just wasn't my Lady C. But despite this, they remained enjoyable, and the story gave a fresh spin that I hadn't encountered yet. All in all, I was pleased, even if left a little wanting.
Then I moved on to Second Glances.... and I kinda loved it. I mean, really. It just made me smile. First of all, I should mention that Second Glances moves the story forward, out of the territory of retelling and into that of continuation. It predominantly follows Kitty and Georgiana, both of whom I'm always glad to see more of, because I don't feel enough is done with their characters, or credit given to them. Maybe I felt this was stronger because it wasn't messing with my beloved and well-known characters, but instead was fleshing out some that needed attention. Or maybe Adams' style and strengths were better show-cased here. Who knows. I have a feeling it was a bit of both, but whatever the reason, I found myself more than a bit tickled by this one.
Where changes to characters may have bothered me before, now they were used to grown Kitty and Georgiana into likable characters capable of sustaining their own stories and romances. Kitty becomes fierier, stronger and more resilient, and I couldn't help but love her. Under the guidance of her sister, she becomes a little more like Lizzie, which isn't a bad thing, but she still remains her own character. The relationship and closeness between her and Georgiana was sweet and strong, and I rooted for them both.
This isn't to say it was perfect, as there were still drawbacks. I would have liked a little less immediacy to the romances, though Alexa managed to take an immediacy that normally would have been a deal-breaker for me, and turn it into something charming. But still - I want obstacles! I want conflict! I want some pride and some prejudice and some misunderstandings, you know? Honestly, I would really, really like to see Second Glances as a full-length novel, with all the development and fleshing out and, yes, conflict that would entail. I'd love to see Adams' powers let loose on a grander scale, with the room to really play with detail and scope, and build anticipation, and grow these characters into something magnificent. I have a feeling I would love it. I was pretty enchanted by Second Glances, despite any flaws or things that would normally really bother me; I can only imagine what Adams would do with a higher page-count in which to win me over...
All in all, I'd certainly recommend these, albeit with some minor caveats (especially for those of you who are like me, and like a little angst). And I'm definitely glad for that guest post long ago that introduced me to Alexa and her tales... :)
I decided to review these two together, as I read them back to back, both are fairly short, and I think my review of the one hinges upon my review of the other.
Billed as "a tale of less Pride & Prejudice," and being novellas, I went into the series expecting the "playful romp" it is described as, and on that score, it delivers. It's a light, sweet style that seeks to remove a lot of the conflict and, you know, pride and prejudices the characters may otherwise encounter. First Impressions takes the tack of "What if Lizzie and Darcy were able to get along pretty early on?" Well, what then? Obviously they don't meet and marry, so what else might keep them apart? Adams explores that, creating a playful, pleasing-enough story that I always found enjoyable, even if it felt like something was lacking.
And see, there is something lacking, for me, at least - when you rob a story of its conflict and obstacles, what's the point?
Those very conflicts and obstacles were what made the characters what they were in the end, and what made Pride and Prejudice so enjoyable - without that, they're not nearly so perfectly suited; they haven't had the chance to prove their mettle and to truly trust each other, which is one of the beautiful things about the story, and what makes it so transcendent and universal. But I'm willing to go with just about anything, and see how it turns out, so go with it I did. And I have to say, on the whole, I enjoyed First Impressions. I wanted more conflict, but I will always want more conflict, because that's what makes a story interesting to me. But though Alexa did remove the old conflict - those two hallmarks of P&P - she did substitute in new ones.
To accommodate a tale with much of the original conflict removed, there had to be some overhaul in the characters, and Darcy became a bit of a "fixer" - wanting to take everyone in hand and manage them into being what he needed or wanted them to be, in order to get his Elizabeth (or make her acceptable as his Elizabeth, which seemed a very Darcy-like thing to do). But some of these changes meant reactions and personal interactions sometimes became less believable, not only for who the characters were originally, but also for the time period of the story. Sometimes I felt Adams' Darcy is too patient and self-effacing, and he speaks far too freely/puts up with far too much; sometimes I found Elizabeth lacking a bit in her characteristic backbone. And Lady Catherine just isn't that gloriously hard piece of work we've come to know and love to hate - she just wasn't my Lady C. But despite this, they remained enjoyable, and the story gave a fresh spin that I hadn't encountered yet. All in all, I was pleased, even if left a little wanting.
Then I moved on to Second Glances.... and I kinda loved it. I mean, really. It just made me smile. First of all, I should mention that Second Glances moves the story forward, out of the territory of retelling and into that of continuation. It predominantly follows Kitty and Georgiana, both of whom I'm always glad to see more of, because I don't feel enough is done with their characters, or credit given to them. Maybe I felt this was stronger because it wasn't messing with my beloved and well-known characters, but instead was fleshing out some that needed attention. Or maybe Adams' style and strengths were better show-cased here. Who knows. I have a feeling it was a bit of both, but whatever the reason, I found myself more than a bit tickled by this one.
Where changes to characters may have bothered me before, now they were used to grown Kitty and Georgiana into likable characters capable of sustaining their own stories and romances. Kitty becomes fierier, stronger and more resilient, and I couldn't help but love her. Under the guidance of her sister, she becomes a little more like Lizzie, which isn't a bad thing, but she still remains her own character. The relationship and closeness between her and Georgiana was sweet and strong, and I rooted for them both.
This isn't to say it was perfect, as there were still drawbacks. I would have liked a little less immediacy to the romances, though Alexa managed to take an immediacy that normally would have been a deal-breaker for me, and turn it into something charming. But still - I want obstacles! I want conflict! I want some pride and some prejudice and some misunderstandings, you know? Honestly, I would really, really like to see Second Glances as a full-length novel, with all the development and fleshing out and, yes, conflict that would entail. I'd love to see Adams' powers let loose on a grander scale, with the room to really play with detail and scope, and build anticipation, and grow these characters into something magnificent. I have a feeling I would love it. I was pretty enchanted by Second Glances, despite any flaws or things that would normally really bother me; I can only imagine what Adams would do with a higher page-count in which to win me over...
All in all, I'd certainly recommend these, albeit with some minor caveats (especially for those of you who are like me, and like a little angst). And I'm definitely glad for that guest post long ago that introduced me to Alexa and her tales... :)
October 3, 2017
This was written well enough, but there was zero conflict. It wasn't a story so much as a sequence of events. Some of those events were entertaining enough in and of themselves, but there wasn't enough meat to it all to make for a completely satisfying read.
September 13, 2018
If you want a retelling of Pride and Prejudice, (and what true fan doesn't?), where Darcy meets and dances with Elizabeth without the hurtful remarks, then this variation is for you. The story stays clean, sweet and almost angst free throughout. Quite enjoyable.
April 20, 2020
Wacky idea, but unexpectedly funny in parts. Honestly I’m just Jane Austen trash so yeah, good times.
May 26, 2017
Mon billet sur le blog
Je ne pensais pas le dire, mais j'ai vraiment beaucoup aimé cet ouvrage !
Pourquoi suis-je surprise ? Eh bien parce qu'il s'agit d'une réécriture d'Orgueil et Préjugés et que ce n'est pas mon Austen favoris. Mais peut-être parce qu'il ne s'agit pas de mon préféré, j'ai eu la possibilité de ne pas rendre ombrage d'une hypothétique infidélités à l'oeuvre originale. En fait j'ai trouvé ce petite bouquin (une centaine de pages) très bien écrit, amusant et assez passionnant.
Comme le sous-titres l'indique (A tale of less Pride and Prejudice) il s'agit d'une histoire avec moins d'orgueil et de préjugés. Que ce serait-il passé si la première fois que Darcy voit Elizabeth il ne faisait pas son horrible snob et dansait avec elle ?
Je pensais, que vu que l'histoire est plus gentille, plus facile en un certain sens, ça me déplairait, mais j'ai trouvé ça tout simplement très crédible. L'histoire d'Alexa Adams se tient et j'ai été étonnée tout le long d'y prendre plaisir car un rien aurait pu faire pencher la balance vers une mauvaise austinerie.
J'ai trouvé ça doux et attendrissant (et oui j'ai un coeur parfois). J'ai étrangement aussi appris à mieux comprendre Darcy ; son comportement m'a toujours laissé perplexe, et là, la façon dont Adams explique sa froideur en société, et son attitude est très intéressante. Et oui, ce n'est pas l'histoire qu'Austen aurait écrit, et oui il n'y a pas cette tension du roman original, mais comme toute réécriture, une fois qu'on a admis le parti-pris de départ et qu'il convainc, je ne vois pas pourquoi s'attarder là-dessus.
Tout comme pour la continuation de Sanditon, j'ai été épatée par l'écriture d'Adams. Peut-être même plus encore que pour le susnommé. Ici on retrouve le piquant et l'ironie très austinienne qui m'avait manqué. Ses tournures de phrases, son vocabulaire, tout fait très fin 18e siècle. Sans que ce soit lourd ou emprunté. Il y a quelques phrases un peu maladroites, notamment dû à une ponctuation parfois hasardeuse, mais ça passe si on lit attentivement.
La narration, omnisciente avec l'intervention du narrateur m'a plu et reflète vraiment la production littéraire Régence. On passe d'un personnage à l'autre, explorant ses pensées, découvrant l'histoire et c'est fluide.
Je me pose cependant une question. Si on n'a pas lu Orgueil et Préjugés, est-ce que le livre peut tenir tout seul ? La plupart des austineries peuvent se lire sans qu'on connaisse l'oeuvre originale, certes on ne prends pas plaisir au clin d’œil faits à l'oeuvre originale, mais il me semble qu'elles peuvent se lire indépendamment. Hors ici, clairement, l'auteure ne décrit pas autant les choses, et ne passe pas autant de temps dans l'histoire, que si son lecteur ne connaissait pas déjà l'histoire à la base de sa réécriture. Et ça fonctionne il n'y a pas de problème là-dessus, cependant je m'interrogeais sur le procédé.
Mais passons cela ; j'ai adoré en apprendre plus sur Mary, Kitty et Lydia ; entre parler plus Mr Bennet aussi et même Caroline Bingley (qui n'a jamais une belle fin dans ces austineries décidément). Alexa Adams possède son sujet et je lirais ses autres textes avec plaisir. Ils sont auto-édités si j'ai bien compris, mais n'ont rient à envié à ses austineries un peu niaises publiées chez des éditeurs ; malheureusement ils ne sont pas traduits en français pour ceux qui ne lisent pas l'anglais.
Je ne pensais pas le dire, mais j'ai vraiment beaucoup aimé cet ouvrage !
Pourquoi suis-je surprise ? Eh bien parce qu'il s'agit d'une réécriture d'Orgueil et Préjugés et que ce n'est pas mon Austen favoris. Mais peut-être parce qu'il ne s'agit pas de mon préféré, j'ai eu la possibilité de ne pas rendre ombrage d'une hypothétique infidélités à l'oeuvre originale. En fait j'ai trouvé ce petite bouquin (une centaine de pages) très bien écrit, amusant et assez passionnant.
Comme le sous-titres l'indique (A tale of less Pride and Prejudice) il s'agit d'une histoire avec moins d'orgueil et de préjugés. Que ce serait-il passé si la première fois que Darcy voit Elizabeth il ne faisait pas son horrible snob et dansait avec elle ?
Je pensais, que vu que l'histoire est plus gentille, plus facile en un certain sens, ça me déplairait, mais j'ai trouvé ça tout simplement très crédible. L'histoire d'Alexa Adams se tient et j'ai été étonnée tout le long d'y prendre plaisir car un rien aurait pu faire pencher la balance vers une mauvaise austinerie.
J'ai trouvé ça doux et attendrissant (et oui j'ai un coeur parfois). J'ai étrangement aussi appris à mieux comprendre Darcy ; son comportement m'a toujours laissé perplexe, et là, la façon dont Adams explique sa froideur en société, et son attitude est très intéressante. Et oui, ce n'est pas l'histoire qu'Austen aurait écrit, et oui il n'y a pas cette tension du roman original, mais comme toute réécriture, une fois qu'on a admis le parti-pris de départ et qu'il convainc, je ne vois pas pourquoi s'attarder là-dessus.
Tout comme pour la continuation de Sanditon, j'ai été épatée par l'écriture d'Adams. Peut-être même plus encore que pour le susnommé. Ici on retrouve le piquant et l'ironie très austinienne qui m'avait manqué. Ses tournures de phrases, son vocabulaire, tout fait très fin 18e siècle. Sans que ce soit lourd ou emprunté. Il y a quelques phrases un peu maladroites, notamment dû à une ponctuation parfois hasardeuse, mais ça passe si on lit attentivement.
La narration, omnisciente avec l'intervention du narrateur m'a plu et reflète vraiment la production littéraire Régence. On passe d'un personnage à l'autre, explorant ses pensées, découvrant l'histoire et c'est fluide.
Je me pose cependant une question. Si on n'a pas lu Orgueil et Préjugés, est-ce que le livre peut tenir tout seul ? La plupart des austineries peuvent se lire sans qu'on connaisse l'oeuvre originale, certes on ne prends pas plaisir au clin d’œil faits à l'oeuvre originale, mais il me semble qu'elles peuvent se lire indépendamment. Hors ici, clairement, l'auteure ne décrit pas autant les choses, et ne passe pas autant de temps dans l'histoire, que si son lecteur ne connaissait pas déjà l'histoire à la base de sa réécriture. Et ça fonctionne il n'y a pas de problème là-dessus, cependant je m'interrogeais sur le procédé.
Mais passons cela ; j'ai adoré en apprendre plus sur Mary, Kitty et Lydia ; entre parler plus Mr Bennet aussi et même Caroline Bingley (qui n'a jamais une belle fin dans ces austineries décidément). Alexa Adams possède son sujet et je lirais ses autres textes avec plaisir. Ils sont auto-édités si j'ai bien compris, mais n'ont rient à envié à ses austineries un peu niaises publiées chez des éditeurs ; malheureusement ils ne sont pas traduits en français pour ceux qui ne lisent pas l'anglais.
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