The Big Dark Sky is a stand-alone sci-fi/horror/suspense novel set in Montana, about a mysterious being with a plan that threatens all humanity, and the disparate group of people summoned to stop it. I hadn’t read any Koontz for at least ten years, having had very mixed results in the past. This one falls bang in the middle - I liked the premise, the characters (mostly), the beginning and the ending, but struggled through the middle, finding myself frequently distracted and frustrated by the choppiness of the story-telling and the absurdity of the writing. It’s hard to say too much without spoilers as this is a book which delays revealing what’s going on until about the last quarter, which I’ll confess added to my frustration.
Joanna Chase is a successful author who has led a life of isolation since losing both her parents in quick succession as a child. Then a voice from her past calls her back, through apparent control of her car’s electronic system, to the remote Montana ranch of her early years. Asher Optime is a man on a mission - he wants to become the last man on earth by beginning a revolution that will exterminate the human species - starting with a collection of strangers to build the necropolis he hopes will inspire others. Ganesh Patel is an extraordinary scientist at the head of a top secret project to find out who is killing specific individuals by internet, and what their objective is. When these and other unique characters converge on the idyllic lakeside homestead of Rustling Willows, will courage overcome madness to save humankind?
First off, it’s unusual to meet a Main Character who shares my given name (but please don’t call me Jojo!) Joanna, Wyatt, Ophelia, Colson and Kenny were likeable characters who were easy to root for, but they didn’t get enough time to be fully developed amongst the large cast of supports - some of whom were introduced as potential victims then never heard of again. The way each chapter moved between them was maddening, and completely disrupted the flow of the story - what I presume was meant to be mini-cliffhangers to keep you turning the pages just ended up disconnecting me from the plot. I therefore found this terribly slow for a suspense novel, until the action ramps up in the final 10% and the various players all come together for the last act.
The writing - oh my, purple doesn’t even begin to describe it! “Slowly sinking toward the great mountains in the west, the sun had for several minutes bathed the ghost town in a honeyed splendor that made some of the weathered buildings appear gilded.” gives you a taste. There are assorted pop culture references, some for the author’s own books, and others that would probably give serious sci-fi fans an early clue as to what’s going on but went over my head. You’re deliberately kept in the dark as to whether the evil antagonist is human, metaphysical, supernatural or alien - I didn’t work it out in advance. It did all make a bonkers sort of sense, and I’ll admit I did like the twist in the final sentence.
I also liked the way pompous ultra-malignant narcissist Asher Optime’s story plays out - he pretends his crusade is for the love of nature, but as one character calls him out: “your crusade is not about serving the planet or bringing a miscreated universe to an end. Instead, it’s about your ambition, your pride, your ego, your sadism.” The chapters from his hateful POV mean that you’ll cheer when his fate is revealed (maybe that’s a spoiler but you don’t expect any other outcome in this kind of book do you?) I was hoping for more of an explanation of the “synchronicities” which are repeatedly mentioned and would’ve liked a more comprehensive wrap-up than the very rushed ending we get, but them’s the breaks! All of my advance reviewing friends have rated this higher than me so I’d say if you’re a big Dean Koontz fan, go for it, but I won’t be rushing to read any more of his supernatural/sci-fi stuff - although I do plan to read the Jane Hawk books some day.
Thanks to NetGalley and Thomas & Mercer for the ARC. I am posting this honest review voluntarily. The Big Dark Sky is published on July 19th.