I will start by saying this is the first book review I have written. That being said...who was in charge of editing this book? A few times while reading, I thought I was having deja vu. However, I found out that it was really due to the fact that a few times within the book it repeated the same information.
Here is an example: on pgs. 135 & 136:
"You were going to tell us something, remember?" John prompted me. "Oh, right. Anyways, you know those life bags they use to pull up artifacts?" "The inflatable ones?" John asked. I lined up three wine glasses and nodded "...,but I saw one under Molly's bed today." ........ I told them about the other things I had seen in Molly's bathroom... "You didn't find any artifacts in her room," John said. "Maybe the lift bag was defective--or she forgot she had it." "What about the plastic tubs and the car battery?" I asked.
Here is the same information being "introduced AGAIN to John" on pgs. 171 & 172:
(John) "Anything else you forgot to mention?" "Actually, yes," I said. "And it was much stranger than a photo." I told him about the plastic tubs and the car battery I'd seen in Molly's room.
There was more conversation/wording on both pages about Natalie informing John about what she found when snooping through Molly's room. The point being, the author obviously forgot what she had written 40 pages earlier and no editor seemed to pick up on it. Not to mention the numerous grammatical errors throughout the book. I just can't believe that someone gets paid to edit books and is allowing such errors to be printed!
When I told my husband I finally finished the book, his response was, "Good, now I don't have to hear you complain about all the errors you keep finding." I was going to give the book 1 star, but gave it 2 because I enjoy the setting of the book. I most likely will read the next book in the series, because I am not one to give up until I have finished a series. Here's to hoping the next one is better!