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Half-Orcs #2

The Cost of Betrayal

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Their prophet dead and their home lost, the half-bloods Harruq and Qurrah Tun form a strained alliance with a band of mercenaries outside the city of Veldaren.

As the brothers and their allies wage a private war against powerful thief guilds, divine forces threaten to tear them apart and ruin any hope for a better life.

Harruq must do everything he can to defend his family, for Qurrah’s love of a girl with a shattered mind and the power of a goddess may doom them all.

The death prophet returns, and the disloyal will suffer.

337 pages, Paperback

First published March 25, 2010

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Profile Image for The Shayne-Train.
438 reviews102 followers
June 16, 2016
Another great entry in the series, and no "sophomore slump" here.

Exciting fantasy action, examination of guilt and responsibility, awesome new supporting characters. Love blossoms in the most unexpected place. And oh man, the terrible things that are done to people. Yikes.

This is quickly becoming one of my favorite "grimdark" series. It has the gravitas and dastardly-ness of Martin or Abercrombie, but the taste as it goes down is pure Forgotten Realms. I would have scoffed at the idea until I started reading these, and now I truly cannot get enough.
Profile Image for J.M. (Joe).
Author 32 books163 followers
April 25, 2011
I'm not even going to try to write a review after reading Robert J. Duperre's. Suffice to say, David Dalglish's THE COST OF BETRAYAL was one of the most depressing novels I've ever had the pleasure to read.

Duperre's review of A SLIVER OF REDEMPTION also covers THE COST OF BETRAYAL in many ways: http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...

Also: Yes, it took me a while to read this book (if you pay attention to such things), but not for lack of interest. I just have a LOT going on so far this year, so my opportunity to read has been very limited.
26 reviews1 follower
February 21, 2011
What can I say - if you read my review of the first book, you'll have a lot of the second. Bigger magic, bigger battles, bigger violence, but the same quality of writing.

I will say the plot is more intricate in this book, and at some points I almost started enjoying it. Almost being the key word... But again I know Dalglish can do it from another book I read, and I will continue the series.
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705 reviews5 followers
June 28, 2024
The Lines Have Been Drawn

This book dark touching many serious subjects such as rape and abuse. Yet this book excels at is how it built the enmity between th brothers which led to a very angering and shocking event that was utterly heart breaking! With a battle that was very well written.
Yet the only thing that Mr Dalglish need to work on is led to g the reader know of the passage of time.
Profile Image for Derek.
7 reviews
February 16, 2012
Herein Harruq and Qurrah meet up with a band of mercenaries and go about their lives in the wake of former lives as terrible, terrible people. Harruqs trying to move past it. Qurrah? Not so much.

The problem is, while this books supposed to be the growth of these characters, showing how things are changing since the action of The Weight of blood, theres not really any character development. While some of the news characters have their amusing moments, for the most part they dont really add anything. So much...didnt happen. I was mired in it. And I wanted to scream at the number of times stupidity or true, obvious evil rears its head and Harruq and everyone else under the sun are all too eager to just sweep it under the rug. Who would act this way, i kpet asking myself? Theres no momentum here.

Let me say though as with the first one, I like what Dalglish tries to do hear. What he very obviously wants. Its high fantasy in all its dungeons and dragonsiest glory, but theres no emotion that you feel, no characters to stir you forward, just...status quo. Its like the book just goes in a perfectly straight line. There's no attachment.

But for people not looking for the indepth, the gripping, for people just looking for a dark quick fantasy story, I would still recommend it. Mostly this just wasnt my cup of tea, it doesnt mean that will hold true for others.
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Author 2 books36 followers
September 29, 2010
The second book in the Half-Orc series is another success. Continuing the story of the half-orc brothers Tun, in this installment they find friends and family of sorts. This book is somewhat of a dark fantasy but I found myself actively hoping for redemption for both brothers. While Hurruq seems to embrace salvation, I still hope that Qurrah finds it, as well.

As for the fantasy aspect of the book, it's a fairly generic fantasy world. I don't mean this in a bad way, just that it reminded me heavily of the old days of Dungeons & Dragons games, staying up until the wee hours with friends. There's a level of comforting familiarity with the world, which leaves you free to follow the brothers' journey.
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Author 9 books19 followers
August 31, 2010
This series is definitely not for the faint of heart. Things take a much darker and more dangerous turn in this book; evil deeds are committed and some of those doing them feel no regret or conscience about it.
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12 reviews2 followers
January 13, 2011
Book two in the series, it is almost like the author felt bad for having written the dark first book and attempted to make up for it in this one. I was thourouly let down as the focus changed from the brothers to the new hero group trying to save the world, leaving the dark story as a sideline.
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2 reviews2 followers
April 15, 2010
Far more emotionally evocative than the first book.

If you read this, prepare yourself to think "He _couldn't_" (the author) just before he does.
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Author 26 books107 followers
August 19, 2010
Rating: 5 out of 5

Let me preface this by saying that normally I like to sit on a book a few days before I review it. This allows me time to ponder the meaning of the story in greater detail, to mull over the finer aspects of the storytelling and decide whether my initial, guttural reaction was indeed true, or if I was simply caught up in the moment. Sometimes a book I loved will appear lesser after time, sometimes one I loathed will be struck with new meaning. This balance is what I seek and what this practice is for, to come from an objective place. However, as with most things of an objective nature, sometimes the emotion can be wrung from my explanation of it, due to both the time and that pondering.

So now I sit here, an hour past finishing “The Cost of Betrayal”, the second of the Half-Orc series by David Dalglish, and I want nothing more than to get my thoughts down on paper now. This is a work that is demanding of a highly emotional state, and it’s in my own, right now, that I honor it.

The story picks up where “The Weight of Blood” left off, in the aftermath of master necromancer Velixar’s failed attempt to destroy Woodhaven. The three partners-in-convoluted-crime – Harruq and Qurrah, the half-orc brothers, and Aurelia, an elven sorceress – are on their way back to Veldaren, the city in which the brothers grew up, on the streets and all alone. Upon reentering the city, they are immediately attacked, by a group called the Eschaton, a militia who protects the city for coin and favor. The way Dalglish pours you right into the action is admirable. He does it without missing a beat and without a ton of setup, which is appreciated.

The small group joins up with the Eschaton, and wackiness ensues. They encounter a plot by the local thieves’ guild and the battle scenes are epic. In fact, ALL the battle scenes are epic, extremely graphic, and skillfully presented, just as in the first book. You don’t get lost in the action and you actually care about what’s about to happen to the characters.

The funny thing about these battles, however grand they might be, is that they are overshadowed by the emotional threads that run through the novel. The relationship between Harruq and Aurelia grows by leaps and bounds, and Qurrah becomes obsessed with a strange and tweaked-out girl named Tessanna, who is possessed of power that not even she knows the depths. It is with these two relationships, mirrored against each other, that the bulk of the story grows and flourishes. More than in book one, the differences between Harruq and Qurrah and made that much more apparent by the way they relate to their loved ones. Harruq, though a big lunk, is thoughtful and caring. He listens and is willing to change. Qurrah, on the other hand, is fanatical, cynical, and unbending. He thinks he knows his place in the world and is not willing to alter his mindset…or his actions.

Though a work of fantasy – and a graphic, cringe-inducing work at that – it is this heart that sets this book apart from others I’ve read. The emotional and social threads that run through it cast it above the realm of high fantasy and into highly literary. There are so many issues presented, from racism (how well an individual can “pass” when partially of a lineage deemed unsavory) to the difference between love and fixation (how far will one go, how much will one sacrifice, to help out someone they care about) to the simple act of forgiveness (an example of which I will not give away, as it is the most powerful and gut-wrenching part of the book).

Yet despite all this, there is one theme that rises above all others: family. What does it mean to be family? Can there be family without blood relation? Can that family overcome the faults of its members, even if those faults endanger them? These were stunning revelations to read, and some of the more prophetic words and ideas presented left me with a gigantic lump in my throat. By the end of the book I was a quivering mess. I cried. I couldn’t help but look at my own family, pull them in, and tell them how much I loved them. I thought of the actions of those involved in this yarn and wondered if I would be able to be as forgiving as they were. That is what I found surprising. Almost every character in these novels is a highly flawed individual. They perpetuate horrible acts and seek no clemency. They murder and maim because it’s their job, and they refuse to apologize because that is the state of the world they live in. And yet, through each of them runs a deeply emotional center, a potential to love and be loved that they wish to feed and encourage. There is change, and as I said before, there is forgiveness, and we the readers forgive right along with them. We do this because we recognize the power they hold, the love they are capable of, and when one treads off that path, we shake our heads in pity. We want them to succeed, to overcome whatever demons have befallen them, and it actually HURTS when they fail.

This is a deeply sad book. And it is poignant. I couldn’t put it down. It is painful, at times, to take in, and yet you can’t stop. It makes you FEEL and THINK, and that is, besides pure entertainment, the reason most of us read in the first place. For this, David Dalglish should be commended. I do not speak in hyperbole to say that this is one of the four or five best novels I have read IN MY LIFETIME. It has everything one would want in a book. It takes you through the roller coaster of sensations – from hopeful to despaired to overjoyed to, finally, broken – and spits you out on the other side shaken and thankful for what you have. You laugh, you cry, you ponder. This is truly an accomplishment, and one that should not be overlooked.

Yes, “The Cost of Betrayal” is that good. I dare anyone to read it, to take it in, to relish it. The mistakes in the writing from the first book (which weren’t that noticeable to begin with) have been remedied. What remains is a tale of such power that you have no choice but listen. Carnage and conflict aside, as some might not welcome them, there is too much here to not appreciate it.

This needs to be read. It needs to be out there.

And with that, for the emotions I feel, I give the author two simple words that I think say everything.

Thank you.
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500 reviews11 followers
June 12, 2018
Powerfully exciting.
Audio version.
This is the second part of the series. This is the first book by David Dalglish I've read. I gave this a 4 because there are a few things that were confusing. I think if I had listened to the first book I probably would have given this a 5. Unfortunately I can't afford it to find out, hopefully I can get it soon. So if you're interested in this one I suggest getting the first book as well for best enjoyment.
C. J. McAllister has fastly risen to becoming one of my favorite narrators. It's a pleasure listening to him.
Reasons I enjoyed this audio book:
Tear-jerker, Romantic in a few places, Wonderful characters, Page-turner, Great world building, Unpredictable, Original, Easy-to-read, Entertaining, Action-packed, Twisted, Haunting, Scary.
Bookshelves/tags:
curse-cure, fantasy, multiple-couples, mystery, nonhuman, read, recorded, romance, series, suspense, tragic
This Audio book was given to me at my request from the publisher, author or narrator and I provided this unbiased voluntary review.
Profile Image for Raul Lara.
41 reviews
January 26, 2025
Way better than the first book

It is the stubbornness of Harruq's mind that makes me feel a connection with the story. I don't know about other men, but I'm just as thick-headed and hot-headed as he is. Plus, being a father of a child of similar age made me relate to this book even more.

I felt the loses and I have loved his wins, I have felt the sorrow but also the love for my wife and son as his love was portrayed.

The character progression, meaning the increase in ability and power, is well-earned, and the changes in their way of being are aligned with the shocking events through which their lives transpired.

I can't say Qurrah's story is one of a meaningless life, but it is one of an empty one, filled with whatever vice or person to 'love' he could find for whatever reason he sees fit, a person like him that finds no value in other's lives is as dangerous as it could be.
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1,701 reviews5 followers
June 6, 2017
My review is based on the Audiobook. The beginning was tedious for me and had I been reading I would have skimmed through alot of the day to day details however the pace does get better and I found myself hanging on every word. Tessana is such a tortured soul and the way CJ McAllister narrates her and the others truly brings the story to life. At the core everyone is just trying to do what is right for their loved ones but life is messy and not easy and this story reflects that very well. I am eager to find out what happens next in the series. I would definitely purchase other books narrated by CJ McAllister. I was given this free review copy at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
Profile Image for Michael Evan.
67 reviews29 followers
November 6, 2018
Beautiful, twisted, gothic, tragic, unrelenting, magical, imaginative, intense, horrific, bone chilling , philosophical, polarizing, comforting and warm, cold and claustrophobic , humorous , chaotic , cinematic , mesmerizing

Oh...and quite simply one of the best books I've ever read. Without giving anything away , book 2 of David Dalglish's epic tale of two Half Orc brothers will challenge your understanding of right and wrong by forcing you to empathize with despicable characters. It begs you to examine the way that a troubled and torturous past can lead someone further in to the Abyss, or send them seeking redemption from the light. These concepts are relatable to our lives despite the Fantasy setting, and will no doubt have readers drawing parallels to themselves and those they know and love.

While book 1 touched on this element as well, the sequel further establishes the theme of love and the pursuit of it at all costs, no matter how seemingly twisted and unconventional and how finding it is often both a blessing and a curse.

The Cost of Betrayel is brutally violent, shockingly dark, and often gut wrenchingly sad. The strongest of readers will shed at least a few tears, but what offsets the gothic drama is the introduction of a series of wonderful new characters in Tarlak the wizard and his team of Eschaton mercenaries. This team that includes a magic priestess, and a deadly assassin among others help cement another important theme in the novel. One of acceptance and the power of friendship. This loyal crew are infectious in their desire to help and fight for what they feel is just. They also add an element of light heartedness and humor that is missing from the doom and gloom of the first book.

It is clear that the author is passionate about the world he created and this makes reading the books even more enjoyable. This book will send you further in to Dalglish's fantastic world. You will progress with many unanswered questions, many hopes for what is to come, but more than anything else a need to know what is next for Harruq, Qurrah, their loves and their friends.

132 reviews1 follower
May 18, 2020
Now that the characters are fully introduced, the world is built, we get into a good story. I am glad I pushed through the first book. The second book did not disappoint. Harruq and Quarrah with Aurie are attacked by a band of mercenaries hired to keep all elves out of the city. They fight for an extended period of time, it basically comes to a standstill and they agree to join the mercenaries to not be kicked out of the city. They are hired to do a few jobs, meet some new people including Tessana but the brothers start to be drawn apart. Tessana has a fractured mind which leads to other issues. Definitely worth a read.
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912 reviews39 followers
June 18, 2017

The Gray Area..

This book centers around brothers Qurrah and Harruq after their lives have been turned upside down.

The brothers find unlikely alliances.

The story line has twists, turns and is mostly dark.

Overall, a well written novel that encompasses hate and love but also leaves a bit of hope after all of the gore.


C.J. McAllister did really well with the narration.

Note:
"This audio book was provided by the author, narrator, or publisher at no cost in exchange for an unbiased review."


582 reviews
June 6, 2017
I found this novel thought provoking. The main characters are a collection of interesting personalities, that swirl around the lives and choices of two brothers. Their choices are poorly made. When I started this book I didn't realize it was the second in a series. I'm sure some back information would have filled in some of the blanks, but I did not need it to understand and find the book fascinating. I will be getting the first book to listen too, and also finish the series.
2 reviews
May 7, 2021
A Gem found by accident!

I have not read such a captivating series in a long time. It is addictive. The characters draw you in and you just want to know more. I even felt sadness and hoped for redemption for the evil broken characters. I have not enjoyed a series as much since reading David Eddings , Terry Goodkind, and R.A. Salvatore. This series is worth your time it is dark but well written. I promise you will not be disappointed.
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2 reviews
March 12, 2021
Awesome

Although I liked the first book very much. I wasn't sure I really connected to the Tun brothers too well. Do in this one and I am thoroughly enjoying this outcast story of redemption. Would recommend this series 100%. Story is always moving which I prefer and there isn't over explanations or descriptions.
10 reviews
April 5, 2022
I definitely enjoyed the book but at times felt character development was a bit excessive but also needed to tie in all the characters. There is plenty of epic battle scenes and also tragic loss that pulls on your heart strings. I can see this book being a set up for the next book. I don’t even know what’s next and excited to read the next book and find out.
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106 reviews
October 10, 2022
It took me awhile to get on board with the new characters after enjoying the first books focus on essentially just the brothers and Aurelia and Velixar. But I definitely warmed up to the crew, and Tessana was infinitely interesting character and I’m glad there’ll be more to learn about her.
This book is amazingly written and wrenched my heart.
13 reviews
October 1, 2024
Another great read by Dalglish

I have enjoyed all of the Shadowdancer Series and rolled right into the Half-Orc series and have not been disappointed. David Dalglish's writing style is one that flows so easily you don't notice how many pages you've read until you have to stop and go back to the real world for awhile.
1 review
November 19, 2019
Amazing

Such an awesome book and series!!! I could not put it down, I found myself returning to the book to finish reading every chance I had. I definitely recommend you read this book.
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Author 62 books140 followers
July 15, 2020
Not bad

This book was definitely better than the first one. There was time to get to know the characters and the story held more interest for me because it was more oriented around them. It still had some problems, but I'm interested enough to read the next book.
5 reviews
June 27, 2025
great setting to a lengthy quest

As these 2 books lead you on a journey into these characters, I recommend reading the Shadowdancer series to understand how Hearn and his friends fit in.
I look forward to reading the rest of this series and seeing how it ends.
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10 reviews1 follower
March 10, 2019
The story is dark and mesmerizing , depressing and captivating in the same time . I found some chapters hard to digest yet compelling. Will go though the whole series for sure.
19 reviews
October 19, 2024
Awesome

I really enjoyed this book and can not wait to start the new one. Lots of plot twist and turns, only just getting to know the characters.
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365 reviews31 followers
June 29, 2012
The Cost of Betrayal by David Dalglish is the second book in the Half-Orcs series. I thoroughly enjoyed the first book but this one just really sealed the deal for me as I am now 100% positive that I will be seeing this entire series through. Reading The Cost of Betrayal really reminds me of the good old days of fantasy books. It's really hard to describe this feeling if you're not a fan of the genre. The only thing that saddens me is that not many readers know of the author. On many top fantasy books lists, I really don't remember seeing the author in them. Well, they don't know what they are missing out on because this guy can write fantasy books. It's in his blood. The only thing I can do to help out is doing what the author actually hopes his reader can do for him and that is to write reviews, negative or positive, to help spread the word. If you are into the fantasy genre, you really need to give this series a try.

In the first book, we were introduced to the conflicted half-orc brothers of Qurruh and Hurruq. In The Cost of Betrayals, we finally get to read about the inevitable. You just knew sooner or later that the brothers would one day separate and go on their own path. One of them heads into darkness while the other heads for the road of redemption. I'm sure the book title dropped a big hint on that one! While you read through the book, you slowly begin to see the relationship between the two once inseparable brothers begin to take a turn for the worst. I love the half-orc brothers because each one is so different from one another in a way. Hurruq is trying his hardest to erase his past by beginning a relationship with Aurelia. Qurruh on the other hand, remains true to his orcish heritage. The only thing that keeps him on a leash is the love for his brother. His struggle continues throughout this book. The author does a great job in keeping you guessing of whether Qurruh's soul can be redeemed or not till the very end. It makes for some great reading.

What surprised me the most about The Cost of Betrayal is the amount of comedy in the book. Usually, I don't laugh out loud while reading a book but I broke tradition here! Because I've read the Shadowdance trilogy prior to this, I knew the back story between Haern and his group of mercenaries. This really makes things more interesting for me because I personally know about the story of the famed Watcher and how he came to be. Other readers not familiar with his character might not put much thought into him because they don't know of his upbringing and the trials and tribulations he had to go through prior to meeting the half-orcs. Suffice it to say, you'll have a blast reading Hurruq's time spent with this interesting group of individuals.

Once again, the author writes beautifully. He has a good pace, knows when to advance the story and doesn't bore you with a whole bunch of details. This however doesn't mean the book is shallow because it's far from that. He just knows how to balance things out. One thing I do wish the author would do in future books is expanding the world and location settings a bit more. I feel the author can really push the story even more if the characters weren't just stuck in the same location or two. Other than that, expect the same magic heavy and gory battle scenes. It's not as brutal as the first book but if you're reading the second book here, then you should already know what to expect.

Throughout the book, I found myself from laughing really hard at times, getting sad at others, excited when it was time for action to being disgusted as eyeballs and intestines came flying out of people. It really is a roller coaster ride and I loved every moment of it.
109 reviews
May 27, 2013
Harruq and Qurrah attempt to take control of their own lives; Hurruq wants to change from the monster he became, and Qurrah wants to become better, in his own way...

New characters are introduced, and the relationships lighten the conversation and lends proof that at least Harruq wants to be no more than anyone else, but so much more than he had been. the author protrays Harruq's attempts really well, and it seems the half-orc is on his way to redemption.

However, problems between the brothers erupt, and life for them and all who are around them becomes dangerous, and to be honest, tedious... Fight scenes go on for pages, people are set on fire, drained of blood, de-boned, etc, then a few pages further on, it all happens again, to the same characters, with the same end result!!

For beings who live in a world of powerful soldiers and stronger magic wielders, I would have thought the survival instinct would be very strong.... It got to the point where I was gritting my teeth and praying for SOMEONE to die, just to get the situation resolved!! But Harruq continues to back off, and his friends, despite their injuries, continue to accept his decisions, like he's the best one to make them...

In this book, I would have liked to see the brothers develop deeper characters; Harruq is shown to be on his way, though not out of the "personality disorder" status yet, but Qurrah becomes a truculent teen; people make awful accusations and assumptions, and rather than present proof of his innocence, he throws the " no one believes me anyway" tantrum and the fighting goes on. And on... Maturity is not something either character has in any shape or form.

Having whinged all this, I do like these stories; I appreciate what the author is attempting, I have enjoyed the plot line, if not the way the characters are living it. I like the side characters and care more about them than either of the brothers. I wonder if the story told from Aurelia's point of view may have been more varied. I am going to give the series a bit of a rest, and then go back.
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