I wasn’t going to read this book because I didn’t like the first one, but I did, so here it goes: it’s not any better than the first one.
Ok, the good points. Stirling knows his historical trivia. Also, he pays a nice homage to the much-better Harry Turtledove by including a passing reference to Flora Hamburger from the Southern Victory series.
Ok, that’s about it for the good points.
The bad points: he shows he is only an amateur historian by throwing every bit of historical trivia he can in there. The full manufacturer names of every firearm, for example. Or how he has to identify every single person who speaks by where their regional accent in their particular language is from. I mean . . . Every. Single. Person. And the lingering descriptions of every meal, in detail. Excruciating detail. Either he is being paid by the word, or else he just wants to show off how smart he thinks he is. I suspect the latter.
There is the usual annoying lesbian fetish of the main characters, which I have said before is favorite of his (see his Draka series). And of course the only male homosexual is a villain, Ernst Rohm. Yea, that guy.
As for Luz, you simply don’t ever get the idea that she will lose because she is perfect at everything she does. The one thing she isn’t good at, which is techie stuff, her partner Ciara excels in. Liz can outfight a man twice her weight and strength, she can outshoot a trained sniper, etc., etc. She is the definition of a Mary Sue. And Stirling has to have her bring down all sorts of real-life characters. In this book, we find she killed Trotsky in Mexico (in Frida Kahlo’s mother’s house, no less!) and captured Pancho Villa. In Europe she kills Hitler - who is never named but very obviously Hitler, albeit a bit more crippled by the war, and is laboring in obscurity as the main baddie’s orderly.
And then there are the evil Germans. Yes, the Great War Germans of the Kaiserreich were not nice people, as the natives of southwest Africa can attest. But Stirling makes them World War II Germans, and in some ways worse than that. They seem to want to commit genocide against everyone, even fellow Europeans. In France, they use the horror-gas to kill everyone in Paris, and then they actively aid and abet famine amongst the civilian population to drive them south into Algeria. Not even Hitler pursued a policy like that towards the French, and he despised French culture and civilization. The Austrians are apparently doing the same to the Serbs, having killed over half their prewar population (which would be over two million people). Austria did kill about 30,000 Serbian civilians during their occupation. But even them and the Bulgarians focused more on suppression of Serbian culture and Cyrillic than outright genocide. Stirling seems to think that the Germans have this natural impulse to mass murder - he even says they only kept the Belgians alive because of their industrial and technical expertise. And while it is well known that the Germans in the Great War did draft forced laborers for their factories, Stirling has the Germans working them in concentration camp-like conditions until they eventually drop dead from the bare minimum of food they re given - and Luz interprets it as deliberate policy, not a result of the British naval blockade. Stirling seems ignorant of or dismissive of the fact that the Nazis had to use years of propaganda to condition the German people into murdering their countrymen who looked like them. Even during the war, average German soldiers were being bombarded with propaganda to make them into killers on the Eastern Front, as Omer Bartov has shown us. To Stirling, with few exceptions, the Germans under the Kaiser are already bloodthirsty, albeit rational, mass murderers.
I’m not even going to comments how the Germans invent fully accurate and working radar by 1916 when that wasn’t developed until the 1930s.
I was hoping the second book would be better, but alas. My library doesn’t have the third, and I’m not going to spend money to buy it.