In a cathedral at the south of the Istryan Empire, young men and women are trained to be killers. The Order of the Golden Sword’s inquisitors are feared for their brutality masked as piety. Masters of blade, poison, and crossbow, their quarry is the god-cursed werewolf, whom they hunt with impunity to herald the return of their god.
Betrayed by her monstrous father, Selene loses her left arm and nearly her life when she’s saved by a traveling inquisitor. Scarred and broken, she swears vengeance on the cursed beasts and joins the Order. It takes all her will to overcome her limits, only for her violent past to drag her back into blood.
With the fabric of the empire at stake, Selene must master her hatred, hone it to a sharp point, then let it loose on her enemies.
NC Koussis was born in Perth in 1993 to Greek and Gamilaroi ancestry. He has moved all around Australia, settling in Newcastle for the moment, where he lives with his wife, son, and staffy dog, Nala. He’s been writing fantasy books since he was a little boy, after falling in love with Lord of the Rings, Realm of the Elderlings, and Deltora Quest. He decided to publish a book in 2019, and it only took him three years. The Pyres of Vengeance is his upcoming novel. He considers himself an enthusiastic amateur of medieval history, historical battles and tactics, and food. When he’s not writing, he’s making sourdough bread and working on a PhD in neuroscience.
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is the debut grimdark fantasy by NC Koussis, a blood-soaked tale of losing one’s identity in the monomaniacal pursuit of revenge.
The book opens with a standard fantasy trope: a young squire, Tristain, seeks to prove his valor to become a knight. However, Tristain is dealing with a curse that he is too innocent to handle.
Tristain shares point-of-view duties with his adopted sister, Selene, who steals the spotlight immediately upon making her entrance in the third chapter. Selene is a dynamic and engaging heroine and my favorite part of the book. Anytime she is on the page, The Sword of Mercy and Wrath becomes an unputdownable delight.
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath offers remarkable depth, especially related to questions of character identity. About halfway through the novel, Selene adopts an alternate persona and makes several rather shocking decisions on her pathway to zealotry. Meanwhile, the innocuous Tristain must grapple with his literal beast within. The surprising identity of another side character also introduces an unexpected twist toward the end of the novel.
I thoroughly enjoyed how NC Koussis subverts the clearcut views of morality found in traditional epic fantasy. During the first few chapters of The Sword of Mercy and Wrath, I thought the book was falling into the usual mold of good versus evil. However, NC Koussis goes full-on grimdark by the middle of the novel, introducing moral complexity accompanied by scenes of graphic violence. NC Koussis is a talented writer, and he particularly excels at writing such scenes.
There is also an unexpected touch of romance in the book, although I hesitate to call it that. The scene is not sentimental at all, but rather a violent outburst of passion reflecting the increasingly dark mental state of one of our main characters.
NC Koussis should be commended for his representation of a physically disabled main character, whose disability does not limit her in any way. We need more of this positive representation in fantasy. I’d also like to call attention to the beautiful cover art by MiblArt Design, which contains a subtle clue about our heroine that I didn’t even notice until I reached the midpoint of the book.
My main critique of The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is that the world is underdeveloped. There is a great story here with a surprising amount of psychological depth, but it takes place in a world that feels only partially established. NC Koussis errs on the side of brevity to maintain a fast-paced plot. However, I wished that he would slow down a bit to expand the worldbuilding and deepen all the characters not named Selene.
Overall, The Sword of Mercy and Wrath has a lot to offer grimdark fans, especially in its lead heroine. I’m excited to see where NC Koussis takes the story next as he continues his Swords of Dominion series.
It's no secret that I enjoy my fantasy books slightly (or not so slightly) on the dark side. And THE SWORD OF MERCY AND WRATH definitely fits that bill, especially in the latter half of the book which is an all out carnage fest. One thing that is different about this particular book though is the introduction of werewolves into the equation. I haven't read a ton of fantasy with werewolves so I wasn't sure exactly how this would go over. But I'm not opposed to injecting some horror elements into my fantasy reads, so away I went into this grimdark tome keeping an open mind and an eye out for some menacing lycanthropes.
I will say that Koussis does a fine job building the tension and setting the mood as with each chapter we are introduced to the lore of this war-ravaged world and all of the players involved. The two main characters Tristain and Selene have been separated from each other at the beginning of the book and their individual journeys are told through alternating MC viewpoint chapters. Theirs is not a very fun journey needless to say and both are put through so much that will test them in this perilous setting where evil, danger, and bloodthirsty enemies both human and beast lurk around every corner.
The action in this book is simply off the charts. If you enjoy some bloody battles and fight scenes, you will almost certainly find THE SWORD OF MERCY AND WRATH to your liking. The pace is quick and the plot is often fraught with foreboding scenes where dark magic and treachery are dished out in copious amounts.
That's not to say that I didn't have my issues. For example, I really would have liked a little more expansion and description in the worldbuilding. We get a little taste of it but I kept craving more details and just wish that things were touched on a little more in that department. I also thought that the main characters were intriguing but again, a deeper dive into their personalities and backstory would have made this an even better read for me I believe. Hopefully the next book in the series will maybe get into these things some more.
In the end I found this book to be a really entertaining read that never let me feel comfortable most of the time. That's a good thing by the way. Based off this promising first book in Koussis' Swords of Dominion series, I'm eager to get my hands on the next entry The Pyres of Vengeance and jump back into this story to see where it goes. I won't have too long to wait as it releases on June 1st of this year. Ultimately this book is a solid dark fantasy that I'm sure will appeal to many readers.
Came for the werewolves, stayed for the addictive story. Really, all you have to do to get me excited over a book is tell me that there's some kind of supernatural creature in it and I'm sold.
I actually have the first version of this book, as well as the second. I was waiting for the right time to read it, then it got updated, I obviously had to get that version too, and here we are now.
The book is told through two different PoVs, that of Tristain and his adoptive sister Selene. Tristain went off to fight while Selene stayed home to face the wrath of their father, which led to her losing an arm and joining the Order which likes to hunt my furry little werewolf friends for sport. Boo.
WE DON'T LIKE THE ORDER IN THIS HOUSE!!!
So anyway, Tristain and Selene seem to be on different paths, they haven't spoken in years...will they ever meet again? READ TO FIND OUT.
When I started The Sword of Mercy and Wrath I knew I was going to love it. You know why? The word Wukodlak, which is how we say werewolf in Serbia, just with a v instead of a w. It appears on the very first page and I just knew.
Then the name Radimir happened, and after many (too many) encounters of random Slavic words being passed off as names, I could finally be happy that an actual name was used. It's such a small thing, but it means a lot to me.
There were also Veles and Vera, which is so cool. Fingers crossed I spot more Slavic names in future books.
Then there's the writing style which refused to to let me put the book down. I wanted to finish the whole thing yesterday, my brain was going "just one more chapter, ok now one more, maybe one more"...Mr Koussis, I don't know what you sprinkled in here but...keep it up.
We got more PoVs from Selene than Tristain, but I love both of them. I think they were both fleshed out well, and the only thing I kind of mind is how fast Selene was brainwashed by the Order.
Because one second she's cool, the next she's an evil zombie. At that point I still loved her, but I was hoping she'd get hit upside the head to regain her senses.
I also really loved Soren and Leon. And I shipped Soren and Selene from the start. Did I get what I wanted? Kiiiiiinda.
NO BUT, I was starting to think nothing would come of it, my beloved ship wasn't about to sail and then...somewhere around 85% something happened. And I wish I could call it a slow burn, but they don't have enough romantic scenes for that.
But I am glad that SOMETHING did happen. Even more so because of the thing at the end.
As for Tristain's romantic encounter, I saw that coming. Don't ask me how, but something about the way he talked/thought about Selene, while clear that he cared for her, wasn't exactly the same as when she talked or thought about him.
I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here, but first I'll go back and read the prequel and THEN the sequel.
P. S. Songs by the band Powerwolf popped into my head on more than one occasion while reading so if a bookish playlist were to happen, that band would definitely be on there.
So, you’ve been looking for a good werewolf story that isn’t a paranormal fantasy romance with a ripped, bare-chested dude on the cover? Well friends, N.C. Koussis has got you covered. The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is a bloody and brutal grimdark fantasy that will leave you howling for more, in the best way possible.
This is a dual POV story told through the eyes of Tristain and Selene, whose harrowing personal journeys we get to experience from the front-row seat. Tristain is a soldier set on becoming a knight, so that he can eventually save his sister and mother from his abusive (and beastly) father. But little does he know, his adopted sister Selene isn’t exactly the damsel in distress that Tristain thinks she is. After barely surviving a life-changing werewolf attack at the start of this book, she embarks on a path of revenge and joins up with the religious Order of the Golden Sword to start hunting down werewolves. It takes years before the two finally cross paths again, but when they do, their worldviews are completely shattered and they are left wondering who the real monsters in this world are.
Now, I first read this book when it was just released and thought there was a lot to enjoy, but in the end I was just left wanting a bit more. So when the author re-released this updated version of the book, which is about 150 longer, I immediately knew I wanted to re-read the story. And I am so glad I did, because holy damn, did this updated version step it up a notch in every single way possible!
The main highlight of this book is without a doubt the complex character work for me. I already thought Tristain and Selene’s journeys were compelling on my first read, but I do remember feeling like their characterizations were a bit weak in parts. Well, that’s not the case anymore in this updated edition. Koussis spent a lot more time fleshing out the characters and developing their interpersonal relationships, which helped so much with my emotional investment in the story. There were still a couple of decisions/actions that felt a bit out-of-character, but overall I thought the character arcs were very strong and compelling.
I am also really impressed by the way that trauma is explored in this story, especially in Selene’s storyline. The werewolf attack at the start of the book definitely leaves a big impact on her, but I really appreciated seeing that she is so much more than her physical and mental scars. Her way of coping is far from perfect and I thought it was fascinating to see the role that The Order of the Golden Sword plays in her ‘healing’ journey. The themes around religious zealotry, othering, cultish fanaticism, indoctrination, and morality are explored in such interesting ways and added a lot of complexity and depth to the story.
And I don’t know what it is about Koussis’ writing style, but every time I opened the book I just got sucked in and completely lost track of time. The world building is quite immersive and I always love stories like these that can keep me on my toes the entire way through. The frenetic pacing, the brutal action scenes, and all the big ‘OH SHIT’ moments just had me glued to the page. And by the end, I was quite surprised by the author’s ballsy storytelling decisions, which made me appreciate this book all the more!
So, weird as it may sound, I honestly had a lot of fun with this dark story. The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is one hell of a promising debut and I can’t wait to see where the story goes next. If you are looking for a fast-paced and engaging story full of werewolves, religious zealotry, morally gray characters and a whole lot of visceral action scenes, then I highly recommend you give this book a shot. I had a blast!
Disclaimer: ARC provided by the author in exchange for honest and fair review
Okay so first off can we just take a minute to appreciate how beautiful that cover is. I don’t know about you but I’m a sucker for a good cover and if I bought every book that I thought had a cool cover I would never be able to retire.
So then onto the question is the The Sword of Mercy and Wrath worth your purchase? Well I would say yes if you are okay with one small caveat which I will get into in a second. First let's start off with what I liked about the book.
The story starts off with Tristain who is a knight in training hoping to land a cushy job serving a high lord so he can not only leave his army days behind him but hopefully rescue his mother and more or less adopted sister Selene away from his evil father. Tristain heart and hopes are in the right place but boy oh boy is he more like his father then he cares to admit.
Selene is the other POV in the story and honestly the main character at least it felt like more of the story revolved around her then Trisitan. While her brother went off to war she was left behind to help their mother and father but after a family tragedy falls on the household she is rescued and taken to the order to heal and be trained to be a beast hunter.
I don’t want to say too much more directly about the story for fear of giving away the plot but I can honestly say there were more than a few times while reading about Selene that I had an “oh no she didn't” reaction to something she did. I think NC Koussis is a very witty writer and it shows throughout the story. I really enjoyed the humor in the story and his punch lines resonated with me. This story is definitely geared towards adults due to the choice of language he uses in the book but overall I really enjoyed it.
Alright so about the caveats, the book jumps around a lot. I know it's normal to switch back and forth between POV’s of the main characters but I feel like this happened a little too much though. Also the timing felt off, I can’t give exact details because it would spoil the book but let's just say both characters progressed at different paces. One felt like they basically progressed overnight from beginner to expert and the other you got the sense that the transformation should have took years to complete yet it didn't. The timelines are actually very much the same as you read through the story.
It’s honestly my only criticism of the book and I think this could have easily been overcome had the story been a little longer. At 263 pages it's a very quick read which is nice but I think had this book been pushed out to somewhere around 400 pages it could have been developed more and not felt quite so rushed. So if the jumping around/rushed timeline doesn’t both you then definitely pick this book up
So I guess the only question left to answer is will I continue this series….. Absolutely I enjoyed the story overall and NC Koussis nailed the ending/epilogue in my opinion in a way that left me wanting for more. Had the timeline not felt rushed/under developed this would have been an easy 5 stars from me but unfortunately I gotta knock it down to 4 but will see maybe the next book will be a solid 5.
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is the initial book of the Swords of Dominion series by the Aussie writer NC Koussis, and it's an excellent grimdark novel, that at the same time does a great job portraying a myth such as the werewolf one in a different kind of light, while creating a huge world which I hope to continue exploring on the next books of the series.
First of all, let me make the clarification that this is a review focused on the rereleased edition of TSoMaW, which includes 150 extra pages. I read the first edition, and liked it; but personally, I think this edition enhances and improves many aspects, bringing the novel to a whole new level, especially diving into the transformation of Selene.
TSoMaW follows two different stories, alternating the timelines until they met again due to the force of circumstances. And both are at some point faces of the same coin, a coin that surprisingly ends up not being as simple as we could think.
Selene's life is far from ideal, but it definitely gets wrecked after the attack of her monstrous father, which was a werewolf, letting her at the border of death; losing her left arm as a consequence. Scarred and broken, she swears vengeance against those beasts, joining the Order. I find really interesting and accurate how Koussis portrays the process of the catchment, and how a cult operates to get more adepts that will follow blindly their orders; Selene is the perfect victim, as she's broken, with vengeance as the only remaining feeling on her. She's an easy target to manipulate and radicalize, and the Order plays its cards in order to make her a fanatical, a monster who will follow all its orders blindly. Practically Selene gets dissociated from who she used to be, something signaled by the change of name to Selene. The newly named Diana quickly escalates in the organization, not without getting attacked by her mates, in brutal ways; but she becomes the perfect Inquisitor, and she doesn't really think about her actions until she has to capture a particular werewolf. Tristain acts as a squire for Leon the Strong, serving the imperial army, with the hope he will at some point get enough prestige to retire and live serving as a home guard, and hopefully meet again Selene. But after a traumatic encounter, he discovers that there's a beast inside him; he can transform into a werewolf.
While still serving in a war that seems kinda unproductive, we get to see how Tristain puts his life in danger multiple times, while at some points letting his true nature unleash. But if with Selene we get to see a brutal nature, with Tristain we get to observe how all that the Order says about those creatures might not be true. And the culmination of this story appears when Diana's obligations and Tristain's nature clash, because she's tasked with retrieving a living beast for Citadel's matters. Diana's convictions get challenged, putting her between the sword and the wall; more once part of the truth about Order's acts gets revealed. I don't want to spoil much more, but all the setting done with the two timelines gets a payoff in an explosive ending, letting all ready for a second book.
The world of TSoMaW is dark and brutal, as the grimdark genre dictates. We are direct spectators of violence and atrocities, showing the worst aspects of humanity; the Continent is under war and that shows. The Order is a religious cult that tries to create fanatics, and their process with the novices is the best example of it. If you look closely, you can see the Greek and European influences in this world, in small details such as names, places, and some of the structures; while we explore just some places, I want to travel to more cities in this world.
Koussis's prose is excellent, shining especially in two kinds of scenes: action scenes, where it becomes especially cinematic and spectacular (watching Diana fighting against werewolves is an absolute delight); and those where we met better the characters, transmitting how they feel perfectly.
This new edition of TSoMaW is what any fan of grimdark could ask for. A brutal world, morally grey characters, and a reality that is more complex than what plain sight could see. Can't wait to see Pyres of Vengeance.
Want a great werewolf story without having to deal with sparkly vampires? How about a werewolf story without the Romeo/Juliet tragic love story element? NC Koussis has you covered!
In this world, doubt means death. At least, that's what they're told. But what if doubt actually meant taking the time to look at the facts and discovering what was a curse was actually a blessing?
Shapeshifters, demons, werewolves - these people, their bloodlines were cursed by Sigur because their ancestors were traitors who sided with the Devil. There was even a group formed who hunted those of these bloodlines down in order to eradicate them - The Order of the Golden Sword. There were even times in history with the The Order would exterminate an entire town to destroy the Beasts and those that aided/supported them.
Our story is provided through the perspectives of Tristain and his adopted sister, Selene. Tristain has left his home in order to fight in the war to find favor with a Knight, so that he could be taken and trained as a squire. His goal is to gain employment at a noble house, so that he may bring his sister and mother with him, away from his abusive father.
Selene is left behind to bear the wrath of her adoptive father. During one particular incident, the adoptive mother puts herself between the two and is murdered as the man rages out of control and shifts into his werewolf form. Selene is able to escape with her life, but loses her left arm in the tragic events. Her character development throughout this book is fantastic. The author shows how she learns to resume a normal lifestyle with one arm. He doesn't gloss over the process at all - Selene deals with the phantom arm feeling, where she forgets her arm is going and still reaches for things, or misses correctly mounting her horse - it was very well done. She eventually doesn't even realize that she's any different than anyone else with both arms. In addition, she has amazing development due to her suffering. Her adoptive brother is off fighting the war, the mother and father are dead, she's destitute. The Order of the Golden Sword offer her purpose, a goal. She takes the opportunity and thrives, moving up the ranks only to have those beliefs questioned later.
I really enjoyed Tristain's POV as well, though his development was a bit glossed over. As you can imagine, he's our werewolf POV and where we watched Selene learn to operate with her disability and slowly work through the ranks of the Order, Tristain went out to learn to control his Beast and he managed the first time he tried. I would've liked to have the same methodical development for him as Selene. Now, to be honest, this may be just because Tristain was my favorite character.
There were some very interesting secondary characters I would have loved more from as well, but it's entirely possible they'll have larger roles in the subsequent books, so I'll keep my fingers crossed!
I liked the world building and the settings traversed by our characters and I look forward to seeing if those get expanded and built upon in the sequel. I was keen on the lore and history of Sigur, the one they worship, and I hope for more on that element as well. I have some ideas of what I think may happen in regards to the religion, based on how this one ended and I really look forward to finding out what happens.
I should mention that I read this book after it had been revised and expanded by the author. It also got a gorgeous new cover (though the first one was amazing as well!) and the cover for the sequel is just FIRE. (I can't wait to read it - already grabbed a copy on my Kindle!)
It was a relief to have a werewolf story that broke out of the same old mold of either being a supernatural romance or tied to vampires. Points to the author for creating outside the box on that front. I'm looking forward to continuing the series and seeing where we go next!
I did accept a copy of this novel from the author for review consideration. All thoughts and opinions discussed above are my own.
This is an exceptionally addictive read. For such a short novel, N.C. Koussis packs nonstop action and character development from start to finish to create a fast paced read that is hard to put down.
The two main points of view are Tristain, off to war as a knight’s squire in hopes of making a name for himself and getting his adopted sister and mother away from their abusive father back home. The other is Selene, the sister, attacked by a werewolf and in turn sets off with a dashing inquisitor to become a hunter of those monsters.
I think the Selene character stole the spotlight from Tristain and ran with it. I enjoyed both viewpoints but her character arc was the best part of the book for me. An interesting look at how grief and revenge can cause a loss of identity as Selene shucks off her last to become a remorseless werewolf hunter for the religious order. The training was brutal and dark and everything I’d expect from an order that targets those with hurt in their heart and no where else to turn. Then the question becomes – can Selene find herself again?
Tristain took a bit of a different arc and showed us the life of the army, the depths of betrayal in the novel, and that monsters can take many shapes and forms.
I liked how both characters, and most of the side characters, were in the moral grayzone. They had faults, they were ravaged from war and hardship and grieving, making mistakes and learning from them. The book was pretty dark though the middle to end but managed to keep up a thread of hope that I don’t see in a lot of Grimdark anymore. The end was… Uh… Well, I’d like a sequel, let’s put it that way. (My heart didn’t need a hug at all before the epilogue).
While I did truly enjoy the book, the action, the battles, the military strategy, the violence that all makes up a solid dark fantasy, one can guess by the length that there might not have been a ton of world building. I am a world building fanatic and (while I 100% recommend the book for fans of fast paced action packed reads), I really wanted some more background and development for the world, the characters, the political conflicts, maybe some more history, just those little things that flesh out fantasy worlds. I know that’s not necessity what the author set out to do but I think it would have helped without slowing things down too much.
That said though, the action and moral conflicts and characters more than carried this book! I am now patiently waiting for the next installment
For better or worse, I wasn't happy with the last edition of The Sword of Mercy and Wrath. But passion and dissatisfaction of my earlier work has brought to you a hugely expanded edition, with 100+ pages of new content, an expanded map, new illustrations by Sara Ferrari, and a new cover by Nino Is. I hope you all enjoy it!
Having read The sword of salt and smoke novella . I was intrigued by this world. When I heard he was adding and perfecting the first novel I was even more intrigued! TSOMW starts of with a minor trope. But I love this trope!
People say that this book is grimdark , I'll take it a little further by saying the darkness you read and feel between the pages is a POV in its own right!. It's his NC's own version of Sodom and Gomorrah.
Religious overtones Zealotry Call in the asylum
The two story lines are vibrant , cascading through the pages , with Selene on one side and Tristain on the other, woven through the story , but the looking glass shows tradegy to one and transformation to the other.
Surviving the terror that befell her family is not enough. Joining those who pursue the creatures an opportunity. When the hunt takes a personal turn however, all may not be as it seems. Great POVs! Engaging & action packed!
TLDR: The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is a quick, exciting read and promising debut from a talented author. While its fast pacing doesn't allow much room for a deep dive into most of the characters/situations, it does add to the thrilling action sequences and frenetic conflicts.
Let's start with the plot:
Our story centers around a squire, Tristain and an orphan, Selene. As the novel opens, we find Tristain in service to a knight as both of them have been mobilized to conflict against a rival kingdom. We quickly learn Tristain harbors a damning secret and his arc kicks off from there as he tries to keep his secret while weathering the storm of war around him.
Selene, by contrast, begins the story in her home, being a ward of Tristain's family. Tragedy ensues, and Selene loses an arm. Having nowhere else to go, she joins a religious order dedicated to hunting werewolves and her arc kicks off from there.
Koussis covers a wide range of topics in this tale, ranging from realizing one's own identity, to the dangers of institutionalized religious zealotry and all the political ramifications of that. He also does a good job of showcasing the nuances of morality, showing us plenty of shades of gray instead of a typical "good vs. evil" dichotomy. The themes present here are a HUGE highlight and do a great job keeping the reader engaged.
I enjoyed the broader strokes of the plot as well as the more intricate details Koussis weaves in. Of particular note are the delicious melancholy twists along the way. Some of these twists, along with other revelations would've probably felt more impactful if the pacing slowed a bit in order to provide more buildup.
On that note, let's talk about my one criticism with the novel: its pacing.
This novel moved at breakneck speed, which bolstered the wonderfully-written action sequences, of which there were many. That being said, I think the speed at which we move through scenes doesn't allow us to spend enough time with the characters to get a sense for the nuances of their characterizations and attach ourselves to them. This becomes more apparent when those bonds are put to the test in the aforementioned beautifully designed twists and turns, which Koussis executes well. If we had more breathing room to get to know the cast, these unexpected outcomes and moments of strife would hit like an absolute freight train, which shows Koussis possesses obvious talent as a story crafter. All in all, if not for this Achilles heel, I could easily see this novel as a 4.5-5 star read.
On a more positive note, let's briefly talk about the action sequences. This novel is FULL of action, be it sweeping battles of warring knights or hand-to-hand training sequences between religious zealots. Koussis definitely keeps things exciting with these stimulating scenes.
Lastly, I've got to talk about my favorite aspect of the novel, the WEREWOLVES!!! Everytime one of these creatures shows up, they steal the show. Koussis does a good job at providing weight to the deadly capabilities and imposing presence these monsters possess. I loved it. Rest assured, any of you who are yearning to read about some classically terrifying, yet strangely majestic, wolf monsters will have a good time here.
All in all, I think this is a promising debut and a good start to a series that shows promise. With a few tweaks and refining of obvious talent, I could easily see this series becoming something truly special. Well done, NC Koussis!
***Disclaimer*** I've found out the author is rereleasing this first installment, so my critiques may have already been addressed by the time you've read this. Either way, if you're a fan of monster fantasy, especially werewolves, you should pick this one up.
I'd seen this book around a lot and was excited to give it a read. The cover is gorgeous. Koussis has created a dark world with werewolves and a religious Order bent on fighting them. The author holds no punches in this world that shows that nature is red in tooth and in claw. The concept of the werewolves isn't necessarily an original one but it didn't feel overdone and worked very well in this world, so no complaints there. Leon was one of my favorite characters next to Selene, and it was nice to see a one-arm protagonist fighting. The reveal of Tristain being a werewolf was a nice surprise and seeing Selene having to choose between family and duty really got to me. While I liked Selene and Tristain, it was hard at times to really get to know them and dive deeper into their character and their relationship with one another. The time jumps and pacing of their PoV chapters made it hard to really connect with them, and I didn't really feel for their relationship as siblings and any feelings they had with each other. That felt like the case with a lot of the characters introduced where I wasn't getting a strong feel for a lot of the relational aspects, especially the romantic ones. This also affected how the plot twist at the end landed. Because I hadn't gotten a lot about the other brother, I wasn't as shocked (I was surprised) as I wanted to be or feel as betrayed by it all. Some of the characters didn't seem to have a lot of reflection about some of the situations, traumas, and other things happening to and around them in the story, which made it hard for me to emotionally connect with them. Also, at some points, it seemed like Selene had gotten her other arm back, or at least that's how the writing appeared in places. The political and warring upheaval in the background of the story didn't make a whole lot of sense to me; I wanted to understand how the conflicts were started and how it affected everything. Toward the end when the city is apparently on fire, I didn't feel that sense of urgency or really that it was a big deal because of how the characters in the following scenes were acting. With Tristain's sexuality, it kind of came out of nowhere and I would have liked some more layering of that before getting to Lucas and Vidan to make it feel more natural. In that same vein, I wanted more understanding of how he felt being a werewolf (did he always know, how does he feel about it, is he worried about being found out by the rest of the army, those kinds of things). I also was a bit confused on how someone became a werewolf (if it was hereditary or spread through cuts or blood). With the writing, while I really liked it in place and some of the dialogue was funny, I felt it lacked a lot of character expressions during pieces of dialogue. There would be some pieces of dialogue that seemed very intense but not having the characters' tone of voice or facial expressions made it hard to figure out the tone for the scene at times. Overall, this is a great book for people who like werewolves (which I do). It fits with October's vibe and is a great debut novel. I would have loved if this book at been longer :) 3.5 rounded up to 4
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
I thought this was a very good debut fantasy. Although there are werewolves, they aren’t treated in a stereotypical way. We see different types of these creatures out there. Just like people they are different from one another. Selene is the main protagonist we follow. We understand why she follows the Order of the Golden Sword so blindly until something makes her question their decisions and actions. Other characters are good too. Leo is a wonderful knight. Tristain is Selene’s brother who is trying to live with his curse. I found the ending was a little quick with some deaths dispatched too swiftly. But it leaves you wondering what’s next.
I really wanted to like this story because the writing isn't bad overall, but the characters and plot didn't draw me in. The flow is a bit disjointed and some of the details that are pointed out turn out to not be relevant.
I strongly suspect that for the right person, this would actually be a really good read. I don't seem to be the target audience.
I have read the 2nd edition, which is about 100 pages longer than the first edition and is the definitive edition of this book. Published March 20, 2023.
Rating 4,5 of 5 Stars (Rounded up to 5 Stars)
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath, Book #1 of the Swords of Dominion Series by NC Koussis is a book full of intrigue, morally gray characters and a world you don't want to live in.
A world full of conflicts and wars caused by sibling rivalry and upper class power games, a religion that puts itself above all else, and the problems of ordinary people that go along with it. A world full of werewolves, called demons by the Order of the Golden Sword.
In the middle of this world, you will meet Tristain and Selene, adoptive siblings separated by war. Tristain in a siege camp on the front lines of the war and Selene at home with her adoptive father and mother. And here begins their journey. A journey full of self-doubt, violence, inner conflict and moral questions that accompany the lives of Selene and Tristain.
We follow each of these perspectives and I have to admit that, for me, Selene is the shining star of this book. There is no doubt that I like Tristain, he is a good guy and I can relate to him, but Selene is much deeper as a character, her doubts about herself, her “family” and the world she lives in. You can feel with her, have a gnarly feeling in your gut, and overcome loss and anger with her. But does she really overcome these feelings? In her darkest moments, the Order of the Golden Sword is her pillar of strength, a refuge, a place where she can heal and become someone she never thought she could be. But is it all worth it, is the fanaticism of the Order really the right path? I guess you have to find out for yourself.
The story is fast-paced and doesn't leave much room to breathe, but I liked it a lot. I had to get used to the pace at first, but once I did, it was a pleasure to read.
If I had to pick one gripe I had with this book, it would be the world building. It is there, and later on you get hints of more overarching political issues and conflicts, and it all sounds intriguing to me, but overall I would have liked to get a little more information. I can only hope that book two will expand on this and give more insight into this dark, gritty world. But to be fair, you do learn some really interesting things in Epilogue II that I think are relevant to where this world is going.
All in all, The Sword of Mercy and Wrath was a fast-paced, engaging story with likeable characters, twists, and turns you are not prepared for, and an underlying fear that a character you love or hate might not make it. NC Koussis is merciless, and that's a good thing.
With this book, NC Koussis has made his way into my top authors, and every new book is an insta-buy for me. Also, book #2 of the Sword of Dominion series, “The Pyres of Vengeance” will be released on May 2nd, and you should pre-order it like I did. I can't wait to find out what happens next in this story.
(The prologue to "The Pyres of Vengeance" is at the end of this book. It's promising).
Disclaimer: ARC given for honest review The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is a thrilling, dark religious fantasy that really explores the extremity of religious zealotry in the setting of a world with werewolves. The background is explained in much detail, if a little too much at times, and sets the scene and societal values really well – the use of a new language to add new elements to common literary tropes as well as explore the fantasy component. While I personally don’t enjoy heavy religion themes, I still was able to enjoy the exploration of it in the novel. This was aided by the fact that the religion and Order joined by the main character, Selene, mirrors Christianity with an all-central and judgemental god, Sigur, despite its polytheistic nature. It almost felt reminiscent of the Crusades at times with the persecution of werewolves and cruel methods to reveal them. There are two main characters in the novel are a part of a relatively noble household, Tristain is the son and Selene is the guardian daughter of the family. Tristain is an unwilling soldier trying to land a job to save his family from an abusive father, then needing to cope with saving himself. Selene is his powerful ‘foster’ sister who faces great tragedy before joining a religious order to prevent similar tragedies from befalling others. NC Koussis creates an excellent sibling dynamic throughout the story that explored the complexities of siblings past getting along and the concept of betrayal. Although both are introduced as main characters, a majority of the book follows Selene which I personally was a little bummed about. Tristain’s perspective in the first chapters outlined a charming and captivating character that I empathised with as well as brilliant side characters – I was excited to explore his evolution more. However, Selene’s perspective was still extremely compelling and interesting through its exploration of the devotion of the religious society and cultish mentalities. However, I did find a few issues with reading the book – namely the confusing nature of the time skips. Between chapters and even some paragraph breaks there was issues with the setting that lead to a slightly disjointed read due to having to reread certain parts to aid understanding. Some parts had seemingly significant progressions that were skipped and would have been good to see fleshed out more. There were also some complications with the time scale of the novel, especially during Selene’s perspective, that made it hard to tell how much time had passed at any one point – if it had been days, weeks or months. Overall, not my usual choice in novel but a very enjoyable read none the less with compelling characters and interesting twists. Excited to see where the series will go from here!
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath is a character-driven fantasy novel designed to start a series. In this fantasy world, there doesn't appear to be much in the way of magic. Instead, there is a robust and deep religious world building element, with a ton of history and politics, not all of which has been fully revealed yet, and I look forward to seeing in future books.
The center of the lore spins around the existence of werewolves, often called demons in the book. In this world, a fanatical religious order with shades of the Spanish Inquisition hunts these abominations down. Overall, this group has a fantastic level of depth, where people in the group come for different reasons and end with different goals.
That said, most of the book focuses on two characters, Selene and Tristain. I won't spoil details of their backstory, but very quickly you learn their connected history and the events that set them at odds.
Pros: - The plot of this novel is fantastic, with events coming fast and heavy. Scenes turn on a dime in unexpected ways. - The characters motivations are typically clear, well constructed, and believable - While it's not the focus on this book, this book lays a foundation for a rich and deep world with a yet to be unveiled history. The second epilogue really sets up this interesting idea. - Overall, a very fun read that kept me turning the pages - Overall, the writing is great quality, though there are issues at times.
I want to be clear that while my cons sections will appear longer, it is only because it's harder say in a few words where I at times stumbled with this book.
Cons: - Perhaps the biggest concern I have is that at times it feels like the book is speedrunning itself. While it's great that scenes keep coming hard and fast, we often don't get time to digest what has happened to characters and how they will react from it before they are on to the next event occurs. This, at times, left me confused as to how I should interpret what the character saw/felt. Perhaps the most dire example of this is the scene where the two main characters finally met back up. This scene feels like it could have fleshed out much longer, or given us more insight into the individual characters - At times, I'm actually unsure if events are being described in an intentionally misleading way, or if maybe there is a small plot gap or editing slip up in the book. For instance, in the scene I mentioned above, it describes one character as being stabbed through the chest and bleeding out, but that same character is still alive in the next scene, and it's never explained how he's alive. - Related to this, there are multiple instances where a character is stabbed or otherwise seriously injured, but seems to recover immediately with no real explanation. A character is bleeding from the mouth, which almost always means fatal internal bleeding, then next thing you know they're running a marathon. - Related, there were more than a few typos, incorrect missing words. It's and independent book, so that's to be expected, but I found it more than in other books.
Final verdict:
This has all the makings of a promising epic fantasy series. Rather than a world build that leans on a magic system to do all the heavy lifting, this world uses religion, politics, and history in an exciting way, and I can't wait to see the next steps as I have already preordered book 2. If you want gritty grimdark with a heavy nod to politics, with more realism than magic, definitely check it out!
I have to start with Leon is my favourite character. His wit and humour had me chuckling throughout this book. The twist at the end was not what I was expecting to see. Overall, I enjoyed this book and I definitely want to continue the series. I did feel as though the pacing was a little off and the jumping around could be jarring at times. I think this will improve with the next book as Koussis finds his rhythm in future books. I look forward to seeing what he comes out with next.
Disclaimer: An ARC was given for free in exchange for an honest review
N. C. Koussis’ debut, The Sword of Mercy and Wrath, is an impressive first novel set in a gritty and realistic fantasy world. Its characters are carefully crafted, truly morally grey, and set their own unique mark in the genre. Its world is immersive, with accurate depictions of war that pull you into the story and don’t let go. If you like fantasy, the supernatural (did I forget to mention the WEREWOLVES), or political dramas, I highly recommend this book for you!
If you’re interested in my full, in-depth review featuring a Q&A from the author, you can access it here:
The Sword of Mercy and Wrath by NC Koussis is the first book in The Swords of Dominion series and was an impulse read for me. When I saw that the story consisted of werewolves and assassins, I knew I had to push it up the TBR. Overall, I am very happy I took a chance on this book. It is a solid start to what I feel could be a really fantastic series. I truly think that NC Koussis has something special here. The world he has crafted is a beautiful and twisted combination of fun and horrific, even despite its issues.
After an encounter with a werewolf that takes her family from her, she wants revenge, with the help of the Order of the Golden Sword she becomes an excellent hunter of werewolves. Now with her success, she has been put to the test on whether or not she can put aside her long-time feelings when the Lord Inquisitor asks her to hunt down her brother/childhood love Tristan since he is a werewolf now.
This was a great read! I loved the idea behind this book I thought it was very unique. The world-building was great in this book helping you connect with the setting a lot faster than you would have. I loved both Selene's and Tristan's characters they were both so unique and interesting to read about. We got a lot of backstories for both of them, and I loved the growth and character development that both of these characters go through in this book.
I loved how this book ended, we were left with no loose ends and on a hopeful note after everything that went on in this book. I really enjoyed the story from start to end, you definitely get hooked on the plot especially because of the suspense of whether they will capture Tristan and if he will find out who Selene has become. One thing that wasn't my favorite was that I did feel like the first two-thirds of the book went by quite slowly and then the last third of the book was sped up making the pacing of the story a bit uneven compared from start to end.
This is an amazing fantasy read with a bit of a mystery element to it. It's definitely a book I recommend checking out if you enjoy a unique twist on werewolves and love a very thoroughly wrapped-up story.
It is (I believe) the debut grimdark novel from the author's "Swords of Dominion" series. The main characters, Selene and Tristain, grew up together, but eventually separate, and the novel is in large part about the consequences of them meeting up once again (not a spoiler…that’s referenced in the Goodreads summary).
I would probably rate this book 3.5/5, but rounded up to 4. I did so because my biggest complaint is that I wish the story was longer ... I think there are more than a few plot points that could have benefitted from more detail (so I could be more connected to the characters and the why of the plot ... because the story feels a little too compact), as well as some additional copy editing.
In any event, as the other reviewers here have noted, the premise is intriguing and the story is a quick, engaging read. There are so many people I want to know more about (Leon!) and I can confidently recommend that you give this book a read. You'll finish it in no time!
3.5 rounded up to 4 for the worldbuilding! Lots of promise here, just wish it was longer to give time for things to breathe and characters to be deeper drawn.
Not a bad story in concept but I failed to grow invested in the characters. I found Tristain’s build up was interesting but the focus swaps more to Selene and I just didn’t enjoy her character or find her journey believable. The writing style was not for me as all. I’m sure this book has an audience, but I am not the right reader for this book sadly.