HEARTSTONE By Phillip Margolin
MY REVIEW TWO STARS**
I just finished Margolin's debut novel which was published three decades ago. The book was nominated by the Mystery Writers of America for an Edgar for best original paperback mystery of 1978.
THE PROLOGUE begins with an imminent deathbed confession to be delivered by a man named Willie Heartstone. The dying man wants to unburden his soul by telling the District Attorney "who killed Elaine Murray". The DA is Albert Caproni. He reflects on the Murray-Walters Case from so long ago, remembers his own role, and recalls that the outcome might have been different but for his own cowardice at the time.
PART TWO DEATH takes us back in time to the players who populated the town at the time of the killings, delves into the details of the infamous murder case in the winter of 1960. The book suffered from its "run-on" paragraphs with abrupt changes in POV. This was likely an editing problem but it was annoying and distracting.
The reader is introduced to a likeable and believable teenager (Elaine Murray). The narrative then shifts to the POV of two good-looking but no-good brothers, Billy and Bobby Coolidge. They are joined at the table in a hamburger joint by their friends Roger Hessey and Esther Freemont. Even before Billy pulls "The Old Equalizer" (his switchblade knife) and snaps it open under the table pretty much just for the hell of it, the reader knows that the brothers are pure trash, testosterone-driven teenage boys who are racists, despise the privileged kids in their school, and are perpetually spoiling for a fight.
There is an abrupt POV change to a nice kid named Richie Walters. He was smart, good in three sports, and was bound for an Ivy League School when he graduated. He was ready to ask Elaine Murray to go steady, and he was really nervous. The reader is provided sufficient background information on the two good kids, Elaine and Ritchie, to be repulsed and depressed by their brutal murders. Elaine suffers a fate worse than death which raises the level of horror for the reader.
We are briefly introduced to Ralph Pasante and Willie Heartstone, a couple of career criminals, certainly not teenagers, but rather adult sexual predators. The pair of misfits beat and rob a mark that they had spotted at the bar flashing a wallet with lots of cash.
By the time the actual assault occurs on (Lover's Lane), and the two innocent teenagers meet pure evil incarnate, I was already disgusted by the fact that the two kids were the only decent characters introduced in the book. Richie sustains something like twenty stab wounds and then post-mortem blunt trauma to the head, classic "overkill".
By PART III BLACK ARTS I realized that all of the men in this book were preoccupied with their overactive sex drives. We should exclude Caproni, but his failure to adhere to the ethics of his profession was despicable. We've got an investigating detective (Shindler) who is cold as ice, but obsessed with the Murray-Walters murders. He believes that the Coolidge boys were the vicious killers who brutally murdered Ritchie and did God-knows what with Elaine before she met her eventual death. Significantly, he believes that Esther is the missing piece in the puzzle. Years after he has been pulled off the case because of his psychotic behavior with witnesses, Shindler enlists the help of a psychiatrist to work with Esther to recover her lost memory of the event.
Between the well-meaning but idiotic Dr. Hollander and the manipulative sadistic Shindler you want to shoot yourself. Over a period of time Esther is hypnotized repeatedly, their goals ultimately achieved only with increased suggestibility from drugs and sexual exploitation and manipulation by Shindler. He had been sexually attracted to her from the get-go, but then found it convenient to use her dependence on him, seduce her, and then wield all of the influence that he needed to bring the case to the DA. Shindler was unfair, unethical, and like essentially all of the characters in the book, beyond contempt.
Meanwhile, after the passing of the years, Bobby Coolidge served in Vietnam, and returned home with memories of the war that haunted him. He enrolled in college, and met a beautiful, wealthy Canadian girl who was actually attracted to him. He is portrayed as a man of conscience who sees a way forward, and his struggle is poignant. He tells the rich girl who is infatuated with him “You know, this is the turning point in my life, Sarah. I won’t go back, ever again.” His brother Billy is in prison, and is obviously the sociopath that he appeared to be as a teenager.
By PART FOUR SHADOWS AND WHISPERS the power hungry DA Phillip Heider is thrilled to prosecute such a high profile case, and Shindler assured him that Esther would provide an independent recollection of the events. A struggling young attorney named Mark (with no criminal experience) is recruited by Sara, Bobby's love interest, to defend Bobby. He asks for $10,000 and she coughs up $3,000 from her own bank account. Then she meets with the man who loves her and is in deep sh--t with a murder charge bearing down on him. Sara is repulsed by his clinging and beaten down appearance. She doesn't want to ever see him again.
Meanwhile, the attorney Mark, is "love-sick" over his client's girlfriend Sara.
"He wanted to see Sarah. He thought about her constantly. He could picture her pale features and her long blond hair and wanted more and more to touch her."
Sara finally comes clean with Mark and tells him that $3,000 is all that she is going to invest in the pathetic defendent that she cannot imagine ever being attracted to in the first place. Mark can't help himself, and (how truly low can this book go?) plants a big passionate kiss on Sara's lips. She looks at him like he is some kind of varmint under her feet. I felt that he was a twisted unethical #@$%&* I told my partner that in all of the books that I have read on my kindle since 2014, that THIS book contains more profanity in my Kindle Notes than any other book, period.
PART FIVE INQUISITION But for the exception of the judge, everyone in the trial made me want to vomit. Margolin throws in misdeeds by the DA (Heider) and the cowardly Caproni, who wanted his job and advancement more than following his professional code of ethics. He did try to "throw a bone" to the defense, but let's just say that the prosecution of Bobby did not end well for the defendant. Concealing exculpatory evidence from the defense team did not help. Mark was so preoccupied with fantasizing about Bobby's girlfriend and how she would look naked that he wasn't even paying attention in a murder trial. I wasn't sure which character I hated the most, Shindler comes very close and garnered a note of "Despicable $%^&*--reading this story makes me feel dirty" in my Kindle Notes. The Defense Attorney should have been disbarred or shot.
By PART SIX HEARTSTONE we FINALLY arrive at the deathbed confession. I kept reading this cesspool of a book because I suspected SOME kind of a "gotcha moment" just couldn't figure out how it could play out. I started to stop reading it several times....I felt dirty like I needed a bath after reading it. The "twist" came... and I was indeed surprised. But it was not worth reading the book.
If this was the first Phillip Margolin novel I had read, I would never read anything he wrote again.