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212 pages, Hardcover
First published April 29, 2010
PLOT#11: A story moves backward as it moves forward [i.e. with backstory] What I really liked about this one is that backstory can be done quickly, a la #2 and #92, such as in Landau's following example: "A single on-screen event can demonstrate a long-term pattern: A man storms out on his wife in the midst of an argument, and she hurls a high-heeled shoe at him. The shoe hits the door, and a dozen heel marks are seen on the doors it slams shut."
CHARACTERS#28: Beware the Passive Protagonist. "The protagonist ultimately must make the clear choice to act." Related to this is #80: Burn your characters' bridges. "Limit their options so they remain trapped in the central dilemma [away from their ordinary world] and their only course is to keep forging into the unknown."
BE CONCISE#2 (start late) & #92 (make it shorter) are related: get rid of bloated beginnings of scenes and really all bloat period. It reminds me of Stephen King's quote, "Kill your darlings." The things you think are funniest need to be cut if they do not (1) advance the story, (2) "prepare the audience for what comes next," or (3) "reveal and deepen character."