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80 pages, Paperback
Published November 17, 1999
His scuttle body, thin as a mantisThese moments of perfection occur enough to justify reading the collection, but not enough to hold what it would seem, at first glance, to promise. Some of the poems, particularly those filled with anger and images of decay, fall apart when sound is brought forward. The seeming inattention to the sound of many of the poems deprives them of a great deal of power that may have been otherwise available to Hughes and her discerning eye. The sense that there should be more to many pieces, like "Tiger" damages their success--a poem about a tiger does not need to mean anything beyond an effective capturing of the animal,but lines like "It eats to become/Its father" imply a further theme that Hughes does not quite get around to exploring. This is most true in the animal poems, all of which seem to hint at an intent that is not realized, and in "Nothing". In this very intriguing poem, Hughes makes "nothing" an active participant. but them almost reaches to make a point when she says "Their breath//Is the breath I would give you when nothing/Nothing is a small planet." Hughes is constantly playing with the meanings behind the poems, but often fails to provide enough "stuff" to work with when trying to construct those ideas as a reader.
Was tied to his twig, and each one
Swung the other. We called to him.
His long, thin load raised itself
Expecting to be wrong.