Half good, half bad. This is a GYG I have some mild nostalgia for since I read it back in 4th Grade, and I remembered the endings and paths I took vividly. But that nostalgia can’t blind me and not allow me to feel the way I do about this book. For some positives, I’ll give the book credit with the actually magic centered storyline. It was fun and had some neat elements, solid ideas, and didn’t overstay its simple welcome. I quite liked the settings as well, with the underground dungeon in the magic arc and the abandoned factory in the… random shit happens arc. There’s some good endings here and there, a few great endings like the drowning in tears one and the “kid knees” joke. Bad Hare Day line drop was a genuine chuckle moment too. But the book falls flat when it comes to the other arc: the random-shit-balls-to-the-walls-chemical-factory-bullies-subscribe-to-undertime-slopper bullshit. It’s so random and has little to nothing to do with magic and has no identity aside from, “hey, that’s the half-factory arc!” Whilst there’s cool bits and some good endings, most endings in this arc and even some in the other arc are butt. So yeah, the arc is really random and resurrects the biggest issue I had with Escape from the Carnival of Horrors. The book also was clearly ghost written, because the paragraph’s are structured poorly—a whole issue in itself. Some paragraphs go on too long or should have been cut, usually the fault of poorly placed dialogue. I wouldn’t mind this if it didn’t happen like twenty times lol. Overall, a flat 5/10. Mid, but not bad and definitely not the worst GYG in the series.