I read the first volume of Stephen R. Donaldson’s Mordan’ts Need, the book called The Mirror of Her Dreams last year, after a false start several years ago. The concept, in its elevator pitch form, was really cool: In a fantasy a world that uses mirrors as magical implementations of summoning/transition, the masters of mirror magic see a sci-fi hero in a prophetic vision ginned up to save their world. When they go to pull this deadly armored giant from the mirror, however, they get a febrile and mentally fragile woman, and no one knows why. However, I ran into my first problem with Donaldson’s style right away, and that ultimately caused me to call it quits: the melodrama.
I am a fan of Donaldson’s writing; I’ve read the first Chronicles of Thomas Covenant three or four times through, and I’ve read the entire series--all ten books--through once. I’ve also read a portion of his Gap cycle, and some of his short fiction. You don’t spent literally hundreds of hours reading someone’s work unless you’re a fan, but at the same time, it becomes difficult to overlook shortcuts and over-used linguistic tics that creator takes. Mannerisms that were endearing begin to grate, and once you see the dead pixel, you can’t really unsee it. Donaldson’s weakness--though some may call it a stylistic strength--is the microscopic detail he goes into with his characters’ neurosis. It’ melodrama, plain and simple, and in the worlds Donaldson creates, often ties it’s indecisive melodrama, where characters can’t seem to think or act clearly, perhaps so Donaldson can really explore nuances of plot and setting, but I think also to artificially inflate the story length.
This indecisiveness is one of the strengths of the Covenant series, I think: the Lords can’t decide what to do, are ineffectual ditherers waiting for Lord Foul to come back, or not. Covenant shows up, doesn’t care what they think, and he acts: that is both his strength and his crime. It’s not until later in the series, when he begins to believe in and care for the Land, that he hesitates and becomes indecisive; that indecision nearly costs him everything. That indecision is also wht so many people dislike about Linden Avery, the subsequent Covenant series protagonist. ANd ever since then, it seems indecision plagues Donaldson’s characters in general.
Mordant’s Need is no different, and Terisa Morgan, the main character, is every bit as indecisive as King Joyse, Geraden, the Tor, Castellan Lebbick, Artagel--everyone is so concerned and caring and unsure that they don’t act. The only people acting are Master Eremis (bad guy) and King Festten (bad guy). Maybe there’s a meta-narrative theme there; I don’t care What it boils down to is King Joyse having an unbelivably, incredously obstuse plan to out-siege his secret enemies and leaving everything up to chance and uncertain prophecy, while everyone else agonizes about why the king is mad and not helping, and eventually what to do when he goes missing for a while.
In 600 pages, there is maybe 200 pages of plot: Terisa is jailed, Terisa escapes, some people die, Terisa meets the Domne’s family at Houseldon and tours the Cares of Mordant, eventually makes her way back to Orison Castle, is re-seiged, captured, freed/escapes, goes to war, visits her own world real quick, then beats the bad guy. I’m skipping a LOT of beats in there, but that’s because most of those beats are periods of indecision where characters churn over and over the same information, adding one or two new facts that ultimately always add up to the same sum: We know King Joyse has a plan, but we don’t know what it is, and we’re afraid to act and upend it, until our hands are forced, and then we act with as little force as possible. Oh, and rape threats. Terisa spends the entire book almost being raped by one bad guy or another. It gets predictable. She gets captured, Eremis or Lebbick threatens visceral sexual violence against her, and then she escapes just in the nick of time. That combined with the uncertainty makes for a plodding, almost but not quite boring story.
Taken as a whole, I think Mordant’s Need is an interesting story about prophecy and predetermination, about individual agency within a broader vision of the world; I htink the magic is cool and Donaldson used it to good effect...but I think the plot of the story is dreadfully overwrought. This “volume 2” could have been just an extra 150 pages attached to a (similarly edited down) Volume 1. The story’s central conceit: that no one knows whats going on, or what to do, is its greatest flaw, and it seems to go out of its way to ram that down the reader’s throat.
A Man Rides Through is probably my least-favorite Donaldson novel of the fifteen or so I’ve read. It lacks of the narrative edge of the Gap books, and the ambition of Covenant. It’s prosaic and very pretty at times, and asks some valid questions that fantasy, as a genre, is particularly well-suited to examine and attempt to answer. It just takes too long to get to its destination. I read it in about three weeks and change, and can’t really recommend it without recommending the previous book...which I do, with the corollary that the second book is weak, and the series as a whole is not his best. It only makes sense to visit Mordant, Cadwal and Alend if you are already a Donaldson fan and want more.