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320 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2010
[Matthew's] companion had come to stand next to Sarah's chair and pulled on her kapp strings with dirty fingers. "She's pretty, Matt. Let's have a little fun." He leaned close, and she could smell the lanky teenager's foul morning breath... The boy laughed and squeezed hard at the nape of her neck... "I bet I could loosen her up," [he] said, keeping a firm grip on Sarah's neck... The youth moved to kiss her and she jerked away, knocking over her chair and rising to press herself into the small corner of the stand. "Sarah, is it? Not shy, are you?" The boy was moving closer as she screamed while he laughed... [Then Grant comes to rescue her.]I felt immensely uncomfortable reading this scene. Is this a guy whom you would forgive as easily as that, especially after he commits arson and burns your father's crops later in the book? No, I don't think so.
"Are you Mr. Kemp?"This scene is from one page in the book. Almost all of the dialogue is written like this. I kid you not, there are 436 uses of the ellipsis in this book. FOUR HUNDRED THIRTY-SIX. ARGH.
"John... please. And you're Dr. Williams?"
"Yes. How is your wife doing?"
The young man shook his head and swallowed hard. "It's our first, you know. Frau [Mrs.] Knepp has been with her for hours... I don't know."
"Frau Knepp is the midwife?"
"Jah..."
"Well," Grant tried to encourage him. "First labors always take a while. It's normal."
"Jah. Please... will you come inside?"
Grant considered; Sarah would probably have a fit. "I'd better not," he said with regret. "I've got some calls."
"Just for a bit... I could do with some menfolk's company."
"Alright... for a few minutes."
"You think you'll turn my heart with your gentleness, but I'll not have it." [Side note, the dialogue is awful—who talks like this?!]Sarah, girl, have some self-worth! Also, if you don't like Grant's compliments and weird touching, then just say NO! It would make all your lives so much easier!
[Sarah] nodded as if in agreement. "Just talk to me; not everything has to be in anger." She took a deep breath. "Then, if you wish to kiss me, I will let you."
"You will kiss me when I desire it," he stated.
[A few pages later, after Sarah gets him in contact with his uncle and she gives him a haircut.]
[Matthew] couldn't look [Sarah] in the face, so she leaned near to him. "I promised a kiss if you would talk with me. I freely give it." He glanced up, and she kissed him on his cheek.