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Kindle Edition
First published December 10, 2009
This book starts out promising but ultimately, it is too short to make it a good read. A lot of events in this book are just too simple; as in, things are too simply written.
That said, with my opinions toward the writing, the erotic scenes do not feel erotic. In my opinions, there is a lack of passion between the characters and so the erotic scenes do not work for me. Because of that, the erotic scenes feel mechanical and read like a checklist of erotic things to do.
It's also not helpful when the dialogues are cheesy and cliché. The hero is just too black and white and a cardboard cutout. He's just too good to be true without any good development into his character. It's especially silly when he's dead set committing to her when he has only met her once. I guess this is a type of instalove, which is the bane of romance.
Overall, the fault of this book is that it is too short, which leads to a simple plot and underdeveloped characters, cascading into a not believable romance.