Setting: Nightfall Isle – the 4 winged by 2 branches palace – especially Trevan’s section; Harbor City – the port, the Ticklish Pig restaurant; Desalinator – the magical core, the tester pipes, the pipes that go throughout the island, etc; udrejhong (essentially a submarine); Menomon – undersea hidden city;
Characters:
Koranen – 7th brother: Pyromancer; 2 experiences with women before exiled led to burned hand marks on their breasts; he listens to what his brothers tell him about women and about sex – especially Trevon; his brothers gave him a magical illusion-woman, programed by the escort service, and can be touched, sound, and sight – but not taste or smell – so he could practice, and have some place for sexual release; but it is his turn for a bride; and Morganen, knowing the prophecy saying his brother of fire will find cooling in water, and in negotiation with the Menomons, requests 5 unmarried aquamancers to come to examine their Desalinator – both for assistance in getting it fully functional and secondly, so as to reconstruct in their city – potential destined brides for Kor – and he is very excited; though he is invested in getting to know them, not just to jump into bed with any of them;
Danau, Rank 10 Aquamancer of Menomon; 8 years celibate; she sucks heat from others, and is very icy – her tears, her sweat, her emotions result in ice; her first and only boyfriend – they progressed slowly, they tested her limits… but when actually had intercourse, his penis got frostbite – and Chana and Reuen delight in sharing this with everyone and calling her ice queen, and generally tormenting her and excluding her; Danua has instead devoted herself to the city and developing her powers;
Saber / Queen Kelly: moving forward in their plans to settle/build the island; Kelly and Amara – words like Panko game – back and forth;
Wolfer / Alys:
Dominor /Serina (pregnant) : Guardians of Koral-tai (nunnery on far side of the Eastern Ocean) and fountain on Nightfall; not seen much;
Evanor / Mariel (healer) / Mikor (her son): Mariel helping out with injuries;
Trevon / Mayor Amara: Zella enchants the royal cloak before she returns it to Amara – and when Amara puts it on, she is too nice, and the rest realize something’s wrong… so Morg despells the cloak; then when Zella ‘calls’ her, she pretends to be spelled, so as to catch Zella – then they exile her;
Rydan / Rora : she is in hiding – the Living Fountain… and they learn to extract the fountain – required for the Conclave of gods - she must die (and then they’ll bring her back to life – CPR); Rydan resisting this;
Morganen / Hope: Morganen is as much in this story as Kor – using his power to move things in for Hope, to locate the countess, to look back half a day to see who spell killed the countess, to locate and defeat a crazy mage who is out to kidnap Rora, to bringing Hope through the mirror;
Chana / Reuen / and Ama-ti: Menomon Aquamancers; flirt and blond / cousin and red&brown striped hair / an almost friend to Danau and blue hair; they are well equipped to help with the Desalinator – but they are anti Danua; Chana and Reuen destroy the velvet dress that foreseer Hope ‘sees’ Kor’s woman would see (at Kor’s suggestion, they are penalized with having to pay back x10 their world value of the dress); Kor dates each of them, but they react to his heat, so he knows they cannot be the one for him;
Zella Fin Rin: Amazai mage; she is the one that recognized Rora was a living fountain, and sent armed people to kidnap her – leading to Rora and Amara running away (landing on Nightfall); she doesn’t believe that Rora is dead, and is setting spells to try and get Amara to bring the sister to her;
Yarrin Del Ya: Mornai mage; crazier mage; he is after the living fountain… and he traces a dissecting spell on the countess, and compels her… and when she doesn’t bring Rora, he sends her overboard, and the sea water enacts the spell, ‘cutting’ her into 20 pieces (found by Morg, who is using a tracking spell to find her);
Lord Consus of Kairides: Councilor for Sea Commerce; an honest man of integrity; he accidently uncovers a magic mirror that spies on others – and it is tuned to those making plans against Nightfall; once he figures out what is going on, he feels compelled to warn the brothers – though it is against his country’s interest in seeing Nightfall fail; the Mornais are setting up a series of transport mirrors stretched across the ocean, with a plan to invade nightfall, kidnap Rora, kill Rydan (and Kelly), and transport Rora mirror by mirror back to their land – to wed their priest and take her fountain…
Memorable scenes: the gentleness of Kor – as he tries to get to know each of the women – including Danau, who keeps her distance physically and socially, due to her cold touch; and when they accidently fall through the faux wall into the control center of the Desalinator, not only do they find the information they need to restore the Desalinator, they learn of each other’s oppositeness – and Kor uses the skills he’s studied and practiced with his illusion woman, to first of test their physical compatibility with kisses and touches – and then to make love to her (first orally, then penetration)… and it works… and from their pleasure in physicality with each other they continue to grow as companions… and he is willing to return to Monemon with her, and to decide together once both obligations to the Desalinator of each city is completed and they decide where to live; plus they will stay in Nightfall until the Concovation;