Even a devil deserves the good love of a woman. . .
After avenging the murders of his family, Gareth Lowell headed west to put his demons to rest. Though several years have passed, he still carries the weight of his sins and doesn't believe he deserves to be loved--even by the beautiful Portia Townsend. He's known Portia since she was a young girl, and though she's blossomed into a voluptuous woman, he resists the deep longing she stirs in him.
When Portia realizes Gareth will never see her as anything more than the feisty, silly girl she once was, she decides to move on. Trouble is, Portia has once again gotten herself into a dangerous situation, and the only way out is to marry Gareth--if only temporarily. Turns out getting hitched was the easy part, while giving up a scorching passion is the last thing either are willing to admit. . .
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This book was just mediocre. Sometimes the dialogue was so stilted it was like a high school play. I felt nothing for either the hero Gareth or the heroine Portia. And her recovery from years of sexual abuse by her husband was too quick to be believable. I've read a short story by this author and liked that more.
The book was phenomenally written it was one of those books where I did not need to force myself to finish it , it had me hooked from beginning to end.
This was not one of the better books I've read. I didn't care about any of the characters although I did have a twinge of compassion for Gareth for a little bit. I found the settings to be distracting. It starts in Arizona, goes to New York with no sort of indication that it was going that way then it ends up in England and from there through a maze of places, it ends up in Constantinople where the majority of the story takes place. I didn't find the setting to be interesting at all and since I was so down on the setting, it was hard for me to get into the action of the story. Needless to say, the story ends in California via England...again.
The transition from one place to the next was so choppy. I'm reading along and then suddenly BAM! I'm somewhere else. It got kind of irritating and I found myself going back to re-read a couple of pages before the "trip" because I thought I'd missed something.
I think the story would have been more interesting if more time had been spent cultivating the relationships with Portia and Gareth and Portia and St Arles. They just appeared and it was like getting in on a story in the middle. I also think that knowing more about her life in England would have made this more interesting.
Now in all fairness, this is the first book of the series that I read and it is #6. Maybe I should have read the others before I read this one, I don't know. I might see if I can track down the first one and see if it makes a difference in how I perceived this one. Maybe they're all linked together.
Oh, this started out so promisingly. And within 10 chapters turned to crap. I'm still not sure how I managed to read my way through the dreck. The first book in this series was so good, particularly on an erotic note! And, it seems, Whiteside had given her all by its end. Each succeeding book has simply gotten worse and worse.
When we first meet Portia, she is presented as an intelligent, benevolently manipulative, brave, still childish character. Within a few chapters, she's the opposite. Stupid and, while able to recognize those in her family who have her best interests at heart, unable to realize the appropriate actions. As the years go by, we see nothing of her intelligence only of her ability to blend...whoopee. Not the person we initially met.
Just before Gareth and Portia do meet back up again, we discover just how stupid she is, again, when she leaves her allies in the lurch seemingly not even able to guess what her vindictive ex- is capable of doing to them. And, it just continues to go downhill. I confess I skimmed most of the supposedly erotic love scenes as they were too mechanical---Whiteside must have worked on just filling out the outline without putting in any passion.
Save up your reading pleasure...read something else.
The characters were "flat" and didn't seem to have the chemistry as you would expect. Female lead has had a crush on hero since she was a little girl. He treated her like a "kid" sister and was portrayed that way until the very end in my opinion. Story took place mostly in Turkey to make it more "exotic" local, but didn't do much for me.
I remember liking Whiteside's previous books, but if they're anything like this one I sure can't figure out why I did. The premise was great, but the execution was very poor. And the wording is often just bizarre.