I almost didn't download this as I didn't like the first book in the series, Slave, but the Kindle edition came up as free one day and I was honestly curious if there would be improvement since the first book or if it would feature another kind of alien. Obviously, I skipped books two and three, but I wasn't concerned about missing any plot points in a larger story arc.
So ... the major things I noted in this book:
1. The hero in this book is the same kind of cat-like alien that the hero was in the first book. I was actually OK with that. I figured the familiarity would help in not making the book seem so kinky as the first one seemed to me, and I was right. While I was still not turned on by the sex scenes, at least they didn't bother me. I actually mostly breezed right through them. Also, I realized that the entire series is probably mostly about these cat-like aliens, and probably every hero is from that same planet, which I thought was a nice premise for a science fiction series.
2. The writing actually seemed worse, not better. At first, I couldn't pinpoint why, and it wasn't until I finished the book that I realized what it was — it was a different point of view. The first book was written in the heroine's first person point of view, and this one was written in an omniscient third person point of view. This is not to say that first person POV is better than third person POV; in fact, it's usually the case that third person is better than first person. But it really depends on the author and the story being told, and for some reason, this book did not at all benefit by being told in the POV in which it was told.
Luckily for me, the book included excerpts from some of the other books in the series, and I could immediately tell why the third person POV wasn't working for this book. For instance, the first and second books are written in the heroines' first person POV — Captain Jacinth in the first one and the witch whose name I've forgotten in the second one — and much of the descriptive narration, how the words are arranged and what exactly is noticed, actually ADDS to the characters. There's a voice there, a personality, and it altogether makes for better, smoother, more entertaining reading. I can only assume that the author excels particularly when writing first person POV. With Outcast, though, there seems to be less personality, less of a voice, and it feels like too much telling and not enough showing. I don't know if that is all due to the POV, though, and I can understand why the author would decide to change over to a third person POV after doing the first two books in the first person POV; there are scenes in this book where the heroine isn't present, and she couldn't possibly be there to witness what goes on, like the hero's history or his side of the story.
Which leads me to another major thing I noted in this book...
3. There are far too many unnecessary scenes. I actually got to like the main characters — the hero and the heroine. I liked their back stories and their personalities, and I liked how they interacted with each other. I wanted this book to be solely about them, but there were scenes that had absolutely nothing to do with them, scenes where the characters from the previous books would be featured; they would discuss things that had nothing to do with the H/h, and they would have their own sex scenes. For anyone reading this book out of the blue, without having read the previous books, this would seem to come out of left field, and the big question would be, who the heck are these characters, and why are they being featured so much? Who cares about their sex scenes? This is a book about Bonnie and Lynx, not about Jack and Cat. This for me was my biggest complaint about the book.
The rest, however, I liked. I think I like the story even better than the first.