Off Limits

by Daniel May

What gratified Milo the most about playing his loud porn where Puck could theoretically hear it wasn’t the hope of annoying his brother.

A big part was how much the men on the screen resembled Puck. Big. Muscular. Not muscular in the hetero sense, with a focus on big arms and a chest, but a comprehensive muscling that meant thick thighs and a generous ass.

And yeah, the resemblance was why he watched it.

Off Limits is a contemporary brother-brother gay incest short featuring somnophilia and accidental aphrodisiacs.

Erotica themes: Incest, Dubious consent (dubcon)

Genres: M M Romance, Erotica, Contemporary, Romance, LGBT

ebook

First published January 10, 2023

About the author

Daniel May writes MM romance and erotica with a focus on dark contemporary, kink, and BDSM. Originally a lover of sci-fi and fantasy, he turned his sights on the erotic as a joke that went over surprisingly well.

Completed series: The Taste of Ink (rereleased as A Fresh Taste of Ink trilogy)
Ongoing series: Hanged Men

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Reviews

[Drusilla · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is smut, just two brotherly sex scenes and nothing more ... you've been warned!
I had to think for a few days about whether I wanted to write a review at all, because the 35 pages of this story are not really a story. If you want to be precise, there is neither a beginning nor an end or a dramatic structure, nor is anything explained.
So why do I rate it so highly? Honestly, I love Daniel May's writing style. I just can't help it, because even if this book rather frustrates me, I'm still fascinated.
And after thinking about it for two days now, I've come to the conclusion that this story simply doesn't want to be much more than it is. And I'm simply taking these few pages as an incentive to write the rest of the story myself in my head.
So, Daniel May, a thousand thanks for the visuals and for stimulating some synapses in my brain, which are now busy spinning a story around these two scenes.

[⋆｡°✮ Lucy InTheSky ✮°｡⋆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Was this hot or what??

Wow, wow, wow. One of the hottest sex scenes ever.
I really, really liked this short story, I liked both MMCs, their dynamic, how they looked, I liked everything, except



Did the cat eat the rest of the story? Because it's painfully missing!

🔴 Taboo - Brocest
🟡 Double non-con
🟣 Somnophilia
🟢 Rimming (really good)
🔵 No resolve, no ending, no epilogue
🌶️ Fantastic sex, spicy, hot; t/b

Milo and Puck are brothers who don't really get along, but somehow end up living together for a while.
Milo is the younger twinkish brother who's apparently not out to Puck, their sexualities are not really talked about or explained - and Puck is the older tall, muscular jock brother, who's not really hooking up much, but Puck has a very devoted admirer in Milo, who's been lusting after him in secret since he was 14 years old.

🔵 The first non-con happens when Puck is asleep and Milo really wants to take advantage of the situation, because it's probably the only and last time he's getting the chance to be intimate with Puck.

"Milo reached out and ran a hand over the smooth, perfect curve of Puck’s ass.
Yep, he thought. He was going to eat it."



Milo's making love to Puck's muscular ass was great. Sensual, delicious and really enjoyable.

🟢 The second non-con happens when Puck drinks a shake that has him pent up and ready to explode and since Milo is the one who's near by and has been getting on Puck's nerves for a while, well



Puck's brute force and not listening to Milo's protests when he was taking him was hot as fuck, I knew there was more to Puck than his gym and his shakes when he started remembering what it was like to have someone's ass available, when he was grabbing Milo with no end in sight.

Hot as fuck!

BUT

Why did it end with them having sex with absolutely no closure? No aftermath, no talks, nothing. I'd really like to know what happens with Puck and Milo after all this went down, because there's the issue of Milo's crush, the rimming Puck had no idea about, Milo's sexuality, their familial relationship, what happens after the sex???

So many things to cover, yet the book ended with

"At least, Puck thought, he had technically gotten a workout."

😐

[Lilly [Hiatus due to School] · Rating 4 out of 5]

Off Limits is a taboo novelette.. We have Milo, who is really into his gym rat brother Puck. One day, he decides to take advantage of his brother sleeping like the dead. Fast forward, Milo has moved out and stops by since his shower isn’t working. Puck returns from the gym super amped up, angry and aroused and sets his sights on his brother.

Overall, it’s a super hot incest short. I enjoyed it for what it was, but as with all these super short, darker stories, I just wish it was longer!

[Smutty Sully · Rating 4 out of 5]

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4 WTF, what a ride stars!

Well, that was a fun little ride. Also, possibly the longest drawn-out somnophilia scene I've read in a while! And not that cutesy pretending to be asleep type somno either! Full-on noncon passed out somno.

Then the POV switches and we get workout powder from China that makes the MC go ballistic and horny. I love these small glimpses into Daniel May's head.

Get it on Smashwords for $2.99! Erotica novella, brocest, dubcon, noncon somno, painful sex, forcing your brother to take it, spit as lube, scheming twink, somno rimming, accidental aphrodisiac.

This happened:

By age fourteen Milo had come to terms with the fact that he lusted after his brother. The time for shame had passed ages ago. The demeaning crush of years past had settled into an almost zen resignation, watching Puck bend over to clear the dishwasher and filing the mental image away to beat his dick to later.

When he walked into his brother’s room, Puck was already deeply unconscious.

He lay face down. Ass up. Well, that made Milo’s life easier. And put the final brick in his decision to be a morally bankrupt human being.

Milo was surprised by his balls. Not because they looked weird, or that he was surprised Puck had them... he just hadn’t held them in mind when he went into his brother’s room to eat his sleeping ass. He had wanted to see his brother’s cock.

With his friends, it was just a fun way to kill time. Anal took effort. Cleaning up, prepping, awkwardly timing things around the junk meals they binged together. Oral was easy, but Milo wasn’t a natural at deepthroating and had no desire to practice. He would rather just eat ass.

[vrstal · Rating 4 out of 5]

I’m constantly going to ask where the lube is. Otherwise tho, hot!

[Lisa · Rating 3 out of 5]

Taboo?! Why, hello there!!

I brought this short book for a bit of a subject change- and it certainly delivered in the naughty sense! But really, I like to read a bit more of a plot, about interesting characters and if it has some taboo content, then that’s great.

This was pretty much JUST sex and so was just ok.

[Lauri MissDysfunktion · Rating 4 out of 5]

Off limits is a short and not so sweet but smutty taboo brocest read

I’ve read Daniel before and this was a great short read

[Jo · Rating 3 out of 5]

This story needed lube. And a middle. And an end. But mostly LUBRICATION!!!

[Cara · Rating 1 out of 5]

There's nothing to this. Drab and disappointing. And the entire one bit of spit being lube for a rough s3x sessions tells me that maybe the author doesn't even know how that works.

[Clari · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars
Um, where’s the rest??? There HAS to be some closure please I have so many questions

Other than that this was some taboo smutty noncon fun BUT WHERES THE CLOSURE????

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

He lay face down. Ass up. Well, that made Milo’s life easier. And put the final brick in his decision to be a morally bankrupt human being.

I love Daniel May's mind. Two parts to the story. First, Milo having his way with sleeping Puck and then Puck going wild on Milo after taking a pre-workout, with a surprisingly sweet ending🤍

Milo dropped his head to rest against Puck’s shoulder, snuggling up a little closer.
Puck continued to run his fingers over his brother’s smaller body — so soft, so warm, so incredibly touchable even after all the sweat, even sticky with cum.

At least, Puck thought, he had technically gotten a workout.

Available on Smashwords.

[Anne]

While I have nothing against the taboo trope, something was missing. Maybe it was too short.