I keep having high hopes for Feehan's newest novels, only to be disappointed. While the GhostWalker series have been steps above the Dark series for the past several years, I felt this one was a step backwards.
The story revolves around Kane and Rose. They'd been part of Whitney's breeding program and then escaped, but somehow got separated--and no, Feehan never told us how that happened... Also, I would have liked to see their first meeting, in flashbacks or something, instead of the vague descriptions given later.
Well, Kane and Rose meet up again, but they go on the run as they try to protect her unborn baby. Not only did this go into some detail about the birthing-process, the rest of the novel had something to do with her drippy nursing breasts almost every other page. Which was a turn-off for me the entire time (while it is natural, I read romance for fun! Sheesh).
Also, Kane bugged me for the first half, and then both characters annoyed me the rest of the way through. First, Kane: every time he thought about Rose, he'd freak out ("He could poke a bullet through his own skin" or "He could sew his own wounds in the field" but the thought of child labor/vulnerability to Rose freaked him out). It said that kind of thing A LOT. Except then we learn that he was already kind of in love with her before he let Whitney pair them....so, um, okay, he has no reason to freak out.
Plus, every time Rose -did- threaten to bail, he didn't really react. That bugged.
Most of the novel spent time on eyes, breast milk, abstract fear, and wordy exposition. I ended up skipping paragraphs at first, and then entire pages, since it would take over a page for Rose to respond to simple questions (UGH).
The last 1/4 of the book, I was more excited about Javier and Rhianna than I was about Kane and Rose, which is just sad. Yeah, I'll read the next book because of it, but I wanted this to be exciting! I was sadly, sadly disappointed.
Oh. The first half of the book was them running and hiding out with some romance... The second half was a bunch of action, minus the romance (so no climax really for the romance plot), but a lot of the action was jumped into randomly. Feehan has done a lot of research on military strategy and stuff, but needs to re-analyze her stance on the romance genre, because it isn't balanced. No emotional tugs this entire story--except for secondary characters. I like romance that makes me feel empathy, not apathy! That's for thrillers and mysteries.
And it seems Feehan has also grown a penchant for long-lost-loves. The GhostWalker book before this (Jamie and Mack's story) had them break up before we even got to page one, but we never saw it... Then the newest Leopard book had the same thing... And this one... And Javier/Rhianna, which has yet to come..
While I do love that kind of story, she needs to show it. I feel like I'm missing a vital part of the story if I don't know how the relationship ended in the first place, first-hand.
(Yes, this is long, but I've kept it pent up for a while.)