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A Magic Evermore: Book 1 in the Mirri Series
A mystical land ruled by evil . . . Few creatures who remember how life used to be . . . And a young girl flung into this world of tyranny and oppression.
The magical world of Althord Loch is crumbling . . . at the hands of the evil Panthera. Fifteen-year-old Mirri is struggling with the guilt of her father's death, when she lands in front of a twisted staircase, in a land of forbidden magic.
With the help of an orphaned elf and lonely Loofa, Mirri accepts her fate. Together, these misfits must change the course of this world—or die trying.
Walking over rushing waters and battling Fangars are only parts of the danger that lies ahead. Join Mirri on the adventure of a lifetime—an adventure that teaches Mirri it’s not how much power you hold—it’s how much you believe in yourself.
The magical world of Althord Loch is crumbling . . . at the hands of the evil Panthera. Fifteen-year-old Mirri is struggling with the guilt of her father's death, when she lands in front of a twisted staircase, in a land of forbidden magic.
With the help of an orphaned elf and lonely Loofa, Mirri accepts her fate. Together, these misfits must change the course of this world—or die trying.
Walking over rushing waters and battling Fangars are only parts of the danger that lies ahead. Join Mirri on the adventure of a lifetime—an adventure that teaches Mirri it’s not how much power you hold—it’s how much you believe in yourself.
- GenresFantasy
273 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 16, 2023
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January 24, 2024
Probably 3 ⭐️’s for me but rounding up because this is YA and maybe I am just not the target audience. Writing at times was juvenile/overly simple (using a characters name several times in a row for back to back sentences or using words like “uh” or “hmm” after full sentences) - but again: YA. Story was cute and adventurous and followed a 15y girl who was swept away into a magical world where she meets a few friends and goes on a quest. A few good twists that I didn’t initially see coming until right before they happened. Will probably read book 2!
October 19, 2023
*I received a free, digital, reading copy of this book from the publisher via Michelle Massie. My review is 100% my own and reflects my honest opinion about this book.*
I rated this book 3 out of 5 stars.
A Magic Evermore is the first book in a fantasy/adventure series that follows the FMC 15 year old Mirri Langley on her journey through a magical world that she was pulled in to through a journal given to her by a family friend.
I did enjoy this book. For the most part it was easy to follow along and I found the characters lovely and enjoyable. I didn’t exactly know what to expect given that it was marketed as YA (young adult). I would even consider this MG (middle grade). I felt like I would be able to give this to my 4th grader to read and he would likely be able to follow along in the world building and plot.
I am historically more so a dark fantasy girlie so I definitely had to switch my mindset while reading.
Things I liked:
I enjoyed the plot of this book. The storyline was easy to follow. As I said before, I really enjoyed the characters. The descriptions of the various types of characters or the design of their rugs and things like that were helpful in getting you INTO the story. I enjoyed the ending the most, that is where I found the most action packed adventure and where my attention stayed hooked.
Things I didn’t like so much:
While yes, the storyline was easy to follow, there were times that I had to reread a description or go back a couple paragraphs to remember where they were at in the forest and whatnot. I also felt like the world building could have been a little better in the beginning of the story. I can’t pinpoint exactly what about it could have been better but I found myself slightly confused at times.
Final Thoughts:
Good read. I really enjoyed the characters and the plot. Feels like a good family book that could easily become a really great series.
I rated this book 3 out of 5 stars.
A Magic Evermore is the first book in a fantasy/adventure series that follows the FMC 15 year old Mirri Langley on her journey through a magical world that she was pulled in to through a journal given to her by a family friend.
I did enjoy this book. For the most part it was easy to follow along and I found the characters lovely and enjoyable. I didn’t exactly know what to expect given that it was marketed as YA (young adult). I would even consider this MG (middle grade). I felt like I would be able to give this to my 4th grader to read and he would likely be able to follow along in the world building and plot.
I am historically more so a dark fantasy girlie so I definitely had to switch my mindset while reading.
Things I liked:
I enjoyed the plot of this book. The storyline was easy to follow. As I said before, I really enjoyed the characters. The descriptions of the various types of characters or the design of their rugs and things like that were helpful in getting you INTO the story. I enjoyed the ending the most, that is where I found the most action packed adventure and where my attention stayed hooked.
Things I didn’t like so much:
While yes, the storyline was easy to follow, there were times that I had to reread a description or go back a couple paragraphs to remember where they were at in the forest and whatnot. I also felt like the world building could have been a little better in the beginning of the story. I can’t pinpoint exactly what about it could have been better but I found myself slightly confused at times.
Final Thoughts:
Good read. I really enjoyed the characters and the plot. Feels like a good family book that could easily become a really great series.
September 19, 2023
📕BUNNY’S🐰 ARC REVIEW 📕
Book rating: 4 / 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This book is catered for a younger audience, I would say between the ages of 11-14. It has an insane amount of details that give you a vivid world-building. I loved how in-depth the author was when it came to even the smallest detail about the world around our FMC. A refreshing read, it is very light, fun, and has a creative plot twist. For the younger audiences, I can see this being a huge hit! As an adult reading it, it came off as refreshing and a fun mini-read. It is a fast-paced book and dives straight into the action, which I found to be a nice balance between the author going in-depth with the world-building.
Our FMC is swept away into a magical journal that becomes the key to setting a new fantasy world free. And she alone holds that key. I love that her character and confidence grow little by little and we get to see how much of a dramatic change that is on her. I love that this book makes a great story to tell children who are in their magic era. My daughter included, I was telling her small bits and pieces and she was out of this world happy and excited! There is just something about finding a book that creates and sends young minds into a realm of possibilities and wonders.
Come on a breathtaking adventure and find out if she has what it takes to save them! Definitely will read book 2.
Received as an arc and all opinions are truthful and solely my own. Thank you for the opportunity 🖤
With love,
Bunny the arc reader / book w h o r e reporting for duty, ready to spread pages for you. 🫡👹
Book rating: 4 / 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This book is catered for a younger audience, I would say between the ages of 11-14. It has an insane amount of details that give you a vivid world-building. I loved how in-depth the author was when it came to even the smallest detail about the world around our FMC. A refreshing read, it is very light, fun, and has a creative plot twist. For the younger audiences, I can see this being a huge hit! As an adult reading it, it came off as refreshing and a fun mini-read. It is a fast-paced book and dives straight into the action, which I found to be a nice balance between the author going in-depth with the world-building.
Our FMC is swept away into a magical journal that becomes the key to setting a new fantasy world free. And she alone holds that key. I love that her character and confidence grow little by little and we get to see how much of a dramatic change that is on her. I love that this book makes a great story to tell children who are in their magic era. My daughter included, I was telling her small bits and pieces and she was out of this world happy and excited! There is just something about finding a book that creates and sends young minds into a realm of possibilities and wonders.
Come on a breathtaking adventure and find out if she has what it takes to save them! Definitely will read book 2.
Received as an arc and all opinions are truthful and solely my own. Thank you for the opportunity 🖤
With love,
Bunny the arc reader / book w h o r e reporting for duty, ready to spread pages for you. 🫡👹
May 5, 2024
*4.5 rounded to 5 stars on sites that don't accept halves*
A Magic Evermore is such a fun story that reminded me of an Alice in Wonderland type of chaos with a touch of Narnia. Reluctant heroes rise, quests abound, strange creatures greet you at every turn, fantasy foods that you can taste, and a unique world to explore!
I loved the emphasis on storytelling that Mirri and her journal portray throughout the story. Smidge and Jinx were equally lovable characters and made the adventure a delight to read. This story is everything I expect from a YA fantasy quest. It is a fast-paced quest, and Mirri is 15, so I would recommend it to the younger side of YA, though I thoroughly enjoyed every moment with Mirri, Smidge, and Jinx!
I can't wait to start the next book!
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A Magic Evermore is such a fun story that reminded me of an Alice in Wonderland type of chaos with a touch of Narnia. Reluctant heroes rise, quests abound, strange creatures greet you at every turn, fantasy foods that you can taste, and a unique world to explore!
I loved the emphasis on storytelling that Mirri and her journal portray throughout the story. Smidge and Jinx were equally lovable characters and made the adventure a delight to read. This story is everything I expect from a YA fantasy quest. It is a fast-paced quest, and Mirri is 15, so I would recommend it to the younger side of YA, though I thoroughly enjoyed every moment with Mirri, Smidge, and Jinx!
I can't wait to start the next book!
Content/trigger notices for young readers:
September 12, 2023
I can’t even… this book was sooooo good!!
1- Detailed vivid descriptions of this other world and it’s creatures without overwhelming the story itself.
2- Cool otherworldly names that you could still pronounce.
3- Likable characters and great dialogue.
4- Engages so many different emotions. Awesome twists!
Mirri goes to another world quite accidentally. Begins a journey to help the beings there save their world and restore a more peaceful way of life where they do not have to be ruled by a tyrant, Amara of the Panthera. But the panthera have many powers and the others are forbidden to use their magic. She faces many obstacles, but has some awesome sidekicks. They follow a journal and have many adventures while trying to fix what the panthera ruined. - This book is amazing and I highly recommend it!
1- Detailed vivid descriptions of this other world and it’s creatures without overwhelming the story itself.
2- Cool otherworldly names that you could still pronounce.
3- Likable characters and great dialogue.
4- Engages so many different emotions. Awesome twists!
Mirri goes to another world quite accidentally. Begins a journey to help the beings there save their world and restore a more peaceful way of life where they do not have to be ruled by a tyrant, Amara of the Panthera. But the panthera have many powers and the others are forbidden to use their magic. She faces many obstacles, but has some awesome sidekicks. They follow a journal and have many adventures while trying to fix what the panthera ruined. - This book is amazing and I highly recommend it!
August 28, 2023
This is the most amazing world building adventure of a young girl trying to find herself and get over the death of her father. When she gets a birthday present from Rose her world is turned upside down. She falls into a world with creatures of all sizes and shapes and Colors. The scenery around her is described with such detail you can picture it in your mind. I wish I was a better artist cause I would be going wild drawing these characters. I absolutely love the main character and her two companions. They are so lively and adorable. To imagine such little creatures being so brave and loyal. Wow, I loved this debut novel and I can't wait to see what is next. Go get this book today. It is so worth it!!!
September 23, 2023
This is a YA Fantasy Adventure book about a young girl dealing with grief. She is swept away to a fantasyland in need of saving, and in the process, learns to forgive herself.
I was fortunate to stumble upon this author looking for Arc reviews! I enjoyed the book. I would say it would be an appropriate reading level for my 4th grade son. The characters are likable and relatable. There are classic mythical creatures as well as some that I believe the author created from her own imagination. The book needs some minor editing in a few places, but it didn’t bother me enough to stop me from enjoying the book. I am adding this book to one’s that I will read with both of my children, as I think that they would enjoy it as well! I look forward to seeing this series develop!
I was fortunate to stumble upon this author looking for Arc reviews! I enjoyed the book. I would say it would be an appropriate reading level for my 4th grade son. The characters are likable and relatable. There are classic mythical creatures as well as some that I believe the author created from her own imagination. The book needs some minor editing in a few places, but it didn’t bother me enough to stop me from enjoying the book. I am adding this book to one’s that I will read with both of my children, as I think that they would enjoy it as well! I look forward to seeing this series develop!
December 16, 2023
Oh my gosh. I've been in a slump since reading Iron Flame, and it took me awhile to really get into this, but once I did, holy goodness. Reading slump is over.
This is such a wonderful story of found family, self forgiveness, faith, and perseverance. The more I read, the faster I read because I was desperate to find out how it ended.
It doesn't end on a cliffhanger, but it does end in a way that makes you subtly ache to start the second book.
This was a wonderfully sweet story, and exactly what I needed. Thank you, Michelle, for writing this.
I highly recommend this to everyone wanting a nice, wholesome fantasy read.
This is such a wonderful story of found family, self forgiveness, faith, and perseverance. The more I read, the faster I read because I was desperate to find out how it ended.
It doesn't end on a cliffhanger, but it does end in a way that makes you subtly ache to start the second book.
This was a wonderfully sweet story, and exactly what I needed. Thank you, Michelle, for writing this.
I highly recommend this to everyone wanting a nice, wholesome fantasy read.
August 2, 2023
Mirri, an average 15 year old that recently lost her dad, gets transported to a magical land. When she arrives she learns that they have been taken over by an evil overlord and the rightful leader has been jailed. The inhabitants believe Mirri to be the chosen one. Only she can save them.
This book was so enjoyable. The characters that Mirri met along her journey were great. The story moved along so fast. It was quite an adventure that Mirri went on. I can't wait to see what comes next in this series.
This book was so enjoyable. The characters that Mirri met along her journey were great. The story moved along so fast. It was quite an adventure that Mirri went on. I can't wait to see what comes next in this series.
December 30, 2023
Had the absolute pleasure of meeting Michelle at my local library for Indie Author Day and learning about this series. This book is fantastic. I love the imagery, all explained so clearly it is as if I am in the world. Mirri is such a strong female character, brave and inspiring. I love how she grows more confident as the book progresses. Her relationship with Smidge and Jinx is so heartwarming. Like, she fell into this world and has no idea wtf is happening, yet she will not let her new found friends down. I cannot wait to dive into the second book before it releases Jan 15th!
January 4, 2024
This book is perfect for a younger audience.
I intend to put it on my daughter’s kindle for her to read.
For me it was a bit hard to get through.
While the characters and story line are amazing, it can be a bit hard to follow at times, I found myself having to go back to reread something multiple times.
The characters are easy to fall in love with, and it gives very much a Lion the witch and the wardrobe vibe.
It’s a cute fantasy.
I intend to put it on my daughter’s kindle for her to read.
For me it was a bit hard to get through.
While the characters and story line are amazing, it can be a bit hard to follow at times, I found myself having to go back to reread something multiple times.
The characters are easy to fall in love with, and it gives very much a Lion the witch and the wardrobe vibe.
It’s a cute fantasy.
December 22, 2023
Jump into a magical world with Mirri as she quiet literally stumbles her way through this new magical land. She has to learn to have an open mind and an open heart. Along with trusting her own instincts and trusting in some very unusual beings. Story of healing through and through, for more than one of the characters. Absolutely adored.
September 23, 2023
A page turner from the beginning!
A Magic Evermore is a wonderfully written story that keeps you hooked not wanting to put the book down. I loved the story line and characters. I can’t wait for the next book in the series.
A Magic Evermore is a wonderfully written story that keeps you hooked not wanting to put the book down. I loved the story line and characters. I can’t wait for the next book in the series.
December 18, 2023
I enjoyed the book. However, it feels like it’s written for a kid and I’m not big on 3rd pov. The story was easy to follow and was interesting to read. I didn’t expect the ending tho. Can’t wait to read the second one.
February 1, 2024
This was an amazing book. The world building and attention to detail is stunning. The characters are so rich, bold, and vibrant. I could practical see them jumping of the page. The plot had such a charming mix of up, downs, action, and rest. That at the end I was still buzzy.
May 27, 2025
This story was magical! Mirri's growth and maturity at the end were great. This is a true book about overcoming obstacles, dealing with the loss of someone or something, and knowing when to forgive yourself.
September 19, 2023
This is definitely a YA, written for 12 to 15 years. I enjoyed it as a light, easy, fun read. I would read the next one for the same reason.
September 23, 2023
This truly is such a great story for fantasy lovers of all ages.
October 9, 2023
The magic systems in this book is something I have never read. I loved it. The character building us great and the twist was something I never seen coming.
January 24, 2024
Loved it!! 🖤
July 11, 2025
Such a great story. I am glad it is going to be a series because I want to follow these characters longer!
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