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Olivia Enslaved
Following an acrimonious divorce from her unfaithful husband Jack, the beautiful twenty-six year old Olivia Johnson becomes a powerful advocate for woman’s equality. In the process, she makes an enemy of the millionaire womanizer, Sir Malcolm Bradbury. Humiliated by her public attacks, he wreaks his revenge by kidnapping young woman. After being sexually used by his henchmen, she’s taken to Malcolm’s mansion where she’s branded with his mark, pierced, ringed and subjected to weeks of intense slave training. She’s taught unquestioned obedience and absolute submission, her body and mind conditioned to accept her subjugation until she is no longer able or willing to resist the touch of her master’s hand or the fiery bite of leather on her flesh. Even worse, she can do nothing to squelch the intense slave-heat that fills her belly. Malcolm will not stop her training until she’s become the ultimate pleasure slave, at which point she’ll be ready to sell to her new master. Dressed in a fine gown, Olivia attends a dinner-party, where she subjected to the naked and humiliating scrutiny of the master’s guests. Spilled wine earns her a brutal beating, which sexually inflames the men and she’s forced to submit to their multiple ravagings. However, when she sees true desire in the eyes of her rapist Alexander DeVere, she knows that this is one man to whom she would willingly give herself. She learns that DeVere has offered to buy her from Malcolm, and this inspires a tiny flicker of hope. However, when she’s locked in a wooden truck and shipped off, she’s horrified to discover that she’s been sent to her ex-husband and his lover, Lady Honoria. For one week, she’ll be their slave. But will that week be the end of the humiliating surrender to Jack? Olivia’s fate remains in the hands of Malcolm Bradbury. Will he sell her to her ex, to DeVere, or keep her as his own passion slave?
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First published April 6, 2010
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December 29, 2013
I just saw that it was on my kindle and that I was at 91%. Wow, I thought, when did that happened? I don't even remember reading this book, or what it was about. What does it say about a book that I don't even remember anything about, neither reading nor buying?
I decided to see if I had any notes in it, that could jog my memory. I found only two; one at about 30% and the other 70%. The first one said What the fuck is love juice? and the second said Holy shit this book is repetitive, but at least she has plenty of love juice left.
I just used the ''search'' bottom on my kindle, to see what was the deal with the love juices. IT WAS EVERYWHERE, AND ALL THE TIME. Love juices were, soaking, boiling and scalding, dripping, foaming, cascading, showering down, spewing, jetting, exploding, pouring, oozing, spurting, spraying down, thundering (really?), bursting, crashing down and trickling. Good Lawd!
Writing seemed very juvenile. Like it was written by a kid or something. The description of the sex scenes were just odd. If you decide to write erotica USE GROWNUP WORDS!!! Or don't write at all. It's written by a man, but sounded like it was written by an old hardcore prude. Love juice, and feelings in their bellies, down there, buried invaders. WTF is this? I can't believe I paid 5.74$ for this book. Was I drinking that day?
The book is pretty long and full of sex, but there is not a single c@ck or a pu$$y in it :-D. But there is a lot of special places, lady bits, members and invaders/intruders.
I'm so glad my obsession with ''buy with 1-click'' bottom is over, no more stupid purchases.
I decided to see if I had any notes in it, that could jog my memory. I found only two; one at about 30% and the other 70%. The first one said What the fuck is love juice? and the second said Holy shit this book is repetitive, but at least she has plenty of love juice left.
I just used the ''search'' bottom on my kindle, to see what was the deal with the love juices. IT WAS EVERYWHERE, AND ALL THE TIME. Love juices were, soaking, boiling and scalding, dripping, foaming, cascading, showering down, spewing, jetting, exploding, pouring, oozing, spurting, spraying down, thundering (really?), bursting, crashing down and trickling. Good Lawd!
Writing seemed very juvenile. Like it was written by a kid or something. The description of the sex scenes were just odd. If you decide to write erotica USE GROWNUP WORDS!!! Or don't write at all. It's written by a man, but sounded like it was written by an old hardcore prude. Love juice, and feelings in their bellies, down there, buried invaders. WTF is this? I can't believe I paid 5.74$ for this book. Was I drinking that day?
The book is pretty long and full of sex, but there is not a single c@ck or a pu$$y in it :-D. But there is a lot of special places, lady bits, members and invaders/intruders.
I'm so glad my obsession with ''buy with 1-click'' bottom is over, no more stupid purchases.
June 17, 2011
A quick review. I hope to put a full review up later.
Overall it was a really good read, except for a couple of things that kind of annoyed me.
*The use of 'love jucies.' There was an over use of this phrase and every time I read it, I couldn't help but be pulled out of the story. I even began contemplating using the phrase as a drinking game, except I didn't want to get taht sloshed that I dropped my Kindle and broke it.
*The ending was really really abrupt. Fine, I'm not expecting every loose end to be wrapped up in a bow or for there to be a fluffy HEA. These type of books aren't really that type of book, yet after what the heroine goes through at the hands of her ex-husband and the letter to her Master, it seemed as though the author was desperate to just close it all off and be done with it. It also smacked of "sequal". There was no conclusion to this part of the story. At least with the first book in The Milk Bitch Trilogy, it could have stood as a stand alone book. This one didn't.
Overall, I did like this book better than The Milk Bitch Trilogy and it would have been a five star if it weren't for the above issues. While The Milk Bitch Trilogy seemed to be doing its best to shock or to meet a certain criteria for what to do to the heroine next, this book always came back to Olivia, the main character in the book. It was about her and I liked that. Also the lack of over complecating what Olivia was subjected to to only about half a dozen different things was good. There were a few things thrown in for good measure that strayed from the tried and tested and all sat well within the narrative.
Overall it was a really good read, except for a couple of things that kind of annoyed me.
*The use of 'love jucies.' There was an over use of this phrase and every time I read it, I couldn't help but be pulled out of the story. I even began contemplating using the phrase as a drinking game, except I didn't want to get taht sloshed that I dropped my Kindle and broke it.
*The ending was really really abrupt. Fine, I'm not expecting every loose end to be wrapped up in a bow or for there to be a fluffy HEA. These type of books aren't really that type of book, yet after what the heroine goes through at the hands of her ex-husband and the letter to her Master, it seemed as though the author was desperate to just close it all off and be done with it. It also smacked of "sequal". There was no conclusion to this part of the story. At least with the first book in The Milk Bitch Trilogy, it could have stood as a stand alone book. This one didn't.
Overall, I did like this book better than The Milk Bitch Trilogy and it would have been a five star if it weren't for the above issues. While The Milk Bitch Trilogy seemed to be doing its best to shock or to meet a certain criteria for what to do to the heroine next, this book always came back to Olivia, the main character in the book. It was about her and I liked that. Also the lack of over complecating what Olivia was subjected to to only about half a dozen different things was good. There were a few things thrown in for good measure that strayed from the tried and tested and all sat well within the narrative.
April 24, 2012
Again, I *want* non-consent. I am not offended by non-consent or bdsm. I am offended by awful writing.
This book is so repetitive, it is ludicrous. Olivia "recognizes her utter submission" about once every page. What is she, a goldfish?
There's barely any sex in the book, but all the punishments Olivia endures begin to run together after a while. Five really interesting and unique scenes would have been a lot better than 40 nearly-identical ones.
Olivia's always described as "lithe brunette", which is annoying for trying to empathize with her -- women just don't think of themselves in terms of their appearance. It is a book that is obviously written by a man, but he is trying to take the female perspective and failing -- he might have been better off just writing it from the man's perspective instead. If you want a well-written bdsm book from a male perspective, try A Good Student.
As always, I appreciate any suggestions in the comments.
This book is so repetitive, it is ludicrous. Olivia "recognizes her utter submission" about once every page. What is she, a goldfish?
There's barely any sex in the book, but all the punishments Olivia endures begin to run together after a while. Five really interesting and unique scenes would have been a lot better than 40 nearly-identical ones.
Olivia's always described as "lithe brunette", which is annoying for trying to empathize with her -- women just don't think of themselves in terms of their appearance. It is a book that is obviously written by a man, but he is trying to take the female perspective and failing -- he might have been better off just writing it from the man's perspective instead. If you want a well-written bdsm book from a male perspective, try A Good Student.
As always, I appreciate any suggestions in the comments.
August 28, 2013
I read this book to the end but do not really know why, probably I harboured the hope that justice would somehow prevail - it did not! The story is brutal and depressing.
Because of the work Olivia does with mistreated women she is kidnapped by a vicious and vindictive man. Every kind of cruelty, pain and humiliation is heaped upon her. She is sold, eventually ending up in the hands of her sadistic, cheating ex-husband and his equally vile new ladylove, in their hands the brutality continues. All in all a pitiless and grim read - thoroughly unpleasant.
Because of the work Olivia does with mistreated women she is kidnapped by a vicious and vindictive man. Every kind of cruelty, pain and humiliation is heaped upon her. She is sold, eventually ending up in the hands of her sadistic, cheating ex-husband and his equally vile new ladylove, in their hands the brutality continues. All in all a pitiless and grim read - thoroughly unpleasant.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 20, 2013
I really like non consent or dubious consent books, which is why I was interested in this story. At first I thought the story had a great potential. The plot is believable, unfortunately it's delivery was not as good.
While the first part was great (1/4 of the book), the rest became predictable and repetitive. Too many inner realizations, too many oh my god I'm helpless... All the repetitive scenes and the lack of imagination in the sex scenes, forced me to skip pages.
The book would have been much better if it was much shorter.
While the first part was great (1/4 of the book), the rest became predictable and repetitive. Too many inner realizations, too many oh my god I'm helpless... All the repetitive scenes and the lack of imagination in the sex scenes, forced me to skip pages.
The book would have been much better if it was much shorter.
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