Incubus Master: Captured 1

Incubus Master: Captured #1

by Yamila Abraham, Barbara Apostolico (Illustrator)

The gruff demon Scor maintains a tenuous position in the human settlement that’s guarded by incubi. He intended on killing their leader Figaru with his lover Rowan. It was only when Rowan revealed he would devastate many others in the settlement that Scor switched sides. With Rowan dead Scor is utterly alone. Jinady, the betrothed of Figaru, promised to give himself to Scor if he saved Figaru’s life. The demon takes him, and then decides not to let go. He’s lost everything for Figaru. Jinady should belong to him now in return. To the surprise of the entire settlement–Figaru agrees! The erotic ebook phenomenon Incubus Master continues with this brand new sequel. A great jumping-on point for new readers! From the author of The Eidolon's Conquest!

Genres: M M Romance, Yaoi, Fantasy, Erotica, Demons, Romance, LGBT

25 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 3, 2010

About the author

Yamila Abraham founded the publishing company Yaoi Press in 2004 and published over 50 graphic novels, many she wrote herself.

Abraham is a prolific writer of male/male romance, yaoi, yaoi graphic novels, science fiction romance, and erotica. She's known for explicitly detailed love scenes and dynamic premises. She wrote two of Yaoi Press' best selling series: Winter Demon and Dark Prince. Her best known ebooks include Maelstrom, UnPrison, Alien's Bride, and the Vanquished series.

Abraham has been a speaker or guest of honor at 150 anime fan conventions.

Reviews

[Kimmylongtime · Rating 4 out of 5]

I read this for the first time in 2012 when I was still very heavy into the Yaoi game. My girlfriend was an artist and she would create Yaoi and Yuri mangas and put them on deviant art and Tumblr. So when I saw this book again I had to give it a whirl. This was extremely fast paced because it is broken up into 7 parts when I read it originally it was one large anthology. Reading this as an adult I can no appreciate the kink more and I can understand why these characters were so driven by lust. I enjoyed this book as much as I did the first time and I gained some new insight along the way.

Happy reading everyone 🥰😍😘😍?!?!

[Dee Wy · Rating 2 out of 5]

A rather strange and disjointed story. Didn't care for this one.

[Chippy Marco]

A free read, so I don't feel bad it turned into a DNF. I can't rate it because I didn't read enough. It could've ended in a 3 star, but I didn't care enough to find out.

[John Carter · Rating 2 out of 5]

I imagine it would have been easier to get a handle on what was going on if I’d read her Incubus master series first; and the story was definitely not a stand-alone. I don’t know: perhaps I should have been alerted to the fact that—although there was a “1” in the name of the book in the Nook store but there wasn’t on the cover—this was really chapter 1 rather than book 1. And then there’s the the term yaoi to me has always meant manga or doujinshi rather than being synonymous with ordinary m/m works, so I was disappointed by the absence of any illustrations at all.

OK: those are more or less my problems. However there is a big flaw in the author’s use of the word incubus. As far as I can tell, here it is just a synonym for demon. Now a demon is a being from another plane of existence or another dimension and its motives and actions may be just as complex and unpredictable as those of a human, but an incubus has a single motive and a single action: to come to humans at night and copulate with them—leading to disruption of their morals, destruction of their purity and (in the case of a man) utter depravity. Whereas here, while there is interspecies screwing, the mortal is awake and a conscious participant in the sex.

And since in addition to all that I didn’t find the story terribly compelling, I’m giving it only two stars.

[BTina · Rating 2 out of 5]

Reading this story felt a bit like reading a manga without the pictures.

[Lori Jackson · Rating 3 out of 5]

Read the 1st series!

The weakness in this story is it draws on events and characters from the previous series. Didn't read the previous series? Well, you are lost and sadly, can't connect with this book. If you read the 1st series, read on. You are good to go.
The rest may want to skip as you can't buy the first series as stand alone books anymore.

[(the.darkandmoody.reader) · Rating 2 out of 5]

2/5 - this was not well written...

[Les Chroniques Aléatoires · Rating 2 out of 5]

Que dire sur cette mini nouvelle à part que c’est une nouvelle déception pour ma part signée Yamila Abraham. Après les vampires, ceux sont ses incubes qui m’ont donné des migraines et cela en à peine 25 pages. Entre histoire qui n’a ni queue, ni tête, des personnages certes intenses mais qui manquent d’intérêt et du sexe à tout va, même si ce n’est que de l’évocation, j’ai fait une sorte d’overdose et je demande grâce.

Pour une fois, je commencerais par l’histoire qui se déroule dans un univers complexe et développé, je ne peux que le souligner. Mais quand on commence le livre, il n’y a aucune indication qu’il s’agit d’une suite et donc on est totalement perdu en ne comprenant rien de ce qui se déroule et pourquoi un inconnu peu tout chambouler aussi facilement. Personnellement, si on prend on compte que c’est une suite, cela reste une histoire assez bancale avec un enchaînement de rebondissement prévisible et insipides.

Quand aux personnages, je trouve Scor assez intéressant puisqu’il n’est pas que la bête sanguinaire dont il se donne l’air. Même si je peux lui reprocher d’être une girouette (mais encore une fois, les choses tendait à des sentiments pour Jinady dans le prequel). Jinady ne m’a pas convaincu du tout, ses sentiments n’ont pas l’air puissant et surtout c’est un paumé doublé d’une victime… bref, tout ce que je n’aime pas. N’oublions pas Figaru qui est le « grand méchant » de l’histoire avec son charisme et ses phrases chocs. Il cherche à faire les choses bien mais reste un enfoiré dans le fond.

Yamila Abraham a de bonnes idées dans le fond, les différentes couvertures sont assez attrayantes, mais c’est loin de suffire. Je n’aime vraiment pas son style d’écriture superficiel et qui va au plus simple. Ses personnages manquent cruellement de profondeur et du potentiel est gâché. N’oublions pas le sexe qui est là pour le plaisir d’exister, sinon pourquoi choisir des incubes ? Un livre en plusieurs parties dont je ne prendrais même pas la peine de conclure et que je tente dès à présent d’oublier son existence.

[Jessica Mitchell · Rating 5 out of 5]

A short but romantic story about how a couple demons and a human will live on.
Jinady is lost in thought, with Figaru not around. He knows he shouldn't but he seems drawn the the demon Scor.... Will Scor accept him? What will Figaru do when he finds out?

[78sunny · Rating 2 out of 5]

Verwirrend und irgenwie komisch. Es fängt mit einer ellenlangen Sexszene an und hört dann mit Gesprächen auf, die keinen richtigen Sinn für mich ergaben. Es war schwer die merkwürdigen Namen im Gedächnis zu behalten und somit dem ganzen zu folgen. Man muss wohl irgendwelche anderen Bücher der Autorin gelesen haben, um das zu verstehen. Da mir aber schon das hier nicht zugesagt hat, werde ich wohl auch nichts anderes mehr probieren.

[Mandi · Rating 1 out of 5]

This was just plain awful. No idea who was who or what was going on (maybe part of a previous series?) Downloaded it for free but will be deleting it off my cloud. And apparently this is a whole series?

[Nancy Carbajal · Rating 3 out of 5]

Really short read, part of a series. It starts out of nowhere but I still liked it. Yaoi read.

[Amber Schmitz · Rating 5 out of 5]

LOVED IT!!!!

The best yaoi book I've read!!!! I don't have that many. Two or three. But still awesome!!! You must get it!!!

[L.J. Baker · Rating 3 out of 5]

Just ok for me

This was just ok for me. Not bad but not that great either. I Doubt I will read more in this series.

[Kakamaka]

lll